| 62.07% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 14 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Beside her Nyx moved like [like]" | | 1 | "the grove time moved differently [differently]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 29 | | tagDensity | 0.483 | | leniency | 0.966 | | rawRatio | 0.143 | | effectiveRatio | 0.138 | |
| 96.60% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1472 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 59.24% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1472 | | totalAiIsms | 12 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "warmth" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "flickered" | | 3 | "etched" | | 4 | "silk" | | 5 | "symphony" | | 6 | "unspoken" | | 7 | "shimmered" | | 8 | "whisper" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 98 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 98 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 116 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 45 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1466 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 14 | | unquotedAttributions | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "The jewel had been given by an unknown benefactor, and now, near this hidden meadow, it sang." |
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| 66.30% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 81 | | wordCount | 1135 | | uniqueNames | 18 | | maxNameDensity | 1.67 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Isolde" | | discoveredNames | | Park | 2 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Pendant | 3 | | Nyx | 11 | | Shade | 3 | | Isolde | 15 | | Fae | 6 | | Rory | 19 | | Richmond | 3 | | Dymas | 2 | | Fae-Forged | 3 | | Blade | 3 | | Earth | 1 | | Veil | 2 | | Wardens | 1 | | London | 2 | | Courts | 1 | | Hel | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Pendant" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Shade" | | 3 | "Isolde" | | 4 | "Fae" | | 5 | "Rory" | | 6 | "Dymas" | | 7 | "Blade" | | 8 | "Veil" | | 9 | "Hel" |
| | places | | 0 | "Park" | | 1 | "Richmond" | | 2 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 0.663 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 38.06% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 67 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed farther now, blurred by a shimmering distortion visible only when Rory turned her head quickly, the faint shimmer of the Veil marking this place as a rift point monitored by Wardens she would never meet" | | 1 | "as if expecting offerings" | | 2 | "as if breathing" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 8 | | per1kWords | 5.457 | | wordCount | 1466 | | matches | | 0 | "not for answers, but because the grove demands a price" | | 1 | "not branches at all but tendrils of dark wood" | | 2 | "not for defense, but because the ground itself seemed to lean" | | 3 | "not fear, but recognition" | | 4 | "not a portal, but a voice" | | 5 | "not distant anymore, but layered, a symphony of carving knives" | | 6 | "not out of weakness, but out of precision" | | 7 | "not to Isolde but to the air, \"you answer straight" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 116 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 48 | | mean | 30.54 | | std | 25.35 | | cv | 0.83 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 82 | | 1 | 15 | | 2 | 36 | | 3 | 15 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 86 | | 6 | 39 | | 7 | 10 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 38 | | 10 | 62 | | 11 | 112 | | 12 | 26 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 22 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 12 | | 17 | 27 | | 18 | 71 | | 19 | 85 | | 20 | 36 | | 21 | 20 | | 22 | 44 | | 23 | 10 | | 24 | 21 | | 25 | 15 | | 26 | 37 | | 27 | 14 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 40 | | 30 | 52 | | 31 | 26 | | 32 | 32 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 15 | | 35 | 29 | | 36 | 68 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 28 | | 39 | 22 | | 40 | 66 | | 41 | 14 | | 42 | 9 | | 43 | 12 | | 44 | 11 | | 45 | 9 | | 46 | 40 | | 47 | 11 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 98 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 188 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 116 | | ratio | 0.06 | | matches | | 0 | "The blade at her hip—Isolde's gift, moonsilver and leaf-shaped—felt heavier than steel, always cold, always humming with music only the Fae could hear." | | 1 | "The sky above Richmond Park—visible through gaps in the canopy—showed a moon that had not risen when they entered, yet cast silver light across the clearing." | | 2 | "The wind did not blow; it circled." | | 3 | "Unease settled in her chest—not fear, but recognition." | | 4 | "Paths twisted back on themselves; the stones behind them seemed farther now, blurred by a shimmering distortion visible only when Rory turned her head quickly, the faint shimmer of the Veil marking this place as a rift point monitored by Wardens she would never meet." | | 5 | "The sound grew louder—not distant anymore, but layered, a symphony of carving knives and laughter in tongues that twisted around the teeth." | | 6 | "She walked deeper, because the grove demanded, because the blade cut through wards, because the wildflowers bloomed for her alone, because the exploration was not finished—it was only beginning." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 320 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "resting cold against her" |
