Run: 2026-09-01-01M1EMK53WVNPG4G77VPT69H1N

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Duration:
1m 8s
Cost:
$0.011906
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Richmond Park smelled of wet clay and pine. Rory tucked her delivery bag behind her ribs, the Heartstone Pendant resting cold against her collarbone. Its crimson gem held a faint inner glow, a warmth that pulsed once, twice, like a second heart testing its walls. Beside her, Nyx moved like a breath held too long, their shadowed form stretching across the gravel path in a silhouette that did not match the streetlamps' geometry. The Shade's violet eyes glowed faintly against the dusk. Nyx turned. The words came on a wind with no direction. "You feel the boundary." Rory touched the crescent scar on her left wrist. The blade at her hip—Isolde's gift, moonsilver and leaf-shaped—felt heavier than steel, always cold, always humming with music only the Fae could hear. "I feel the Veil." Nyx's shadow flickered, half-corporeal and half-absence, as they stepped closer to the first standing stone. "Not thinner. Different. You step where trees remember names older than your city." Before them, ancient oak standing stones rose from the loam like vertebrae of some buried god. Their bark was black with age, etched with spirals that shifted when Rory blinked. No footprints marked the dust around them. Isolde stood between two of the stones, her silver hair reaching her waist, her pale lavender eyes fixed on the horizon. She left no traces. The ground beneath her bare feet remained undisturbed, wildflowers blooming in a halo at her ankles despite the winter air biting at Rory's cheeks. "Three seekers," Isolde spoke in riddles, her voice like smoke. "One born of barrister and teacher, one born of failed ritual, one born of speed and scars. You cross not for answers, but because the grove demands a price." Rory straightened. The pendant pulsed again, warm against her sternum. "I am Rory. This is Nyx. We need answers." "Answer is a door that opens only when the key shrinks." Isolde smiled, but her lips held no warmth. She turned, her bare feet brushing frost that did not melt, and stepped through the gap between the stones. The air changed in an instant. Not in steps. The smell of pine vanished. Instead, the grove exhaled a sweet rot of wildflowers and copper. Rory followed, Nyx's shadow elongating as if pulled by a rope tied to the Shade's spine. The ground beneath their boots was soft with moss and violet petals that bloomed year-round, their fragrance thick enough to taste. Inside, time moved differently. The sky above Richmond Park—visible through gaps in the canopy—showed a moon that had not risen when they entered, yet cast silver light across the clearing. The oaks here were ancient, their trunks wider than a delivery van, their branches not branches at all but tendrils of dark wood that draped like hair. The wind did not blow; it circled. It carried the sound of a distant feast, copper pans clanging, voices raising toasts in a language Rory almost recognized from her father's courtroom or perhaps from deeper archives. Rory's lungs filled with air that tasted of copper and sugar, the perfume of Dymas bleeding through the boundary. Nyx halted. Their form shifted, shadow pooling at the feet like ink, their glow fading to bruise-purple as they pointed toward the center of the grove. "Something watches from the dark." Rory drew the Fae-Forged Blade. The moonsilver leaf drank the moonlight, glowing with faint light, the cold biting her palm through gloves. "Watchers don't always need eyes." Isolde walked ahead, leaving nothing behind. She spoke over her shoulder, smiling. "The Seer walks where footprints fear to tread, yes, but the Shadow brings the dark that makes the trees speak. Do not cut the flowers. They bleed." The wildflowers here were not flowers. They were lanterns of crimson and gold, their petals translucent, their centers beating with a rhythm that matched Rory's heartbeat. She kept her blade low, not for defense, but because the ground itself seemed to lean. Unease settled in her chest—not fear, but recognition. She had delivered meals to Silas' bar, had fled Evan's touch, had crossed borders that killed others. This was another border. They moved deeper. The grove expanded with each step, a pocket between Earth and Fae realm that refused geometry. Paths twisted back on themselves; the stones behind them seemed farther now, blurred by a shimmering distortion visible only when Rory turned her head quickly, the faint shimmer of the Veil marking this place as a rift point monitored by Wardens she would never meet. A sound like tearing silk rippled through the branches, and the wildflowers turned their faces toward them, as if expecting offerings. A pool emerged, black as the Shade's eyes, reflecting stars that did not belong to London. Isolde knelt at its edge, her silver hair falling forward like a curtain. She dipped her hand into the water. "The pendant pulses," she said, not asking. "The blade cuts wards. Yet you seek not a portal, but a voice." "I seek understanding," Rory said. Her bright blue eyes tracked the water. The Heartstone Pendant grew warm, crimson deepening, a faint inner glow stretching across her collarbone. The jewel had been given by an unknown benefactor, and now, near this hidden meadow, it sang. Nyx circled the pool, their incorporeal and solid forms alternating. "The Veil weakens at winter solstice," Nyx whispered, testing the air. "This place is a tear, held by oak and time." Isolde rose, water dripping from her fingers in beads that vanished before they touched earth. "Tears are not always wounds. Sometimes they are mouths. You have entered, and the grove has tasted you. Your delivery bag contains no food. Your blade contains no blood of your enemies. Your pendant contains a promise." Rory's fingers found the crescent scar. The Fae-Forged Blade pressed cold against her ribs. "I'm not here for prophecy." "You are here because the grove called, and the Veil allowed," Isolde said. "Now you hear the feast, do you not? The chefs of Dymas need ingredients from this realm too. Gluttony does not stay in Hell alone. It leaks." The sound grew louder—not