Run: 2026-09-01-01M1EMPNTTHRV8H9C73F6M6X8N

Run Details

Duration:
1m 1s
Cost:
$0.008571
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign above The Raven’s Nest sputtered, casting a sickly glow across the wet Soho pavement. Aurora Carter pushed through the door, a tray of dumplings balanced on her left palm, her straight shoulder-length black hair clinging to her neck from the rain. She moved like she always did—cool, precise, her bright blue eyes scanning the room for Silas, for the hidden bookshelf, for anything out of place. At twenty-five, she had learned that London did not reward softness. Inside, the air smelled of old paper, gin, and the peculiar damp of a bar that had survived war and fashion alike. Black-and-white photographs of dead men lined the walls. Old maps, cracked at the folds, showed borders that no longer existed. Aurora set the tray down and rubbed her left wrist—the small crescent-shaped scar from a childhood accident burned white against her skin—then glanced toward the bar. Silas Blackwood stood behind the mahogany counter, his grey-streaked auburn hair and neatly trimmed beard catching the amber light. He wore the silver signet ring on his right hand like a warning. His left leg gave him a slight limp as he poured, a permanent souvenir of Prague. Then the door opened again. A woman stood there. Aurora’s breath caught. The years had carved Eva into something harder. Her hair, once long and dark, was cropped to a severe black, shaved at the temples where a thin surgical scar glinted. She wore a charcoal coat that smelled of rain and smoke, her jaw set like a stone. But her eyes—those had changed most. Once warm, they now held a hollow, calculating distance. “Aurora.” Aurora set down the tray. Her fingers trembled. Not much. She hid it. “Eva.” The word came out flat. Aurora moved to the bar, her five-foot-six frame threading between tables, her eyes refusing to look anywhere but Eva’s face. Eva stepped inside. The green neon flickered across her cheek. She did not smile. “You work here now.” “I deliver food,” Aurora said. “Above this place. You know Silas.” Silas turned. His hazel eyes met Eva’s. He did not ask. He simply nodded, the signet ring catching the light, and returned to his glass. Eva followed Aurora to a corner booth, away from the main crowd. The hidden back room—accessible through the bookshelf—remained closed, a secret sleeping behind the wall. “You don’t call.” “I’ve been working.” “Working.” Eva sat. She pulled off her coat, revealing a tailored navy suit that spoke of barristers’ chambers and long hours in white rooms. “I’ve been in Prague. Then London. I thought I’d find you still running from everything.” Aurora’s scarred wrist rested on the table. She did not touch her coffee. “I stayed.” “You didn’t call me when he—” “Evan.” Aurora’s voice sharpened. “You mean Evan. Yes. I left him. You told me to leave. You pushed me here.” The words hung in the air, heavy with the weight of years. Eva leaned forward. The leather of her chair creaked. “I thought I was saving you.” “And I thought you were abandoning me to a city that eats people alive.” Silas moved closer, his limp audible on the wooden floor. He set two glasses down without asking—whiskey for Eva, gin for Aurora. “The Raven’s Nest doesn’t keep secrets well,” he said softly, his voice a low rumble, “but it keeps friends.” Aurora’s bright blue eyes flicked to him. She did not ask how he knew Eva. He knew everything; that was his job. Eva picked up the whiskey. Her hand shook, just slightly, then steadied. “I became a barrister.” Aurora’s jaw tightened. “You always said law was the only thing with teeth.” “Your father did well.” “My father is distant to me.” Aurora stopped. The lie felt too sharp. “Not dead. Just distant.” Eva drank. “I sit across from people every day who lie about the things they did to survive. You lied to me, Rory. You told me you were fine. You told me London was the answer.” “I was fine.” “You were a delivery person in a bar that hides spies.” Aurora laughed, sharp and brief. “You tracked me.” “I asked Silas for a contact. He told me where you lived.” Silas nodded, his silver ring flashing. “She lives above the secret room. I see her every morning.” The tension cracked like ice. Aurora looked at Eva’s changed face—the surgical scar, the grey at the temples, the lines carved by years of courtroom battles and private grief. This was not the girl who had packed her bags in Cardiff, who had whispered that Rory deserved more than a life of abuse and law books. This was a woman who had become the very thing Aurora’s father was: steel, unyielding, precise. “You’re different,” Aurora said. “I had to be.” “Have you forgiven me?” Eva’s eyes narrowed. “Have you forgiven yourself?” Aurora reached for her left wrist, touching the crescent scar. The childhood accident—her father calling her careless, her mother bandaging her—felt suddenly distant, a small wound compared to the larger ones. “I left you behind,” Eva said quietly, “and I told myself you were better off without me. But I never stopped checking the wind for your name.” Aurora’s heart hammered. The bar around them seemed to fade—the green neon, the old maps, the photographs of dead men. Only Eva remained, and the ghost of who they had been. “I couldn’t stay,” Aurora said. “Not after—” “You didn’t have to become this.” Eva gestured at Aurora’s work clothes, her delivery bag propped against the booth, her life reduced to plates and hidden rooms. “I didn’t choose the bar,” Aurora said. “I chose survival.” Silas moved back to the counter, leaving them. His limp left a rhythm in the quiet. Eva leaned closer, her voice low. “I saw your father at a conference in Edinburgh last year. He asked about you. He said you had a scar on your left wrist.” Aurora’s breath caught. Her father, Brendan Carter, the barrister who had never understood her flight, who had called her a disappointment—he remembered her scar. “He told me you were too smart