Run: 2026-09-01-01M1EPATXVH8PHSE2T1XW54DF1

Run Details

Duration:
1m 25s
Cost:
$0.006378
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The oak standing stones marked their passage with silent authority, and Aurora crossed them without looking back. Isolde moved ahead, silver hair dissolving into twilight that had no source, her bare feet leaving no footprint in the dew-heavy grass of Richmond Park's hidden heart. Behind them, Nyx shimmered like a bruise against the bark, half-present, half-memory, their whisper cutting through the damp air. "You feel it," Isolde said. Not a question. Her voice carried the weight of centuries. Aurora pressed her fingers to the crescent scar on her left wrist and felt the Heartstone Pendant throb against her sternum, deep crimson against silver, warm with a pulse that matched the blood in her throat. The grove had swallowed them whole, and the world outside—London, the flat above Silas' bar, the delivery routes for Golden Empress—crumbled into a fiction too thin to hold. "Time forgets us here," Nyx said, their words barely sound. Aurora turned. The shadow-figure stood at six feet, solidity flickering, violet eyes like distant lantern flames. "How long?" "An hour here is a minute there, or a year." Isolde did not slow. She walked toward a cluster of wildflowers that defied every season, blooming in spirals of violet and gold, colors that hurt to name. "But you came for the blade, not the calendar." Aurora unsheathed the Fae-Forged Blade from her coat. Moonsilver caught a light that did not come from the sun. It bit her palm with cold, always cold, its leaf-shaped edge luminescent in a darkness that was not quite night. She had carried Isolde's gift through London streets, through the grief of leaving Evan, through the grinding rhythm of part-time deliveries, and now it sang in her grip. The grove deepened. Ancient oaks formed arches, their bark thick with moss that glowed faintly. The air smelled of copper and rain on hot stone, and every breath tasted like a memory not her own. Sound came from everywhere and nowhere; leaves rustled with voices that spoke no language, wind carried whispers that slipped behind her teeth. "Something breathes at the center," Isolde said. Aurora moved forward. She did not ask what something. She followed the blade's cold whisper, the pendant's pull, the absolute conviction that her feet knew where to go. Nyx drifted beside her, incorporeal, a silhouette of living shadow threading between branches that bent away from them. The Shade's voice dropped to a murmur. "The Wardens think the Veil holds in summer. They do not watch this crack." Aurora glanced at the trees. A shimmer, faint and warping, distorted the air where the trunks split like mouths. The Barrier between Earth and Hel frayed, visible only to those who bore supernatural sight, and Aurora's bright blue eyes burned with the recognition. "The tear," she said. Isolde stopped at a clearing where the wildflowers grew thickest, their petals unfolding in rhythms too slow for eyes. She turned, silver hair framing a face that seemed carved from moonlight and exile. "You ask with your eyes, child of Cardiff. Speak." "The blade cuts wards," Aurora said. "But this is older than wards." Isolde smiled, a riddle in every curve. "The Fae do not build fences to keep Hel out. They build flowers to forget." Aurora reached out. The blade cut the air, and where its edge passed, a shadow split—not darkness, but a denial of light—that collapsed with a sound like wet silk tearing. Unease rooted in her gut, cold and heavy. The grove was not hostile; it was indifferent, vast and ancient, a place that held centuries in its soil and offered only questions. Nyx dissolved entirely, becoming a draft that moved through Aurora's hair, their voice a whisper against her ear. "Your scar knows this ground. You were born near the water, but the earth remembers other crossings." Aurora touched the crescent on her wrist. The pendant flared, crimson glowing, silver chain heating against her skin. It pulled her toward the shimmer, toward the tear, toward the heart of the grove where the Veil breathed. They walked. The distance betrayed them; what seemed a few paces stretched into a labyrinth of oak and bloom, and Aurora realized with a jolt that they had walked in circles, or that the grove had decided they needed more time to arrive at their own discovery. The light remained amber and frozen, never shifting, while their breath turned to mist. "You carry a gift that can sever demons," Nyx said, reforming beside her, violet eyes glowing like embers in wet wood. "And a pendant that sings of Hel's door. You bring both worlds into this clearing." "Not my choice," Aurora said. Her voice came out harder than she intended, shaped by the steel of leaving Evan, by the golden weight of Golden Empress deliveries, by the quiet terror of standing where no mortal map could guide her. "Choice is a luxury of the unbroken," Isolde said. She walked to a flat stone at the center, her bare feet pressing the earth without leaving trace, her silhouette catching a glow that seemed to come from beneath the soil. "The grove offers you a vision. Take it, or step back into a world that will never ask you again." Aurora stepped forward. The blade trembled, moonsilver ice against her palm, and she realized with a clarity that stripped her bare: the grove was not a place to observe. It was a place to become part of its question. She lowered the dagger, and the wildflowers turned their heads, not