Run: 2026-09-01-01M1EPA61AQ0J84JP4RDJ0Y8WY

Run Details

Duration:
1m 53s
Cost:
$0.031412
Provider:
xAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Quinn ducked under the tape at the bottom of the service stairs. Condensation beaded on the tiled walls of the old Camden platform, and the air carried damp brick, burnt sage, and a copper tang that sat on her tongue. Emergency lamps the Met had strung from the tunnel ribs threw hard white pools across a row of stalls that had no business existing on a line closed since the seventies. Canvas awnings sagged between iron pillars. Wooden crates stood open. Glass jars lined a trestle, their contents shifting even without a draught. A bone token the size of a shilling lay in a brass dish by the nearest stall, its surface scored with marks she did not recognise. She checked the worn leather watch on her left wrist. 03:47. The second hand swept past twelve. Her shoulders stayed square. A uniformed constable straightened from a crate of dried roots. “Detective Quinn. Body’s at the far end. Stall eighteen. SOCO’s waiting on you before they bag anything.” “Who found him?” “Anonymous call to the Camden desk. Female. Accent they couldn’t place. Said we’d want a look before the market packed up.” Quinn moved down the platform. Her boots found the old Northern Line tiles, cracked and slick. Stalls flickered past: a rack of knives with handles of yellowed horn, a cage of moths the size of a palm, a ledger bound in something that was not leather. She kept her hands at her sides. Stall eighteen sat under a patched green awning. A man lay on his back between the counter and a stack of crates, one arm flung toward a spilled tray of brass fittings. Grey at the temples. Wool coat still buttoned. No visible wound from ten feet out. A small brass compass rested in his open right palm, its casing mottled with verdigris, the face etched with sigils that caught the lamp light. Sergeant Hale crouched by an empty cash box, latex already on. He looked up as her shadow crossed the tiles. “Robbery. Cash gone. Phone gone. Watch gone off his left wrist—see the tan line. Looks like a smash and grab that went pear-shaped when the poor sod put up a fight.” Quinn stood over the body. The man’s eyes were open, filmed, fixed on the tunnel roof. No blood on the coat. No blood on the tiles beneath him. The compass needle trembled, then settled, pointing not north but at a blank stretch of brick behind the stall. “Where’s the blood, Hale?” “That’s the bit I don’t like. No spatter. No pooling. Pathologist’s on the way, but if this bloke fought, he did it without bleeding.” Hale rocked back on his heels. “Could’ve been poisoned. Could’ve been a heart. Could’ve been anything. Market like this, half these stalls are selling powders I wouldn’t put in a rat. My money’s still on a deal gone wrong. These people don’t call us. Someone wanted this one found.” Footsteps clicked on the tiles behind them. A woman in a navy coat stopped at the edge of the awning, round glasses catching the lamp, a worn leather satchel heavy against her hip. Curly red hair. Freckles across the bridge of her nose. She tucked a strand behind her left ear and kept her hands visible. “Detective Quinn? Eva Kowalski. British Museum. Restricted archives. Your superintendent rang my department an hour ago. Said you had markings that weren’t in the database.” Hale’s mouth tightened. “Civilians off the platform, miss. This is a crime scene.” “She’s cleared.” Quinn did not look away from the compass. “What do you see?” Eva stepped under the awning. She knelt without touching the body, satchel settling against her knee, and studied the sigils on the compass face. Green eyes moved from the needle to the brick wall it indicated, then to the bone token still sitting in its dish two stalls down. “This isn’t a robbery.” She adjusted her glasses with one knuckle. “The compass is a Veil piece. Shade work. It points at rifts, not north. It’s pointing at that wall because there’s a seam there, or there was. And the token at stall three is an entry mark. This market doesn’t let you in without one. Whoever killed him had a token or he let them through.” Hale snorted. “Or he got jumped by someone who nicked a token off a punter. Occult doesn’t pay the rent, Miss Kowalski. Empty till does.” “The till was empty when the market opened.” Eva’s voice stayed level. She opened the satchel, drew out a thin notebook, and flipped to a sketch of the same sigils. “I catalogued a piece like this last month. The artisan who made them works this circuit. Moves with the market every full moon. If this is him, he doesn’t keep cash in a box. He keeps it in a hollow under the third crate from the left.” Quinn crossed to the crates. She lifted the third from the left. A panel in the wood gave under her palm. Inside: a roll of notes bound with twine, untouched. She let the crate settle back. Hale stood. “So not a robbery. Poison, then. One of his own powders. Rival trader. We’ve got a whole tunnel of suspects who don’t exist on any electoral roll.” Quinn returned to the body. She crouched. The wool of the coat was dry. The man’s fingernails