| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 19 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "he said softly [softly]" | | 1 | "Eva said quietly [quietly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 58 | | tagDensity | 0.328 | | leniency | 0.655 | | rawRatio | 0.105 | | effectiveRatio | 0.069 | |
| 86.95% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1533 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "softly" | | 1 | "slightly" | | 2 | "very" | | 3 | "suddenly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 44.55% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1533 | | totalAiIsms | 17 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "scanning" | | 1 | "calculating" | | 2 | "trembled" | | 3 | "flickered" | | 4 | "weight" | | 5 | "flicked" | | 6 | "tension" | | 7 | "unspoken" | | 8 | "silence" | | 9 | "measured" | | 10 | "glinting" | | 11 | "tracing" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "eyes narrowed" | | 1 | "hung in the air" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 108 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 108 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 148 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 34 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1519 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 24 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 80 | | wordCount | 1058 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 3.12 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 5.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Raven | 1 | | Nest | 1 | | Soho | 2 | | Carter | 2 | | Silas | 8 | | London | 2 | | Blackwood | 1 | | Prague | 1 | | Eva | 25 | | Aurora | 33 | | Cardiff | 2 | | Rory | 1 | | Brendan | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Raven" | | 1 | "Nest" | | 2 | "Carter" | | 3 | "Silas" | | 4 | "Blackwood" | | 5 | "Eva" | | 6 | "Aurora" | | 7 | "Rory" | | 8 | "Brendan" |
| | places | | 0 | "Soho" | | 1 | "London" | | 2 | "Prague" | | 3 | "Cardiff" |
| | globalScore | 0 | | windowScore | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 61 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 68.33% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.317 | | wordCount | 1519 | | matches | | 0 | "not as a shackle, but as a bridge" | | 1 | "not as words, but as a hand extended, finger tracing the air near Eva’s scarre" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 148 | | matches | | 0 | "learned that London" | | 1 | "whispered that Rory" |
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| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 78 | | mean | 19.47 | | std | 16.26 | | cv | 0.835 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 81 | | 1 | 68 | | 2 | 48 | | 3 | 5 | | 4 | 7 | | 5 | 62 | | 6 | 1 | | 7 | 13 | | 8 | 1 | | 9 | 25 | | 10 | 14 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 11 | | 13 | 25 | | 14 | 26 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 39 | | 18 | 15 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 20 | | 21 | 12 | | 22 | 15 | | 23 | 14 | | 24 | 41 | | 25 | 22 | | 26 | 16 | | 27 | 13 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 17 | | 30 | 36 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 11 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 12 | | 35 | 17 | | 36 | 72 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 7 | | 41 | 31 | | 42 | 27 | | 43 | 31 | | 44 | 7 | | 45 | 27 | | 46 | 10 | | 47 | 16 | | 48 | 31 | | 49 | 24 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 108 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 196 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 14 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 12 | | totalSentences | 148 | | ratio | 0.081 | | matches | | 0 | "She moved like she always did—cool, precise, her bright blue eyes scanning the room for Silas, for the hidden bookshelf, for anything out of place." | | 1 | "Aurora set the tray down and rubbed her left wrist—the small crescent-shaped scar from a childhood accident burned white against her skin—then glanced toward the bar." | | 2 | "But her eyes—those had changed most." | | 3 | "The hidden back room—accessible through the bookshelf—remained closed, a secret sleeping behind the wall." | | 4 | "He set two glasses down without asking—whiskey for Eva, gin for Aurora." | | 5 | "He knew everything; that was his job." | | 6 | "Aurora looked at Eva’s changed face—the surgical scar, the grey at the temples, the lines carved by years of courtroom battles and private grief." | | 7 | "The childhood accident—her father calling her careless, her mother bandaging her—felt suddenly distant, a small wound compared to the larger ones." | | 8 | "The bar around them seemed to fade—the green neon, the old maps, the photographs of dead men." | | 9 | "Her father, Brendan Carter, the barrister who had never understood her flight, who had called her a disappointment—he remembered her scar." | | 10 | "She looked down at Eva—at the changed woman, the hardened barrister, the friend who had pushed her into London." | | 11 | "The unspoken regret filled the space between them—not as a shackle, but as a bridge." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 733 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small crescent-shaped scar" |