to stay.” “I was smart enough to run.” “You were smart enough to survive. But you never forgave me for making you leave.” Aurora stood. The movement was sudden, a quick out-of-thought decision that defined her cool-headed nature. She looked down at Eva—at the changed woman, the hardened barrister, the friend who had pushed her into London. “You think I blame you for London?” “I think you blame me for everything.” Aurora’s bright blue eyes held Eva’s. No tears. Only the heavy, unspoken weight of years between them, the silence of letters never written, the regret of a childhood left in Cardiff. “I blame the man who hurt me,” Aurora said. “I blame myself for staying too long. But you?” She paused. “I never blamed you. I just never knew how to come back.” Eva stood too. The two women faced each other, strangers in the shape of old friends. The green neon sign above the entrance flickered once, then held steady, casting long green shadows across the floor. Aurora turned toward the hidden bookshelf, toward the secret room behind the wall where Silas kept his files, his network, his life. “If you want to talk about regret,” she said, “talk to Silas. He has a whole room for it.” Eva followed her, her steps measured, her coat draped over her arm like armor. Silas leaned against the bar, his left leg aching, his signet ring glinting, watching them with hazel eyes that had seen too many good people become strangers. “Come,” Aurora said, not looking back. “The room is cold. But the wall is thick. And both of us need to pretend, for one night, that nothing changed.” Eva stepped forward. The door to the secret room slid open with a silent click behind the bookshelf. Inside, the air was darker, older, filled with the smell of old paper and the weight of secrets. Aurora did not turn around. She stood at the center of the room, her straight hair brushing her shoulders, the crescent scar on her wrist glowing faintly in the dim light. “We are not the girls from Cardiff,” she said. “No,” Eva answered. “We are not the lawyers you wanted us to be, or the survivors I pretended to be.” “Then what are we?” Aurora finally looked back. The unspoken regret filled the space between them—not as a shackle, but as a bridge. “We are two women who learned that leaving is easier than returning,” Aurora said. “And returning is harder than anyone admits.” Eva stepped closer. Their shoulders almost touched. “Do you want to stay?” Aurora’s answer came not as words, but as a hand extended, finger tracing the air near Eva’s scarred jaw, a gesture of recognition, of forgiveness, of the weight of time finally lifting. “I’ve already stayed,” Aurora said. “I just needed you to find the door.” Outside, the green neon sign continued its steady glow, illuminating Soho, illuminating the bar, illuminating two old friends who had finally stopped running.
created_at"2026-09-01T14:06:53.794Z" 9/1/2026, 2:06:53 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags19
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"he said softly [softly]"
1"Eva said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences58
tagDensity0.328
leniency0.655
rawRatio0.105
effectiveRatio0.069
86.95% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1533
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count1
3
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"slightly"
2"very"
3"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
44.55% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1533
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"scanning"
count1
1
word"calculating"
count1
2
word"trembled"
count1
3
word"flickered"
count2
4
word"weight"
count4
5
word"flicked"
count1
6
word"tension"
count1
7
word"unspoken"
count2
8
word"silence"
count1
9
word"measured"
count1
10
word"glinting"
count1
11
word"tracing"
count1
highlights
0"scanning"
1"calculating"
2"trembled"
3"flickered"
4"weight"
5"flicked"
6"tension"
7"unspoken"
8"silence"
9"measured"
10"glinting"
11"tracing"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences108
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences108
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences148
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1519
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions24
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions80
wordCount1058
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity3.12
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity5.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Soho2
Carter2
Silas8
London2
Blackwood1
Prague1
Eva25
Aurora33
Cardiff2
Rory1
Brendan1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Carter"
3"Silas"
4"Blackwood"
5"Eva"
6"Aurora"
7"Rory"
8"Brendan"
places
0"Soho"
1"London"
2"Prague"
3"Cardiff"
globalScore0
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences61
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
68.33% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.317
wordCount1519
matches
0"not as a shackle, but as a bridge"
1"not as words, but as a hand extended, finger tracing the air near Eva’s scarre"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences148
matches
0"learned that London"
1"whispered that Rory"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs78
mean19.47
std16.26
cv0.835
sampleLengths
081
168
248
35
47
562
61
713
81
925
1014
114
1211
1325
1426
153
163
1739
1815
196
2020
2112
2215
2314
2441
2522
2616
2713
284
2917
3036
313
3211
338
3412
3517
3672
374
384
394
407
4131
4227
4331
447
4527
4610
4716
4831
4924
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences108
matches
0"was cropped"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs196
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount14
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences12
totalSentences148
ratio0.081
matches
0"She moved like she always did—cool, precise, her bright blue eyes scanning the room for Silas, for the hidden bookshelf, for anything out of place."
