Run: 2026-09-01-01M1EMAQT65H12WH26NXMK1593

Run Details

Duration:
35.7s
Cost:
$0.006463
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The granite bones of the grove waited at the edge of Richmond Park, four ancient oak standing stones split by centuries of lightning and weather. Aurora Carter crossed the boundary not with a map but with a pulse in her chest, a directive from an unknown benefactor that she refused to name aloud. She had left Silas’ bar above her flat, left the flat above the Golden Empress, left the delivery routes and the pre-law textbooks that still haunted her duffel bag. Eva had told her to seek answers before the past reclaimed her. Aurora came here because the Heartstone Pendant demanded it, its deep crimson gem heavy against her collarbone on its silver chain. The clearing existed in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm. Time moved differently here. “Still doing what Eva asks,” Aurora said. She spoke that into the dark, her bright blue eyes scanning the tree line. Straight black hair fell past her shoulders, unbound, swaying with a motion her cool-headed mind refused to acknowledge as trembling. She touched her left wrist, the small crescent-shaped scar from a childhood accident, and felt the pendant respond with warmth. The air thickened. Pollen coated her tongue, sweet and wrong, a perfume that belonged to no English winter. The wildflowers bloomed between stones—violets, golds, a crimson bloom that mirrored her gemstone—defying every season outside. “I’m alone,” Aurora said. “That’s the plan.” A branch cracked. Not a deer. Something closer, something that wore the rhythm of footsteps but lacked weight. She stopped. The stones stood like broken teeth around her. “I came because you gave me this,” she said, raising the pendant in her palm. The crimson heartstone glowed faintly, a warm pulse that deepened when she turned toward the western stone. No voice answered. Only a rustle from a tree that had not moved, a sound stripped of bird-song, replaced by a hollow laugh that lacked vowels. She froze. Her scar burned. The silver chain bit her collarbone. “Not real,” she said, sharp, precise. She walked. Short steps, delivery-girl discipline, the pre-law brain cataloging risk. The ground felt wrong, too soft, too ancient. She kept her breathing steady. “The grove breathes,” she said aloud. “Fine. It can breathe.” She moved further. The boundary stones watched. She spoke into the dark, her voice steady, the kind of sound she used to calm customers at the Golden Empress when orders went wrong. “I came for the Hel portal,” she said. “It pulses near one. You know that.” A shadow moved at the edge of her vision, near the oak that leaned like a bowing priest. It wore her father’s face but not his eyes, a shape built from the memory of Brendan Carter, twisted into something that understood legality but rejected mercy. Aurora turned. Nothing. She turned back. The shape shifted. The wrongness built slowly, deliberately, like a barrister building a case against the innocent. She clutched the pendant closer. The crimson gem pulsed. “I’m not leaving,” Aurora said. Footsteps followed her, not from behind but from inside her own heartbeat, slow and deliberate, made of branches snapping with the cadence of objections—her father’s rhythm, now twisted into a claim of possession. A piece of bark cracked behind her, not from her step. She did not turn. “I’m not your case,” she said. The wildflowers blackened near her boots. Not her step. Something else. The figure emerged—not from the trees, but from the space between heartbeats, from the moment when time moved differently and a minute outside became a day inside. It was tall, narrow, wearing the crescent of her scar as a mouth, a moon-shaped wound pulled into monstrosity. Aurora raised her hand. The pendant glowed bright against her palm, crimson, silver, a beacon that drew the dark closer rather than repelling it. “You want to talk,” she said. “Talk.” A voice answered, not from the stone, not from the trees, from the air itself, inverted, layered with her father’s cadence and something older: “We have waited for you.” Aurora’s eyes widened. She stepped back. The stone behind her was wet, though no rain fell, though no cloud existed in this pocket of altered time. “You need permission,” she said. Her voice did not tremble. “You need a door. The pendant is that door.” The creature tilted. The blackened flowers spread. She stepped forward, into the wrongness, into the night older than the park, carrying her scar and her silver chain and her refusal to break. The grove accepted her. The wildflowers bloomed in shades of blood and gold around her feet. The moon hung wrong. The silver chain glowed. She stood alone, and she was not alone, and the clearing held its breath as she spoke one final word into the dark. “This ends,” Aurora said. The stones watched. The heartstone pulsed. Time moved differently inside the grove, and she walked on.
created_at"2026-09-01T14:00:22.65Z" 9/1/2026, 2:00:22 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she said aloud [aloud]"
dialogueSentences17
tagDensity0.765
leniency1
rawRatio0.077
effectiveRatio0.077
87.78% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount818
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"deliberately"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"deliberately"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
38.88% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount818
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"pulse"
count2
1
word"scanning"
count1
2
word"warmth"
count1
3
word"footsteps"
count2
4
word"weight"
count1
5
word"pulsed"
count2
6
word"beacon"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"scanning"
2"warmth"
3"footsteps"
4"weight"
5"pulsed"
6"beacon"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences77
matches
0"d with warmth"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences77
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences82
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords814
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
87.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions23
wordCount718
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity1.25
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Carter2
Eva1
Heartstone1
Pendant1
Earth1
Fae1
English1
Golden1
Empress1
Brendan1
Footsteps1
Aurora9
persons
0"Carter"
1"Eva"
2"Heartstone"
3"Pendant"
4"Brendan"
5"Footsteps"
6"Aurora"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Golden"
globalScore0.873
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences34
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords3.686
wordCount814
matches
0"not with a map but with a pulse in her chest, a directive from an unknown benef"
1"not from behind but from inside her own heartbeat, slow"
2"not from the trees, but from the space between heartbeats, from the moment"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences82
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs37
mean22
std20.31
cv0.923
sampleLengths
0115
116
27
354
434
57
618
710
832
926
1011
116
1224
1310
1432
1515
1645
179
1814
199
205
2133
2215
236
2411
2546
2624
277
2829
2926
3019
317
3225
334
3443
354
3616
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences77
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs122
matches(empty)
38.33% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences82
ratio0.037
matches
0"The wildflowers bloomed between stones—violets, golds, a crimson bloom that mirrored her gemstone—defying every season outside."
1"Footsteps followed her, not from behind but from inside her own heartbeat, slow and deliberate, made of branches snapping with the cadence of objections—her father’s rhythm, now twisted into a claim of possession."
2"The figure emerged—not from the trees, but from the space between heartbeats, from the moment when time moved differently and a minute outside became a day inside."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount93
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount1
adverbRatio0.010752688172043012
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences82
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences82
mean9.93
std8.5
cv0.856
sampleLengths
025
128
229
312
421
512
64
77
814
920
1020
113
1215
1316
144
153
163
173
1812
192
208
2115
2217
233
2423
252
263
276
286
292
309
318
325
336
344
353
364
3725
388
397
4018
4127
422
431
443
453
4614
475
484
495
42.68% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.2926829268292683
totalSentences82
uniqueOpeners24
52.91% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences63
matches
0"Only a rustle from a"
ratio0.016
99.37% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount19
totalSentences63
matches
0"She had left"
1"She spoke that into the"
2"She touched her left wrist,"
3"she said, raising the pendant"
4"Her scar burned."
5"she said, sharp, precise"
6"She kept her breathing steady."
7"she said aloud"
8"She moved further."
9"She spoke into the dark,"
10"It wore her father’s face"
11"She turned back."
12"She clutched the pendant closer."
13"She did not turn."
14"It was tall, narrow, wearing"
15"She stepped back."
16"Her voice did not tremble."
17"She stepped forward, into the"
18"She stood alone, and she"
ratio0.302
7.62% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount57
totalSentences63
matches
0"The granite bones of the"
1"Aurora Carter crossed the boundary"
2"She had left"
3"Eva had told her to"
4"Aurora came here because the"
5"The clearing existed in a"
6"Time moved differently here."
7"She spoke that into the"
8"She touched her left wrist,"
9"The air thickened."
10"Pollen coated her tongue, sweet"
11"The wildflowers bloomed between stones—violets,"
12"A branch cracked."
13"Something closer, something that wore"
14"The stones stood like broken"
15"she said, raising the pendant"
16"The crimson heartstone glowed faintly,"
17"Her scar burned."
18"The silver chain bit her"
19"she said, sharp, precise"
ratio0.905
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences63
matches(empty)
ratio0
40.82% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences28
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The wildflowers bloomed between stones—violets, golds, a crimson bloom that mirrored her gemstone—defying every season outside."
1"Something closer, something that wore the rhythm of footsteps but lacked weight."
2"Only a rustle from a tree that had not moved, a sound stripped of bird-song, replaced by a hollow laugh that lacked vowels."
3"The pendant glowed bright against her palm, crimson, silver, a beacon that drew the dark closer rather than repelling it."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags12
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences17
tagDensity0.706
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
79.8566%