| | adverbCount | 26 | | adverbRatio | 0.03547066848567531 | | lyAdverbCount | 4 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.005457025920873124 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 148 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 148 | | mean | 10.26 | | std | 7.69 | | cv | 0.749 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 18 | | 1 | 27 | | 2 | 25 | | 3 | 11 | | 4 | 22 | | 5 | 8 | | 6 | 12 | | 7 | 26 | | 8 | 19 | | 9 | 13 | | 10 | 16 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 22 | | 16 | 17 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 9 | | 19 | 1 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 1 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 20 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 14 | | 37 | 12 | | 38 | 14 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 21 | | 43 | 15 | | 44 | 7 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 2 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 16 |
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| 43.92% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 9 | | diversityRatio | 0.23648648648648649 | | totalSentences | 148 | | uniqueOpeners | 35 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | | 0 | "Then the door opened again." | | 1 | "Once warm, they now held" | | 2 | "Only Eva remained, and the" | | 3 | "Only the heavy, unspoken weight" |
| | ratio | 0.044 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 23 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | | 0 | "She moved like she always" | | 1 | "He wore the silver signet" | | 2 | "His left leg gave him" | | 3 | "Her hair, once long and" | | 4 | "She wore a charcoal coat" | | 5 | "Her fingers trembled." | | 6 | "She hid it." | | 7 | "She did not smile." | | 8 | "His hazel eyes met Eva’s." | | 9 | "He did not ask." | | 10 | "He simply nodded, the signet" | | 11 | "She pulled off her coat," | | 12 | "She did not touch her" | | 13 | "He set two glasses down" | | 14 | "he said softly, his voice" | | 15 | "She did not ask how" | | 16 | "He knew everything; that was" | | 17 | "Her hand shook, just slightly," | | 18 | "His limp left a rhythm" | | 19 | "Her father, Brendan Carter, the" |
| | ratio | 0.256 | |
| 21.11% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 79 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | | 0 | "The green neon sign above" | | 1 | "Aurora Carter pushed through the" | | 2 | "She moved like she always" | | 3 | "Aurora set the tray down" | | 4 | "Silas Blackwood stood behind the" | | 5 | "He wore the silver signet" | | 6 | "His left leg gave him" | | 7 | "A woman stood there." | | 8 | "Aurora’s breath caught." | | 9 | "The years had carved Eva" | | 10 | "Her hair, once long and" | | 11 | "She wore a charcoal coat" | | 12 | "Aurora set down the tray." | | 13 | "Her fingers trembled." | | 14 | "She hid it." | | 15 | "The word came out flat." | | 16 | "Aurora moved to the bar," | | 17 | "Eva stepped inside." | | 18 | "The green neon flickered across" | | 19 | "She did not smile." |
| | ratio | 0.878 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 23.81% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 42 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "She wore a charcoal coat that smelled of rain and smoke, her jaw set like a stone." | | 1 | "Aurora moved to the bar, her five-foot-six frame threading between tables, her eyes refusing to look anywhere but Eva’s face." | | 2 | "The childhood accident—her father calling her careless, her mother bandaging her—felt suddenly distant, a small wound compared to the larger ones." | | 3 | "Her father, Brendan Carter, the barrister who had never understood her flight, who had called her a disappointment—he remembered her scar." | | 4 | "The movement was sudden, a quick out-of-thought decision that defined her cool-headed nature." | | 5 | "She stood at the center of the room, her straight hair brushing her shoulders, the crescent scar on her wrist glowing faintly in the dim light." | | 6 | "Outside, the green neon sign continued its steady glow, illuminating Soho, illuminating the bar, illuminating two old friends who had finally stopped running." |
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| 72.37% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 19 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "he said softly, his voice a low rumble," | | 1 | "Aurora said, not looking back" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 13 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 58 | | tagDensity | 0.224 | | leniency | 0.448 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |