Run: 2026-09-01-01M1ENH0TQP2E0KC90BYC87GQG

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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt slid free. I hauled the door open. Lucien Moreau occupied the landing as if the space had been measured for him. Platinum hair swept back without a strand out of place. Charcoal suit uncreased. Ivory cane planted like a verdict. Amber met black in those eyes and the stairwell shrank around them. "Aurora." "Rory. You lost the rest of it." He inclined his head the way men did in rooms with chandeliers. The extractor fan from the curry house below rattled the landing window and pushed cumin and burnt onion up the stairs. Ptolemy shot from behind my calves, tabby fur on end, and planted himself in the gap with a growl that belonged to a larger animal. "Your familiar objects." "He's the only one here with standards." I left the door swinging. Let the landing keep whatever it wanted. "Eva's at the Library. She isn't selling whatever you're buying." "I did not come for Eva." He crossed the threshold. One step. Another. The cane tapped once against a stack of leather volumes that should have collapsed and did not. "Your name surfaced where it had no business surfacing." "Which one?" "Malphora." The alias sat in the cramped flat like a guest who had not been invited. Scrolls carpeted the coffee table, the windowsill, the counter that served as Eva's shrine to instant coffee and cold samosas. I picked my way through without looking. I knew the geography of every pile. "I don't use that." "Someone used it for you. A Soho broker. Buyer already attached. Avaros-side." His gloved hand settled on a sheaf of Eva's notes, the handwriting looping and desperate. "The broker no longer requires a tongue. Or most of the rest." I kept my expression level. Eva always said I went still when the box caught fire. "Heroics. That's new." "Fixing. The work I do. The work you walked away from." "I walked?" I laughed once, sharp. "You left a hotel keycard and a line about forgetting. That's not walking. That's a disappearing act with better stationery." He turned. The suit refused to wrinkle. Nothing on him ever did except the parts he kept hidden. "You saw the change. The night the wards on that room failed." His voice stayed even, French cadence running underneath like a current. "Claws. The other eye taking the rest of the light. You did not scream. You asked if it hurt. Then you packed a bag." "I asked because I needed to know whether my throat came next. You dimmed instead. Like a bulb with a faulty switch." I leaned against the desk. A map of East London ley lines slithered to the lino. "So I packed. You stood there and let me." "Stopping you would have written you into my father's ledger. He collects in blood and names. Yours would have served as both." Ptolemy leapt to the windowsill and flattened his ears at the street. The glass hummed with the fan. Lucien's attention flicked there, then returned, precise. "Noble vanishing, then. Convenient, too." I retrieved the map, rolled it, set it aside. My fingers needed occupation. "What changed the arithmetic? Why risk the ledger now?" He closed the distance without hurry. He never hurried. Heat came off him that had nothing to do with the radiator that had given up in February. Sandalwood, and beneath it the faint metallic edge I remembered from the night his blood had not been entirely red. "The buyer spoke. Before the end. He gave an address. This building. This floor." His gaze dropped to my left wrist, to the pale crescent that never quite faded. "Evan taught you deadbolts. I am here to tell you they will not be enough." The name landed. I let my sleeve cover the scar and kept my voice flat. "You don't get to say his name." "I get to when the mark of him still sits on you. I get to when Avaros writes your alias into a contract. I get to because I am the reason they looked in the first place." "There. Guilt. Took its time." "Not guilt. Balance. I involved you. I remove you. The equation closes." "I'm not a column in your ledger, Lucien." "No." Both eyes lingered on my mouth a fraction too long. "You are the variable I failed to price." I should have ordered him out. The sentence sat ready behind my teeth. Instead I watched the line of his throat when he swallowed. The gloves. Always the gloves, even here. I had seen what lived under them. Ridges. Nails that caught light wrong. "Take them off." He went motionless. "The gloves. If we're pretending at honesty tonight." A beat. Then he drew them off, one finger at a time, and laid them on a closed grimoire whose spine had cracked years ago. His hands passed for human until the bulb caught the nails, a shade too dark, edges too keen. He flexed once. "Enough?" "Not remotely." He stepped in. Desk at my spine, towers of books at his. We had stood like this in a hotel with better lamps and worse timing. His height put my eyes at the knot of his tie, still perfect, still untouched by whatever he had done between then and now. "I have thought of little else." The words came low. "Your questions. The way you refused to look away. How you said my name when the change took me and you still did not run." "I run from fists. Not from claws that look ashamed of themselves." My hands stayed down. They wanted wool and heat. "The shame was the part that cut." His jaw tightened. He lifted one bare hand. I did not pull back. The too-sharp nail traced the air above the scar and never quite landed. "I left the card because language failed. French. English. The others. None of them covered what I became in that room with you still watching." "Try the one you have left." "Je n'aurais pas dû te toucher." He spoke it like both apology and claim. "I should not have put my hands on you. I did. I would again." The French settled heavier than the English. Cardiff had given me a father who quoted dead languages over breakfast and a mother who drilled verb tables into teenagers who wanted none of it. I wanted this. "Then the warning. The 'forget this'. Explain that." "Forgetting keeps air in your lungs. Remembering puts your name on paper in two tongues." I reached up. Charcoal wool, warm, expensive. I meant to shove. I closed my fists in the lapels instead and drew him the last inch. His breath warmed my cheek. One amber eye, one black. Either could swallow a person whole. "You're here. You traced the scar. That is not forgetting." "That is me failing at the single skill I possess." His other hand braced on the desk beside my hip, caging without touching. Scrolls with Eva's annotations on binding circles framed his shoulders. The irony wrote itself. "I came to move you. Tonight. No debate. Yu-Fei will find another pair of hands for her deliveries." "You don't get to decide my shifts. Or my city. Or whether I remember the way you looked when the other half of you came up for air." Ptolemy's yowl cut the room in half, sudden and raw. Lucien's head snapped toward the door. The drawing-room manners vanished. What looked out of those mismatched eyes had been born in Avaros and had never quite left. I heard it then. Not the cat. Footfalls on the stairs. More than one pair. Heavy. Unhurried, the pace of things that did not need speed. Lucien's hand found the cane. The ivory twisted. Steel showed, a thin bright line. "The buyer had associates. They followed the trail I failed to erase." I closed my fingers around the nearest dense volume, some Latin text Eva had forbidden the British Library to catalogue. Weight would do. The footsteps halted. A knock, three polite raps, the kind men in good coats used when they meant the opposite. Lucien did not glance at me. "Left of the desk when I open it. Eva's ink still holds there. Just." He moved to the door. I had thrown the bolts. He reached for them without asking, without looking, as if he had counted them from the landing. Three. The habit of a man who noticed locks. The knock came again. Then the wood began to blacken from the other side. Smoke curled under the frame, acrid, wrong, carrying a scent that did not belong to any curry house in East London.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"I laughed once [once]"
dialogueSentences52
tagDensity0.25
leniency0.5
rawRatio0.077
effectiveRatio0.038
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1444
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
68.84% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1444
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"measured"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count1
2
word"flicked"
count1
3
word"variable"
count1
4
word"perfect"
count1
5
word"traced"
count2
6
word"weight"
count1
7
word"footsteps"
count1
highlights
0"measured"
1"familiar"
2"flicked"
3"variable"
4"perfect"
5"traced"
6"weight"
7"footsteps"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences107
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences107
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences146
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen37
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1444
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions31
wordCount894
uniqueNames16
maxNameDensity0.56
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Moreau1
Let1
One2
Eva5
French2
East2
London2
February1
English1
Scrolls2
Avaros1
Latin1
British1
Library1
Lucien5
Ptolemy3
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Eva"
2"French"
3"Scrolls"
4"Lucien"
5"Ptolemy"
places
0"East"
1"London"
2"February"
3"Avaros"
4"British"
5"Library"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences57
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1444
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences146
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs64
mean22.56
std16.33
cv0.724
sampleLengths
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145
21
37
458
53
629
739
82
91
1049
114
1239
1316
143
1511
1626
1718
1847
1947
2022
2125
2227
2347
2444
2515
267
2737
285
2912
308
3119
3244
333
343
358
3646
371
382
3950
4035
4128
4226
4325
446
4528
4636
478
4815
4941
98.70% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences107
matches
0"been measured"
1"been invited"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs154
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences146
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount896
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount32
adverbRatio0.03571428571428571
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0011160714285714285
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences146
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences146
mean9.89
std7.41
cv0.749
sampleLengths
05
15
214
310
43
56
612
71
87
912
1021
1125
123
1312
147
1510
1610
172
181
1917
209
212
221
2315
2420
257
267
274
2827
2912
305
3111
323
3311
346
3520
362
375
3811
3923
4024
4127
4211
439
4422
4512
466
477
4814
494
68.49% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.4315068493150685
totalSentences146
uniqueOpeners63
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences99
matches
0"Instead I watched the line"
1"Always the gloves, even here."
2"Then he drew them off,"
3"More than one pair."
4"Then the wood began to"
ratio0.051
50.30% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount42
totalSentences99
matches
0"I hauled the door open."
1"He inclined his head the"
2"I left the door swinging"
3"He crossed the threshold"
4"I picked my way through"
5"I knew the geography of"
6"His gloved hand settled on"
7"I kept my expression level."
8"I laughed once, sharp"
9"His voice stayed even, French"
10"I leaned against the desk"
11"I retrieved the map, rolled"
12"My fingers needed occupation."
13"He closed the distance without"
14"He never hurried."
15"His gaze dropped to my"
16"I let my sleeve cover"
17"I should have ordered him"
18"I had seen what lived"
19"He went motionless."
ratio0.424
20.61% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount87
totalSentences99
matches
0"The third deadbolt slid free."
1"I hauled the door open."
2"Lucien Moreau occupied the landing"
3"Platinum hair swept back without"
4"Charcoal suit uncreased."
5"Ivory cane planted like a"
6"Amber met black in those"
7"He inclined his head the"
8"The extractor fan from the"
9"Ptolemy shot from behind my"
10"I left the door swinging"
11"He crossed the threshold"
12"The cane tapped once against"
13"The alias sat in the"
14"Scrolls carpeted the coffee table,"
15"I picked my way through"
16"I knew the geography of"
17"His gloved hand settled on"
18"I kept my expression level."
19"Eva always said I went"
ratio0.879
50.51% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences99
matches
0"Either could swallow a person"
ratio0.01
77.92% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences33
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Ptolemy shot from behind my calves, tabby fur on end, and planted himself in the gap with a growl that belonged to a larger animal."
1"Scrolls carpeted the coffee table, the windowsill, the counter that served as Eva's shrine to instant coffee and cold samosas."
2"Cardiff had given me a father who quoted dead languages over breakfast and a mother who drilled verb tables into teenagers who wanted none of it."
86.54% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"I laughed once, sharp"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"I laughed once (laugh)"
1"He spoke (speak)"
dialogueSentences52
tagDensity0.038
leniency0.077
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.077
90.7303%