Run: 2026-09-01-01M1ENTX08C3ADW2HJYJR9H4AG

Run Details

Duration:
59.0s
Cost:
$0.006673
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The oak standing stones of the Grove gaped at her like a mouth that had not eaten in centuries. Rory pushed through, her trainers crunching dead leaves that snapped like small bones. The air turned syrupy immediately, thick with pollen that smelled of copper and old paper, and she knew before she saw it that London had slipped its leash somewhere between Silas’ bar and the Richmond Park gates. She had left Golden Empress an hour ago, still wearing her grey delivery apron folded in her bag, her black hair tied back with a rubber band from the morning shift, her bright blue eyes stinging from the cold wind that whipped across the delivery routes. Time in the Grove moved like a liar. Her phone—clutched in her left hand, the hand with the small crescent scar from her childhood, the one from climbing a gate at seven—showed 3:14, the same minute she had stepped onto her bike behind the restaurant. But the moon hung lower, fatter, wrong, and the stars wore positions she did not recognize. She came because of the pendant. The silver chain bit into her collarbone, the crimson gem—thumbnail-sized, smooth, warm—pressed flat against her sternum. It had begun to pulse three blocks back, near the park entrance, a faint, insistent throb that matched her heartbeat only when she felt fear. She wore it now because an unknown benefactor had left it wrapped in brown paper on her delivery stool at Golden Empress, with no note, no name, just the weight of something that demanded her attention. She did not know if the gift came from Eva, her childhood friend who had told her to leave London and the abusive ex named Evan, or from someone older, someone who spoke in the language of Cardiff’s barrister fathers and Welsh teachers. She only knew she could not stop walking toward the clearing. Wildflowers bloomed in black soil despite the January freeze, brushing her ankles with violet and white clover and something that looked like foxgloves but bled grey instead of purple. They did not fade as she passed. They followed her with the patience of things that had all night. “Still breathing,” she said aloud. The sound of her voice startled her. It bounced thin, without walls to hold it, and she felt suddenly that she was not alone, not because of what she saw, but because of what she heard: a knocking, slow, deliberate, from somewhere behind the eastern stones. Knock. Knock. Knock. Like knuckles wrapped in leather. Rory’s breath hitched. She turned her head. Nothing. Just oak and shadow. But the shadows nodded. She spoke to the dark. “What do you want?” No answer. Only the knock, closer now, and a whisper of movement at the very edge of her vision—something that wore her own straight shoulder-length black hair, that moved with her posture, that stepped backward when she stepped forward. She froze. Her hand went to the gem, her fingers brushing the silver chain with the precision of someone who had learned quick out-of-the-box thinking at Cardiff University, who had fled an abusive ex and rebuilt a life in a flat above Silas’ bar, who knew that panic was a luxury she could not afford. “I don’t know who you are,” she said, her voice steady, cool-headed, the trait that had carried her through pre-law studies and part-time delivery runs. “But I know this grove. I know the standing stones mark the boundary. And I know I shouldn’t be here.” The flowers shuddered. A figure coalesced at the portal’s edge, but not fully. It was a suggestion of shoulders, a suggestion of eyes, a suggestion of her own face but older, hollowed, the crescent scar on its left wrist glowing like a fresh wound. It did not speak. It only watched, and the knocking stopped. Rory pulled her phone. Dead. Of course it was dead. Time in the Grove was not her time; an hour inside could be minutes or days outside, and she suspected now that the clock on her screen was lying to her, just as the grove lied about its location in Richmond Park. The figure tilted its head. The movement was not right; it folded, like paper creased by a wet thumb, and Rory felt her stomach twist with a certainty that she had not felt since she had looked at Evan’s reflection in a darkened kitchen. “Did you bring me?” Rory asked. “Was it you?” The figure’s mouth opened. No sound came out, but the wildflowers screamed—not with noise, but with scent—copper, old paper, the exact smell of the brown paper that had wrapped the pendant, the smell that had made her flee Cardiff and London and everything that smelled like a barrister’s silence. The ground beneath her trainers erupted in grey growth, roots thick and twitching that humped toward her ankles like fingers, like the hands of someone who had never held a delivery bag or a textbook. She pulled back. The pendant blazed. The crimson gem turned a deeper shade, not red but something closer to exposed vein, and she felt the heat of Hel bleeding into the clearing, the portal opening wider, the wrongness of her presence here when she should have stayed safe above Silas’ bar with her cold coffee and her delivery route. “I came to find out,” she said, and her voice cracked, not with fear, but with the weight of knowing. “I came because of her.” The figure’s head snapped toward her, and for a moment the face was not hers. It was the face of the unknown benefactor, faceless, wrapped in dead brown paper, holding the silver chain in hands that had never touched a grocery bag or a student desk. Then it was her mother, Jennifer, Welsh and sharp-tongued. Then it was Eva, childhood friend, the one who had said leave, leave, leave. Then it was Evan, the abusive ex she had fled, and Rory felt the crease of her scar burn with a phantom pain. “I came because of Eva,” Rory said, louder now, forcing the words through