Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
72
glossingSentenceCount
2
matches
0
"eyes that seemed to catch every wrong light in the world—stood at the edge of Richmond Park as the winter dusk turned the trees to charcoal against a sky the color of iron"
"Aurora Carter—Rory to her friends, though here she was just the girl with the black hair that fell straight to her shoulders and the bright blue eyes that seemed to catch every wrong light in the world—stood at the edge of Richmond Park as the winter dusk turned the trees to charcoal against a sky the color of iron."
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"Her left hand—where the small crescent-shaped scar from a childhood accident circled her wrist like a faint white moon—had gone numb."
2
"Nyx’s mouth—when they had one—curved in a shadow-smile that did not reach their glowing eyes."
3
"And the ground—she felt it through her boots—was soft as velvet, not soil but a moss-carpet that released a fragrance of wildflowers blooming in January, impossible clusters of silver-pink and white that turned their faces to a moon that was not quite right, that seemed too close or too aware."
4
"Aurora checked her watch—delivery schedule, the Golden Empress orders still in her bag, Silas’ bar above her flat, the ordinary architecture of her life."
5
"The amber sky of Dymas was not here; this was twilight with a violet undercurrent, stars arranged in constellations she did not know, and a moon that cast light as if it were passing through a prism."
6
"She was ethereal, ageless at three hundred years, and she left no footprints as she moved; Aurora watched her step forward, and the moss remained undisturbed, the soft carpet uncrushed."
7
"She touched the chain of her pendant; it pulsed again, deeper this time, a crimson throb that matched the beat of her own heart but seemed to come from elsewhere."
8
"The wildflowers parted around her boots, releasing a fragrance that was not perfume but something older—rain on hot stone, the sweetness of overripe fruit, and beneath it, the metallic tang of Hel."
9
"The world blurred at the edges; she caught her breath, her black hair falling straight, her delivery jacket suddenly feeling like a costume from a life that was fading with each step."
10
"The sound changed—not birds, not wind, but a low hum from the earth, a resonance that made her scarred wrist ache where her crescent moon of skin circled bone."
11
"The pendant pulsed harder, and she felt it—not just warmth, but a warning."
12
"The standing oaks at the grove’s edge shimmered, and through a gap she had not noticed—because she had been looking at Isolde, at the flowers, at the cold blade—she saw a glimpse of amber sky."
13
"The wildflowers bent to touch her sleeve, and the air smelled of honeyed cedar, of cold copper, and of something else—the exhaust of London, the noodles of her delivery route, the flat above Silas’ bar—all fading into the background noise of a life that was being left behind."
14
"Aurora looked at them—at the Shade, at the Oracle with her silver hair and pale eyes, at the cold blade, at the warm stone, at the wildflowers that turned to greet her like old friends."
15
"And deep inside the clearing, where the oak standing stones stood like old teeth marking a boundary that was not a wall but a door, Aurora Carter—Rory, Laila, Malphora—felt the crescent scar at her wrist pulse with the pendant’s rhythm, felt the moonsilver blade grow colder against her hip, and knew that she was not visiting anymore."
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
55
technicalSentenceCount
21
matches
0
"Aurora Carter—Rory to her friends, though here she was just the girl with the black hair that fell straight to her shoulders and the bright blue eyes that seeme…"
1
"The air smelled of damp bark, of rain that had fallen hours ago and left the earth wet without warming it, and of something else she could not name, a sweetness…"
2
"The Heartstone Pendant hung on its silver chain against her collarbone, deep crimson and roughly the size of her thumbnail, and she felt it now, a faint warmth …"
3
"Their eyes were faintly glowing violet, like bruised fruit caught in moonlight, and their voice sounded like a whisper carried on a wind that was not blowing."
4
"Her voice was cool, precise, the same voice she used to talk her way out of deliveries in impossible traffic, the voice of a girl born in Cardiff to an Irish ba…"
5
"The air felt pressed and thin, as if she were breathing through deep water, and the smell of damp bark gave way to honeyed cedar and the metallic tang of someth…"
6
"The trees in the grove were not oaks but something taller, older, their bark silvered with lichen that glowed like phosphor in the failing light."
7
"And the ground—she felt it through her boots—was soft as velvet, not soil but a moss-carpet that released a fragrance of wildflowers blooming in January, imposs…"
8
"The amber sky of Dymas was not here; this was twilight with a violet undercurrent, stars arranged in constellations she did not know, and a moon that cast light…"
9
"She felt the boundary between Earth and the Fae realm not as a line but as a pressure in her temples, a tightness that made her bright blue eyes water."
10
"The Half-Fae seer waited at the center of the clearing, where wildflowers bloomed year-round beneath trees that had no business flourishing in winter."
11
"She touched the chain of her pendant; it pulsed again, deeper this time, a crimson throb that matched the beat of her own heart but seemed to come from elsewher…"
12
"The wildflowers parted around her boots, releasing a fragrance that was not perfume but something older—rain on hot stone, the sweetness of overripe fruit, and …"
13
"The world blurred at the edges; she caught her breath, her black hair falling straight, her delivery jacket suddenly feeling like a costume from a life that was…"
14
"It was always cold to the touch, and now, in the moonlight of this hidden grove, it glowed faintly luminescent, a slender leaf of silver that could cut through …"
15
"The sound changed—not birds, not wind, but a low hum from the earth, a resonance that made her scarred wrist ache where her crescent moon of skin circled bone."
16
"Her boots left prints in the moss, but they silted over as quickly as they formed, as if the grove was erasing her passage, remembering her for only a moment be…"
17
"She thought of Silas, who knew more than he said and who had let her live above his bar because he recognized something in her that she had not yet named."
18
"Aurora looked at them—at the Shade, at the Oracle with her silver hair and pale eyes, at the cold blade, at the warm stone, at the wildflowers that turned to gr…"
19
"And deep inside the clearing, where the oak standing stones stood like old teeth marking a boundary that was not a wall but a door, Aurora Carter—Rory, Laila, M…"
20
"The Shadow followed, whispering of things that had not yet come to be, and the Grove, older than the Fae Courts, older than the Wardens who watched the rifts, o…"