Run: 2026-09-01-01M1EN96XPDMNGJ783Z90X3AW3

Run Details

Duration:
1m 16s
Cost:
$0.008604
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain came down hard enough to blur the edges of Camden, blackening the graffiti-streaked walls of the disused station beneath the streets. Detective Harlow Quinn pushed through the police tape with her shoulders squared in military precision, her closely cropped salt-and-pepper hair slick against her skull, her sharp jaw set against the chill. She wore her worn leather watch on her left wrist; it clicked sharply as she moved, measuring intervals rather than minutes. A corpse lay near the old ticket booth, clothed in a coat too thin for the damp. The mouth hung open, frozen in a rictus of surprise, but Harlow noticed the hands folded across the chest with judicial neatness, the fingers interlaced by someone who had arranged them after death. A voice cut through the tunnel’s echo. “Quinn.” Eva Kowalski stood at the foot of the stairs, round glasses slick with condensation, curly red hair darkened to damp auburn, her freckled complexion pale against the fluorescent buzz. She clutched her worn leather satchel full of books against her chest, tucking the hair behind her left ear with a nervous rhythm that never quite stopped. “You shouldn’t be here,” Harlow said. “I was already here when they called you.” Eva’s green eyes flicked to the body, then back. “The sigils match the Shade artisans.” Harlow stepped closer. The air smelled of rust, stale electricity, and something chemical—alchemical residue, perhaps, or something sold at the Veil Market. She crouched, her coat hem brushing cold tiles. “What sigils?” “Look at the floor.” Eva pointed with a gloved finger. Cramped symbols traced a circle around the dead man. “These are protective marks. He was pulled through a rift.” Harlow did not look at the symbols; she looked at the blood. It arced in a thin parabola from the body to the turnstile, too high for a fall, too low for a jump. She traced the trajectory with her finger, stopping two feet above the corpse’s head. Someone had stood over him. “The bone token is missing,” Eva continued. She opened her satchel, extracting a notebook. “The Veil Market requires a bone token for entry. It’s gone from his pocket. He was lured there, or something was lured here.” Harlow crouched lower. Near the body, half-buried in dust, lay a small brass compass. Verdigris coated its casing like old copper. The face was etched with protective sigils—intricate, symmetrical, precise. The needle trembled, not at a portal, but pointing toward the east tunnel, a disused service passage that led to the surface above Camden Lock. “Your compass,” Harlow said. “Mine?” Eva’s fingers tightened on her satchel strap. “No. It was his.” “It points nowhere supernatural.” Harlow lifted the compass by the brass rim. The needle remained locked, fixed in a direction that spoke of exits, not rifts. “A Shade artisan crafts these to detect supernatural energy. This needle is stuck. The casing has patina, but the engravings are fresh. Look at the tool marks—machined, not carved. Someone made a prop.” Eva tucked her hair again, a nervous twitch beside her ear. “You’re hunting monsters because of Morris.” “I don’t hunt monsters. I hunt geometry.” Harlow set the compass down. Its needle still pointed east, toward the tunnel, toward a freight access, not a rift. “The Veil Market moves every full moon. This station hasn’t hosted it in three months. Yet your bone token is missing from the victim, and this compass—this fake—is here. Someone staged a market connection.” The body, Harlow realized, had been moved. Rigor mortis had set in the wrong posture; the limbs were too stiff to have folded like that after death. The kill site was elsewhere—perhaps the market itself, perhaps a tunnel where the clique conducted business behind the market’s veil. The water on the floor was not rain; it carried a chemical sweetness, silver nitrate and synthetic mercury compounds, both banned alchemical substances sold through the market’s hidden stalls. Eva stepped closer, her round glasses catching the fluorescent buzz. “Morris died because of what lives in these tunnels. You can’t deny it.” “I deny nothing.” Harlow stood, brushing her coat. “Morris died because he followed evidence that didn’t add up. He trusted interpretations over observation. I’m not repeating that.” “Then observe this.” Eva gestured to the symbols. “The blood matches a rift tear. The water—” “The water contains synthetic compounds from the market’s inventory. It’s not portal residue; it’s supply chain evidence.” Harlow moved to the turnstile, tracing the blood arc again. “The body was dragged here after death. The wound is at the back of the skull—one blow, precise, professional. There’s no defensive abrasion because he was dead before he hit this station. The bone token? It’s in his hand, not missing. I see the shadow of it. Someone planted the idea that it was lost to make us think he entered the market. He never entered.” Eva’s green eyes widened. For a moment, the occult researcher in her fought with the childhood friend who knew Harlow’s grief, the woman who had moved to London two years before Aurora and held a master’s degree