the syrup. “She told me to run. She told me to find something better. And I found this.” The figure’s mouth widened. It was not a scream, because things in the Grove did not scream; they simply existed, and Rory understood now that she was not alone, that she had never been alone, and that the pendant was not a gift but a hook, a crimson lure set into the silver chain to pull her exactly here. The flowers closed in. The roots tightened. Rory’s black hair snagged on something that felt like oak bark, and she pulled her left wrist free, the crescent scar burning, and she ripped the chain from her neck with a snap that sounded like bone. The gem fell. Not onto the earth, but into the black tear at the portal’s edge, into the mouth of the Grove, and the pendant blazed one final time, crimson fading to black, and the figure dissolved into wildflowers that went suddenly silent. The knocking stopped. The air returned—not to London cold, but to something that tasted like Cardiff rain on a Tuesday, like a flat above a bar where the coffee was always cold and the delivery route was always predictable. Rory stumbled through the stones. The moon was still wrong, lower, fatter, but her phone showed 3:14 again, exactly as she had left it, and she knew that outside, in the real world of Golden Empress and delivery routes and the flat above Silas’ bar, minutes had passed, but inside, she had lost something she could not name. She walked out of Richmond Park, not running, because running was for people who did not think, and Rory was cool-headed, intelligent, quick out-of-the-box, and she had just out-thought a grove that moved differently. Behind her, the wildflowers bloomed on, year-round, eternal, waiting for the next delivery person with a crimson gem and a grey apron and a heart that still beat like a second pulse in her chest. The silver chain lay broken in her pocket, heavy, empty, and she did not look back.
created_at"2026-09-01T14:26:40.784Z" 9/1/2026, 2:26:40 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
88.89% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she said aloud [aloud]"
dialogueSentences10
tagDensity0.9
leniency1
rawRatio0.111
effectiveRatio0.111
89.07% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1372
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count2
1
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
67.20% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1372
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"pulse"
count2
1
word"throb"
count1
2
word"weight"
count2
3
word"whisper"
count1
4
word"stomach"
count1
5
word"silence"
count1
6
word"predictable"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"throb"
2"weight"
3"whisper"
4"stomach"
5"silence"
6"predictable"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences73
matches
0"t with fear"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences73
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences78
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen55
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1363
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions49
wordCount1248
uniqueNames17
maxNameDensity0.88
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Grove5
London4
Golden3
Empress3
Eva2
Evan3
Cardiff4
Welsh2
January1
University1
Richmond2
Park2
Rory11
Hel1
Jennifer1
Tuesday1
Knock3
persons
0"Grove"
1"Eva"
2"Evan"
3"January"
4"Rory"
5"Hel"
6"Jennifer"
places
0"London"
1"Golden"
2"Cardiff"
3"Richmond"
4"Park"
globalScore1
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences44
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"looked like foxgloves but bled grey inste"
1"smelled like a barrister’s silence"
2"felt like oak bark, and she pulled her"
3"sounded like bone"
4"tasted like Cardiff rain on a Tuesday, li"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches8
per1kWords5.869
wordCount1363
matches
0"not alone, not because of what she saw, but because of what she heard: a knocking, slow, deliberate, fro"
1"not with noise, but with scent"
2"not red but something closer to exposed vein"
3"not with fear, but with the weight of knowing"
4"not alone, that she had never been alone, and that the pendant was not a gift but a hook, a crimson lure set into the silver chain to pull her"
5"not a gift but a hook, a crimson lure set into the silver chain to pull her"
6"Not onto the earth, but into the black tear at the portal’s edge, into the mouth of"
7"not to London cold, but to something"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences78
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs37
mean36.84
std30.09
cv0.817
sampleLengths
069
1107
26
3131
448
55
646
71
81
91
105
1116
129
1339
1455
1545
163
1752
1852
1944
209
2149
2235
2359
2425
2592
2631
2759
2844
293
3040
313
3236
3358
3434
3535
3616
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences73
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs197
matches
0"was lying"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount3
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences78
ratio0.103
matches
0"Her phone—clutched in her left hand, the hand with the small crescent scar from her childhood, the one from climbing a gate at seven—showed 3:14, the same minute she had stepped onto her bike behind the restaurant."
1"The silver chain bit into her collarbone, the crimson gem—thumbnail-sized, smooth, warm—pressed flat against her sternum."
2"Only the knock, closer now, and a whisper of movement at the very edge of her vision—something that wore her own straight shoulder-length black hair, that moved with her posture, that stepped backward when she stepped forward."
3"Time in the Grove was not her time; an hour inside could be minutes or days outside, and she suspected now that the clock on her screen was lying to her, just as the grove lied about its location in Richmond Park."
