Run: 2026-09-01-01M1EMM7ZNXFEC6QVZQQ29P8ZX

Run Details

Duration:
47.2s
Cost:
$0.007341
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory pushed through the ancient oak standing stones at Richmond Park’s hidden edge, and the air changed immediately. Not cold, not warm—thicker, textured, like drawing breath through wet silk that clung to the back of her throat. By night the Grove sat hidden in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm, a clearing where wildflowers bloomed year-round despite the season, but she knew the boundary better than she knew her own flat above Silas’ bar. She kept her straight black hair pinned back with a clip she had borrowed from Eva’s flat, though sweat already clung to her bright blue eyes, reflecting a moon that sat wrong in the sky. Inside this clearing, the lunar light turned yellow, bruised, and the oak stones seemed taller than they had been at noon, their bark sharpening into ridges that looked almost like faces in the dark. She moved deeper. Time inside the Grove moved differently; an hour here could be minutes or days outside. She did not check her phone because there was no signal, and she did not check her watch because she knew, with the cold precision that had survived Cardiff University’s pre-law lectures and the long nights delivering noodles for Yu-Fei Cheung’s Golden Empress, that she had already lost minutes she could never reclaim. The delivery bags sat untouched in her kitchen, stacked beside her father Brendan Carter’s old barrister books, and her mother Jennifer Ellis’s Welsh poetry, and by now Eva would be pacing the Shoreditch flat, furious and terrified, wondering if Rory had run from Evan only to vanish completely. The Heartstone Pendant hung against her collarbone, silver chain biting into her skin, deep crimson gem roughly the size of a thumbnail glowing with a faint inner pulse. It had been given to her by an unknown benefactor, but she knew its origin. Dymas. Hel portals. The warmth sharpened when she crossed the oak stones, a warning she refused to ignore, and now it throbbed faster, frantic, matched to nothing in her chest. “I came because you pulled,” Rory said, her voice flat against the stillness, loud enough to feel ridiculous, low enough to stay private. No answer came from the wildflowers. They did not bend with wind because there was none. Crimson and pearl blossoms brushed her knees, releasing a scent that smelled of copper and old rain, of something buried for years in wet earth. She walked on, her 5’6” frame casting a shadow too long for the bruised moon above. The standing stones circled the clearing, rough-barked and ancient, marking a boundary older than her father’s Irish lineage, older than the Welsh hills where her mother had taught children to read, older than the childhood accident that had left a small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. Rory scratched it with her thumb, feeling the familiar ridge, the proof that her body was real, that pain was real, that she had survived an abusive ex named Evan and the law school she had abandoned. A sound arrived. Not a bird. Wet. Clicking, like someone working a tongue against teeth, and then a silence that swallowed the echo before it could reach her ears. Rory stopped. She turned her bright blue eyes toward the black trunks of the oaks. “That’s not real.” But the sound came again, closer, and this time it held a rhythm. Breath. Wet. Human in shape but wrong in timing, as if the creature that owned it had forgotten how lungs worked. She spoke again, quieter, though her voice carried nowhere but to the petals that turned to watch her. “You don’t get to be this loud without a body.” The pendant’s glow thickened. She pulled it from her shirt, silver chain biting cold into her fingers, crimson gem thrumming like a second heart that knew secrets. “You came from Dymas. You came with no name.” Her pre-law mind worked quickly, out-of-the-box, calculating angles, exits, legal precedents for reality, but the Grove had no corners—only the circle of stones, and the center where she stood, and the dark that breathed back. The wildflowers shifted. Not metaphorically. The stems bent, the crimson heads pivoting, tracking her steps with a patience that made her stomach tighten without her allowing fear to name itself, because fear was a luxury she had not paid for when she fled to London. She walked toward them anyway. Smart. Cool-headed. Quick-thinking was her armor, but armor did not stop wrongness. She reached the edge of the clearing where the moss grew too soft, too green, and the air tasted of copper and salt, of blood without wounds. A figure stood at the far stone. Not human, not quite—tall, wrong-jointed, with a head that turned too slowly. But Rory’s intelligence did not flinch. She spoke to it, and to herself, because the Grove demanded honesty, and she had learned that dialogue was the only weapon she had left, and it had to continue the action, never stall, never add fluff. “I know what this is. I’m not imaginary.” The figure did not answer. It only watched, and behind it, the wildflowers opened like mouths, crimson petals curling back to expose center flesh that shimmered with dew. Rory’s fingers found the scar on her left wrist again. The childhood accident had taught her that bodies failed, but she had survived, and she spoke now with the steadiness her father had drilled into her at Cardiff, with the argument she had made to Eva, with the refusal she had shown Evan. “I came alone,” she said. “No one followed. No one knows I crossed the boundary.” The figure leaned. A branch snapped under weight that should have been hollow, but the sound was wet, heavy, wrong, and the wildflowers turned away from her, bowing