| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 24 | | tagDensity | 0.042 | | leniency | 0.083 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1396 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 64.18% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1396 | | totalAiIsms | 10 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "throb" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "resonated" | | 3 | "whisper" | | 4 | "perfect" | | 5 | "depths" | | 6 | "warmth" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 119 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 119 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 142 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 38 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1400 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 0 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 34 | | wordCount | 1211 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 1.07 | | worstName | "Nyx" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 12 | | London | 2 | | Yu-Fei | 1 | | London-tap | 1 | | Grove | 2 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Welsh | 1 | | Nyx | 13 | | Half-Fae | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Yu-Fei" | | 2 | "Grove" | | 3 | "Nyx" | | 4 | "Half-Fae" |
| | places | | 0 | "London" | | 1 | "London-tap" | | 2 | "Cardiff" |
| | globalScore | 0.963 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 76 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.714 | | wordCount | 1400 | | matches | | 0 | "not London-tap cold but the memory of ice" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 142 | | matches | | 0 | "stayed that way" | | 1 | "held that amber" |
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| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 55 | | mean | 25.45 | | std | 23.78 | | cv | 0.934 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 54 | | 1 | 26 | | 2 | 4 | | 3 | 31 | | 4 | 3 | | 5 | 50 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 97 | | 8 | 1 | | 9 | 51 | | 10 | 28 | | 11 | 40 | | 12 | 34 | | 13 | 4 | | 14 | 25 | | 15 | 23 | | 16 | 50 | | 17 | 48 | | 18 | 2 | | 19 | 22 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 26 | | 22 | 66 | | 23 | 2 | | 24 | 18 | | 25 | 7 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 1 | | 28 | 14 | | 29 | 74 | | 30 | 17 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 17 | | 34 | 91 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 26 | | 37 | 9 | | 38 | 34 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 18 | | 41 | 1 | | 42 | 17 | | 43 | 13 | | 44 | 45 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 33 | | 47 | 15 | | 48 | 6 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 119 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 218 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 42.25% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 4 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 142 | | ratio | 0.035 | | matches | | 0 | "The air layered scents one over another — crushed mint, woodsmoke, the mineral bite of wet slate, and underneath it a sweetness that reminded her of Yu-Fei's late kitchen, garlic and star anise, though no stove burned here." | | 1 | "Nyx crouched — or the idea of crouching gathered beside her." | | 2 | "Trees pressed close, bark carved with symbols that crawled when she tried to read them — spirals becoming eyes, eyes becoming mouths that shaped silent words." | | 3 | "They had walked twenty minutes or two hours; her legs held no ache to tell her which." | | 4 | "Shapes moved there — towers under an amber heaven, tables groaning with food that never ended, a figure with a smile too wide." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 174 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 4 | | adverbRatio | 0.022988505747126436 | | lyAdverbCount | 0 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 142 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 142 | | mean | 9.86 | | std | 6.93 | | cv | 0.703 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 24 | | 1 | 14 | | 2 | 11 | | 3 | 5 | | 4 | 16 | | 5 | 10 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 8 | | 8 | 11 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 12 | | 13 | 17 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 17 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 19 | | 19 | 29 | | 20 | 38 | | 21 | 1 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 13 | | 24 | 16 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 13 | | 28 | 15 | | 29 | 13 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 22 | | 33 | 13 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 2 | | 37 | 19 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 11 | | 40 | 14 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 13 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 18 | | 46 | 26 | | 47 | 2 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 67.37% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.4295774647887324 | | totalSentences | 142 | | uniqueOpeners | 61 | |
| 62.89% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 106 | | matches | | 0 | "Even the crows went silent." | | 1 | "Then everything snapped into a" |
| | ratio | 0.019 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 24 | | totalSentences | 106 | | matches | | 0 | "She stepped between the stones." | | 1 | "Her inner ear spun." | | 2 | "They stood inside." | | 3 | "Their branches knitted into a" | | 4 | "It resonated against the pendant" | | 5 | "She took a step." | | 6 | "She shoved it into her" | | 7 | "She dipped two fingers." | | 8 | "They crossed on stones that" | | 9 | "She turned her face." | | 10 | "They promised rest if she" | | 11 | "She shook her head hard" | | 12 | "It might have been Nyx." | | 13 | "It might have been the" | | 14 | "They had walked twenty minutes" | | 15 | "She wiped her mouth." | | 16 | "She pulled her hand back." | | 17 | "She rubbed it with her" | | 18 | "Her face held the stillness" | | 19 | "She lifted one hand" |
| | ratio | 0.226 | |
| 35.47% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 90 | | totalSentences | 106 | | matches | | 0 | "The oaks stood in their" | | 1 | "Bark like hammered pewter caught" | | 2 | "Nyx moved at her left," | | 3 | "Violet eyes burned low, the" | | 4 | "Rory laid her palm against" | | 5 | "Heat met her skin, a" | | 6 | "The crescent scar on her" | | 7 | "She stepped between the stones." | | 8 | "The world compressed." | | 9 | "Air shoved itself down her" | | 10 | "Her inner ear spun." | | 11 | "They stood inside." | | 12 | "Wildflowers covered every inch of" | | 13 | "Petals the size of her" | | 14 | "Colours she had no names" | | 15 | "The air layered scents one" | | 16 | "The oaks now numbered more" | | 17 | "Their branches knitted into a" | | 18 | "The space stretched in directions" | | 19 | "Nyx took on height, the" |
| | ratio | 0.849 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 106 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 33.90% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 59 | | technicalSentenceCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "Then everything snapped into a new shape, sharper, wetter, wrong in ways that made her teeth ache." | | 1 | "Colours she had no names for shifted as she watched: a blue that hummed against her eardrums, a gold that left the taste of sun-warmed honey on her tongue." | | 2 | "The air layered scents one over another — crushed mint, woodsmoke, the mineral bite of wet slate, and underneath it a sweetness that reminded her of Yu-Fei's la…" | | 3 | "A stream crossed the path, water so clear it seemed not to be there at all, flowing over pebbles that shone from inside like trapped stars." | | 4 | "Cold hit her, not London-tap cold but the memory of ice that had never known thaw, the cold of the space between stars." | | 5 | "Trees pressed close, bark carved with symbols that crawled when she tried to read them — spirals becoming eyes, eyes becoming mouths that shaped silent words." | | 6 | "She rubbed it with her thumb and kept her eyes on the path that kept unrolling." | | 7 | "Her face held the stillness of something that had watched cities become dust." | | 8 | "The Half-Fae's mouth curved, a crescent that mirrored the mark on Rory's wrist." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |