Run: 2026-09-01-01M1EMW3NXBV2XMQP0ZKA20NDN

Run Details

Duration:
1m 11s
Cost:
$0.008533
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon above the entrance to The Raven’s Nest buzzed with an electric hum that vibrated inside Aurora Carter’s ribs as she pushed through the door. Rain had turned her straight black hair into dark ribbons against her shoulders, and her bright blue eyes, always too sharp for the room they occupied, scanned the dim interior before settling on the figure at the far end of the counter. Silas Blackwood stood ankle-deep in shadow, his grey-streaked auburn hair catching the weak bulb overhead like a torch set deliberately low, his neatly trimmed beard framing a mouth that had gone still as stone. She carried the smell of Yu-Fei Cheung’s kitchen with her, grease and ginger and the particular steam of noodles that stuck to containers, and she set her delivery bag on the stool beside her with a thunk. The small crescent scar on her left wrist caught the light as she rolled her sleeve down, a souvenir of a childhood accident that now felt like a brand for every bad decision she had made since leaving Cardiff. Silas turned a glass with his right hand, the silver signet ring marking the wood with a faint, dry sound. “You’re late.” Aurora pulled her gaze away from the old maps that covered the walls, black-and-white photographs of men with cigarette smoke curling from their lips. “I came straight from Golden Empress. The delivery window closed at ten.” “I don’t care about the noodles.” His hazel eyes locked onto hers, unblinking. “You live above my bar and you treat me like a stranger at the door.” “I treat everyone like a stranger when they’ve been away for years.” Silas leaned his weight onto his left leg, the slight limp from the Prague operation more pronounced now in the quiet of the bar, and his gaze tracked her scar with a recognition that made her stomach tighten. “You kept that.” “It’s not a trophy.” Her voice came out flat, cool-headed, the kind of tone that had once impressed professors at Cardiff University before she fled Pre-Law for London at Eva’s behest, before she left an abusive ex named Evan in a Camden stairwell with blood on his cufflinks. Silas set the glass down. “Three years, Rory. You haven’t looked at me since I came back from the operation.” Aurora traced her left wrist with her thumb. “You weren’t exactly waiting by the door.” “I had a list of people to protect. You were on it.” “You never told me.” “I never told anyone.” He moved closer, his beard brushing his collar, the silver ring glinting. “Your father called me the week you left Cardiff. He asked if I could find you. I told him to let you go.” Aurora’s breathing changed, shallow and quick, her bright blue eyes darkening against the neon. “Brendan Carter never tells anyone anything. He’s an Irish barrister who treats emotion like a legal liability.” “Then he lied to you, too. I told him you were already gone. I told him you had disappeared into London, into Golden Empress and delivery bags and a flat with no windows.” “I didn’t need a spy to tell me to run from Evan.” She stepped closer to the counter, her shoulder-length black hair damp from the rain, her body the height of a woman who had learned to make herself small in doorways. “You kept me off your books because I wasn’t important enough for a retired spymaster with a limp and a bar full of ghosts.” “That’s not it.” Silas’s voice dropped, gravel under velvet. “I kept you away because I failed you. I failed to see Evan for what he was. I failed to warn you that leaving wasn’t the same as escaping.” The hidden back room behind the bookshelf remained shut, its secret ordinary now, a joke they no longer shared, and Aurora glanced at the door that concealed clandestine meetings for a network she had never been part of, though she had lived above it for months. “You think I came looking for your apology?” She set her hands on the counter, the wood sticky with the residue of old drinks. “I come here because I need to know if you see me, or if you see the girl who used to argue about intelligence in the library.” “I see both.” Silas tilted his head. “You came back to London, but you didn’t come back to me.” The weight of time sat between them like a physical object, heavy and shaped by every unspoken regret that had gathered like dust in the cracks of The Raven’s Nest. Aurora thought of Cardiff University, of Pre-Law books stacked in a dorm room she had abandoned, of her mother Jennifer Carter née Ellis teaching Welsh literature in a room she would never see again. “I deliver noodles for a living,” Aurora said, her words sharp and quick, her intelligence still intact though she wore it differently now, wrapped in practical clothing instead of ambition. “I live in a flat above your ceiling. I have a scar on my left wrist and straight black hair that I don’t bother to fix, and I haven’t spoken to anyone from Cardiff except Eva, and she only texts me when she needs money.” Silas looked at the change in her, not in her body—she was still 5’6”, still bright-eyed, still sharp—but in the way she held herself, like a door that had been kicked open too many times and never fully repaired. “You changed,” he said. “You look like a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner who carries the weight of Prague in his knee and a silver ring that pretends to be a crown.” “We both changed.” He lifted his glass, then set it down untouched. “You came back to this bar because you think I owe you something.” “I came back because I wanted to see if the person who taught me that quick thinking was a weapon could still recognize the woman who uses it to survive.” Silas’s jaw tightened. The green neon flickered, casting red-tinged light across his beard, and for a moment the room seemed to narrow to just the space between his hazel eyes and her bright blue ones. “I’m sorry,” he said. Aurora pulled back, the admission sharper than any blow. She touched her left wrist again, feeling the crescent scar as if it might burn. “Sorry is cheap. You disappeared when I needed a father figure, not a code name, and now you want me to sit in your secret room and pretend we’re still the same two people who thought intelligence wins wars.” “I don’t want that.” Silas moved closer, his limp dragging slightly against the floorboards, his authority quiet but undeniable. “I want you to understand that I kept you away because I was afraid that if I saw you, I would see everything I failed to prevent. I kept your father’s secret. I kept your absence. I kept you from yourself because I was too broken from Prague to handle the weight of a child who had grown into someone I couldn’t protect.” Aurora laughed, the sound breaking against the old maps, a quick, punchy reaction that masked the tremor in her hands. “You protected nothing. I left Evan with nothing but a broken nose and a lesson. I left Pre-Law with nothing but a degree I won’t use. I left Cardiff because I had to, and I came to London because Eva told me to, and now I live above your bar because I have nowhere else to go.” “I know,” Silas said. “You don’t know anything. You have a bar, a network of contacts, a hidden room for clandestine meetings, and a limp that reminds you every hour of what you lost. I have a delivery bag, a flat with a leak, and a scar that reminds me I survived.” Silas reached for her shoulder, then stopped, his silver ring glinting between them like a barrier. “I opened this place for people who think in codes because I thought nobody needed a place to speak plainly. You speak plainly now, Rory. You always did. You just forgot that I was listening.” Aurora stared at the bookshelf that concealed the back room, at the dark wood that held secrets they no longer shared. The rain against the window sounded like static, and she realized that the tension between who they were—she the brilliant law student, he the field agent who had once seemed to know everything—and who they had become was not a gap to bridge but a chasm to acknowledge. “I’m not your secret anymore,” she said. “I never said you were.” She turned toward the green neon doorway, her black hair clinging to her neck, her bright blue eyes fixed on the exit. “If you want to talk again, don’t make me find you in my own bar, Silas. Knock on my door like a person.” She stopped at the threshold, her shoulder brushing the frame, the delivery bag heavy against her hip. “Silas.” He didn’t turn. “Yes?” Aurora looked back at the grey-streaked auburn hair, the neatly trimmed beard, the hazel eyes that had once seen too much, the silver signet ring that marked him as a man who had never fully left the field. “Next time,” she said, “bring a reason I haven’t heard before.” Then she walked out into the rain, leaving the bar to its maps and its electric hum, leaving Silas to the weight of his knee and his unspoken regret, leaving the secret room locked behind a bookshelf that no longer held their shared code, and the green neon buzzed on behind her like a heartbeat that refused to stop.
created_at"2026-09-01T14:09:51.812Z" 9/1/2026, 2:09:51 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags26
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Aurora pulled back [back]"
dialogueSentences49
tagDensity0.531
leniency1
rawRatio0.038
effectiveRatio0.038
93.87% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1630
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"deliberately"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"deliberately"
1"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
35.58% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1630
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"electric"
count2
1
word"vibrated"
count1
2
word"scanned"
count1
3
word"weight"
count5
4
word"stomach"
count1
5
word"traced"
count1
6
word"glinting"
count2
7
word"velvet"
count1
8
word"clandestine"
count2
9
word"unspoken"
count2
10
word"flickered"
count1
11
word"tinged"
count1
12
word"tension"
count1
highlights
0"electric"
1"vibrated"
2"scanned"
3"weight"
4"stomach"
5"traced"
6"glinting"
7"velvet"
8"clandestine"
9"unspoken"
10"flickered"
11"tinged"
12"tension"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences53
matches(empty)
88.95% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences53
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences75
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen71
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1626
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions18
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
94.29% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions59
wordCount1077
uniqueNames21
maxNameDensity1.11
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Raven2
Nest2
Aurora11
Carter2
Blackwood1
Yu-Fei1
Cheung1
Cardiff4
Silas12
Prague2
University2
Pre-Law3
London2
Eva2
Evan2
Camden1
Jennifer1
Ellis1
Welsh1
You5
Rory1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Aurora"
3"Carter"
4"Blackwood"
5"Yu-Fei"
6"Cheung"
7"Silas"
8"Eva"
9"Evan"
10"Jennifer"
11"Ellis"
12"You"
13"Rory"
places
0"Cardiff"
1"Prague"
2"London"
3"Camden"
globalScore0.943
windowScore1
28.05% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences41
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"felt like a brand for every bad decisio"
1"sounded like static, and she realized that"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.615
wordCount1626
matches
0"not a gap to bridge but a chasm to acknowledge"
77.78% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences75
matches
0"forgot that I"
1"realized that the"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs47
mean34.6
std25.42
cv0.735
sampleLengths
0103
176
220
32
436
528
612
738
83
948
1020
1115
1212
134
1439
1531
1633
1766
1838
1946
2051
2119
2264
2375
2439
254
2629
2725
2830
2935
304
3163
3282
3377
344
3548
3651
3769
387
395
4045
4117
421
434
4438
4511
4659
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences53
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs165
matches(empty)
66.67% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences75
ratio0.027
matches
0"Silas looked at the change in her, not in her body—she was still 5’6”, still bright-eyed, still sharp—but in the way she held herself, like a door that had been kicked open too many times and never fully repaired."
1"Aurora stared at the bookshelf that concealed the back room, at the dark wood that held secrets they no longer shared. The rain against the window sounded like static, and she realized that the tension between who they were—she the brilliant law student, he the field agent who had once seemed to know everything—and who they had become was not a gap to bridge but a chasm to acknowledge."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount898
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount28
adverbRatio0.031180400890868598
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.005567928730512249
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences75
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences75
mean21.68
std15.21
cv0.701
sampleLengths
027
142
234
337
439
520
62
724
812
913
1015
1112
1238
133
1448
155
1615
178
187
1912
204
2116
2223
2314
2417
2533
2642
2724
289
2929
3046
3124
3227
337
3412
3530
3634
3730
3845
3939
404
4129
4225
4330
4435
454
4627
4736
4846
495
31.33% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats14
diversityRatio0.22666666666666666
totalSentences75
uniqueOpeners17
69.44% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences48
matches
0"Then she walked out into"
ratio0.021
36.67% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount22
totalSentences48
matches
0"She carried the smell of"
1"His hazel eyes locked onto"
2"Her voice came out flat,"
3"He moved closer, his beard"
4"She stepped closer to the"
5"She set her hands on"
6"He lifted his glass, then"
7"You disappeared when I needed"
8"I kept your father’s secret."
9"I kept your absence."
10"I kept you from yourself"
11"I left Evan with nothing"
12"I left Pre-Law with nothing"
13"I left Cardiff because I"
14"You have a bar, a"
15"I have a delivery bag,"
16"You speak plainly now, Rory."
17"You always did."
18"You just forgot that I"
19"She turned toward the green"
ratio0.458
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount46
totalSentences48
matches
0"The green neon above the"
1"Rain had turned her straight"
2"Silas Blackwood stood ankle-deep in"
3"She carried the smell of"
4"The small crescent scar on"
5"Silas turned a glass with"
6"Aurora pulled her gaze away"
7"His hazel eyes locked onto"
8"Silas leaned his weight onto"
9"Her voice came out flat,"
10"Silas set the glass down."
11"Aurora traced her left wrist"
12"He moved closer, his beard"
13"Aurora’s breathing changed, shallow and"
14"She stepped closer to the"
15"Silas’s voice dropped, gravel under"
16"The hidden back room behind"
17"She set her hands on"
18"Silas tilted his head"
19"The weight of time sat"
ratio0.958
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences48
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences20
technicalSentenceCount10
matches
0"The green neon above the entrance to The Raven’s Nest buzzed with an electric hum that vibrated inside Aurora Carter’s ribs as she pushed through the door."
1"Silas Blackwood stood ankle-deep in shadow, his grey-streaked auburn hair catching the weak bulb overhead like a torch set deliberately low, his neatly trimmed …"
2"She carried the smell of Yu-Fei Cheung’s kitchen with her, grease and ginger and the particular steam of noodles that stuck to containers, and she set her deliv…"
3"Aurora pulled her gaze away from the old maps that covered the walls, black-and-white photographs of men with cigarette smoke curling from their lips."
4"Silas leaned his weight onto his left leg, the slight limp from the Prague operation more pronounced now in the quiet of the bar, and his gaze tracked her scar …"
5"The hidden back room behind the bookshelf remained shut, its secret ordinary now, a joke they no longer shared, and Aurora glanced at the door that concealed cl…"
6"You have a bar, a network of contacts, a hidden room for clandestine meetings, and a limp that reminds you every hour of what you lost."
7"Aurora stared at the bookshelf that concealed the back room, at the dark wood that held secrets they no longer shared. The rain against the window sounded like …"
8"Aurora looked back at the grey-streaked auburn hair, the neatly trimmed beard, the hazel eyes that had once seen too much, the silver signet ring that marked hi…"
9"Then she walked out into the rain, leaving the bar to its maps and its electric hum, leaving Silas to the weight of his knee and his unspoken regret, leaving th…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags21
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"He moved, his beard brushing his collar, the silver ring glinting"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Aurora laughed (laugh)"
dialogueSentences49
tagDensity0.143
leniency0.286
rawRatio0.143
effectiveRatio0.041
77.4208%