toward the dark with a surrender that felt demanded. Rory stepped back. Her black hair pulled by the wind that had not existed seconds before, her bright blue eyes fixed on the stone where the figure had been, now empty but for the footprint, too wide, too deep, as if something had stepped out of the earth rather than onto it. She spoke once more, because she was alone in a strange, isolated place at night, and she had come for a reason, and something felt off from the moment she arrived, and she needed to name it, to fight it with sound. “I want out. I want the time back.” The pendant’s glow sharpened, not with warmth now, but with a flush of warning, pulsing faster, an alarm against the Hel portal she was standing inside, and the Grove answered with a sound like a door opening—not with a hinge, but with an absence, with the air rushing out of a chamber that had been sealed for centuries. She turned her back to the figure. She walked to the boundary. But the oak stones had moved. She stopped. The crescent scar burned. The Heartstone throbbed against her collarbone like a live thing. The Grove was not done. She turned, and spoke to the darkness, her voice carrying across the wildflowers that had not stopped turning, that leaned closer now, pressing petals against her ankles. “You want me here?” The answer came not in words, but in the blooming of wildflowers, in the turning of heads, in the single, wet click of a tongue against teeth, and Rory Carter, once Rory, once Laila, once Aurora, looked at the empty stone and knew—in her cool, intelligent, quick-thinking heart—that she was not wrong. She was not wrong. She was not alone. The figure did not speak; the Grove spoke for it, with the wrongness of time turning, with the wildflowers turning, with the pulse of the crimson gem against her throat, and Rory saw, with a clarity that cut through the dark, that she had been wrong about only one thing. She had never been alone. She had crossed the boundary alone. And now the Grove had her.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"She spoke again [again]"
dialogueSentences13
tagDensity0.769
leniency1
rawRatio0.1
effectiveRatio0.1
88.77% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1336
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"completely"
count1
1
adverb"quickly"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"completely"
1"quickly"
2"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
47.60% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1336
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"silk"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count2
2
word"warmth"
count2
3
word"throbbed"
count2
4
word"familiar"
count1
5
word"silence"
count1
6
word"echo"
count1
7
word"calculating"
count1
8
word"stomach"
count1
9
word"shimmered"
count1
10
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"silk"
1"pulse"
2"warmth"
3"throbbed"
4"familiar"
5"silence"
6"echo"
7"calculating"
8"stomach"
9"shimmered"
10"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences49
matches
0"t with warmth"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences49
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences52
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen102
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1330
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions48
wordCount1153
uniqueNames26
maxNameDensity0.87
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Grove"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Grove7
Earth1
Fae1
Eva3
Cardiff2
University1
Yu-Fei1
Cheung1
Golden1
Empress1
Brendan1
Carter2
Jennifer1
Ellis1
Welsh1
Shoreditch1
Rory10
Evan2
Heartstone2
Pendant1
London1
Hel2
Laila1
Aurora1
persons
0"Grove"
1"Eva"
2"University"
3"Yu-Fei"
4"Cheung"
5"Brendan"
6"Carter"
7"Jennifer"
8"Ellis"
9"Welsh"
10"Rory"
11"Evan"
12"Heartstone"
13"Pendant"
14"Laila"
15"Aurora"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Cardiff"
3"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
84.21% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences38
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"seemed taller than they had been at noon, their bark sharpening into ridges that looked almost like faces in the dark"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords2.256
wordCount1330
matches
0"not with warmth now, but with a flush of warning, pulsing faster, an alarm against th"
1"not with a hinge, but with an absence, with the air rushing out of a chamber"
2"not in words, but in the blooming of wildflowers, in the turning of heads, in"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences52
matches
0"learned that dialogue"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs35
mean38
std32.94
cv0.867
sampleLengths
0145
1119
273
323
441
5100
629
718
834
928
1071
1145
1244
1362
148
1528
1653
1715
1837
1952
2042
218
2258
2312
246
2521
2627
274
2852
294
304
3150
325
336
346
90.94% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences49
matches
0"been given"
1"been sealed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs192
matches
0"was standing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences52
ratio0.115
matches
0"Not cold, not warm—thicker, textured, like drawing breath through wet silk that clung to the back of her throat."
1"Time inside the Grove moved differently; an hour here could be minutes or days outside."
2"A figure stood at the far stone. Not human, not quite—tall, wrong-jointed, with a head that turned too slowly. But Rory’s intelligence did not flinch. She spoke to it, and to herself, because the Grove demanded honesty, and she had learned that dialogue was the only weapon she had left, and it had to continue the action, never stall, never add fluff."
