Run: 2026-09-01-01M1EP7MDR8FZJRN2XH3DN9N2C

Run Details

Duration:
1m 46s
Cost:
$0.006467
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door to Eva’s flat groaned open, the frame of the deadbolt scraping wood that had not moved since morning. Rory sat at the narrow table, her straight black hair falling past her shoulder, bright blue eyes fixed on a scroll she never finished. Ptolemy, Eva’s tabby, shifted on a pile of research notes, then hissed. “You forgot the third lock.” Luc filled the doorway, charcoal suit sharp against the cramped room, his slicked-back platinum hair catching the dim light from Brick Lane. One eye amber, one black. He held his ivory-handled cane like a conductor’s baton. Rory did not stand. She kept her left hand on the paper, the small crescent scar on her wrist hidden but present, a quiet map of old damage. “I didn’t forget. I know exactly which ones click.” He stepped inside, and the door shut with a heavy thud that swallowed the curry-house steam rising through the floorboards. Every surface wore books, scrolls, coffee rings; the air smelled of ink and turmeric. He moved past her, not touching, not quite, and set his cane against the bookcase where Eva’s notes on Avaros lay scattered. “Still running from me in other people’s apartments?” Rory’s gaze snapped up. “You shouldn’t be here.” “He shouldn’t be anywhere, according to you. Yet here I am.” She finally stood, five feet six of reluctant tension, her shoulder brushing the edge of the table. “You came unannounced. That’s a new low, even for you.” He turned, and the amber eye caught the lamp light, sharp and searching. “I came because you left without answering the door to anything.” “I answered. I just stopped answering you.” Luc moved closer. The distance between them shrank to the length of a breath, and the cramped room seemed smaller, the books leaning in like spectators. “You vanished into Golden Empress deliveries and this cramped room full of strangers’ research. I thought you at least needed air.” “I needed space.” “You needed walls.” She stepped back, her shoulder hitting the shelf, a stack of scrolls trembling. “You came to London to make points. Not to make amends.” “I came to London because your name followed me like a broken record.” He tilted the cane, and the thin blade inside caught the dim glow. “I came because I still remember the shape of your mouth when you lied to me about leaving.” Rory’s breath caught. She crossed her arms, hiding the scar, hiding the lean muscle of her forearm she never used to defend anything. “I lied about leaving because there was nothing left to say. You had your demon blood and your four languages and your perfect little excuses. I had this.” She gestured at the flat, at the chaos of Eva’s life that had become her headquarters. “This is not a life for you.” “It never was. That’s why I stayed.” “You stayed until the hurt got too loud. Then you went back to Marseille’s shadows.” “I stayed until you pushed me out with both hands. Until you said the attraction was a mistake, that the hurt was permanent, that you could build a life without the Frenchman who spoke too pretty.” Rory’s eyes narrowed. “You make it sound like a performance.” “It was a performance. You were the only audience that mattered.” The tabby hissed again, leaping from the table to the windowsill, leaving Ptolemy’s fur on the scroll between them. Luc noticed the hair. His gaze dropped to her left wrist, where the crescent scar sat like a pale moon. He reached out, not with the cane, not with words, and touched the skin with one warm finger. She pulled back, but only an inch. “Childhood accident,” she said. “From before me, then.” “Everything is from before you.” His thumb pressed the scar, tracing the curve she had lived with since long before the backstreets of London knew her name. The touch was clinical, intimate, relentless. “You came to disturb my deadbolts and my research,” Rory said. Her voice dropped, soft as paper. “I came to see if you were still whole.” “I’m not whole. I’m just here.” “You’re not just here. You’re still bright blue and sharp as a knife.” She should have moved away. She should have unlocked the third deadbolt and thrown him into Brick Lane’s rain. Instead, she lowered her hand, and her fingers found his. The ivory handle of the cane pressed against her palm, cold and elegant, hiding the blade that could cut a man in half. “You should go,” she said. “I should,” he agreed. “But I won’t.” The words hung between them, heavier than the curry smell, heavier than the books that had witnessed every secret Eva and Rory ever wrote down. Rory felt the history in her ribs: the attraction that had pulled them together in dark corners of London, the hurt that had shattered them at the edge of recognition, the things left unsaid that now filled the air like smoke. Luc stepped closer, not touching her face, not claiming her, but close enough that she smelled the charcoal of his suit and the faint metal of the blade concealed in his cane. “I did not come to close the door,” he said. “I came because you are still the only door I want to open.” Rory’s heart beat against her ribs like a bird that refused to learn the cage. She looked at him—platinum hair, heterochromatic eyes, the tailored suit of a man who made his living in hidden things—and she knew that some doors stayed open because they had always been open, even when they pretended to be shut. “The deadbolts are still unlocked,” she said. “I heard them click when I came in.” “You heard wrong. I never locked them.” “Why not?” “Because I knew, somewhere, that you’d come back not for my notes, not for the flat, but for the hole where I left my heart.” Luc tilted his head. His thumb moved from her scar to her knuckles, then to the line of her jaw, tracing the sharp edge of her cheek. “Then why did you hide behind Eva’s books?” “Because books don’t ask questions.” “They don’t apologize either.” “I don’t want apologies. I want the past to stay buried.” “The past is sleeping in every corner of this flat. It’s in Ptolemy’s fur, in the scrolls, in your scar.” He leaned