Run: 2026-09-01-01M1ENWWA8KKXGXM0BT3YWR9MG

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Duration:
1m 33s
Cost:
$0.008799
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora Carter pushed through the door of The Raven’s Nest without knocking, and the green neon sign above the entrance buzzed like a circuit failing at midnight. The air inside smelled of brass polish, old tobacco, and paper rubbed thin by years. Black-and-white photographs lined the walls—maps of cities she no longer recognized, faces from wars she had never seen—all watched over by bulbs that never fully brightened. Her bright blue eyes adjusted to the dark. Straight shoulder-length black hair clung to her neck in the damp London air. The delivery jacket from Yu-Fei Cheung’s Golden Empress, grease-stained at the cuffs, felt suddenly wrong against the dim wood and the quiet authority of the room. She carried the weight of a flat above this bar, a flat she had called home for months without ever calling it hers. Silas Blackwood stood behind the mahogany bar. Grey-streaked auburn hair framed a face that had lost its softness not to age but to the gravity of decisions made in dark rooms. His beard, trimmed neat and precise, hid a jaw that had once met threats with a smile. A silver signet ring glinted on his right hand as he polished a lowball glass. His left leg carried the old injury—slight limp, permanent, the ghost of Prague walking with him. He did not look up at first. “You forgot the stairs, Rory.” She froze. The crescent scar on her left wrist—small, white, from a childhood accident—tucked into her sleeve as if it had heard his name. “The stairs are always there,” Aurora said. “Not this time.” Silas set the glass down. The wood creaked. He turned fully, six feet one of quiet menace, and his hazel eyes fixed on her with the intensity of a man who had spent years reading rooms before she had learned to read herself. “You’ve been avoiding me.” “I’ve been delivering.” “You’ve been hiding.” She slid onto the stool. The seat groaned. He did not pour. He did not offer. He just leaned, the limp making the floorboards whisper. Aurora pulled her shoulders back. “You’ve changed.” “I know what I am.” “You’re older.” “I am older,” Silas said. “Not that it excuses the silence.” She touched her hair, straight and black, and felt the years between them press like a finger against her throat. At twenty-five, she was a different creature from the girl who had fled Cardiff after Evan. At fifty-eight, Silas was not the mentor who had opened a bar as a front; he was the weight of every secret still breathing behind that bookshelf. “I came back because Eva said London would save me,” Aurora said. “You were already here. You opened this place. And I never once asked what it cost.” Silas moved. Not fast. The limp made every step deliberate. He stopped at the shelf against the far wall—the hidden back room, accessible only through a latch hidden behind a photograph of a river she did not recognize. He pressed it. The wood groaned open. Inside, the air smelled of paper and copper. Documents spread across a table. A file with her name. A photograph of her at twenty, eyes bright, hair uncombed, holding a knife she had not used. Old maps pinned like scalps. “You kept this,” she said. “I keep everything that hurts.” Aurora stepped inside. The room was small, claustrophobic, full of the evidence that her life had intersected with his in ways she had not permitted herself to examine. She saw the ring again—silver, heavy, a signet that spoke of bloodlines and betrayals. She saw his beard, neat as a blade, and the way his hands trembled only slightly when he reached for the photograph. “I thought if I stayed out of your orbit,” Aurora said, “I’d become myself again.” Silas turned. His face had lost the authority of the bar; now it held only the exhaustion of a man who had watched a girl survive and still failed her. “You think you are the only one who lost years?” “I think I lost mine to a man who thought love meant possession.” Silas did not flinch. “Evan is not here.” “No. But the habit of flinching is.” She touched the crescent scar again. The small wound—unrelated, meaningless, a mark she had carried before the man who struck her, before the flat above, before the green neon—ached with a temperature that had nothing to do with the room. “You taught me to read rooms,” Aurora said. “To see pressure points before they snap. And now I cannot read you.” “I have become the room,” Silas said. “Dark, narrow, full of hidden doors.” She laughed, short and dry. “You were never just the bar owner. You were never just Silas. And I built a life above your ground floor because I was afraid that if I descended, I’d have to become the girl you once knew.” “The girl who could think in circles,” Silas said. “Before anyone blinked.” “That girl is buried under delivery bags and scars,” Aurora said. “Under a flat where I flinch at every footstep.” Silas moved closer. The limp made the room feel