Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
56
glossingSentenceCount
5
matches
0
"charcoal that seemed to drink the sodium streetlight rather than reflect it, with slicked-back platinum blond hair that looked almost liquid, the kind of perfection that came from being born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros"
1
"something like incense or danger"
2
"sounded like a prayer and a wound"
3
"seemed ancient knowing, his fur the color of old paper and secrets"
4
"as if continuing a conversation they had never finished"
"She had been standing in the cramped entryway of Eva’s flat—not her flat, not the one above Silas’ bar where she paid rent in cash and slept with her window open to the London rain, but this cramped one-bedroom above the curry house on Brick Lane, a place covered in books and secrets and the smell of turmeric that seeped through the floorboards—but she had come because Eva was away, because someone had to feed the tabby, and because the old building had started to feel less secure since she had left the abusive ex named Evan behind in Cardiff."
1
"He did not smile, not exactly, but his amber eye flared with something grim and tender, and she felt the old pull between them—the attraction that had never been safe, the hurt that had never been repaired."
2
"The air was thick with turmeric and cumin from the curry house downstairs, and Ptolemy—not on a table, but balanced like a monarch on a stack of handwritten scrolls near the door—stretched and hissed, a warning to Lucien that even cats knew when a predator had slipped past three locks."
3
"The crescent scar glowed pale against her skin, and she tucked both hands behind her back to hide it, though not from him; he had seen it a thousand times."
4
"He was too close, and she was too aware of him—the warmth of his body in the narrow hallway, the way his charcoal suit seemed to drink the lamplight, the way his platinum hair held the room’s dim glow like a crown."
5
"He moved closer—not touching her, but close enough that she could smell him, cedar and something darker, like the smell of the realm of Avaros, or perhaps just the smell of a man who had been hiding."
6
"He raised his hand—not to touch her, but as if he were reaching for something lost."
7
"She was born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father and a Welsh teacher mother, and she had fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva; she had built a life of delivery routes and flat rentals above Silas’ bar, and she did not have room for a half-demon fixer who loved her in ways that could burn."
8
"But she was also Aurora Carter, and she knew that some people did not leave because they are unwanted; they leave because they are needed."
9
"Ptolemy was watching Lucien with amber eyes—she knew the cat was just a tabby, but in the light he seemed ancient, knowing, his fur the color of old paper and secrets."
10
"His hands were bare now—she noticed his fingers, long and precise, the kind of hands that could hold a blade or a heart—and he reached out, not to her face, but to her wrist, where the crescent scar lived."
11
"“I am not afraid of you,” he said, and lowered his head, not to kiss her—yet—but to rest his forehead against hers in the cramped flat where every surface was crowded with books, where the past and present met in the smell of curry and ink, where two people who had been broken by parting decided that they might try to be whole again."
12
"The flat was small, the history was long, and the romance—complicated, hurt-filled, and true—had finally come home."
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
42
technicalSentenceCount
17
matches
0
"She was twenty-five, born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father and a Welsh teacher mother, and she had fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend E…"
1
"Now she wore dark trousers and a worn cardigan over a white shirt, her straight shoulder-length black hair pulled back in a loose knot that left her bright blue…"
2
"He was taller than she remembered, five foot eleven of tailored charcoal that seemed to drink the sodium streetlight rather than reflect it, with slicked-back p…"
3
"His eyes were wrong in the precise, devastating way she had loved and feared and mourned: heterochromatic, one amber, one black, both holding her with an intens…"
4
"He held his ivory-handled cane in gloved hands, though he never leaned on it in front of her, and she knew it concealed a thin blade, knew that he had never use…"
5
"Her voice was cool, careful, the voice she used with clients at Yu-Fei Cheung’s Golden Empress when she delivered dumplings through London’s rain, the voice of …"
6
"He did not smile, not exactly, but his amber eye flared with something grim and tender, and she felt the old pull between them—the attraction that had never bee…"
7
"She should tell him he was not welcome at Eva’s flat, that she had already survived one man who moved in shadows and vanished, that she did not need another hal…"
8
"Lucien entered slowly, the heel of his tailored suit shoes clicking on the wooden floor with a precision that made the space feel even smaller."
9
"She had spent those days delivering meals for Yu-Fei Cheung’s Golden Empress, riding a scooter through London’s rain, taking orders for dumplings and noodles wh…"
10
"Her bright blue eyes were fixed on his, searching for the lie, but she found only weariness, the weariness of a man who had crossed realms for her and failed."
11
"He moved closer—not touching her, but close enough that she could smell him, cedar and something darker, like the smell of the realm of Avaros, or perhaps just …"
12
"Her voice was steady, her cool head refusing to crack, though her left hand had found her left wrist, her thumb tracing the crescent scar."
13
"She crossed her arms, hiding her scar, hiding her vulnerability."
14
"He was her ally, her complicated past, and he was standing in Eva’s flat above Brick Lane with his hidden blade and his heterochromatic eyes and his love that h…"
15
"The flat was silent except for Ptolemy’s breathing and the distant curry smell and the sound of two people who had parted on hurt and attraction, now forced tog…"
16
"And Lucien Moreau, half-demon and fixer and man who had crossed realms for love, stayed."