Run: 2026-09-01-01M1EPDM5T59XC8AVB4HM7Z6YP

Run Details

Duration:
1m 2s
Cost:
$0.007227
Provider:
Together

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The stairs beneath Camden had swallowed sound long before Detective Harlow Quinn reached the abandoned platform. She counted fourteen steps, each one a deliberate strike of her worn leather soles against rotted timber. Her salt-and-pepper hair was cropped too close for fashion; her sharp jaw worked like a blade beneath skin that had weathered eighteen years of Metropolitan precision. The leather watch on her left wrist ticked once, a low mechanical pulse in the dark. She did not need light to know the tunnel breathed differently than the rest of the Underground. The air smelled of verdigris and old copper, not dust. "Alice told me you'd come down here with a policeman's eyes." Eva Kowalski stood near the far wall, her curly red hair catching the dim glow of Quinn's torch. The freckled complexion of her round face looked paler under fluorescent spill that did not exist here; she adjusted her round glasses and tucked a stray curl behind her left ear. A worn leather satchel full of books hung low on her shoulder, heavy with occult theory. Quinn turned. "You should not be inside." "Your informant gave you the bone token. I am simply the archive." Quinn stepped closer. The crime scene spread across the abandoned platform like a mistake in geometry. A body lay against a pillar, dressed in the tailored grey of a City broker, but the posture was wrong—too still, too arranged. His bones did not match the fall. Blood had pooled beneath him, yet the edges of the stain were dry, cracked like old mud. No struggle marked the concrete. No footprints led away except the ones she had made. "Your interpretation?" Quinn asked. Eva did not answer at first. She pulled a notebook from her satchel and made a note. "The clique did not murder him here. They harvested him. This station is not dead; it is a throat." Quinn crouched. She did not touch the body yet. She watched. The victim's hands were folded across his chest in a posture of prayer, but the fingers had been broken after death—the joints twisted in directions that spoke of manual force, not accident. A small brass compass sat on the floor near his left hand. Its casing carried a patina of verdigris, the face etched with protective sigils. The needle pointed not north, not toward a tunnel exit, but toward a black opening behind the pillar where the tracks vanished. "A Shadow compass," Eva said. "Crafted by a Shade artisan. It finds rifts." Quinn's fingers hovered near the object. She did not lift it. Instead she scanned the floor. The alchemical bottles arranged in a circle around the body were empty. Residue on the caps glinted, but not with the thousand fingerprints of a crowded market. Only one set of prints, smeared by a gloved hand, circled the liquid. The bone token—small, chalk-white—rested in the victim's mouth. Not for entry. For payment. "Evidence says he came here," Quinn said. "But the doors require a token to enter. He had one." "Then he came willingly," Eva said. Quinn stood. She moved to the pillar, to the black opening behind it. The air here was different—colder, thinner, smelling of ozone and copper wire. She shined her torch inside. The tunnel did not end at a wall; it curved, and the walls showed scars of recent scraping, as if something heavy had dragged through. No dust covered the floor of the passage. No cobwebs hung between the rails. The passage had been used, and recently. "He was not killed on this platform," Quinn said. Eva's glasses reflected the torch beam. "You see it now." "I see a corpse positioned for a ritual, not a crime scene. The blood is too dry. The body is too clean at the edges where he touched the pillar—no bruising from impact, just the post-mortem breakages. The bone token in his mouth is not for entry; it is a seal. The clique used it to close the deal." Eva tucked her hair behind her left ear again. "You are talking about a portal." "I am talking about extraction. Your interpretation is supernatural theft. Mine is logistics." Quinn stepped into the passageway. Her boots made no echo in the dark; the stone drank sound here. She counted her steps, military precision, measuring distance. Eighteen paces, and her torch caught something on the wall—a sigil drawn in chalk that matched the compass's face, but larger, more aggressive. The needle pointed directly to this mark. "The compass is not a tool for finding rifts," Quinn said. "It is a key. The needle indicates which rift is open. This one." Eva came closer, her satchel bumping against her side. "The marketplace moves every full moon. The clique must have used this station as a fixed point—an anchor—while the rest of the market relocated. They opened a door here, took the broker, and left the body as proof that the deal is real." Quinn turned. She looked back at the platform, at the circle of bottles, at the broken fingers, at the bone token, at the missing dust in the tunnel. Then she looked at Eva. "You missed the