Run: 2026-09-01-01M1EP8RCS95X9BD1XEHPNQBZ7

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Duration:
1m 39s
Cost:
$0.006493
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The stairwell beneath Camden Square exhaled damp brick and ancient copper. Detective Harlow Quinn descended with her shoulders squared, her closely cropped salt-and-pepper hair catching the dull glow of her flashlight. At five-foot-nine, she moved with a military precision that turned every step into a statement; the worn leather watch on her left wrist ticked against her pulse like a second heart. The Veil Market had shifted here three nights before the full moon, colonizing the abandoned Tube station with flickering lanterns and rusted tracks. Stalls of shadow lined the platforms, selling enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information that never reached a daylight court. Quinn stepped over the threshold, her sharp jaw cutting a hard line beneath brown eyes that had learned not to blink. "You brought her into the bone token's reach," a voice said. Eva Kowalski stood by a fallen timetable pillar, her green eyes glinting behind round glasses, curly red hair framing a freckled complexion. She clutched a worn leather satchel full of books against her hip, her fingers twitching to tuck hair behind her left ear. "I didn't bring her," Eva said. "The market brings everyone." Quinn turned. "Where's the scene?" "Behind the artifact throw." Eva gestured with a tilt of her head, her nervous habit repeating in a quick flick. "Follow the blood, not the shadows." Quinn walked past rows of stalls that smelled of ozone and old coin. Vendors had vanished; the market's schedule moved with the moon, but even it had emptied for this. The stone platform where a train once waited held the corpse. A male, early twenties, slumped against tiled brick with his throat opened wide. The blood had dried in a single arc, dark and theatrical, not pooling but painting. In his open palm rested a bone token, white and polished, entirely dry, missing even the smear of copper that should have soaked it. Quinn crouched. Her boots pressed the wet tile; the heels came up clean, too clean for a station soaked in red. Eva stepped closer, adjusting her glasses. "The clique performs rituals down here. They trade death like books. This is a portal sacrifice." Quinn's gaze moved past the body. Between the corpse's feet lay the Veil Compass: a small brass casing etched with protective sigils, its needle frozen, not trembling, not seeking any supernatural rift. Verdigris patina coated the edges, but the center had been scrubbed polished, the metal bright where fingers had gripped it hard enough to erase the patina. "Your interpretation fails the geometry," Quinn said. Eva tucked her hair behind her ear again. "The Shade artisan crafted it to hunt rifts. If they used it to drag the body, the needle locks." Quinn straightened. Her eyes tracked the blood arc. It started at the throat, curved left, and stopped exactly at the edge of the bone token, leaving a thin dry bridge of tile between murder and prop. The boots of the dead boy were untouched by the blood. He hadn't walked here; someone had carried him, placed him, and arranged the scene like a stagehand. "The token is dry," Quinn said. "The fingernails are clean. He didn't clutch it in panic; they pressed it into his hand after death. And the stalls—look at them. No goods move, no vendors breathe. The market moves every full moon, Eva, but this station hasn't hosted trade. It's a backdrop." Eva's round glasses reflected the flickering lanterns. She stepped closer, her satchel rustling. "You think they planted evidence." "I think DS Morris didn't drown in a rift three years ago," Quinn said, her voice low and precise. "I think he was killed by people who use this market to sell secrets, and now they're using the same place to kill witnesses, framing the clique with magic they never performed." Quinn turned the brass compass over. The protective sigils on the face had been scratched over—new cuts over the old, exposing the needle's mechanism to rift energy, turning a safeguard into a lie. The needle pointed north, toward a wall where no portal existed, while the nearest supernatural rift sat southeast, buried under the old ventilation shaft. The compass wasn't guiding anyone to a portal; it was guiding investigators away from the truth. "You see magic first and murder second," Quinn said. "The clique buys banned substances here, yes. They have power. But this scene is a message to me. They want me chasing ghosts instead of a killer with a leather watch and a reason to bury the past." Eva's fingers tightened around her books. "The British Museum archives don't lie, Harlow. The market sells information that buys silence. You can't erase that with logic." Quinn moved past her, military precision guiding her steps toward the ventilation shaft. She knelt by the wall and ran her finger along the brick. A fresh scratch, deep and clean, matched the carving on the bone token. Someone had pulled the token from the same stall that sold the compass, used it to stage a ritual, and left the corpse as an offering to a detective already half-lost in grief. Quinn stood. She faced Eva. "The blood skips the compass because they arranged it that way. The victim's soles are dry because he was carried. The bone token is too polished because it was selected from a shelf, not pulled from a dying hand. They built this scene to implicate the clique, to make me see supernatural origins where there are only human hands, and to remind me that DS Morris's case is still open—not because of a rift, but because of a killer who knows I want to believe in magic more than I want to believe in murder." Eva tucked her hair behind her left ear, her green eyes sharp beneath her glasses. "Then we're not allies tonight." "We never were," Quinn said. "You see the Veil Market as a door. I see it as a stage. Now step aside." Quinn walked toward the ventilation shaft, her watch ticking, her sharp jaw set. The brass compass glinted behind her, its needle pointing the wrong way, its sigils scratched into lies, its verdigris hiding the truth under polished metal. The market moved with the moon, but the crime was here, solid and ugly and entirely human, and the detective was already moving past the magic, tracing the failure of the stage to the real hands that had set it.
created_at"2026-09-01T14:34:14.818Z" 9/1/2026, 2:34:14 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences21
tagDensity0.381
leniency0.762
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1074
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
76.72% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1074
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"pulse"
count1
1
word"glinting"
count1
2
word"etched"
count1
3
word"silence"
count1
4
word"tracing"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"glinting"
2"etched"
3"silence"
4"tracing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences52
matches
0"t in grief"
87.91% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences52
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences65
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen96
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1071
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions34
wordCount719
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity2.23
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Camden1
Square1
Harlow1
Quinn16
Veil2
Market1
Tube1
Eva9
Kowalski1
Compass1
persons
0"Square"
1"Harlow"
2"Quinn"
3"Market"
4"Eva"
5"Kowalski"
6"Compass"
places(empty)
globalScore0.387
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences41
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.934
wordCount1071
matches
0"not pooling but painting"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences65
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs25
mean42.84
std29.67
cv0.693
sampleLengths
0105
121
211
344
410
55
626
793
821
922
1058
117
1227
1364
1451
1518
1651
1773
1847
1926
2071
21100
2220
2322
2478
85.02% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences52
matches
0"been scrubbed"
1"were untouched"
2"been scratched"
93.33% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs125
matches
0"wasn't guiding"
1"was already moving"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount6
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences65
ratio0.108
matches
0"At five-foot-nine, she moved with a military precision that turned every step into a statement; the worn leather watch on her left wrist ticked against her pulse like a second heart."
1"Vendors had vanished; the market's schedule moved with the moon, but even it had emptied for this."
2"Her boots pressed the wet tile; the heels came up clean, too clean for a station soaked in red."
3"He hadn't walked here; someone had carried him, placed him, and arranged the scene like a stagehand."
4"\"The fingernails are clean. He didn't clutch it in panic; they pressed it into his hand after death. And the stalls—look at them. No goods move, no vendors breathe. The market moves every full moon, Eva, but this station hasn't hosted trade. It's a backdrop.\""
5"The protective sigils on the face had been scratched over—new cuts over the old, exposing the needle's mechanism to rift energy, turning a safeguard into a lie."
6"The compass wasn't guiding anyone to a portal; it was guiding investigators away from the truth."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount725
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount13
adverbRatio0.01793103448275862
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.009655172413793104
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences65
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences65
mean16.48
std14.02
cv0.851
sampleLengths
011
120
231
323
420
521
611
722
822
96
104
112
123
1320
146
1513
1617
1711
1813
1915
2024
212
2219
236
2416
256
2626
2726
287
298
3019
312
326
3328
3411
3517
366
3745
387
396
405
4119
4232
436
4427
4524
4616
479
4838
496
53.85% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.36923076923076925
totalSentences65
uniqueOpeners24
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences43
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount8
totalSentences43
matches
0"She clutched a worn leather"
1"Her boots pressed the wet"
2"Her eyes tracked the blood"
3"It started at the throat,"
4"He hadn't walked here; someone"
5"She stepped closer, her satchel"
6"She knelt by the wall"
7"She faced Eva."
ratio0.186
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount40
totalSentences43
matches
0"The stairwell beneath Camden Square"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn descended with"
2"The Veil Market had shifted"
3"Stalls of shadow lined the"
4"Quinn stepped over the threshold,"
5"a voice said"
6"Eva Kowalski stood by a"
7"She clutched a worn leather"
8"Eva gestured with a tilt"
9"Quinn walked past rows of"
10"Vendors had vanished; the market's"
11"The stone platform where a"
12"A male, early twenties, slumped"
13"The blood had dried in"
14"Her boots pressed the wet"
15"Eva stepped closer, adjusting her"
16"Quinn's gaze moved past the"
17"Verdigris patina coated the edges,"
18"Eva tucked her hair behind"
19"Her eyes tracked the blood"
ratio0.93
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences43
matches(empty)
ratio0
50.69% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences31
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Quinn stepped over the threshold, her sharp jaw cutting a hard line beneath brown eyes that had learned not to blink."
1"Someone had pulled the token from the same stall that sold the compass, used it to stage a ritual, and left the corpse as an offering to a detective already hal…"
2"The brass compass glinted behind her, its needle pointing the wrong way, its sigils scratched into lies, its verdigris hiding the truth under polished metal."
3"The market moved with the moon, but the crime was here, solid and ugly and entirely human, and the detective was already moving past the magic, tracing the fail…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags8
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Eva gestured, her nervous habit repeating in a quick flick"
1"Quinn said, her voice low and precise"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences21
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
76.0286%