distant anymore, but layered, a symphony of carving knives and laughter in tongues that twisted around the teeth. The trees leaned closer. The wildflowers dimmed, then flared, as if breathing. Isolde turned fully, her lavender eyes catching the moonlight, her feet leaving no trace in the soft earth. "Choose the depth," Isolde said. "Step to the pool and ask your questions. Or retreat to the stones and carry nothing away. But the grove remembers." Rory stepped forward. The pendant pulsed in time with the pool's ripples. Nyx flowed beside her, shadow and substance merging, their flickering violet eyes fixed on the dark center of the water. "The air smells of ovens," Nyx said. "Not ovens," Rory corrected, her voice steady. "Contracts. Souls sold for taste. The grove connects." She knelt, not out of weakness, but out of precision. The Fae-Forged Blade glinted. Isolde watched, silent, her riddle unspoken but understood: answers came only when the asker shrank. The pool reflected the standing stones, but reversed, showing an ancient grove older than Richmond, older than the Fae Courts, older than the barrier that separated worlds. Rory reached out. The water was warm. The Heartstone Pendant glowed crimson, and for a moment, she saw the portal, felt the pull of Hel's warm amber sky above Dymas, the gluttony of a realm where chefs traded souls for flavor. She pulled back. The wildflowers did not wither. The trees did not fall. But Isolde smiled, true and ancient, and Nyx's shadow darkened into a solid shape that blocked the moon. "You have seen," Isolde said. "Now you know why you carry both gift and scar. The grove does not give. It reveals." Rory stood. The blade remained cold. The pendant quieted. She turned toward the standing stones, but the path had shifted. The oak gates shimmered with the Veil's distortion, and beyond them, the winter air of London waited, unchanged, impatient. Yet inside the grove, time moved differently, and she knew that minutes had become days, that her flat above Silas' bar might hold only seconds of debt. "Next time," Rory said, not to Isolde but to the air, "you answer straight." Isolde laughed, a sound like wind through silver hair. "I cannot lie, child. Only mislead. You walked here for the misdirection." Nyx shifted back to shadow, their whisper soft against her ear. "The Veil tightens with the solstice. You must decide." Rory touched the crescent scar. The pendant beat faintly, warm, alive. She walked deeper, because the grove demanded, because the blade cut through wards, because the wildflowers bloomed for her alone, because the exploration was not finished—it was only beginning. The trees swallowed them, and the feast called them by name.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
62.07% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Beside her Nyx moved like [like]"
1"the grove time moved differently [differently]"
dialogueSentences29
tagDensity0.483
leniency0.966
rawRatio0.143
effectiveRatio0.138
96.60% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1472
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"quickly"
count1
highlights
0"quickly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
59.24% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1472
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"warmth"
count2
1
word"pulsed"
count3
2
word"flickered"
count1
3
word"etched"
count1
4
word"silk"
count1
5
word"symphony"
count1
6
word"unspoken"
count1
7
word"shimmered"
count1
8
word"whisper"
count1
highlights
0"warmth"
1"pulsed"
2"flickered"
3"etched"
4"silk"
5"symphony"
6"unspoken"
7"shimmered"
8"whisper"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences98
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences98
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences116
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen45
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1466
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"The jewel had been given by an unknown benefactor, and now, near this hidden meadow, it sang."
66.30% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions81
wordCount1135
uniqueNames18
maxNameDensity1.67
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Isolde"
discoveredNames
Park2
Heartstone3
Pendant3
Nyx11
Shade3
Isolde15
Fae6
Rory19
Richmond3
Dymas2
Fae-Forged3
Blade3
Earth1
Veil2
Wardens1
London2
Courts1
Hel1
persons
0"Pendant"
1"Nyx"
2"Shade"
3"Isolde"
4"Fae"
5"Rory"
6"Dymas"
7"Blade"
8"Veil"
9"Hel"
places
0"Park"
1"Richmond"
2"London"
globalScore0.663
windowScore0.833
38.06% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences67
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"seemed farther now, blurred by a shimmering distortion visible only when Rory turned her head quickly, the faint shimmer of the Veil marking this place as a rift point monitored by Wardens she would never meet"
1"as if expecting offerings"
2"as if breathing"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches8
per1kWords5.457
wordCount1466
matches
0"not for answers, but because the grove demands a price"
1"not branches at all but tendrils of dark wood"
2"not for defense, but because the ground itself seemed to lean"
3"not fear, but recognition"
4"not a portal, but a voice"
5"not distant anymore, but layered, a symphony of carving knives"
6"not out of weakness, but out of precision"
7"not to Isolde but to the air, \"you answer straight"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences116
matches
0"knew that minutes"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs48
mean30.54
std25.35
cv0.83
sampleLengths
082
115
236
315
413
586
639
710
89
938
1062
11112
1226
135
1422
155
1612
1727
1871
1985
2036
2120
2244
2310
2421
2515
2637
2714
285
2940
3052
3126
3232
337
3415
3529
3668
373
3828
3922
4066
4114
429
4312
4411
459
4640
4711
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences98
matches
0"been given"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs188
matches
0"was only beginning"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences116
ratio0.06
matches
0"The blade at her hip—Isolde's gift, moonsilver and leaf-shaped—felt heavier than steel, always cold, always humming with music only the Fae could hear."