were clean, no trace of the powders from his own jars. The tan line on his left wrist was sharp, but the skin there was paler than a week’s absence of a watch would account for. She turned the wrist with two gloved fingers. A faint circular impression sat below the tan line, smaller than a watch face, ridged. “He wore something else under the watch.” Eva leaned in. The satchel strap creaked. “A second token. Some of the older traders stitch them to the skin. If it’s gone, whoever took it knew where to look.” “Or it was never stitched. Impression’s too shallow.” Quinn let the wrist rest. She studied the compass again. The needle held on the brick. Verdigris crusted the hinge, old, not staged. She opened the casing with a thumbnail. Inside, beneath the glass, a hairline crack ran across the face, and a flake of something dark had caught in the crack. Not rust. Not verdigris. She held it to the lamp. “Hale. Light.” He angled a torch. The flake was reddish-black, dry, smaller than a pinhead. It sat in the crack as if pressed there. “Blood?” Hale’s torch beam steadied. “From the fight you say didn’t happen?” “Wrong colour for fresh. And it’s under the glass. The case was shut when we got here.” Quinn closed it. The needle twitched toward the wall, then past it, toward Eva’s satchel, then back. “Miss Kowalski. Your books. Anything in them about a compass that tracks more than rifts?” Eva tucked hair behind her ear again. She pulled a cloth-bound volume from the satchel, pages marked with ribbon, and found a plate of an identical instrument. “Attuned to supernatural energy. Nearest rift or portal. That’s the standard function. Some of the Shade pieces were dual-keyed. If the owner dies holding it, the needle can hold the last living signature it registered. Not the killer. The last person the dead man touched.” Hale rubbed his jaw. “So we’re chasing a ghost signature. Brilliant. I’ll put that in the report.” Quinn stood. She walked the three paces to the brick wall the needle had favoured. The mortar was damp, same as the rest of the tunnel, but a section the width of a door showed a hairline where the pointing had been raked out and packed again, paler than the surrounding joints. She pressed. The brick did not give. No draught. No seam she could see. She turned back. The spilled tray of brass fittings lay where the dead man’s arm had thrown it. Among the hinges and clasps sat a single bone disc, same size as the token in the dish, but this one was snapped clean across. The break was new. No dirt in the fracture. “Hale. The anonymous call. Female. You said the accent couldn’t be placed.” “Desk sergeant’s notes. Not local. Not anything he recognised. Call lasted twelve seconds. She gave the station name and stall number and hung up.” “Stall number. She knew the layout.” Quinn picked up the broken disc with tweezers from her pocket and held it to the light. The scored marks on it matched the intact token, except one line that continued over the break, cut after the snap. “This was broken here. After he was down. Someone wanted it unusable.” Eva closed the book. “A voided token. Standard if you’re cutting someone out of the circuit. The market moves on the full moon. That’s three nights off. If they voided him, they didn’t want him following to the next site.” “Or they didn’t want us following.” Quinn set the disc on the counter. She looked at the man’s clean nails, the dry coat, the money still in the crate, the compass with its trapped flake, the packed mortar, the tan line and the smaller impression beneath it. Hale’s robbery sat on none of it. Eva’s voiding sat on some of it and missed the rest. She went back to the body. The compass needle had shifted again, a degree off the wall, toward the service stairs she had come down. She watched it. It held. The lamps hummed. Water ticked in a pipe overhead. Hale waited with his torch. Eva’s fingers rested on the satchel flap. Quinn lifted the dead man’s left hand a second time. The shallow circular impression on the wrist was not from a token. The ridges were too even, too mechanical. She knew that pattern. She wore a version of it. A watch. Not his missing one. A different case, pressed there hard enough and long enough to leave a mark after the first watch was already gone. Someone had held him down by the wrist. Someone who wore a timepiece on the left. She looked at her own leather strap, then at Hale’s bare wrists, then at Eva’s. Eva’s left wrist was bare. A pale band showed where a strap had sat until recently. Quinn’s gaze travelled from that band to the satchel, to the notebook with its sketch of the sigils, to the volume with the plate, to the way Eva had known the hollow in the third crate without looking. The compass needle held on the stairs. Quinn straightened. The platform stretched behind her, stalls and shadows and a market that was not supposed to be here. She kept her voice even. “Miss Kowalski. When the superintendent rang your department. What time was that.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Hale rocked back [back]"
dialogueSentences34
tagDensity0.265
leniency0.529
rawRatio0.111
effectiveRatio0.059