from Oxford, the assistant who worked in restricted archives and knew more about ancient patterns than any detective. “You think this is about trafficking.” “I think the clique uses the Veil Market as a front. Enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information—those are the real products. And they use supernatural legends to bury testimony.” Harlow pointed to the compass needle’s target: the east tunnel, where a freight access led to warehouse districts above Camden Lock, not to any supernatural portal. “This compass isn’t pointing to death. It’s pointing to where they moved him.” Eva looked at the dead man’s coat lining, the way the collar was turned up with care that did not match a violent death. Harlow pointed to a thin fiber caught in the weave—paper, the kind used at the British Museum’s restricted archives. “You came here to document,” Harlow said. “I came to help.” “You brought archive material. The clique knows about Eva Kowalski’s research.” Harlow’s voice was steel, her sharp jaw refusing to soften. “They used your knowledge to build this scene. The bone token, the sigils, the compass—someone read your notes and constructed a supernatural murder to cover a human transaction.” Eva’s fingers spasmed behind her ear, tucking her hair with a frantic rhythm. The round glasses slipped down her nose. She looked at the body, at the fake compass with its fresh engravings, at Harlow’s brown eyes and the worn leather watch now ticking loudly in the damp air. “You’re not wrong,” Eva admitted. “I never am about evidence.” Harlow straightened, her military bearing returning as she scanned the platform once more. “The evidence doesn’t add up because it’s not meant to. Your interpretation sees a portal because the scene demands it. But the missing partner’s case, the alchemical residues, the forged compass, the staged bone token—they all point to a conspiracy using the Veil Market as both weapon and alibi.” The needle pointed east. The tunnel waited. Harlow turned toward it, her shadow stretching long across the tiles, the rain dripping from her closely cropped hair. “The rift isn’t in the station,” Harlow said. “It’s in the business they run above it.” She walked toward the tunnel, and Eva followed, her freckled face pale, her leather satchel clutched like a shield, her green eyes now seeing the cold geometry of murder instead of the shadow of spirits. The sound of their steps blended with the buzz of the lights and the smell of rust and lies, the compass still pointing toward an exit that would not hide them forever.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences36
tagDensity0.472
leniency0.944
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
96.11% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1286
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"sharply"
count1
highlights
0"sharply"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
49.46% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1286
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"chill"
count1
1
word"echo"
count1
2
word"flicked"
count1
3
word"traced"
count2
4
word"etched"
count1
5
word"intricate"
count1
6
word"trembled"
count1
7
word"synthetic"
count2
8
word"tracing"
count1
9
word"constructed"
count1
10
word"scanned"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"echo"
2"flicked"
3"traced"
4"etched"
5"intricate"
6"trembled"
7"synthetic"
8"tracing"
9"constructed"
10"scanned"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences59
matches(empty)
94.43% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences59
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences78
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen67
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1275
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
22.57% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions49
wordCount824
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity2.55
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Harlow"
discoveredNames
Camden3
Harlow21
Quinn1
Kowalski1
Eva13
Veil1
Market1
Cramped1
Lock2
London1
Aurora1
Oxford1
British1
Museum1
persons
0"Camden"
1"Harlow"
2"Quinn"
3"Kowalski"
4"Eva"
5"Museum"
places
0"Veil"
1"London"
2"Oxford"
3"British"
globalScore0.226
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences44
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.784
wordCount1275
matches
0"not at a portal, but pointing toward the east tunnel, a disused service passage"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences78
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs36
mean35.42
std25.67
cv0.725
sampleLengths
075
150
27
31
456
56
623
730
82
929
1053
1137
1255
134
1412
1559
1617
1761
1876
1923
2027
2116
2293
2355
246
2569
2643
277
284
2949
3049
315
3267
3326
3416
3567
87.42% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences59
matches
0"was etched"
1"been moved"
2"was turned"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs129
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount5
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences78
ratio0.115
matches
0"She wore her worn leather watch on her left wrist; it clicked sharply as she moved, measuring intervals rather than minutes."