with eyes but with a presence that made her skin tighten. A sound rose—not wind, not voice, but the groan of the Veil itself, the Boundary shuddering as the winter solstice drew near and the barrier weakened, allowing Hel's reach to stretch into Fae-touched soil. The Heartstone throbbed in rhythm with that shudder, warm, insistent, a herald. Aurora sheathed the blade? No, she held it, point down, and the ground beneath her shuddered. The tear expanded, a distortion that swallowed the oak roots, that breathed heat into her lungs. She felt the pull of Dymas, of gluttony, of excess that demanded consumption, and she knew that some part of her—born Irish and Welsh, raised in Cardiff's concrete and rain—was made for this crossing. Nyx stood at the edge of the tear, half-shadow, half-witness. "I crossed in 1643 and never came back whole. You step closer because you must." "I step closer because it asks," Aurora said. The floor of the grove turned to something not quite stone, not quite earth, and the wildflowers bloomed around her boots in spirals of silver and crimson, colors that belonged to neither sun nor moon. Isolde moved to Aurora's side, silver hair brushing the blade's cold edge, her eyes pale lavender fixed on a vision only she could see. "You see now," Isolde said. "The Veil is not a wall. It is a mouth. And this grove is its tongue." Aurora raised her eyes to the amber sky above the canopy, a sky that did not belong to London or Richmond Park but to a pocket between worlds where time forgot its duty. She felt the weight of the pendant, the blade's cold truth, and the Shadow's breath. She did not ask what came next. She moved deeper. The tear widened. The flowers turned to light, and the light turned to hunger. The air thickened with the scent of wine and burning sugar, the perfume of Dymas seeping through a crack in the Barrier that the Wardens had never mapped. Aurora kept walking, the moonsilver dagger singing in her grip, her bright blue eyes fixed on the center of the world because she had already left the edge behind, and the grove, wild and wondrous, ancient and alien, accepted her without question.
created_at"2026-09-01T14:35:22.95Z" 9/1/2026, 2:35:22 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences22
tagDensity0.545
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1303
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
53.95% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1303
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"shimmered"
count1
1
word"whisper"
count3
2
word"carried the weight"
count1
3
word"throb"
count1
4
word"pulse"
count1
5
word"silk"
count1
6
word"weight"
count2
7
word"trembled"
count1
8
word"throbbed"
count1
highlights
0"shimmered"
1"whisper"
2"carried the weight"
3"throb"
4"pulse"
5"silk"
6"weight"
7"trembled"
8"throbbed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences74
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences74
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences85
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen45
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1296
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
62.68% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions68
wordCount1088
uniqueNames26
maxNameDensity1.75
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Aurora19
Richmond2
Park2
Nyx6
Heartstone2
Pendant1
London3
Fae-Forged1
Blade1
Isolde10
Evan2
Shade1
Barrier2
Earth1
Hel2
Veil2
Golden1
Empress1
Boundary1
Fae-touched1
Dymas2
Irish1
Welsh1
Cardiff1
Shadow1
Wardens1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Nyx"
2"Heartstone"
3"Pendant"
4"Blade"
5"Isolde"
6"Evan"
7"Shade"
8"Hel"
9"Veil"
10"Boundary"
11"Dymas"
12"Welsh"
13"Shadow"
14"Wardens"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"London"
3"Fae-touched"
4"Cardiff"
globalScore0.627
windowScore0.667
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences54
glossingSentenceCount5
matches
0"not quite night"
1"tasted like a memory not her own"
2"seemed carved from moonlight and exile"
3"glow that seemed to come from beneath the soil"
4"not quite stone, not quite earth, and the wildflowers bloomed around her boots in spirals of silver and crimson, colors that belonged to neither sun nor moon"
5"not quite earth, and the wildflowers bloomed around her boots in spirals of silver and crimson, colors that belonged to neither sun nor moon"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches5
per1kWords3.858
wordCount1296
matches
0"not darkness, but a denial of light"
1"not with eyes but with a presence"
2"not wind, not voice, but the groan of the Veil itself, the Boundary shuddering as the"
3"not voice, but the groan of the Veil itself, the Boundary shuddering as the"
4"neither sun nor"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences85
matches
0"knew that some"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs32
mean40.5
std21.31
cv0.526
sampleLengths
063
115
264
310
418
546
667
757
87
928
1039
1143
124
1342
1412
1522
1661
1735
1837
1961
2036
2141
2260
2361
2446
2566
2625
278
2859
2921
3058
3184
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences74
matches
0"was made"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs184
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount3
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences85
ratio0.082
matches
0"The grove had swallowed them whole, and the world outside—London, the flat above Silas' bar, the delivery routes for Golden Empress—crumbled into a fiction too thin to hold."
