Run: 2026-09-01-01M1EM8ZFE72496HC6HJ34M6JN

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Duration:
54.4s
Cost:
$0.006311
Provider:
Together

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Detective Harlow Quinn pushed through the rusted gates of Camden’s abandoned station with her jaw set like a blade. The air downstairs tasted of wet limestone, copper, and something older—something that made the leather watch on her left wrist feel too light against her skin. Her close-cropped salt-and-pepper hair clung to her scalp in military patterns, and she moved with the precision of eighteen decorated years, each step measuring the tunnel’s decay. The station was not dead. It was waiting. Eva Kowalski stood beneath a shattered lantern, her curly red hair plastered to her freckled complexion, round glasses fogged at the edges. Her worn leather satchel sagged against her hip, heavy with books pulled from the British Museum’s restricted archives. She tucked a strand of hair behind her left ear, the nervous habit betraying her. "You crossed the line for this," Harlow said. "I didn't cross anything," Eva replied. "You needed someone who reads sigils." Harlow's sharp jaw tightened. She reached the crime scene. A body lay crumpled against the tiled wall, but the evidence refused to align. No blood pooled. No drag marks. The victim’s fingers were blackened, as if he had gripped something that burned colder than fire. Eva stepped closer, her green eyes fixed on the dead man’s collarbone. "The market moves every full moon. This station was an entry point three nights ago." Harlow dropped to one knee. Her gloved fingers traced the victim’s pocket, pulling out a bone token—pale, polished, wrong for human anatomy. She turned it over, and the station breathed around her. "Your occult theories don’t hold up in court," Harlow said. "They hold up here," Eva said. "Look at the ceiling." The tunnel roof had split open like a mouth. Black vapor curled through the gap, and the air smelled of ozone and old copper. Harlow pulled out her notebook, then stopped. A small brass compass lay crushed beneath the victim’s shoulder. The casing showed a patina of verdigris, the face etched with protective sigils that shimmied in her flashlight’s beam. She lifted it. The needle did not point north; it pointed straight up, toward the rift. "This is a Veil Compass," Eva said quietly. "Crafted by a Shade artisan. It points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal." "I know what it is," Harlow snapped. She turned the compass slowly, watching the needle quiver with unnatural hunger. "The clique didn't just use this market. They bought access." Eva tucked her hair behind her ear again. "You think they murdered him for information?" "I think they staged this," Harlow said. She stood, sweeping her light across the tunnel floor. No footprints led to the body, but a second set—smaller, barefoot, with clawed impressions—circled the corpse and vanished into the rift above. The evidence did not add up because it was not meant to. The bone token at the entrance had been flipped outward, a trick of entry, not exit. The market’s schedule meant this station was a ghost now, abandoned by vendors who had moved to a new location beneath the full moon. "He didn't enter through the gates," Harlow said. Eva’s glasses slid down her nose. "You can see that?" "I can see a lot of things when I stop listening to theory and start measuring." Harlow crouched again, her military precision turning every movement into measurement. She traced the scorch patterns around the body in a circle, not a struggle. The sigils on the compass matched the burn marks on the victim’s clothes—protective, then turned aggressive. "Your partner's case," Eva said softly. Harlow’s breath hitched. DS Morris had died three years ago under unexplained circumstances, supernatural origins she did not yet understand. The bone token in her hand felt like a key to that door, cold and insistent. "We think the clique traffics in banned alchemical substances through this market," Harlow said. "But they didn't kill him. The market did. Or something that walks through it." She held the compass up, the needle trembling toward the rift. The sigils on its face glowed faintly, protective against what waited above. "He's still moving," Eva said. "Who?" "The market. It moves every full moon." Eva pointed to the rift. "This station is empty now, but the goods—him—he was inventory. Or he was a warning." Harlow turned the compass over. The brass was hot. The needle pointed not at the rift above, but at a second, hidden fissure behind a support beam—one that did not reveal itself to casual observation. "You missed it," Eva said. "I missed it because I was looking at the body," Harlow admitted. She moved to the beam, her boots scraping concrete. She pulled aside a loose panel, and behind it, a crate of alchemical vials shone with liquid moonlight. The bone token had been the entry price, but the crate was the true product. The clique had used the market’s mobility to hide this cache, knowing investigators would find only the body and miss the supply. "Your interpretation is wrong," Harlow said. Eva straightened, her satchel creaking as books shifted against her hip. "My interpretation is that this is supernatural," Eva said. "No," Harlow said. "Your interpretation is that the market is innocent because it lives by rules. I see the clique used those rules. They bought access with a bone token, staged a death to distract from the shipment, and left the compass as a signature." She held up the Veil Compass. Its needle pointed to the hidden rift, the one that led to the market’s next location. "Evidence doesn't add up when someone rearranges the proof," Harlow said. "The body was a bookmark." Eva tucked her hair behind her ear and looked at the rift. "What do we do?" "We follow the needle," Harlow said. She turned toward the hidden fissure, her sharp jaw set, her leather watch clicking against the dark. "The clique thinks they vanished. But the market moves every full moon, and they left a compass behind." The tunnel swallowed her steps. Eva followed, her red hair catching the flashlight beam, the worn leather satchel rustling like pages of a confession. Harlow did not look back. She understood now: the crime scene was not a murder site. It was a receipt. And the dead man was merely the ink. Behind her, the rift pulsed, black vapor curling downward like a finger, and the Veil Market prepared to move again beneath a silent Camden sky.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