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1801
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
77.79% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1801
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"etched"
count1
2
word"trembled"
count1
3
word"footsteps"
count1
4
word"database"
count1
5
word"standard"
count2
6
word"mechanical"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"etched"
2"trembled"
3"footsteps"
4"database"
5"standard"
6"mechanical"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences122
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences122
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences147
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen56
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1800
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
91.91% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions40
wordCount1205
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.16
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Hale"
discoveredNames
Camden1
Met1
Northern1
Line1
Hale10
Footsteps1
Eva11
Quinn14
persons
0"Met"
1"Line"
2"Hale"
3"Footsteps"
4"Eva"
5"Quinn"
places(empty)
globalScore0.919
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences76
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.556
wordCount1800
matches
0"not north but at a blank stretch of brick behind the stall"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences147
matches
0"knew that pattern"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs59
mean30.51
std22.73
cv0.745
sampleLengths
071
148
221
310
417
53
621
753
872
920
1031
1147
124
1373
1456
1525
163
1710
1814
1949
2067
212
2223
2377
2436
252
2627
2776
287
297
3023
3164
326
332
3422
3512
3649
3727
3845
394
4013
4166
4252
4312
4424
4556
464
4736
4865
4930
99.51% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences122
matches
0"been raked"
1"was snapped"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs191
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences147
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1207
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount24
adverbRatio0.01988400994200497
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.0016570008285004142
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences147
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences147
mean12.24
std10.53
cv0.86
sampleLengths
012
128
231
36
44
512
626
710
81
96
104
1110
1217
133
1421
155
1611
1730
187
198
2024
214
224
237
2425
2511
269
2731
285
2911
305
317
3219
334
3430
3543
367
3726
383
397
4013
4125
423
4310
4410
454
465
4719
4825
4911
50.46% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.3356164383561644
totalSentences146
uniqueOpeners49
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences110
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount27
totalSentences110
matches
0"She checked the worn leather"
1"Her shoulders stayed square."
2"Her boots found the old"
3"She kept her hands at"
4"He looked up as her"
5"She tucked a strand behind"
6"She knelt without touching the"
7"She adjusted her glasses with"
8"She opened the satchel, drew"
9"She lifted the third from"
10"She let the crate settle"
11"She turned the wrist with"
12"She studied the compass again."
13"She opened the casing with"
14"She held it to the"
15"He angled a torch."
16"It sat in the crack"
17"She pulled a cloth-bound volume"
18"She walked the three paces"
19"She turned back."
ratio0.245
23.64% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount96
totalSentences110
matches
0"Quinn ducked under the tape"
1"Condensation beaded on the tiled"
2"Emergency lamps the Met had"
3"Canvas awnings sagged between iron"
4"Glass jars lined a trestle,"
5"A bone token the size"
6"She checked the worn leather"
7"The second hand swept past"
8"Her shoulders stayed square."
9"A uniformed constable straightened from"
10"Quinn moved down the platform."
11"Her boots found the old"
12"Stalls flickered past: a rack"
13"She kept her hands at"
14"A man lay on his"
15"Wool coat still buttoned."
16"A small brass compass rested"
17"Sergeant Hale crouched by an"
18"He looked up as her"
19"Quinn stood over the body."
ratio0.873
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences110
matches(empty)
ratio0
73.17% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences41
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Condensation beaded on the tiled walls of the old Camden platform, and the air carried damp brick, burnt sage, and a copper tang that sat on her tongue."
1"Emergency lamps the Met had strung from the tunnel ribs threw hard white pools across a row of stalls that had no business existing on a line closed since the s…"
2"Stalls flickered past: a rack of knives with handles of yellowed horn, a cage of moths the size of a palm, a ledger bound in something that was not leather."
3"A small brass compass rested in his open right palm, its casing mottled with verdigris, the face etched with sigils that caught the lamp light."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags9
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
87.2158%