Run: 2026-09-01-01M1EPDAH65XW0CX0PCYYD5V22

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2m 39s
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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
I yanked the door open. Lucien Moreau stood on the landing as if the three deadbolts had been a suggestion. His cane tapped once against the scuffed floorboard. Charcoal wool. Platinum hair combed back without a strand out of place. That amber eye and the black one, both fixed on me. "Aurora." Ptolemy shot off the sofa and vanished under a stack of Eva's notes. Papers slid. A scroll hit the skirting board and unrolled a smear of ink across the floorboards. I kept my hand on the door. "She's not here." "I did not come for Eva." Cumin and fried onion clung to the stairwell from the curry house below. I did not move. The doorframe dug into my shoulder blade. "Then you've wasted a trip." He stepped forward. One polished shoe crossed the threshold. I held my ground, which meant the cramped hall put us close enough that I caught the clean bite of his cologne under the spice. "You opened all three locks." "I expected Eva." "And you received me. Life is full of these little disappointments." I let go of the door. Not because I wanted him in. Because standing there with it half open made me look like I still cared what the neighbours thought, and Brick Lane had heard worse than a Frenchman in a suit. He closed it behind him. The first deadbolt slid home under his fingers. Then the second. He left the third. "You missed one." "I never miss." He set the cane against the wall, ivory handle towards me, as if I might need it. "You do. With some consistency." The flat looked smaller with him in it. Books on the cooker. Scrolls on the windowsill. Eva's research notes in tottering columns that left a path wide enough for one person, if that person did not wear tailored wool and carry himself like the furniture ought to apologise. I picked up the fallen scroll and rolled it. My hands wanted something to do. "Say what you came to say and get out." "Direct. I had forgotten that about you." "You forgot a lot of things. That's rather the theme." He moved into the sitting room as if he had been invited. He had not. Ptolemy's tail stuck out from under the notes, bottle-brush stiff. Lucien glanced at it and the tail vanished. "Your friend's cat has taste." "My friend's cat has sense." I stayed by the door. "What do you want, Lucien." He picked up a page from the nearest pile. Eva's handwriting, cramped, a diagram of concentric circles with annotations in two languages I did not read. He set it down aligned with the edge of the table. "You left." "You told me to." "I told you to stay out of a particular building on a particular night. You translated that into a disappearance." "You said, and I am quoting, 'This is not your world, Aurora. Walk away before it notices you.' Then you put on your coat. Then you walked out of my flat and did not come back." "Your flat above the bar. Yes. I remember the stairs." "Do you." The black eye held me a beat longer than the amber one. He unbuttoned his jacket with two fingers and sat on the arm of Eva's sofa, which complained. Even sitting, he looked composed. I hated that. I hated that my pulse had not received the same memo. "I came back the next night," he said. "You had already gone. Silas claimed ignorance with the conviction of a man who had been paid for it." "Silas wasn't paid." "Then he is a better liar than I gave him credit for. Rare." I crossed my arms. The crescent scar on my left wrist caught the lamp and I dropped my hands again. His gaze flicked to it. Of course it did. He had put his mouth there once, in the dark, like it meant something. "You don't get to rewrite it," I said. "You left. I moved. That is the whole story." "If that were the whole story I would not be standing in a flat that smells of turmeric, listening to you pretend you do not know why I am here." "Enlighten me. You're good at speeches." He smiled. It did not reach either eye. "Someone bought a name last week. Yours. Not Aurora Carter. Not Rory. The other one." I said nothing. The cooker clock hummed. Downstairs, a pan slammed and a man shouted in Bengali about an order. "I don't have another name." "Malphora." He let it sit in the air between us. "It surfaced in three separate ledgers. One of them was mine. I burned that page. The other two I could not reach in time." "That's a pretty story." "It is an ugly one. I prefer those. They tend to be accurate." I walked past him to the kitchenette because the path went that way and because standing still had become its own problem. The kettle sat cold. I filled it. The tap juddered. Water hit steel too loud. "You came all this way to tell me a fairy tale about a name I don't use." "A name you do not remember using is not the same as a name you do not have." I turned. He had not moved from the sofa arm. The cane still waited