50.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags20
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"Eva said quietly [quietly]"
1"Harlow crouched again [again]"
2"Eva said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences34
tagDensity0.588
leniency1
rawRatio0.15
effectiveRatio0.15
90.73% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1079
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
76.83% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1079
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"shattered"
count1
1
word"traced"
count2
2
word"etched"
count1
3
word"pulsed"
count1
highlights
0"shattered"
1"traced"
2"etched"
3"pulsed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences79
matches(empty)
88.61% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences79
filterMatches
0"watch feel"
1"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences93
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen42
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1071
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
29.75% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions45
wordCount790
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity2.41
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Harlow"
discoveredNames
Harlow19
Quinn1
Camden2
Kowalski1
British1
Museum1
Eva15
Morris1
Veil2
Compass1
Market1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Camden"
3"Kowalski"
4"Museum"
5"Eva"
6"Morris"
7"Compass"
places
0"British"
globalScore0.297
windowScore0.5
95.65% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences46
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like a key to that door, cold and"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.934
wordCount1071
matches
0"not at the rift above, but at a second, hidden fissure behind a support beam"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences93
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs42
mean25.5
std17.83
cv0.699
sampleLengths
072
18
255
38
412
545
627
732
810
910
1024
1152
1222
1329
1415
1538
1652
178
1810
1957
206
2136
2228
2323
245
251
2627
2735
285
2912
3064
316
3211
339
3445
3522
3616
3716
3841
3924
4028
4125
96.38% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences79
matches
0"were blackened"
1"been flipped"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs141
matches
0"was waiting"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences93
ratio0.065
matches
0"The air downstairs tasted of wet limestone, copper, and something older—something that made the leather watch on her left wrist feel too light against her skin."
1"Her gloved fingers traced the victim’s pocket, pulling out a bone token—pale, polished, wrong for human anatomy."
2"The needle did not point north; it pointed straight up, toward the rift."
3"No footprints led to the body, but a second set—smaller, barefoot, with clawed impressions—circled the corpse and vanished into the rift above."
4"The sigils on the compass matched the burn marks on the victim’s clothes—protective, then turned aggressive."
5"The needle pointed not at the rift above, but at a second, hidden fissure behind a support beam—one that did not reveal itself to casual observation."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount799
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount19
adverbRatio0.023779724655819776
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.010012515644555695
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences93
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences93
mean11.52
std7.16
cv0.622
sampleLengths
019
126
227
35
43
522
618
715
88
96
106
114
125
1314
143
153
1616
1712
1815
195
2017
2110
2210
236
244
259
2615
277
2810
2919
303
3113
328
3314
347
3512
3610
378
387
397
409
4122
4212
4316
4424
458
466
474
4827
4914
42.65% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.3010752688172043
totalSentences93
uniqueOpeners28
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences63
matches(empty)
ratio0
99.37% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount19
totalSentences63
matches
0"Her close-cropped salt-and-pepper hair clung"
1"It was waiting."
2"Her worn leather satchel sagged"
3"She tucked a strand of"
4"She reached the crime scene."
5"Her gloved fingers traced the"
6"She turned it over, and"
7"She lifted it."
8"She turned the compass slowly,"
9"She stood, sweeping her light"
10"She traced the scorch patterns"
11"She held the compass up,"
12"She moved to the beam,"
13"She pulled aside a loose"
14"She held up the Veil"
15"Its needle pointed to the"
16"She turned toward the hidden"
17"She understood now: the crime"
18"It was a receipt."
ratio0.302
7.62% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount57
totalSentences63
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn pushed through"
1"The air downstairs tasted of"
2"Her close-cropped salt-and-pepper hair clung"
3"The station was not dead."
4"It was waiting."
5"Eva Kowalski stood beneath a"
6"Her worn leather satchel sagged"
7"She tucked a strand of"
8"Harlow's sharp jaw tightened."
9"She reached the crime scene."
10"A body lay crumpled against"
11"The victim’s fingers were blackened,"
12"Eva stepped closer, her green"
13"Harlow dropped to one knee."
14"Her gloved fingers traced the"
15"She turned it over, and"
16"The tunnel roof had split"
17"Harlow pulled out her notebook,"
18"A small brass compass lay"
19"The casing showed a patina"
ratio0.905
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences63
matches(empty)
ratio0
65.64% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences37
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The air downstairs tasted of wet limestone, copper, and something older—something that made the leather watch on her left wrist feel too light against her skin."
1"The victim’s fingers were blackened, as if he had gripped something that burned colder than fire."
2"The casing showed a patina of verdigris, the face etched with protective sigils that shimmied in her flashlight’s beam."
3"The market’s schedule meant this station was a ghost now, abandoned by vendors who had moved to a new location beneath the full moon."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags20
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Harlow crouched again, her military precision turning every movement into measurement"
94.44% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags18
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Harlow snapped (snap)"
1"Harlow admitted (admit)"
dialogueSentences34
tagDensity0.529
leniency1
rawRatio0.111
effectiveRatio0.111
77.9222%