Run: 2026-09-01-01M1EN8DDTZGEJ4PJYPNA43AQD

Run Details

Duration:
1m 36s
Cost:
$0.011758
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign above The Raven’s Nest buzzed against the black London sky, painting the wet cobblestones in a sickly emerald glow that matched the bruise blooming on Harlow Quinn’s left wrist, where the worn leather watch dug into her skin like a silent accusation. She had spent eighteen years in the Metropolitan Police, and every one of them had taught her to read architecture before she crossed a threshold. The walls inside Silas’ bar held old maps that curled at the seams, black-and-white photographs of dead men in collars that stared down at the patrons, and behind a false bookshelf sat a hidden back room where the clique gathered for clandestine meetings that never appeared on any official record. Harlow had not entered for a drink. She had come because Tomás Herrera had slipped through that doorway ten minutes ago, and his Saint Christopher medallion caught the green light like a beacon of guilt. Tomás stepped out onto the pavement, olive skin glistening, short curly dark brown hair plastered to his skull like wet rope. He looked at her with warm brown eyes that had already calculated the distance to every alley in Soho. His left forearm, marked by the old knife scar he had carried since the attack that ended his NHS license, stayed tucked tight against his ribs. The rain hammered his shoulders in sheets too heavy for an umbrella to beat back. “You’re running from the wrong ghost, Herrera.” Harlow stepped forward, military precision in her stride, her sharp jaw set against the wind. “I lost Morris three years ago to something supernatural I still don’t fully understand. I don’t need another body on my conscience, and I don’t want your circle’s secrets scattered across my desk.” Tomás laughed, but the sound died in his throat, choked by the downpour. “You don’t know what you’re chasing.” “I know you’re a former paramedic who administers unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients behind this bar’s secret door. I know your circle sells banned alchemical substances to people who shouldn’t have them. And I know you’ve been using that hidden room to hide evidence that connects to my partner’s disappearance.” He bolted. The chase exploded into the rain-soaked streets. Tomás cut north through the wet alley between two brick buildings, his feet slapping the slick stones with a rhythm born of emergency medicine, not evasion. Harlow followed, her boots finding purchase on the slick pavement, her leather watch catching the green neon as they passed the bar’s entrance again. The smell of old beer and damp plaster clung to Tomás’s heels, a trail of breadcrumbs she refused to lose. “Keep running!” Tomás’s voice cracked by the wind. “You first!” Harlow’s breath came sharp behind the downpour, her brown eyes narrow against the storm. They turned onto a wider avenue where the rain hammered car roofs and streetlamps bled into puddles like spilled ink. Neon signs from other establishments bled into the darkness—red, blue, sick yellow—reflecting in the puddles as Tomás’s silhouette cut through them. He moved with the frantic economy of a man who had already decided that the only safe place was the one he had memorized: the abandoned Tube station beneath Camden, where The Veil Market moved every full moon, where bone tokens bought entry into a realm of enchanted goods and buried truths. Harlow knew the name. She had heard whispers in the precinct, in the hushed corridors of a police force that still pretended the supernatural was a myth for frightened children. The market was no myth. It was a black market where human beings turned into prices. Tomás ducked into a narrow stairwell behind a shuttered pub, the stairs descending past a rusted sign that read Camden Town in faded white. The air changed instantly. The smell of rain gave way to copper, dust, and cold stone. Harlow followed, her hand brushing the damp wall, her teeth bared against the unknown. The stairwell opened into a cavernous abandoned station. The tracks had rusted long ago, the platform edges curling like dead leaves. Above them, the tunnel arched into darkness that seemed to drink the sound. Tomás was already moving across the platform, a dark shape against the gray stone, his scarred forearm swinging with each stride. “Stay back!” Tomás’s voice cracked across the cavern. “You think I came this far to stand in the lobby?” Harlow crossed the platform with deliberate strides, her boots striking each tile with a sound like a gunshot. “You’re a paramedic who lost his license because he treated monsters. You think that makes you immune to me?” Tomás turned, his warm brown eyes now frantic, the Saint Christopher medallion swinging at his throat like a pendulum of doom. “The Veil Market requires a bone token. You don’t have one. You’re not wanted here. The clique has people who know your face, Harlow. They’ve been waiting for you to follow me down here.” “I don’t need an invitation to pursue a suspect who hid evidence tied to Morris’s disappearance!” Tomás stepped into the tunnel, and the darkness swallowed him except for his breath, quick and shallow. Harlow paused at the threshold of the market. Before her, the abandoned station transformed. Stalls lined the rusted tracks like vendors at a medieval fair, but their goods glowed with an impossible light: vials of silver liquid that moved on their own, enchanted jewelry that whispered when touched, alchemical powders that smelled of burnt sugar and corruption. The air here was thick, alive, dangerous. Figures moved between the stalls with masked faces and hands that never fully revealed themselves, trading information that turned lives into currency. Tomás stood at the far end, his scarred forearm glowing in the purple light of a distant burner. He turned and faced her, no longer running, no longer hiding. “You have to decide.” The words cut through the market’s hum like a blade. “You can turn back to the rain, to the streets where you belong, to the precinct that will bury you under paperwork if you vanish down here. Or you can come into the dark where the clique trades everything—including answers about Morris.” Harlow’s leather watch ticked against her wrist, a countdown she refused to hear. She looked at the hidden back room of The Raven’s Nest, at the old maps that had shown her this exact doorway, at the green neon sign that had guided her through the storm. She was Detective Harlow Quinn. She had burned eighteen years in the service of a city that lied about its monsters, and she had lost Morris to the lie. The rain thundered above ground, distant now, a world she could no longer access without surrender. Harlow stepped into the tunnel. The market whispered around her, the stalls creaking with hidden weight, and Tomás did not move, waiting to see if she truly understood the price she had chosen, or if she was merely another blind figure walking into the dark.