1"Aurora set the tray down and rubbed her left wrist—the small crescent-shaped scar from a childhood accident burned white against her skin—then glanced toward the bar."
2"But her eyes—those had changed most."
3"The hidden back room—accessible through the bookshelf—remained closed, a secret sleeping behind the wall."
4"He set two glasses down without asking—whiskey for Eva, gin for Aurora."
5"He knew everything; that was his job."
6"Aurora looked at Eva’s changed face—the surgical scar, the grey at the temples, the lines carved by years of courtroom battles and private grief."
7"The childhood accident—her father calling her careless, her mother bandaging her—felt suddenly distant, a small wound compared to the larger ones."
8"The bar around them seemed to fade—the green neon, the old maps, the photographs of dead men."
9"Her father, Brendan Carter, the barrister who had never understood her flight, who had called her a disappointment—he remembered her scar."
10"She looked down at Eva—at the changed woman, the hardened barrister, the friend who had pushed her into London."
11"The unspoken regret filled the space between them—not as a shackle, but as a bridge."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount733
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount26
adverbRatio0.03547066848567531
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.005457025920873124
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences148
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences148
mean10.26
std7.69
cv0.749
sampleLengths
018
127
225
311
422
58
612
726
819
913
1016
115
124
133
148
1522
1617
176
189
191
205
213
222
233
241
255
2620
273
287
294
304
315
326
332
345
354
3614
3712
3814
393
403
413
4221
4315
447
456
462
476
484
4916
43.92% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.23648648648648649
totalSentences148
uniqueOpeners35
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences90
matches
0"Then the door opened again."
1"Once warm, they now held"
2"Only Eva remained, and the"
3"Only the heavy, unspoken weight"
ratio0.044
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount23
totalSentences90
matches
0"She moved like she always"
1"He wore the silver signet"
2"His left leg gave him"
3"Her hair, once long and"
4"She wore a charcoal coat"
5"Her fingers trembled."
6"She hid it."
7"She did not smile."
8"His hazel eyes met Eva’s."
9"He did not ask."
10"He simply nodded, the signet"
11"She pulled off her coat,"
12"She did not touch her"
13"He set two glasses down"
14"he said softly, his voice"
15"She did not ask how"
16"He knew everything; that was"
17"Her hand shook, just slightly,"
18"His limp left a rhythm"
19"Her father, Brendan Carter, the"
ratio0.256
21.11% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount79
totalSentences90
matches
0"The green neon sign above"
1"Aurora Carter pushed through the"
2"She moved like she always"
3"Aurora set the tray down"
4"Silas Blackwood stood behind the"
5"He wore the silver signet"
6"His left leg gave him"
7"A woman stood there."
8"Aurora’s breath caught."
9"The years had carved Eva"
10"Her hair, once long and"
11"She wore a charcoal coat"
12"Aurora set down the tray."
13"Her fingers trembled."
14"She hid it."
15"The word came out flat."
16"Aurora moved to the bar,"
17"Eva stepped inside."
18"The green neon flickered across"
19"She did not smile."
ratio0.878
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences90
matches(empty)
ratio0
23.81% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences42
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"She wore a charcoal coat that smelled of rain and smoke, her jaw set like a stone."
1"Aurora moved to the bar, her five-foot-six frame threading between tables, her eyes refusing to look anywhere but Eva’s face."
2"The childhood accident—her father calling her careless, her mother bandaging her—felt suddenly distant, a small wound compared to the larger ones."
3"Her father, Brendan Carter, the barrister who had never understood her flight, who had called her a disappointment—he remembered her scar."
4"The movement was sudden, a quick out-of-thought decision that defined her cool-headed nature."
5"She stood at the center of the room, her straight hair brushing her shoulders, the crescent scar on her wrist glowing faintly in the dim light."
6"Outside, the green neon sign continued its steady glow, illuminating Soho, illuminating the bar, illuminating two old friends who had finally stopped running."
72.37% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags19
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"he said softly, his voice a low rumble,"
1"Aurora said, not looking back"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags13
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences58
tagDensity0.224
leniency0.448
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
77.3905%