Run: 2026-09-01-01M1EMB5NZX6GWSC8AE80TK04C

Run Details

Duration:
3m 60s
Cost:
$0.061394
Provider:
xAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Veil gave like wet silk. Rory stepped through and the London chill sheared off her skin. Heat took its place. The Heartstone Pendant kicked against her collarbone, a second pulse out of time with her own. Amber light soaked the world. No sun. The sky itself burned a slow, even gold, thick as melted glass. Grass met her boot. It was too green. Each blade fat and glossy, bent under a dew that smelled of syrup. Nyx came after her in pieces. A smear of dark. Then a column. Then the tall humanoid silhouette they wore when they wished to be counted among the living. Their violet eyes held a faint glow that the amber washed toward bruise-purple. Where the light struck their edges, thin threads of shadow boiled away. “This place eats shade.” Isolde did not look back. She moved along a narrow path between the vines and the earth refused her weight. No print. No bent stem. Silver hair hung to her waist and caught the light like wire. “What is offered here is never free. What is taken here is never full.” Rory scanned the terraces. Vineyards climbed in wide steps toward a ridge. The vines were old, trunks thick as her waist, bark split and weeping a sap the colour of old honey. Grapes hung in clusters the size of a child’s head. Some black. Some a gold so pale they looked hollow. A few were clear as glass, and inside those, small shapes turned and turned. She kept her hands off them. A bee drifted past her ear. It was the size of a thumbnail and its wings left a trail of powder in the air. It landed on a black cluster, drank, and the grape wrinkled around the puncture as if it had been waiting. The bee did not leave. The grape closed. Rory’s mouth had begun to water. Roast and fruit and spice rode every breath, so rich it sat on the tongue without asking. Under it, a sour note, like meat left too long in the pan. “Nyx. You been to Hel before?” The shadow’s head tilted. Their voice arrived from a half-step to the left of their mouth, a whisper the heat could not burn off. “Between. Never this. The air here has a mouth.” She walked. The path was pale stone, warm through the sole. Between the flags, thyme and something with star-shaped leaves pushed up, crushed themselves, released a scent that made her stomach fold in on itself. She swallowed. The Fae-Forged Blade at her hip stayed cold. She put her palm to the moonsilver hilt and the hunger backed off a fraction, as if the chill drew a line the realm did not care to cross. A vine along the path’s edge stirred. Not wind. The tendril lifted, tasted the air, and leaned for her wrist. For the small crescent scar there, pale against the heat-flush of her skin. Rory had the blade out before the thought finished. The leaf-shaped edge went through the tendril as if the plant were rumour. Sap welled, gold, then dark, then gold again. The cut end quested blindly across the stone and went still. Isolde’s riddle drifted back. “A blade of winter in a country of feast. Hold what does not belong, and belonging will not hold you.” “English, Isolde.” The Half-Fae’s pale lavender gaze touched her for a heartbeat, then slid past toward the ridge. “Hunger is a door. Doors open both ways.” Rory wiped the sap on the grass. The grass drank it and stood greener. She sheathed the dagger. Cool head. Look. Catalogue. The scar itched. They descended a shallow bowl of land. Orchards took over from the vines. Trees stood in ranks, their leaves a dark, waxy green. Fruit weighted every bough. Peaches with skins like lacquer. Pears that dripped a juice too red. Apples with no stem, fused to the wood as if they had grown from the inside out. One apple had a seam. As Rory watched, the seam split a finger’s width and a smell of cinnamon and iron rolled out. Nyx drifted wide of that tree. Their form thinned until the orchard showed through their chest. “It wants a hand. I felt the want from here.” A shadow pooled between two roots, thicker than the light allowed. Nyx’s own darkness leaned toward it, then recoiled. The pool held the shape of a mouth for a moment and forgot it. Rory gave the tree a berth. She did not run. Running would admit the place had already chosen the pace. “Your footprints,” she called to Isolde. “You haven’t left a single one. Is that Fae, or is that this?” Isolde’s hair moved. The air around Rory did not. “I was born of two hungers and learned to starve both. This country respects a guest who brings an empty plate. It loves a guest who does not.” “Still not English.” Nyx’s whisper collected at Rory’s shoulder. “She means the land is watching what you take. And what you refuse.” A sound reached them from further in. Not wind. A wet, steady rhythm, like a jaw at work, or a spoon in a pot too thick for stirring. Over it, faint, the clink of glass on glass, and laughter stretched thin by distance. The bowl opened onto a garden. Rory stopped. Beds of vegetables sprawled in geometries too precise for any human allotment. Cabbages the size of millstones. Courgettes curled like sleeping animals. Tomatoes hung in ropes, each one a small sun, skins taut to bursting. Between the beds, channels of water ran, and the water was not water. It moved with a lazy drag. It caught the amber sky and threw it back darker, like tea, or wine. She crouched at a channel’s edge. Her reflection looked well-fed. Cheeks fuller. Mouth stained. She blinked and her own lean face returned, bright blue eyes hard in the gold light. “Don’t drink it.” Nyx stood over her, a cool absence in the heat. “I wasn’t about to.” “You were.” She stood. Fair. The thirst had arrived without her noticing, a dry click in her throat. Along the nearest bed, a row of onions had split. Not rot. Each one peeled itself in a slow, continuous curl, layer after layer, offering, offering, never reaching a