created_at"2026-09-01T14:16:35.02Z" 9/1/2026, 2:16:35 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
95.72% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1167
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"truly"
count1
highlights
0"truly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
74.29% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1167
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"clandestine"
count1
1
word"beacon"
count1
2
word"glistening"
count1
3
word"calculated"
count1
4
word"thundered"
count1
5
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"clandestine"
1"beacon"
2"glistening"
3"calculated"
4"thundered"
5"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences52
matches(empty)
32.97% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences52
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences65
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen52
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1164
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
71.26% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions49
wordCount889
uniqueNames19
maxNameDensity1.57
worstName"Tomás"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Tomás"
discoveredNames
Raven2
Nest2
London1
Harlow12
Quinn2
Metropolitan1
Police1
Tomás14
Herrera1
Saint2
Christopher2
Soho1
Tube1
Camden2
Veil1
Market1
Town1
Detective1
Morris1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Harlow"
3"Quinn"
4"Police"
5"Tomás"
6"Herrera"
7"Saint"
8"Christopher"
9"Market"
10"Morris"
places
0"London"
1"Metropolitan"
2"Soho"
3"Camden"
4"Town"
globalScore0.713
windowScore0.833
94.44% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences45
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"darkness that seemed to drink the sound"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1164
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences65
matches
0"decided that the"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs36
mean32.33
std33.33
cv1.031
sampleLengths
0156
181
27
315
433
513
66
750
82
977
102
116
122
1314
1493
1546
1654
1755
182
196
2011
2118
2219
2321
2434
2516
2625
2778
2829
294
3010
3142
3276
3316
345
3540
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences52
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs142
matches
0"was already moving"
98.90% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences65
ratio0.015
matches
0"Neon signs from other establishments bled into the darkness—red, blue, sick yellow—reflecting in the puddles as Tomás’s silhouette cut through them."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount277
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount3
adverbRatio0.010830324909747292
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.007220216606498195
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences65
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences65
mean17.91
std12.83
cv0.717
sampleLengths
046
125
250
37
428
521
619
726
815
97
1015
1133
1213
136
1450
152
167
1726
1824
1920
202
216
222
2314
2420
2521
2652
274
2826
295
3011
3124
324
3312
3414
358
3613
3713
3821
392
406
4111
4218
4319
4421
4534
4616
4717
488
496
43.85% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.26153846153846155
totalSentences65
uniqueOpeners17
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences51
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount12
totalSentences51
matches
0"She had spent eighteen years"
1"She had come because Tomás"
2"He looked at her with"
3"His left forearm, marked by"
4"They turned onto a wider"
5"He moved with the frantic"
6"She had heard whispers in"
7"It was a black market"
8"He turned and faced her,"
9"She looked at the hidden"
10"She was Detective Harlow Quinn."
11"She had burned eighteen years"
ratio0.235
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount49
totalSentences51
matches
0"The green neon sign above"
1"She had spent eighteen years"
2"The walls inside"
3"Harlow had not entered for"
4"She had come because Tomás"
5"Tomás stepped out onto the"
6"He looked at her with"
7"His left forearm, marked by"
8"The rain hammered his shoulders"
9"Harlow stepped forward, military precision"
10"Tomás laughed, but the sound"
11"The chase exploded into the"
12"Tomás cut north through the"
13"Harlow followed, her boots finding"
14"The smell of old beer"
15"Tomás’s voice cracked by the"
16"Harlow’s breath came sharp behind"
17"They turned onto a wider"
18"Neon signs from other establishments"
19"He moved with the frantic"
ratio0.961
98.04% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences51
matches
0"Before her, the abandoned station"
ratio0.02
27.03% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences37
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"The green neon sign above The Raven’s Nest buzzed against the black London sky, painting the wet cobblestones in a sickly emerald glow that matched the bruise b…"
1"His left forearm, marked by the old knife scar he had carried since the attack that ended his NHS license, stayed tucked tight against his ribs."
2"He moved with the frantic economy of a man who had already decided that the only safe place was the one he had memorized: the abandoned Tube station beneath Cam…"
3"Tomás ducked into a narrow stairwell behind a shuttered pub, the stairs descending past a rusted sign that read Camden Town in faded white."
4"Stalls lined the rusted tracks like vendors at a medieval fair, but their goods glowed with an impossible light: vials of silver liquid that moved on their own,…"
5"She looked at the hidden back room of The Raven’s Nest, at the old maps that had shown her this exact doorway, at the green neon sign that had guided her throug…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
84.5498%