| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 8 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 29 | | tagDensity | 0.276 | | leniency | 0.552 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 97.46% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1969 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 82.22% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1969 | | totalAiIsms | 7 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "perfect" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "crystal" | | 3 | "weight" | | 4 | "flickered" | | 5 | "whisper" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 151 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 151 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 171 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 69 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1975 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 6 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 73.32% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 67 | | wordCount | 1565 | | uniqueNames | 16 | | maxNameDensity | 1.53 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Aurora | 24 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | British | 1 | | Isolde | 15 | | Nyx | 12 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Hel | 1 | | Shade | 2 | | Eva | 1 | | Silas | 1 | | Yu-Fei | 1 | | London | 1 | | Courts | 1 | | Fae | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Isolde" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Shade" | | 4 | "Eva" | | 5 | "Silas" | | 6 | "Yu-Fei" | | 7 | "Courts" | | 8 | "Fae" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Hel" | | 3 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 0.733 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 15.59% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 93 | | glossingSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed farther than they had been two minutes ago" | | 1 | "as if considering her, and drifted toward the pool, where it landed without a ripple and sank like a coin" | | 2 | "something like crystal, something like bone" | | 3 | "something like bone" | | 4 | "not quite belonged to the earth for three hundred years" | | 5 | "not-quite arm" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.506 | | wordCount | 1975 | | matches | | 0 | "not words, but the shape of words, the way a song hummed in another room st" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 171 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 60 | | mean | 32.92 | | std | 23.6 | | cv | 0.717 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 17 | | 1 | 78 | | 2 | 21 | | 3 | 14 | | 4 | 5 | | 5 | 37 | | 6 | 44 | | 7 | 72 | | 8 | 30 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 64 | | 11 | 16 | | 12 | 32 | | 13 | 54 | | 14 | 56 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 17 | | 18 | 69 | | 19 | 30 | | 20 | 11 | | 21 | 29 | | 22 | 57 | | 23 | 30 | | 24 | 32 | | 25 | 76 | | 26 | 38 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 16 | | 29 | 46 | | 30 | 76 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 1 | | 33 | 34 | | 34 | 66 | | 35 | 61 | | 36 | 40 | | 37 | 62 | | 38 | 20 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 7 | | 41 | 62 | | 42 | 10 | | 43 | 1 | | 44 | 7 | | 45 | 76 | | 46 | 31 | | 47 | 31 | | 48 | 11 | | 49 | 10 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 151 | | matches | | 0 | "been tuned" | | 1 | "been given" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 257 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 8 | | semicolonCount | 3 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 171 | | ratio | 0.058 | | matches | | 0 | "The distant traffic on the A3, the dogs, the joggers — gone." | | 1 | "The Heartstone against her sternum remained quiet — no pulse, no heat." | | 2 | "Aurora saw her own face in it, then Isolde's, then a third face that was neither — high-boned, antlered, smiling with too many teeth — and then only the silver again." | | 3 | "Their form tightened, became almost human in outline — tall, narrow, the suggestion of a coat that had been fashionable in a century Aurora knew only from museums." | | 4 | "In the sourceless light it did not glow; it seemed to drink." | | 5 | "One of the stained-glass leaves detached and did not fall; it hung in the air a moment, turned as if considering her, and drifted toward the pool, where it landed without a ripple and sank like a coin." | | 6 | "Aurora caught fragments — not words, but the shape of words, the way a song hummed in another room still has a melody." | | 7 | "She tried to match Isolde's pace and failed; the grass knew the difference between a mortal boot and a foot that had not quite belonged to the earth for three hundred years." | | 8 | "Or not empty — filled with a darkness that was not shadow, a darkness that had weight." | | 9 | "\"A seer is a cup that overflows. I have spilled visions into mortal ears and been named exile for the stain. This—\" she gestured at the hollow, the figures, the eating dark \"—is what the Courts use when a vision is too large for a mouth. They pour it out. They leave it. They pretend the pouring is not also a summoning.