by the door. Six steps. I counted them without meaning to. "Get to the part where this is my problem." "It became your problem the moment the second ledger changed hands. The buyer is not the sort who collects names for sport. He collects them for doors. Yours opens something he wants." "How convenient. You vanish for months, then turn up with a prophecy and that suit." "Fourteen weeks." He said it without heat. "And the suit is the same one. You tore a stitch in the lining. I kept it." The kettle clicked off. I did not pour. Fourteen weeks. I had counted days, then stopped, then started again on the bad nights when the bar below my floorboards stayed open too late and every laugh sounded like his. "You don't get to keep things," I said. "That was the arrangement. You made it." "I made a mistake." "No. You made a decision. Those are different. I sat a first-year jurisprudence module, Lucien. I know the difference between accident and intent." He stood. The sofa arm sprang back. In the narrow path between Eva's towers of paper we had a foot of air and too much history. "Intent." He tasted the word. "Yes. I intended to keep you breathing. I intended to keep Avaros from smelling you. I intended, God help me, to do it without standing in your doorway like a man who had not rehearsed this." "You rehearsed." "Poorly, it seems." I laughed. It came out wrong, short, the sound you make when the alternative is worse. "Say it in French. It might sound less like rubbish." "Je suis désolé." No flourish. Just the words, low, Marseille still in the vowels after all these years in London. "And I am here because the apology is worthless if you are dead by Thursday." Thursday. He had a timeline. Of course he had a timeline. Fixers dealt in clocks and consequences. "Who bought it." "A man who smiles with the wrong number of teeth. You would not know him. I would prefer you never did." "I prefer a lot of things I don't get." We stood there. His hand rose, stopped, fell. I watched it happen. The almost of it sat in my throat. "Rory." There it was. Not Aurora. The name he used when the suit came off and the cane lay across a chair and the city below my window went quiet. "Don't." "I have not touched you." "You're about to. I can see it from here." He looked at his own hand as if it belonged to someone else, then let it drop all the way. "Last time," I said, "you touched me plenty. Then you gave me a speech about worlds and walking away. I am still waiting for the version where that was kindness." "It was not kindness. It was arithmetic. You, minus me, equals a longer life." "And you, minus me?" His mouth tightened. The black eye did something the amber one did not. A thinning. A depth. "Shorter. Louder. Less sleep." I should have stepped back. The notes on my left would have gone over. I stayed. "You don't get to turn up, lock two of my friend's bolts, and tell me I have another name like you're doing me a favour." "I am not doing you a favour. I am collecting a debt I owe you." "You don't owe me." "I owe you the night I walked out. I owe you the stitch in my jacket. I owe you the cat that will not come out from under those papers because it can smell what I am." He glanced at Ptolemy's hiding place. "Half of me, at any rate. The honest half." "Which half is honest." "Guess." I reached out. I did not decide to. My fingers found the lapel of the charcoal jacket, the same one, and I felt for the lining. There. A ridge of thread, poorly mended, where my nail had caught months ago in the dark when I pulled him closer and he had let me. He went still. "You kept it," I said. "I said I did." "I thought you were lying. You lie for a living." "I lie for other people's livings. Mine is rather more expensive." My hand stayed on the wool. His came up and covered it. Warm. Dry. The cane's absence from his grip made him look less like a weapon and more like a man, which was worse. "Luc." "Say that again and I will not be responsible for the third bolt." I did not say it again. I also did not take my hand back. Downstairs the curry house door banged. Footsteps on the shared stairs, heavy, more than one pair. Lucien's head turned a fraction. The amber eye stayed on me. The black one tracked the sound. "You were followed." "I am never followed." His thumb moved once across my knuckles. "Which means they followed you." The footsteps stopped outside. No knock. A smell crept under the door that was not cumin. Wet stone. Old coins. Something sweet gone wrong. Ptolemy screamed from under the papers, a sound no tabby ought to make. Lucien's other hand found the cane without looking. Ivory, then a click, then three inches of thin blade catching the lamplight. "The third bolt," he said. I was already moving. My palm hit the lock. It shot home as the first blow landed on the other side of the wood, and the wood bowed in.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"His thumb moved once [once]"
dialogueSentences82