smaller. He reached out—not to touch her, but to indicate the scar, the hair, the life she had forged in refusal. “You came back from Cardiff because a friend told you to run,” Silas said. “You fled an abuser. And then you moved above the only man in London who knew what you were running from, because proximity without intimacy is its own kind of shelter.” “It’s not shelter,” Aurora said. “It’s paralysis.” “The weight of time does that,” Silas said. “It makes the past a geography you walk over without noticing the graves.” She turned back to the bar. The green neon buzzed. The photographs of wars and maps watched her with their silent black-and-white eyes. She thought of her father’s barrister precision, her mother’s Welsh patience, the pre-law studies she had abandoned not because she failed but because she had realized she needed to live differently. She thought of the Golden Empress and Yu-Fei Cheung, who paid her in cash and never asked about her past. She thought of Eva, who had saved her once with a single sentence: come to London. “I don’t know if I can come back to who I was,” Aurora said. “You don’t need to come back,” Silas said. “You need to stay.” “Stay where?” “Here. Not upstairs. Here. Where the floorboards don’t hide you from the world.” She picked up her delivery bag. The rain outside waited in the Soho streets, gray and indifferent. But she paused at the doorway of the hidden room, and for a moment the green neon seemed to pulse like a heartbeat that had not stopped, only changed rhythm. “I’ll come back,” she said. “You said that the last time.” “I know.” Silas did not follow. He watched her from beneath the auburn sweep, the hazel eyes dark with everything unspoken—Prague, Eva, the bookshelf, the girl with bright blue eyes who had become a stranger to him, and perhaps to herself. The ring caught the light. The limp made the bar shake slightly. The green sign buzzed above the street where she had lived, delivered, survived. Aurora pushed into the night. The Raven’s Nest shrank behind her, swallowed by darkness, old maps, and the unspoken regret of two people who had recognized each other in a light they had both forgotten. She did not run. Not this time.
created_at"2026-09-01T14:27:45.618Z" 9/1/2026, 2:27:45 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences43
tagDensity0.349
leniency0.698
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
88.08% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1258
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count2
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
60.25% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1258
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"carried the weight"
count1
1
word"intensity"
count1
2
word"whisper"
count1
3
word"silence"
count1
4
word"weight"
count2
5
word"trembled"
count1
6
word"pulse"
count1
7
word"unspoken"
count2
highlights
0"carried the weight"
1"intensity"
2"whisper"
3"silence"
4"weight"
5"trembled"
6"pulse"
7"unspoken"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences84
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences84
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences112
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1248
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions18
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions49
wordCount915
uniqueNames17
maxNameDensity1.53
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Raven2
Nest2
London2
Yu-Fei2
Cheung2
Golden2
Empress2
Blackwood1
Prague2
Silas14
Cardiff1
Evan1
Aurora11
Welsh1
Eva2
Soho1
persons
0"Carter"
1"Raven"
2"Nest"
3"Yu-Fei"
4"Cheung"
5"Blackwood"
6"Silas"
7"Evan"
8"Aurora"
9"Eva"
places
0"London"
1"Prague"
2"Cardiff"
3"Soho"
globalScore0.735
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences43
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
39.74% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.603
wordCount1248
matches
0"not to age but to the gravity of decisions made in dark rooms"
1"not to touch her, but to indicate the scar, the hair, the life she had forged in r"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences112
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs50
mean24.96
std28.47
cv1.141
sampleLengths
0138
186
25
324
47
53
643
74
83
93
1025
117
125
132
1411
1563
1628
1785
185
195
2064
2115
2230
2310
2413
254
264
277
2840
2921
3013
3143
3212
3320
3430
3545
367
3721
3890
3914
4012
412
4213
4347
445
456
462
4764
4835
497
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences84
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs161
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount11
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences112
ratio0.089
matches
0"Black-and-white photographs lined the walls—maps of cities she no longer recognized, faces from wars she had never seen—all watched over by bulbs that never fully brightened."
1"His left leg carried the old injury—slight limp, permanent, the ghost of Prague walking with him."
2"The crescent scar on her left wrist—small, white, from a childhood accident—tucked into her sleeve as if it had heard his name."
3"At fifty-eight, Silas was not the mentor who had opened a bar as a front; he was the weight of every secret still breathing behind that bookshelf."
4"He stopped at the shelf against the far wall—the hidden back room, accessible only through a latch hidden behind a photograph of a river she did not recognize."
5"She saw the ring again—silver, heavy, a signet that spoke of bloodlines and betrayals."
6"His face had lost the authority of the bar; now it held only the exhaustion of a man who had watched a girl survive and still failed her."
7"The small wound—unrelated, meaningless, a mark she had carried before the man who struck her, before the flat above, before the green neon—ached with a temperature that had nothing to do with the room."
8"He reached out—not to touch her, but to indicate the scar, the hair, the life she had forged in refusal."
9"He watched her from beneath the auburn sweep, the hazel eyes dark with everything unspoken—Prague, Eva, the bookshelf, the girl with bright blue eyes who had become a stranger to him, and perhaps to herself."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount936
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount29
adverbRatio0.030982905982905984
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.010683760683760684
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences112
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences112
mean11.14
std9.22
cv0.827
sampleLengths
027
115
226
38
413
526
623
77
824
917
1015
1116
127
135
142
1522
167
173
185
193
2035
214
223
233
245
253
264
274
289
295
302
315
322
335
346
3520
3616
3727
3812
3916
402
412
426
4328
443
454
468
475
485
4917
36.61% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats15
diversityRatio0.25892857142857145
totalSentences112
uniqueOpeners29
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences65
matches(empty)
ratio0
60.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount26
totalSentences65
matches
0"Her bright blue eyes adjusted"
1"She carried the weight of"
2"His beard, trimmed neat and"
3"His left leg carried the"
4"He did not look up"
5"He turned fully, six feet"
6"She slid onto the stool."
7"He did not pour."
8"He did not offer."
9"He just leaned, the limp"
10"She touched her hair, straight"
11"He stopped at the shelf"
12"He pressed it."
13"She saw the ring again—silver,"
14"She saw his beard, neat"
15"His face had lost the"
16"She touched the crescent scar"
17"She laughed, short and dry."
18"He reached out—not to touch"
19"She turned back to the"
ratio0.4
29.23% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount56
totalSentences65
matches
0"Aurora Carter pushed through the"
1"The air inside smelled of"
2"Her bright blue eyes adjusted"
3"The delivery jacket from Yu-Fei"
4"She carried the weight of"
5"Silas Blackwood stood behind the"
6"His beard, trimmed neat and"
7"A silver signet ring glinted"
8"His left leg carried the"
9"He did not look up"
10"The crescent scar on her"
11"Silas set the glass down."
12"The wood creaked."
13"He turned fully, six feet"
14"She slid onto the stool."
15"The seat groaned."
16"He did not pour."
17"He did not offer."
18"He just leaned, the limp"
19"Aurora pulled her shoulders back."
ratio0.862
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences65
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences32
technicalSentenceCount9
matches
0"Grey-streaked auburn hair framed a face that had lost its softness not to age but to the gravity of decisions made in dark rooms."
1"The crescent scar on her left wrist—small, white, from a childhood accident—tucked into her sleeve as if it had heard his name."
2"At twenty-five, she was a different creature from the girl who had fled Cardiff after Evan."
3"At fifty-eight, Silas was not the mentor who had opened a bar as a front; he was the weight of every secret still breathing behind that bookshelf."
4"She saw the ring again—silver, heavy, a signet that spoke of bloodlines and betrayals."
5"The small wound—unrelated, meaningless, a mark she had carried before the man who struck her, before the flat above, before the green neon—ached with a temperat…"
6"She thought of the Golden Empress and Yu-Fei Cheung, who paid her in cash and never asked about her past."
7"He watched her from beneath the auburn sweep, the hazel eyes dark with everything unspoken—Prague, Eva, the bookshelf, the girl with bright blue eyes who had be…"
8"The Raven’s Nest shrank behind her, swallowed by darkness, old maps, and the unspoken regret of two people who had recognized each other in a light they had bot…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags15
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences43
tagDensity0.349
leniency0.698
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
75.4637%