path," Quinn said. "I missed the exit?" "I missed the exit." Quinn traced the floor with her torch. "You said he was harvested. You said they pulled him through. But the passage is narrow, barely wider than a coffin. The body on the platform is too large to have been dragged from this tunnel unless they disassembled him. The breakages are to the fingers, not the bones. The body came out of this passage, not into it." Eva's mouth opened. She adjusted her glasses. "He was delivered," Quinn said. "The passage leads away from the station, not toward it. The rift is not the destination. It is the source. Someone used this station as a delivery point for a body extracted elsewhere—maybe from another station, another rift. The clique is not stealing people; they are trafficking bodies through fixed points. The compass led them to the open rift; the bone token sealed the transaction; the body is evidence that the market moved goods through this tunnel." Quinn pointed to the wall. The sigil was not a ritual. It was a shipping label. Eva's voice was tight. "You think the crime is a delivery." "I think the crime is that you thought it was a murder performed on this platform. The evidence does not lie in the blood. It lies in the absence of blood at the point of entry, the absence of dust in the passage, the absence of a struggle at the tunnel mouth. The victim was dead before he arrived. The clique used the Veil Market's rules—bone token entry, shadow compass navigation—to move goods through the supernatural economy. Your occult interpretation caught the ritual, but you missed the logistics." Quinn pulled a small evidence bag from her coat, though her hand was steady. She slipped the brass compass inside. The sigils caught the light, verdigris gleaming like old blood. "You wanted supernatural," Quinn said. "You got organized crime with access to rifts." Eva tucked her hair behind her ear and turned to the body. "Then the clique is not just suspects. They are the entire supply chain." Quinn nodded once, sharp as her jaw. "Now we know where to look. Not at the ritual. At the tunnel that delivered him. The market moves. But this station is the anchor. And anchors do not move." She turned toward the tunnel, her leather watch ticking, her posture military, her eyes brown and focused on the dark where the needle pointed. Eva followed, satchel swinging, glasses lowered, ready to write a new theory. The dark ahead swallowed the torch beam, but Quinn stepped in anyway.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences30
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1306
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
73.20% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1306
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"mechanical"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count1
2
word"etched"
count1
3
word"scanned"
count1
4
word"echo"
count1
5
word"traced"
count1
6
word"gleaming"
count1
highlights
0"mechanical"
1"pulse"
2"etched"
3"scanned"
4"echo"
5"traced"
6"gleaming"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences78
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences78
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences98
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen90
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1295
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions40
wordCount761
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity2.76
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity5.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Camden1
Detective1
Harlow1
Quinn21
Metropolitan1
Underground1
Kowalski1
City1
Eva12
persons
0"Camden"
1"Harlow"
2"Quinn"
3"Kowalski"
4"Eva"
places(empty)
globalScore0.12
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences50
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
45.56% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.544
wordCount1295
matches
0"not north, not toward a tunnel exit, but toward a black opening behind the pillar"
1"not toward a tunnel exit, but toward a black opening behind the pillar"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences98
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs38
mean34.08
std27.74
cv0.814
sampleLengths
075
127
211
365
47
512
678
74
836
990
1013
1169
1218
136
1476
159
1610
1759
1815
1913
2056
2124
2252
2333
246
254
2670
277
2882
2916
3011
3188
3230
3313
3425
3537
3636
3712
91.77% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences78
matches
0"was cropped"
1"were folded"
2"been broken"
3"been used"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs123
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount9
flaggedSentences12
totalSentences98
ratio0.122
matches
0"Her salt-and-pepper hair was cropped too close for fashion; her sharp jaw worked like a blade beneath skin that had weathered eighteen years of Metropolitan precision."
1"The freckled complexion of her round face looked paler under fluorescent spill that did not exist here; she adjusted her round glasses and tucked a stray curl behind her left ear."