1"The sky above Richmond Park—visible through gaps in the canopy—showed a moon that had not risen when they entered, yet cast silver light across the clearing."
2"The wind did not blow; it circled."
3"Unease settled in her chest—not fear, but recognition."
4"Paths twisted back on themselves; the stones behind them seemed farther now, blurred by a shimmering distortion visible only when Rory turned her head quickly, the faint shimmer of the Veil marking this place as a rift point monitored by Wardens she would never meet."
5"The sound grew louder—not distant anymore, but layered, a symphony of carving knives and laughter in tongues that twisted around the teeth."
6"She walked deeper, because the grove demanded, because the blade cut through wards, because the wildflowers bloomed for her alone, because the exploration was not finished—it was only beginning."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount320
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"resting cold against her"
adverbCount11
adverbRatio0.034375
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.00625
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences116
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences116
mean12.64
std8.67
cv0.686
sampleLengths
08
116
221
328
49
52
69
74
89
923
104
1115
1213
1316
1414
157
1621
174
1824
1910
2029
212
228
239
2419
2519
266
273
285
2911
3016
3121
324
3326
3427
357
3629
3719
382
3924
405
415
4217
435
446
456
4627
476
4820
4916
42.24% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.3103448275862069
totalSentences116
uniqueOpeners36
37.45% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences89
matches
0"Instead, the grove exhaled a"
ratio0.011
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount18
totalSentences89
matches
0"Its crimson gem held a"
1"Their bark was black with"
2"She left no traces."
3"She turned, her bare feet"
4"It carried the sound of"
5"Their form shifted, shadow pooling"
6"She spoke over her shoulder,"
7"They were lanterns of crimson"
8"She kept her blade low,"
9"She had delivered meals to"
10"They moved deeper."
11"She dipped her hand into"
12"she said, not asking"
13"Her bright blue eyes tracked"
14"She knelt, not out of"
15"She pulled back."
16"She turned toward the standing"
17"She walked deeper, because the"
ratio0.202
4.94% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount81
totalSentences89
matches
0"Richmond Park smelled of wet"
1"Rory tucked her delivery bag"
2"Its crimson gem held a"
3"The Shade's violet eyes glowed"
4"The words came on a"
5"Rory touched the crescent scar"
6"The blade at her hip—Isolde's"
7"Nyx's shadow flickered, half-corporeal and"
8"Their bark was black with"
9"Isolde stood between two of"
10"She left no traces."
11"The ground beneath her bare"
12"Isolde spoke in riddles, her"
13"The pendant pulsed again, warm"
14"Isolde smiled, but her lips"
15"She turned, her bare feet"
16"The air changed in an"
17"The smell of pine vanished."
18"Rory followed, Nyx's shadow elongating"
19"The ground beneath their boots"
ratio0.91
56.18% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences89
matches
0"Before them, ancient oak standing"
ratio0.011
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences42
technicalSentenceCount9
matches
0"The ground beneath their boots was soft with moss and violet petals that bloomed year-round, their fragrance thick enough to taste."
1"Rory's lungs filled with air that tasted of copper and sugar, the perfume of Dymas bleeding through the boundary."
2"Their form shifted, shadow pooling at the feet like ink, their glow fading to bruise-purple as they pointed toward the center of the grove."
3"They were lanterns of crimson and gold, their petals translucent, their centers beating with a rhythm that matched Rory's heartbeat."
4"The grove expanded with each step, a pocket between Earth and Fae realm that refused geometry."
5"A sound like tearing silk rippled through the branches, and the wildflowers turned their faces toward them, as if expecting offerings."
6"Isolde rose, water dripping from her fingers in beads that vanished before they touched earth."
7"Isolde turned fully, her lavender eyes catching the moonlight, her feet leaving no trace in the soft earth."
8"The pool reflected the standing stones, but reversed, showing an ancient grove older than Richmond, older than the Fae Courts, older than the barrier that separ…"
17.86% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"Isolde smiled, but her lips held no warmth"
1"she said, not asking"
2"Rory corrected, her voice steady"
46.55% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Isolde spoke (speak)"
1"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
2"Rory corrected (correct)"
dialogueSentences29
tagDensity0.345
leniency0.69
rawRatio0.3
effectiveRatio0.207
70.7166%