1"Sound came from everywhere and nowhere; leaves rustled with voices that spoke no language, wind carried whispers that slipped behind her teeth."
2"The blade cut the air, and where its edge passed, a shadow split—not darkness, but a denial of light—that collapsed with a sound like wet silk tearing."
3"The grove was not hostile; it was indifferent, vast and ancient, a place that held centuries in its soil and offered only questions."
4"The distance betrayed them; what seemed a few paces stretched into a labyrinth of oak and bloom, and Aurora realized with a jolt that they had walked in circles, or that the grove had decided they needed more time to arrive at their own discovery."
5"A sound rose—not wind, not voice, but the groan of the Veil itself, the Boundary shuddering as the winter solstice drew near and the barrier weakened, allowing Hel's reach to stretch into Fae-touched soil."
6"She felt the pull of Dymas, of gluttony, of excess that demanded consumption, and she knew that some part of her—born Irish and Welsh, raised in Cardiff's concrete and rain—was made for this crossing."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount276
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"half-present, half-memory,"
adverbCount2
adverbRatio0.007246376811594203
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences85
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences85
mean15.25
std10.24
cv0.671
sampleLengths
017
127
219
35
43
57
636
728
810
92
1014
112
1214
1323
149
158
1611
1720
1828
193
2012
2120
2222
237
243
256
2619
2718
287
2914
305
3114
3224
334
3419
3514
369
376
386
397
4015
413
4227
438
4423
4518
4617
477
4811
4919
40.39% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.3058823529411765
totalSentences85
uniqueOpeners26
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences64
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount16
totalSentences64
matches
0"Her voice carried the weight"
1"She walked toward a cluster"
2"It bit her palm with"
3"She had carried Isolde's gift"
4"She did not ask what"
5"She followed the blade's cold"
6"She turned, silver hair framing"
7"It pulled her toward the"
8"Her voice came out harder"
9"She walked to a flat"
10"It was a place to"
11"She lowered the dagger, and"
12"She felt the pull of"
13"She felt the weight of"
14"She did not ask what"
15"She moved deeper."
ratio0.25
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount60
totalSentences64
matches
0"The oak standing stones marked"
1"Isolde moved ahead, silver hair"
2"Her voice carried the weight"
3"Aurora pressed her fingers to"
4"The grove had swallowed them"
5"Nyx said, their words barely"
6"The shadow-figure stood at six"
7"Isolde did not slow"
8"She walked toward a cluster"
9"Aurora unsheathed the Fae-Forged Blade"
10"Moonsilver caught a light that"
11"It bit her palm with"
12"She had carried Isolde's gift"
13"The grove deepened."
14"The air smelled of copper"
15"Sound came from everywhere and"
16"Aurora moved forward."
17"She did not ask what"
18"She followed the blade's cold"
19"Nyx drifted beside her, incorporeal,"
ratio0.938
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences64
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences43
technicalSentenceCount10
matches
0"Isolde moved ahead, silver hair dissolving into twilight that had no source, her bare feet leaving no footprint in the dew-heavy grass of Richmond Park's hidden…"
1"Aurora pressed her fingers to the crescent scar on her left wrist and felt the Heartstone Pendant throb against her sternum, deep crimson against silver, warm w…"
2"She walked toward a cluster of wildflowers that defied every season, blooming in spirals of violet and gold, colors that hurt to name."
3"It bit her palm with cold, always cold, its leaf-shaped edge luminescent in a darkness that was not quite night."
4"She turned, silver hair framing a face that seemed carved from moonlight and exile."
5"The grove was not hostile; it was indifferent, vast and ancient, a place that held centuries in its soil and offered only questions."
6"Nyx dissolved entirely, becoming a draft that moved through Aurora's hair, their voice a whisper against her ear."
7"She walked to a flat stone at the center, her bare feet pressing the earth without leaving trace, her silhouette catching a glow that seemed to come from beneat…"
8"She felt the pull of Dymas, of gluttony, of excess that demanded consumption, and she knew that some part of her—born Irish and Welsh, raised in Cardiff's concr…"
9"Aurora raised her eyes to the amber sky above the canopy, a sky that did not belong to London or Richmond Park but to a pocket between worlds where time forgot …"
83.33% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Nyx said, their words barely sound"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences22
tagDensity0.455
leniency0.909
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
71.1454%