2"A body lay against a pillar, dressed in the tailored grey of a City broker, but the posture was wrong—too still, too arranged."
3"\"The clique did not murder him here. They harvested him. This station is not dead; it is a throat.\""
4"The victim's hands were folded across his chest in a posture of prayer, but the fingers had been broken after death—the joints twisted in directions that spoke of manual force, not accident."
5"The bone token—small, chalk-white—rested in the victim's mouth."
6"The air here was different—colder, thinner, smelling of ozone and copper wire."
7"The tunnel did not end at a wall; it curved, and the walls showed scars of recent scraping, as if something heavy had dragged through."
8"\"I see a corpse positioned for a ritual, not a crime scene. The blood is too dry. The body is too clean at the edges where he touched the pillar—no bruising from impact, just the post-mortem breakages. The bone token in his mouth is not for entry; it is a seal. The clique used it to close the deal.\""
9"Her boots made no echo in the dark; the stone drank sound here."
10"Eighteen paces, and her torch caught something on the wall—a sigil drawn in chalk that matched the compass's face, but larger, more aggressive."
11"\"The passage leads away from the station, not toward it. The rift is not the destination. It is the source. Someone used this station as a delivery point for a body extracted elsewhere—maybe from another station, another rift. The clique is not stealing people; they are trafficking bodies through fixed points. The compass led them to the open rift; the bone token sealed the transaction; the body is evidence that the market moved goods through this tunnel.\""
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount770
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"paler under fluorescent spill"
1"different—colder, thinner, smelling"
adverbCount17
adverbRatio0.02207792207792208
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.006493506493506494
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences98
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences98
mean13.21
std14.28
cv1.08
sampleLengths
016
117
226
316
417
510
611
718
831
916
102
115
1212
133
1413
1523
167
1717
185
1910
204
216
2211
2319
242
257
262
2732
2812
2913
3022
315
328
336
345
355
3612
3715
3813
398
403
412
427
4311
446
452
4611
4712
485
4925
43.88% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.2755102040816326
totalSentences98
uniqueOpeners27
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences63
matches
0"Instead she scanned the floor."
1"Only one set of prints,"
2"Then she looked at Eva."
ratio0.048
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount17
totalSentences63
matches
0"She counted fourteen steps, each"
1"Her salt-and-pepper hair was cropped"
2"She did not need light"
3"His bones did not match"
4"She pulled a notebook from"
5"She did not touch the"
6"Its casing carried a patina"
7"She did not lift it."
8"She moved to the pillar,"
9"She shined her torch inside."
10"Her boots made no echo"
11"She counted her steps, military"
12"She looked back at the"
13"She adjusted her glasses."
14"It was a shipping label."
15"She slipped the brass compass"
16"She turned toward the tunnel,"
ratio0.27
31.43% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount54
totalSentences63
matches
0"The stairs beneath Camden had"
1"She counted fourteen steps, each"
2"Her salt-and-pepper hair was cropped"
3"The leather watch on her"
4"She did not need light"
5"The air smelled of verdigris"
6"Eva Kowalski stood near the"
7"The freckled complexion of her"
8"A worn leather satchel full"
9"Quinn stepped closer."
10"The crime scene spread across"
11"A body lay against a"
12"His bones did not match"
13"Blood had pooled beneath him,"
14"Eva did not answer at"
15"She pulled a notebook from"
16"She did not touch the"
17"The victim's hands were folded"
18"A small brass compass sat"
19"Its casing carried a patina"
ratio0.857
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences63
matches(empty)
ratio0
79.83% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences34
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Her salt-and-pepper hair was cropped too close for fashion; her sharp jaw worked like a blade beneath skin that had weathered eighteen years of Metropolitan pre…"
1"The freckled complexion of her round face looked paler under fluorescent spill that did not exist here; she adjusted her round glasses and tucked a stray curl b…"
2"Eighteen paces, and her torch caught something on the wall—a sigil drawn in chalk that matched the compass's face, but larger, more aggressive."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences30
tagDensity0.3
leniency0.6
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
81.7889%