1"The air smelled of rust, stale electricity, and something chemical—alchemical residue, perhaps, or something sold at the Veil Market."
2"Harlow did not look at the symbols; she looked at the blood."
3"The face was etched with protective sigils—intricate, symmetrical, precise."
4"Rigor mortis had set in the wrong posture; the limbs were too stiff to have folded like that after death."
5"The kill site was elsewhere—perhaps the market itself, perhaps a tunnel where the clique conducted business behind the market’s veil."
6"The water on the floor was not rain; it carried a chemical sweetness, silver nitrate and synthetic mercury compounds, both banned alchemical substances sold through the market’s hidden stalls."
7"“The water contains synthetic compounds from the market’s inventory. It’s not portal residue; it’s supply chain evidence.” Harlow moved to the turnstile, tracing the blood arc again."
8"Harlow pointed to a thin fiber caught in the weave—paper, the kind used at the British Museum’s restricted archives."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount832
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount29
adverbRatio0.03485576923076923
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.006009615384615385
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences78
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences78
mean16.35
std12.95
cv0.793
sampleLengths
023
131
221
317
433
57
61
729
827
96
1017
116
123
1319
148
152
1610
179
1810
1912
2022
2114
225
237
247
2523
263
2711
287
299
3025
314
328
334
3412
3514
3633
3711
386
3912
4015
4134
427
4320
4420
4529
4610
4713
488
4919
48.72% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.34615384615384615
totalSentences78
uniqueOpeners27
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences53
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount9
totalSentences53
matches
0"She wore her worn leather"
1"She clutched her worn leather"
2"She crouched, her coat hem"
3"It arced in a thin"
4"She traced the trajectory with"
5"She opened her satchel, extracting"
6"Its needle still pointed east,"
7"She looked at the body,"
8"She walked toward the tunnel,"
ratio0.17
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount50
totalSentences53
matches
0"The rain came down hard"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn pushed through"
2"She wore her worn leather"
3"A corpse lay near the"
4"The mouth hung open, frozen"
5"A voice cut through the"
6"Eva Kowalski stood at the"
7"She clutched her worn leather"
8"Eva’s green eyes flicked to"
9"Harlow stepped closer."
10"The air smelled of rust,"
11"She crouched, her coat hem"
12"Eva pointed with a gloved"
13"Harlow did not look at"
14"It arced in a thin"
15"She traced the trajectory with"
16"Someone had stood over him."
17"She opened her satchel, extracting"
18"Harlow crouched lower."
19"Verdigris coated its casing like"
ratio0.943
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences53
matches(empty)
ratio0
68.97% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences29
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"The needle trembled, not at a portal, but pointing toward the east tunnel, a disused service passage that led to the surface above Camden Lock."
1"For a moment, the occult researcher in her fought with the childhood friend who knew Harlow’s grief, the woman who had moved to London two years before Aurora a…"
2"The sound of their steps blended with the buzz of the lights and the smell of rust and lies, the compass still pointing toward an exit that would not hide them …"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
66.67% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Eva continued (continue)"
1"sharp jaw refusing (refuse)"
2"Eva admitted (admit)"
dialogueSentences36
tagDensity0.194
leniency0.389
rawRatio0.429
effectiveRatio0.167
77.8115%