| | adverbCount | 11 | | adverbRatio | 0.034375 | | lyAdverbCount | 2 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.00625 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 116 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 116 | | mean | 12.64 | | std | 8.67 | | cv | 0.686 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 8 | | 1 | 16 | | 2 | 21 | | 3 | 28 | | 4 | 9 | | 5 | 2 | | 6 | 9 | | 7 | 4 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 23 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 15 | | 12 | 13 | | 13 | 16 | | 14 | 14 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 21 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 24 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 29 | | 21 | 2 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 9 | | 24 | 19 | | 25 | 19 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 11 | | 30 | 16 | | 31 | 21 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 26 | | 34 | 27 | | 35 | 7 | | 36 | 29 | | 37 | 19 | | 38 | 2 | | 39 | 24 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 17 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 27 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 20 | | 49 | 16 |
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| 42.24% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 11 | | diversityRatio | 0.3103448275862069 | | totalSentences | 116 | | uniqueOpeners | 36 | |
| 37.45% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, the grove exhaled a" |
| | ratio | 0.011 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 18 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | | 0 | "Its crimson gem held a" | | 1 | "Their bark was black with" | | 2 | "She left no traces." | | 3 | "She turned, her bare feet" | | 4 | "It carried the sound of" | | 5 | "Their form shifted, shadow pooling" | | 6 | "She spoke over her shoulder," | | 7 | "They were lanterns of crimson" | | 8 | "She kept her blade low," | | 9 | "She had delivered meals to" | | 10 | "They moved deeper." | | 11 | "She dipped her hand into" | | 12 | "she said, not asking" | | 13 | "Her bright blue eyes tracked" | | 14 | "She knelt, not out of" | | 15 | "She pulled back." | | 16 | "She turned toward the standing" | | 17 | "She walked deeper, because the" |
| | ratio | 0.202 | |
| 4.94% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 81 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | | 0 | "Richmond Park smelled of wet" | | 1 | "Rory tucked her delivery bag" | | 2 | "Its crimson gem held a" | | 3 | "The Shade's violet eyes glowed" | | 4 | "The words came on a" | | 5 | "Rory touched the crescent scar" | | 6 | "The blade at her hip—Isolde's" | | 7 | "Nyx's shadow flickered, half-corporeal and" | | 8 | "Their bark was black with" | | 9 | "Isolde stood between two of" | | 10 | "She left no traces." | | 11 | "The ground beneath her bare" | | 12 | "Isolde spoke in riddles, her" | | 13 | "The pendant pulsed again, warm" | | 14 | "Isolde smiled, but her lips" | | 15 | "She turned, her bare feet" | | 16 | "The air changed in an" | | 17 | "The smell of pine vanished." | | 18 | "Rory followed, Nyx's shadow elongating" | | 19 | "The ground beneath their boots" |
| | ratio | 0.91 | |
| 56.18% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | | 0 | "Before them, ancient oak standing" |
| | ratio | 0.011 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 42 | | technicalSentenceCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "The ground beneath their boots was soft with moss and violet petals that bloomed year-round, their fragrance thick enough to taste." | | 1 | "Rory's lungs filled with air that tasted of copper and sugar, the perfume of Dymas bleeding through the boundary." | | 2 | "Their form shifted, shadow pooling at the feet like ink, their glow fading to bruise-purple as they pointed toward the center of the grove." | | 3 | "They were lanterns of crimson and gold, their petals translucent, their centers beating with a rhythm that matched Rory's heartbeat." | | 4 | "The grove expanded with each step, a pocket between Earth and Fae realm that refused geometry." | | 5 | "A sound like tearing silk rippled through the branches, and the wildflowers turned their faces toward them, as if expecting offerings." | | 6 | "Isolde rose, water dripping from her fingers in beads that vanished before they touched earth." | | 7 | "Isolde turned fully, her lavender eyes catching the moonlight, her feet leaving no trace in the soft earth." | | 8 | "The pool reflected the standing stones, but reversed, showing an ancient grove older than Richmond, older than the Fae Courts, older than the barrier that separ…" |
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| 17.86% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 14 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde smiled, but her lips held no warmth" | | 1 | "she said, not asking" | | 2 | "Rory corrected, her voice steady" |
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| 46.55% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 10 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Isolde spoke (speak)" | | 1 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "Rory corrected (correct)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 29 | | tagDensity | 0.345 | | leniency | 0.69 | | rawRatio | 0.3 | | effectiveRatio | 0.207 | |