tagDensity0.159
leniency0.317
rawRatio0.077
effectiveRatio0.024
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1814
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
86.22% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1814
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"aligned"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count1
2
word"flicked"
count1
3
word"footsteps"
count2
highlights
0"aligned"
1"pulse"
2"flicked"
3"footsteps"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences134
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences134
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences202
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen43
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1814
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions23
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions21
wordCount1029
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity0.49
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
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Eva5
Brick1
Lane1
Frenchman1
Bengali1
Marseille1
London1
Aurora1
Ptolemy4
Lucien4
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Eva"
2"Ptolemy"
3"Lucien"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"Bengali"
3"Marseille"
4"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences67
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"sounded like his"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1814
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences202
matches
0"hated that my"
1"went that way"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs109
mean16.64
std13.03
cv0.783
sampleLengths
05
115
231
31
430
57
63
76
824
95
1034
115
123
1311
1442
1520
163
1725
1848
1915
209
217
2210
2333
245
2515
2637
272
284
2920
3036
3110
322
3348
3427
353
3613
3743
3817
3930
406
418
4215
4320
445
4534
464
4713
4837
4917
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences134
matches
0"been invited"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs184
matches
0"was already moving"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences202
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1030
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount37
adverbRatio0.035922330097087375
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.000970873786407767
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences202
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences202
mean8.98
std7.78
cv0.866
sampleLengths
05
115
28
32
410
511
61
713
82
915
107
113
126
1313
144
157
165
173
186
1925
205
213
2211
236
246
2530
265
278
283
294
303
3120
325
338
344
354
3632
379
386
399
407
4110
4212
433
4410
458
465
4710
485
499
52.31% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.3465346534653465
totalSentences202
uniqueOpeners70
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences108
matches
0"Then the second."
1"Even sitting, he looked composed."
2"Of course it did."
3"Just the words, low, Marseille"
4"Of course he had a"
ratio0.046
16.30% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount55
totalSentences108
matches
0"I yanked the door open."
1"His cane tapped once against"
2"I kept my hand on"
3"I did not move."
4"He stepped forward."
5"I held my ground, which"
6"I let go of the"
7"He closed it behind him."
8"He left the third."
9"He set the cane against"
10"I picked up the fallen"
11"My hands wanted something to"
12"He moved into the sitting"
13"He had not."
14"I stayed by the door"
15"He picked up a page"
16"He set it down aligned"
17"He unbuttoned his jacket with"
18"I hated that."
19"I hated that my pulse"
ratio0.509
6.30% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount98
totalSentences108
matches
0"I yanked the door open."
1"Lucien Moreau stood on the"
2"His cane tapped once against"
3"Platinum hair combed back without"
4"That amber eye and the"
5"Ptolemy shot off the sofa"
6"A scroll hit the skirting"
7"I kept my hand on"
8"Cumin and fried onion clung"
9"I did not move."
10"The doorframe dug into my"
11"He stepped forward."
12"I held my ground, which"
13"I let go of the"
14"He closed it behind him."
15"The first deadbolt slid home"
16"He left the third."
17"He set the cane against"
18"The flat looked smaller with"
19"Books on the cooker."
ratio0.907
46.30% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences108
matches
0"Because standing there with it"
ratio0.009
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences35
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"I held my ground, which meant the cramped hall put us close enough that I caught the clean bite of his cologne under the spice."
1"The cane's absence from his grip made him look less like a weapon and more like a man, which was worse."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences82
tagDensity0.085
leniency0.171
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
90.2472%