3"The pendant’s glow sharpened, not with warmth now, but with a flush of warning, pulsing faster, an alarm against the Hel portal she was standing inside, and the Grove answered with a sound like a door opening—not with a hinge, but with an absence, with the air rushing out of a chamber that had been sealed for centuries."
4"The answer came not in words, but in the blooming of wildflowers, in the turning of heads, in the single, wet click of a tongue against teeth, and Rory Carter, once Rory, once Laila, once Aurora, looked at the empty stone and knew—in her cool, intelligent, quick-thinking heart—that she was not wrong."
5"The figure did not speak; the Grove spoke for it, with the wrongness of time turning, with the wildflowers turning, with the pulse of the crimson gem against her throat, and Rory saw, with a clarity that cut through the dark, that she had been wrong about only one thing."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount959
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
1"cool, intelligent, quick-thinking"
adverbCount37
adverbRatio0.03858185610010428
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.008342022940563087
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences52
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences52
mean25.58
std20.61
cv0.806
sampleLengths
018
119
239
335
434
53
615
753
848
928
1015
111
122
1327
1423
156
1610
1725
18100
1929
2018
2134
2228
2331
2440
2545
2644
2762
285
293
3028
3153
328
337
3437
3552
3642
373
385
3958
4012
416
4221
4327
444
4552
464
474
4850
495
46.15% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.34615384615384615
totalSentences52
uniqueOpeners18
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences45
matches(empty)
ratio0
60.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount18
totalSentences45
matches
0"She kept her straight black"
1"She moved deeper."
2"She did not check her"
3"It had been given to"
4"They did not bend with"
5"She walked on, her"
6"She spoke again, quieter, though"
7"You came with no"
8"She walked toward them anyway."
9"She spoke once more, because"
10"I want the time"
11"She turned her back to"
12"She stopped. The crescent scar"
13"She turned, and spoke to"
14"She was not wrong."
15"She was not alone."
16"She had never been alone."
17"She had crossed the boundary"
ratio0.4
60.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount36
totalSentences45
matches
0"Rory pushed through the ancient"
1"She kept her straight black"
2"She moved deeper."
3"She did not check her"
4"The delivery bags sat untouched"
5"The Heartstone Pendant hung against"
6"It had been given to"
7"The warmth sharpened when she"
8"Rory said, her voice flat"
9"They did not bend with"
10"Crimson and pearl blossoms brushed"
11"She walked on, her"
12"A sound arrived. Not a"
13"Rory stopped. She turned her"
14"She spoke again, quieter, though"
15"The pendant’s glow thickened. She"
16"You came with no"
17"The wildflowers shifted. Not metaphorically."
18"She walked toward them anyway."
19"A figure stood at the"
ratio0.8
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences45
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences28
technicalSentenceCount13
matches
0"Not cold, not warm—thicker, textured, like drawing breath through wet silk that clung to the back of her throat."
1"She kept her straight black hair pinned back with a clip she had borrowed from Eva’s flat, though sweat already clung to her bright blue eyes, reflecting a moon…"
2"Inside this clearing, the lunar light turned yellow, bruised, and the oak stones seemed taller than they had been at noon, their bark sharpening into ridges tha…"
3"She did not check her phone because there was no signal, and she did not check her watch because she knew, with the cold precision that had survived Cardiff Uni…"
4"Crimson and pearl blossoms brushed her knees, releasing a scent that smelled of copper and old rain, of something buried for years in wet earth."
5"A sound arrived. Not a bird. Wet. Clicking, like someone working a tongue against teeth, and then a silence that swallowed the echo before it could reach her ea…"
6"But the sound came again, closer, and this time it held a rhythm. Breath. Wet. Human in shape but wrong in timing, as if the creature that owned it had forgotte…"
7"The wildflowers shifted. Not metaphorically. The stems bent, the crimson heads pivoting, tracking her steps with a patience that made her stomach tighten withou…"
8"The figure did not answer. It only watched, and behind it, the wildflowers opened like mouths, crimson petals curling back to expose center flesh that shimmered…"
9"The figure leaned. A branch snapped under weight that should have been hollow, but the sound was wet, heavy, wrong, and the wildflowers turned away from her, bo…"
10"Rory stepped back. Her black hair pulled by the wind that had not existed seconds before, her bright blue eyes fixed on the stone where the figure had been, now…"
11"The pendant’s glow sharpened, not with warmth now, but with a flush of warning, pulsing faster, an alarm against the Hel portal she was standing inside, and the…"
12"She turned, and spoke to the darkness, her voice carrying across the wildflowers that had not stopped turning, that leaned closer now, pressing petals against h…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags7
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
73.08% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"She spoke again (speak)"
dialogueSentences13
tagDensity0.231
leniency0.462
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.154
74.6253%