in, his breath warm against her hair. “But I am not the past. I am here. Unannounced. Unwelcome. And I will not leave until you tell me what was unsaid.” Rory felt the pull—the dangerous, magnetic draw that had pulled her to London, to the golden restaurant, to the flat above Silas’ bar, to the man who spoke in languages she did not know but understood every word of. She thought of her father’s barrister precision, her mother’s quiet Welsh strength, her own cool-headed survival, and she realized that all of it was a shield against exactly this moment. “You want the unsaid,” she said. “I want it like I want air.” She closed her eyes for a breath, a fraction of a second, and when she opened them, the room had changed. The books were the same, the curry scent was the same, the deadbolts were still unlatched, but Luc was closer, and she had moved closer to meet him. “The unsaid is this,” Rory said. “I left because I was terrified that if I stayed, you would turn out to be what I feared: temporary, elegant, and hollow.” “I am none of those things.” “You are all of them.” “I am here,” Luc said, and his other hand came up, not to grab her, not to claim her, but to rest against her shoulder with the same precision he used for every secret he brokered in London’s underworld. “I am not hollow. I am not temporary. And if I were, I would not have followed your delivery route through the rain, knocked on Eva’s door at midnight, and stood in this cramped room full of strangers’ notes just to ask one question.” Rory’s bright blue eyes met his. “What question?” “Are you going to make me leave, or are you going to stop pretending that the hurt was the end?” The flat seemed to shrink around them, the books leaning in, Ptolemy watching from the windowsill like a silent judge. Rory thought of the crescent scar, of the childhood accident that taught her that bodies remember everything, of the ex named Evan who taught her that leaving was a kind of survival. She thought of Luc, born in Marseille to a demon father and a human mother, dressing in charcoal suits that hid the blade, speaking four languages, and speaking the one language she needed most without using a single word. “I won’t make you leave,” she said. Luc’s amber eye darkened. His thumb traced her scar again, then slid to her wrist, holding her with the same gentleness he might use on something fragile and dangerous. “I won’t leave,” he repeated. The deadbolts stayed unlocked. The books stayed scattered. The flat stayed cramped and breathless. But Rory Carter, who had fled to London, who worked part-time for Yu-Fei Cheung’s restaurant, who lived above Silas’ bar and carried a crescent scar and bright blue eyes and straight black hair, stood in Eva’s flat with her hand in Luc’s and knew that the complication was not finished. It had only begun. She did not pull away. Outside, Brick Lane breathed with the noise of the city, and the curry-house steam rose through the floorboards, and the two people who had parted on terms too sharp for simple goodbyes were forced together again, in the only room that had enough secrets to hold them both.
created_at"2026-09-01T14:33:37.986Z" 9/1/2026, 2:33:37 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences56
tagDensity0.268
leniency0.536
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1633
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
78.57% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1633
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"tension"
count1
1
word"perfect"
count1
2
word"tracing"
count2
3
word"shattered"
count1
4
word"magnetic"
count1
5
word"traced"
count1
highlights
0"tension"
1"perfect"
2"tracing"
3"shattered"
4"magnetic"
5"traced"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences70
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences70
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tended to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences112
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen52
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1630
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions23
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
80.97% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions49
wordCount1014
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity1.38
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Eva5
Brick3
Lane3
Avaros1
Rory14
Ptolemy3
London5
Luc9
Welsh1
Evan1
Marseille1
Carter1
Yu-Fei1
Cheung1
persons
0"Eva"
1"Rory"
2"Luc"
3"Evan"
4"Carter"
5"Cheung"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"Ptolemy"
3"London"
4"Marseille"
globalScore0.81
windowScore1
41.30% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences46
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"not quite and set his cane against the bookcase where Eva’s notes on Avaros lay scattered"
1"seemed smaller the books leaning in like spectators"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches6
per1kWords3.681
wordCount1630
matches
0"not touching her face, not claiming her, but close enough"
1"not claiming her, but close enough"
2"not for my notes, not for the flat, but for the hole"
3"not for the flat, but for the hole"
4"not to grab her, not to claim her, but to rest against her shoulder with the same precision he used"
5"not to claim her, but to rest against her shoulder with the same precision he used"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences112
matches
0"knew that some"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs66
mean24.7
std23.13
cv0.936
sampleLengths
056
15
236
337
456
58
68
711
827
924
107
1147
123
133
1424
1544
1674
177
1815
1936
2010
2111
2219
2338
247
254
264
275
2828
2917
309
316
3213
3352
345
357
3666
3755
3855
397
408
417
422
4325
4435
455
464
4711
4852
4969
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences70
matches
0"were forced"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs177
matches(empty)
66.33% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences112
ratio0.027
matches
0"Every surface wore books, scrolls, coffee rings; the air smelled of ink and turmeric."