centre. Flies that were not flies stitched the air above them. Their drone had a note in it like a kettle left on. Isolde waited at the far end of the garden, a still figure against a hedge of flowering thorn. The blossoms were white. Their centres were red, and they opened and closed, a wet blink. Rory joined her. The hedge gave off a perfume of crushed strawberries and salt. Beyond it, the land dropped again. Dymas laid itself out without shame. A valley. Vineyards and orchards and gardens repeating, repeating, each terrace richer than the last, until the eye lost the count. In the middle distance, long tables stood in the open air, white cloths, silver, mountains of food that steamed as if just set down. Figures moved between them. Some wore chef’s whites gone brown at the cuffs. Some wore nothing that belonged to a kitchen. All of them worked. Plating. Carving. Tasting. A man at the nearest table carved a roast that flinched under the knife and then went still, and he plated the slice with a garnish of gold leaf and a smile that did not reach anywhere. Rory’s fingers found the pendant. It beat against her skin, warm, insistent, as if it recognised home. “Those are people.” Isolde’s hair lifted. “Contracts have flavours. Some signed with ink. Some with teeth. The kitchens of Dymas do not want for hands.” Nyx’s silhouette sharpened, edges holding against the light for once, as if anger gave them weight. “Souls on a ledger. Cooked and cooking.” “Prince’s table.” Isolde’s mouth curved, not quite a smile. “Belphegor sets a place for every appetite. The empty chair is the one that matters.” Rory looked at the tables and did not look at the roast. She looked at the sky instead, that even amber, and understood there would be no night here to put a stop to any of it. Feast without closing time. Excess without the dignity of a scrap bin. Everything offered, everything wasted, everything begun again. Time had a texture here. It sat on the skin like oil. She could not have said whether they had been walking for minutes or for the length of a meal that refused to end. The light had not shifted. Her shadow at her feet was short and wrong, and Nyx, who was shadow, had no shadow at all. They followed Isolde through a gap in the hedge. The path changed. Stone gave way to a mosaic of broken plate and crushed shell, slick in places with something that might have been jus. Rory picked her footing. The Fae blade tapped her thigh, a cold metronome. To their left, a fountain. Wine climbed a tiered centrepiece of fruit carved from stone, or stone carved to look as if it would bruise. The wine spilled into a basin. It never overflowed. It never ran out. Midges of gold light hung over the surface. Rory watched one land, drink, and burst into a smear of sugar. Nyx passed a hand through the spray. The wine fell through their palm and hissed where it hit the dark of their wrist. “Sweet. And old. Older than the Prince, I think. This land was hungry before it had a name.” Isolde plucked a wildflower from the verge. In the Grove the flowers bloomed out of season and asked nothing. Here the stem sealed itself the instant it was picked, and the bloom in her fingers fattened, petals thickening, scent punching the air. She let it fall. It hit the mosaic and the mosaic absorbed it. A stain. Then no stain. Then a new flower, already growing from a crack, already too lush. Rory rubbed her thumb over the scar on her wrist. Ground herself in a pain that belonged to Cardiff, to a fall off a wall at nine, to a world where flowers stayed dead when you picked them. “How far in do we go?” Isolde walked. “Until the land knows your name. Or until you remember you have one.” “That’s not an answer.” “It is the only answer this country gives.” The wet rhythm grew louder. Not a jaw. Rory sorted the sound as they came around a stand of trees whose bark had been candied, hard and glittering, insects trapped under the sugar like inclusions in amber. A kitchen. Open air. A bank of ovens built into a low wall of pale brick. Heat rolled off them in sheets. Three figures worked the stations. Their faces had the stretched look of people who had not slept in a length of time that no longer used hours. Brands marked the insides of their forearms, sigils Rory did not know, dark as old grease. One of them turned a spit. The thing on the spit had too many joints. It smelled like pork and like a rain-wet pavement. The cook’s eyes passed across the three of them and held on Rory’s pendant. His mouth opened. He shut it. He went back to the spit with a care that was either pride or terror. Nyx’s whisper found Rory’s ear without travel. “He saw the stone. He knows it.” Rory did not touch it. She kept walking, past the ovens, past a trestle where pastries bloomed under glass, their layers without end, their fillings wet and dark. Her stomach clenched. The blade’s chill was a small animal at her hip, insistent. A copper pan on the trestle caught her face again. Fuller. Happier. A smear of sauce at the corner of her mouth she had not earned. She turned her head and the copper went dull. Isolde paused at a low wall. Beyond it the valley’s heart opened. A structure rose from the feasting grounds, not a castle so much as a mouth: arches upon arches, tables running through them like a tongue, banners the colour of wine and fat. Music started up from somewhere inside, strings and a drum that matched the wet rhythm, or was the wet rhythm, given a hall to live in. Rory set both hands on the wall. The stone was warm. It beat. Once. In time with the pendant. She took her hands away. Nyx gathered at her left, taller in this light, a rip in the gold. “We should not cross that wall.” Isolde was already on the other side of it. Her silver hair. Her empty tracks. She looked back, and the riddle sat in her face before it reached her mouth. “The first bite is a question. The second is an answer. The third is a name you did not bring with you.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences29
tagDensity0.069
leniency0.138
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2161
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
60.67% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2161
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"silk"
count1
1
word"chill"
count3
2
word"pulse"
count1
3
word"weight"
count2
4
word"scanned"
count1
5
word"whisper"
count3
6
word"stomach"
count2
7
word"mosaic"
count3
8
word"structure"
count1
highlights
0"silk"
1"chill"
2"pulse"
3"weight"
4"scanned"
5"whisper"
6"stomach"
7"mosaic"
8"structure"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences210
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences210
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tries to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences237
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen37
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2161
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions56
wordCount1890
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity1.16
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Veil1
London1
Heartstone1
Pendant1
Fae-Forged1
Blade1
Half-Fae1
Rory22
Isolde12
Nyx10
Fae3
Grove1
Cardiff1
persons
0"Veil"
1"Pendant"
2"Blade"
3"Half-Fae"
4"Rory"
5"Isolde"
6"Nyx"
7"Fae"
places
0"London"
1"Grove"
2"Cardiff"
globalScore0.918
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences130
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"not quite a smile"
1"smelled like pork and like a rain-wet pave"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount2161
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences237
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs83
mean26.04
std24.7
cv0.949
sampleLengths
06
150
221
354
44
537
614
766
86
952
1036
116
1224
139
142
1572
1674
174
1820
192
2016
218
2225
2379
2416
2510
2633
2720
2819
299
3028
313
326
3313
3443
356
362
3768
3830
393
4010
414
422
4316
4452
4534
4614
4712
48110
4917
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences210
matches
0"been candied"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs309
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences237
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1899
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount50
adverbRatio0.02632964718272775
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.000526592943654555
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences237
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences237
mean9.12
std6.77
cv0.742
sampleLengths
06
111
24
316
45
52
612
74
84
913
106
114
123
1316
1413
1512
164
175
1815
192
203
2112
2214
234
248
2520
2610
272
288
2914
306
316
3218
3320
345
353
366
3717
3813
396
404
4120
429
432
449
4524
462
478
4829
497
62.17% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.4008438818565401
totalSentences237
uniqueOpeners95
73.26% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences182
matches
0"Then a column."
1"Then the tall humanoid silhouette"
2"Then no stain."
3"Then a new flower, already"
ratio0.022
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount42
totalSentences182
matches
0"It was too green."
1"Their violet eyes held a"
2"She moved along a narrow"
3"She kept her hands off"
4"It was the size of"
5"It landed on a black"
6"Their voice arrived from a"
7"She put her palm to"
8"She sheathed the dagger."
9"They descended a shallow bowl"
10"Their form thinned until the"
11"She did not run."
12"she called to Isolde"
13"It moved with a lazy"
14"It caught the amber sky"
15"She crouched at a channel’s"
16"Her reflection looked well-fed."
17"She blinked and her own"
18"Their drone had a note"
19"Their centres were red, and"
ratio0.231
36.92% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount154
totalSentences182
matches
0"The Veil gave like wet"
1"Rory stepped through and the"
2"Heat took its place."
3"The Heartstone Pendant kicked against"
4"Amber light soaked the world."
5"The sky itself burned a"
6"Grass met her boot."
7"It was too green."
8"Each blade fat and glossy,"
9"Nyx came after her in"
10"A smear of dark."
11"Their violet eyes held a"
12"Isolde did not look back."
13"She moved along a narrow"
14"Rory scanned the terraces."
15"Vineyards climbed in wide steps"
16"The vines were old, trunks"
17"Grapes hung in clusters the"
18"Some a gold so pale"
19"She kept her hands off"
ratio0.846
27.47% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences182
matches
0"To their left, a fountain."
ratio0.005
71.43% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences80
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"Between the flags, thyme and something with star-shaped leaves pushed up, crushed themselves, released a scent that made her stomach fold in on itself."
1"The leaf-shaped edge went through the tendril as if the plant were rumour."
2"In the middle distance, long tables stood in the open air, white cloths, silver, mountains of food that steamed as if just set down."
3"A man at the nearest table carved a roast that flinched under the knife and then went still, and he plated the slice with a garnish of gold leaf and a smile tha…"
4"It beat against her skin, warm, insistent, as if it recognised home."
5"Nyx’s silhouette sharpened, edges holding against the light for once, as if anger gave them weight."
6"Their faces had the stretched look of people who had not slept in a length of time that no longer used hours."
7"Music started up from somewhere inside, strings and a drum that matched the wet rhythm, or was the wet rhythm, given a hall to live in."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Isolde’s mouth curved, not quite a smile"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences29
tagDensity0.034
leniency0.069
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
87.1750%