4"The movement was not right; it folded, like paper creased by a wet thumb, and Rory felt her stomach twist with a certainty that she had not felt since she had looked at Evan’s reflection in a darkened kitchen."
5"No sound came out, but the wildflowers screamed—not with noise, but with scent—copper, old paper, the exact smell of the brown paper that had wrapped the pendant, the smell that had made her flee Cardiff and London and everything that smelled like a barrister’s silence."
6"It was not a scream, because things in the Grove did not scream; they simply existed, and Rory understood now that she was not alone, that she had never been alone, and that the pendant was not a gift but a hook, a crimson lure set into the silver chain to pull her exactly here."
7"The air returned—not to London cold, but to something that tasted like Cardiff rain on a Tuesday, like a flat above a bar where the coffee was always cold and the delivery route was always predictable."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount112
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount3
adverbRatio0.026785714285714284
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.008928571428571428
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences78
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences78
mean17.47
std16.16
cv0.925
sampleLengths
019
113
237
346
48
537
616
76
816
925
1036
1143
1211
1329
147
1512
165
177
1839
191
201
211
225
233
244
251
264
274
285
294
302
3137
322
3353
3425
3520
363
3710
3831
394
407
414
421
435
4442
455
4639
476
483
494
37.61% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats14
diversityRatio0.3333333333333333
totalSentences78
uniqueOpeners26
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount6
totalSentences65
matches
0"Just oak and shadow."
1"Only the knock, closer now,"
2"Of course it was dead."
3"Then it was her mother,"
4"Then it was Eva, childhood"
5"Then it was Evan, the"
ratio0.092
78.46% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount23
totalSentences65
matches
0"She had left Golden Empress"
1"Her phone—clutched in her left"
2"She came because of the"
3"It had begun to pulse"
4"She wore it now because"
5"She did not know if"
6"She only knew she could"
7"They did not fade as"
8"They followed her with the"
9"she said aloud"
10"It bounced thin, without walls"
11"She turned her head."
12"She spoke to the dark."
13"Her hand went to the"
14"she said, her voice steady,"
15"It was a suggestion of"
16"It did not speak."
17"It only watched, and the"
18"She pulled back."
19"she said, and her voice"
ratio0.354
67.69% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount51
totalSentences65
matches
0"The oak standing stones of"
1"Rory pushed through, her trainers"
2"The air turned syrupy immediately,"
3"She had left Golden Empress"
4"Her phone—clutched in her left"
5"She came because of the"
6"The silver chain bit into"
7"It had begun to pulse"
8"She wore it now because"
9"She did not know if"
10"She only knew she could"
11"Wildflowers bloomed in black soil"
12"They did not fade as"
13"They followed her with the"
14"she said aloud"
15"The sound of her voice"
16"It bounced thin, without walls"
17"Rory’s breath hitched."
18"She turned her head."
19"She spoke to the dark."
ratio0.785
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences65
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences32
technicalSentenceCount13
matches
0"Rory pushed through, her trainers crunching dead leaves that snapped like small bones."
1"She had left Golden Empress an hour ago, still wearing her grey delivery apron folded in her bag, her black hair tied back with a rubber band from the morning s…"
2"It had begun to pulse three blocks back, near the park entrance, a faint, insistent throb that matched her heartbeat only when she felt fear."
3"She wore it now because an unknown benefactor had left it wrapped in brown paper on her delivery stool at Golden Empress, with no note, no name, just the weight…"
4"She did not know if the gift came from Eva, her childhood friend who had told her to leave London and the abusive ex named Evan, or from someone older, someone …"
5"Wildflowers bloomed in black soil despite the January freeze, brushing her ankles with violet and white clover and something that looked like foxgloves but bled…"
6"Only the knock, closer now, and a whisper of movement at the very edge of her vision—something that wore her own straight shoulder-length black hair, that moved…"
7"No sound came out, but the wildflowers screamed—not with noise, but with scent—copper, old paper, the exact smell of the brown paper that had wrapped the pendan…"
8"The ground beneath her trainers erupted in grey growth, roots thick and twitching that humped toward her ankles like fingers, like the hands of someone who had …"
9"Rory’s black hair snagged on something that felt like oak bark, and she pulled her left wrist free, the crescent scar burning, and she ripped the chain from her…"
10"Not onto the earth, but into the black tear at the portal’s edge, into the mouth of the Grove, and the pendant blazed one final time, crimson fading to black, a…"
11"The air returned—not to London cold, but to something that tasted like Cardiff rain on a Tuesday, like a flat above a bar where the coffee was always cold and t…"
12"She walked out of Richmond Park, not running, because running was for people who did not think, and Rory was cool-headed, intelligent, quick out-of-the-box, and…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags9
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences10
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
77.6306%