1"She looked at him—platinum hair, heterochromatic eyes, the tailored suit of a man who made his living in hidden things—and she knew that some doors stayed open because they had always been open, even when they pretended to be shut."
2"Rory felt the pull—the dangerous, magnetic draw that had pulled her to London, to the golden restaurant, to the flat above Silas’ bar, to the man who spoke in languages she did not know but understood every word of."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount920
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount21
adverbRatio0.02282608695652174
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.002173913043478261
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences112
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences112
mean14.55
std11.67
cv0.802
sampleLengths
020
124
212
35
422
55
69
74
824
99
1020
1114
1222
138
144
154
1611
1717
1810
1913
2011
217
223
2323
2421
253
263
2713
2811
2926
3018
313
3220
3344
347
357
3615
3736
383
397
4011
4119
424
4316
4418
457
464
474
485
4922
41.07% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.24107142857142858
totalSentences112
uniqueOpeners27
55.56% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences60
matches
0"Instead, she lowered her hand,"
ratio0.017
46.67% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount26
totalSentences60
matches
0"He held his ivory-handled cane"
1"She kept her left hand"
2"He stepped inside, and the"
3"He moved past her, not"
4"She finally stood, five feet"
5"He turned, and the amber"
6"She stepped back, her shoulder"
7"He tilted the cane, and"
8"She crossed her arms, hiding"
9"She gestured at the flat,"
10"His gaze dropped to her"
11"He reached out, not with"
12"She pulled back, but only"
13"His thumb pressed the scar,"
14"Her voice dropped, soft as"
15"She should have moved away."
16"She should have unlocked the"
17"She looked at him—platinum hair,"
18"His thumb moved from her"
19"He leaned in, his breath"
ratio0.433
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount56
totalSentences60
matches
0"The door to Eva’s flat"
1"Rory sat at the narrow"
2"Ptolemy, Eva’s tabby, shifted on"
3"Luc filled the doorway, charcoal"
4"He held his ivory-handled cane"
5"Rory did not stand."
6"She kept her left hand"
7"He stepped inside, and the"
8"Every surface wore books, scrolls,"
9"He moved past her, not"
10"Rory’s gaze snapped up."
11"She finally stood, five feet"
12"He turned, and the amber"
13"Luc moved closer."
14"The distance between them shrank"
15"She stepped back, her shoulder"
16"He tilted the cane, and"
17"Rory’s breath caught."
18"She crossed her arms, hiding"
19"She gestured at the flat,"
ratio0.933
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences60
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences35
technicalSentenceCount9
matches
0"He stepped inside, and the door shut with a heavy thud that swallowed the curry-house steam rising through the floorboards."
1"She stepped back, her shoulder hitting the shelf, a stack of scrolls trembling."
2"She crossed her arms, hiding the scar, hiding the lean muscle of her forearm she never used to defend anything."
3"The ivory handle of the cane pressed against her palm, cold and elegant, hiding the blade that could cut a man in half."
4"The words hung between them, heavier than the curry smell, heavier than the books that had witnessed every secret Eva and Rory ever wrote down."
5"Rory felt the history in her ribs: the attraction that had pulled them together in dark corners of London, the hurt that had shattered them at the edge of recog…"
6"Rory’s heart beat against her ribs like a bird that refused to learn the cage."
7"She looked at him—platinum hair, heterochromatic eyes, the tailored suit of a man who made his living in hidden things—and she knew that some doors stayed open …"
8"Outside, Brick Lane breathed with the noise of the city, and the curry-house steam rose through the floorboards, and the two people who had parted on terms too …"
91.67% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"He leaned in, his breath warm against her hair"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"he agreed (agree)"
1"he repeated (repeat)"
dialogueSentences56
tagDensity0.196
leniency0.393
rawRatio0.182
effectiveRatio0.071
76.7375%