\"" |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1452 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | | adverbCount | 46 | | adverbRatio | 0.03168044077134986 | | lyAdverbCount | 4 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0027548209366391185 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 171 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 171 | | mean | 11.55 | | std | 11.09 | | cv | 0.96 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 17 | | 1 | 18 | | 2 | 12 | | 3 | 5 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 25 | | 6 | 5 | | 7 | 7 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 12 | | 10 | 14 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 2 | | 13 | 12 | | 14 | 20 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 10 | | 17 | 2 | | 18 | 1 | | 19 | 22 | | 20 | 7 | | 21 | 2 | | 22 | 12 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 22 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 14 | | 29 | 25 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 15 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 25 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 8 | | 39 | 8 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 12 | | 42 | 11 | | 43 | 7 | | 44 | 15 | | 45 | 11 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 13 | | 48 | 9 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 46.20% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 16 | | diversityRatio | 0.3333333333333333 | | totalSentences | 171 | | uniqueOpeners | 57 | |
| 27.32% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 122 | | matches | | 0 | "More, receding into the white" |
| | ratio | 0.008 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 36 | | totalSentences | 122 | | matches | | 0 | "Their bark had the grain" | | 1 | "She stepped through." | | 2 | "She kept her hand from" | | 3 | "They bloomed in drifts and" | | 4 | "It was warm." | | 5 | "It closed around her fingertip" | | 6 | "It sat on the flowers." | | 7 | "It sat on Isolde's skin." | | 8 | "It did not sit on" | | 9 | "She filed that away and" | | 10 | "It dimpled under her boots" | | 11 | "Its surface was still as" | | 12 | "She took a step back." | | 13 | "Her reflection did not kneel" | | 14 | "It remained standing, watching." | | 15 | "She trailed a finger above" | | 16 | "Their form tightened, became almost" | | 17 | "She turned a slow circle." | | 18 | "She reached up." | | 19 | "She did not need to." |
| | ratio | 0.295 | |
| 21.48% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 107 | | totalSentences | 122 | | matches | | 0 | "The last of the ordinary" | | 1 | "Their bark had the grain" | | 2 | "Aurora ran her thumb along" | | 3 | "Isolde passed between two of" | | 4 | "The wet leaf-litter of Richmond" | | 5 | "Nyx condensed at Aurora's shoulder," | | 6 | "The distant traffic on the" | | 7 | "She stepped through." | | 8 | "The temperature dropped the instant" | | 9 | "The Fae-forged blade at her" | | 10 | "She kept her hand from" | | 11 | "Wildflowers carpeted the clearing in" | | 12 | "Petals the shade of bruised" | | 13 | "Others the precise gold of" | | 14 | "They bloomed in drifts and" | | 15 | "Aurora crouched and touched one." | | 16 | "It was warm." | | 17 | "It closed around her fingertip" | | 18 | "Isolde's silver hair hung to" | | 19 | "Nyx drifted ahead, their edges" |
| | ratio | 0.877 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 122 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 55.14% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 57 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora saw her own face in it, then Isolde's, then a third face that was neither — high-boned, antlered, smiling with too many teeth — and then only the silver …" | | 1 | "Their form tightened, became almost human in outline — tall, narrow, the suggestion of a coat that had been fashionable in a century Aurora knew only from museu…" | | 2 | "One of the stained-glass leaves detached and did not fall; it hung in the air a moment, turned as if considering her, and drifted toward the pool, where it land…" | | 3 | "The moss gave way to a pale grass that chimed underfoot, each blade a sliver of something like crystal, something like bone." | | 4 | "Each globe contained a slow swirl of gold, and when Aurora drew close to one she heard, very faintly, a voice reciting something in a language that made the bac…" | | 5 | "Nyx had gone thin again, a smear of violet-eyed dark against the white trees, and the lantern-globes nearest them flickered as if a wind had passed through thei…" | | 6 | "The bowl sat on its plinth and the darkness inside it turned, slow as cream stirred in a cup, and Aurora stood on the slope of the hollow with a Fae blade in a …" |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 8 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "silver hair hung, though a wind moved the grass" | | 1 | "Isolde said, without looking back" | | 2 | "she gestured, the figures, the eating dark" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 29 | | tagDensity | 0.103 | | leniency | 0.207 | | rawRatio | 0.333 | | effectiveRatio | 0.069 | |