Run: 2026-09-01-01M1EMWP9FN7K5RXQGD65ZS1JR

Run Details

Duration:
1m 2s
Cost:
$0.007293
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The oak standing stones bit into Aurora Carter’s palms. She stood at the boundary of The Fae Grove in Richmond Park, and the cold here did not behave like London cold. It settled into her ribs instead of her skin. Black hair, straight and shoulder-length, stuck to her neck, heavy with mist that tasted of copper. She wore the thin jacket from Yu-Fei Cheung’s Golden Empress delivery rounds, but the temperature here was wrong, a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm that forgot what winter meant. "This is wrong," she said. The clearing opened like a wound in the dark. Wildflowers bloomed in violet and gold despite the season, year-round, their scent sweet and metallic on her tongue. The air moved differently. It spoke through branches without touching leaves. Aurora touched the crescent scar on her left wrist—glass, blood, her mother’s hands, a childhood accident that never fully healed. It throbbed. She checked the pendant. The Heartstone rested against her collarbone on its silver chain, roughly the size of a thumbnail, a deep crimson gem that pulsed with a faint inner glow. Here, the warmth sharpened, pointing inward toward the grove’s center instead of any Hel portal she knew. "You led me here," she said to the stone, to the air, to the unknown benefactor. No answer came. Only her own breath, which felt too loud, too separate from the stillness. She walked. The watch on her wrist ticked backward for a half-second, then spun, and she realized time moved differently inside the Grove. Minutes outside could stretch into days, or vanish entirely. She had crossed the park gates when the streetlamps flickered, or an hour ago, or perhaps she had been walking since yesterday. The oak trunks stood older than the city. Their bark peeled like old skin. Aurora kept her bright blue eyes open, scanning for motion at the edge of vision, her height of five feet six inches making her feel small between the stones. A sound split the dark. One plucked string, low, vibrating in her molars. Not birds. Not traffic from the distant park edge. The note came from behind her, though she had not turned her back. She turned. Nothing but oak and shadow. "Who plays that?" she asked. The wildflowers trembled. Three blossoms near her boots tilted in unison, petals opening wider. She spoke again, to break the silence, to prove she was not imagining. "I’m not leaving," she said. But her voice came thin, and the sound returned, softer, a rhythm that did not match any music she knew, a lullaby broken into pieces. Aurora stepped deeper. The heartstone grew warmer, crimson deepening to something that looked like blood in lamplight. She was cool-headed, intelligent, known for quick out-of-the-box thinking. She had fled Cardiff, fled an abusive ex named Evan, built a life above Silas’ bar where silence meant safety. This silence was different. Weighted with listening. She reached the center. The stones vanished behind her. The path back was thick undergrowth, and she had walked farther than she believed possible in the dark. Her breath came ragged. The sound returned, closer now, a low opening of a throat, a tearing of silk that matched nothing human. "Show yourself," she said. A figure appeared at the tree line. Black hair, straight, shoulder-length. Height exactly five feet six inches. The face was turned away, or missing, or hidden by shadow—she could not say which. It wore a jacket like hers, but the fabric was too still, too heavy, and when it moved, the wildflowers turned crimson in its wake, matching the pendant. Aurora stepped back. The crescent scar on her wrist glowed white. "You’re not my benefactor," she said. The figure did not answer. But the air changed. The wildflowers bloomed louder, a chorus of silent opening, their golden petals turning crimson, the same shade as the gem at her throat. Aurora reached for the pendant. The silver chain bit into her skin, the deep crimson stone hot enough to burn. "Hel," she whispered. The grove responded. The wind turned inside out. The trees moved without breeze, branches reaching. The sound was no longer plucked strings but wet, open throats, a rhythm that matched her heartbeat and then replaced it. She spoke to the dark, to the twin, to the benefactor she never met. "Not alone," she said. The figure moved closer. Aurora backed into a tree. Its bark was warm, blood-warm, alive beneath her collarbone, and she realized the wood was breathing. Her watch was gone, or swallowed, or lost to the time that moved differently here. She held the Heartstone to her chest with both hands. The faint inner glow became a pulse that did not match her own, demanding, hungry. "Give it back," Aurora said. But the pendant only glowed fiercer, a beacon, a heart of stone, and she knew the wrongness had not begun when she crossed the boundary, but when she decided she wanted answers. The figure raised a hand. The crescent scar on its left wrist appeared, glowing white, identical to hers, the same childhood accident mirrored back at her. Aurora kept her bright blue eyes open. She would not close them. She would not turn away. "I’m still here," she said. The wildflowers opened wider, crimson and gold, and the grove breathed out a single note, the sound of doors opening, of time folding in on itself, and she knew she was inside now, not outside, and the boundary was not where she thought it was. The heartstone pulsed once, twice, and then the dark held the sound, and she stood in the center of The Fae Grove while the oak standing stones watched from nowhere, and she was not alone. She spoke to the silence that stayed. "You owe me," she said. But the silence did not answer. It only waited, and the crimson flowers turned, tracking her, and the time moved on.
created_at"2026-09-01T14:10:10.871Z" 9/1/2026, 2:10:10 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences11
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount991
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
24.32% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount991
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"throbbed"
count1
1
word"pulsed"
count2
2
word"warmth"
count1
3
word"flickered"
count1
4
word"scanning"
count1
5
word"trembled"
count1
6
word"silence"
count5
7
word"silk"
count1
8
word"pulse"
count1
9
word"beacon"
count1
highlights
0"throbbed"
1"pulsed"
2"warmth"
3"flickered"
4"scanning"
5"trembled"
6"silence"
7"silk"
8"pulse"
9"beacon"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences90
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences90
filterMatches
0"feel"
1"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences90
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen45
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords989
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions29
wordCount952
uniqueNames16
maxNameDensity0.95
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Aurora9
Carter1
Fae3
Grove3
Richmond1
Park1
London1
Yu-Fei1
Cheung1
Golden1
Empress1
Earth1
Heartstone2
Hel1
Cardiff1
Evan1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Carter"
2"Yu-Fei"
3"Cheung"
4"Heartstone"
5"Evan"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
2"Richmond"
3"Park"
4"London"
5"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences52
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like blood in lamplight"
98.89% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords1.011
wordCount989
matches
0"no longer plucked strings but"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences90
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs45
mean21.98
std18.46
cv0.84
sampleLengths
087
15
238
322
448
516
616
754
843
935
102
115
125
1314
1413
155
1625
1753
184
1923
2023
214
2260
2311
246
2532
2620
273
283
2933
3014
314
3225
3315
3425
355
3632
3726
3817
395
4045
4135
427
435
4421
97.47% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences90
matches
0"was turned"
1"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs167
matches
0"was not imagining"
1"was breathing"
79.37% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences90
ratio0.022
matches
0"Aurora touched the crescent scar on her left wrist—glass, blood, her mother’s hands, a childhood accident that never fully healed."
1"The face was turned away, or missing, or hidden by shadow—she could not say which."
97.85% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount471
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount20
adverbRatio0.04246284501061571
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.012738853503184714
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences90
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences90
mean10.99
std8.79
cv0.8
sampleLengths
09
122
29
316
431
55
69
718
84
97
1020
112
124
1327
1417
1516
163
1713
182
1921
209
2122
228
236
2429
255
268
272
287
2913
302
315
325
333
3411
3513
365
3725
383
3914
409
4120
424
433
444
455
4618
474
4819
494
41.85% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.3111111111111111
totalSentences90
uniqueOpeners28
43.86% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences76
matches
0"Only her own breath, which"
ratio0.013
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount22
totalSentences76
matches
0"She stood at the boundary"
1"It settled into her ribs"
2"She wore the thin jacket"
3"It spoke through branches without"
4"She checked the pendant."
5"she said to the stone,"
6"She had crossed the park"
7"Their bark peeled like old"
8"She spoke again, to break"
9"She was cool-headed, intelligent, known"
10"She had fled Cardiff, fled"
11"She reached the center."
12"Her breath came ragged."
13"It wore a jacket like"
14"She spoke to the dark,"
15"Its bark was warm, blood-warm,"
16"Her watch was gone, or"
17"She held the Heartstone to"
18"She would not close them."
19"She would not turn away."
ratio0.289
38.95% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount64
totalSentences76
matches
0"The oak standing stones bit"
1"She stood at the boundary"
2"It settled into her ribs"
3"She wore the thin jacket"
4"The clearing opened like a"
5"Wildflowers bloomed in violet and"
6"The air moved differently."
7"It spoke through branches without"
8"Aurora touched the crescent scar"
9"She checked the pendant."
10"The Heartstone rested against her"
11"Here, the warmth sharpened, pointing"
12"she said to the stone,"
13"The watch on her wrist"
14"Minutes outside could stretch into"
15"She had crossed the park"
16"The oak trunks stood older"
17"Their bark peeled like old"
18"Aurora kept her bright blue"
19"A sound split the dark."
ratio0.842
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences76
matches(empty)
ratio0
37.82% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences34
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"Black hair, straight and shoulder-length, stuck to her neck, heavy with mist that tasted of copper."
1"She wore the thin jacket from Yu-Fei Cheung’s Golden Empress delivery rounds, but the temperature here was wrong, a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm that …"
2"Only her own breath, which felt too loud, too separate from the stillness."
3"The heartstone grew warmer, crimson deepening to something that looked like blood in lamplight."
4"The faint inner glow became a pulse that did not match her own, demanding, hungry."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences11
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0.091
effectiveRatio0.091
85.3452%