Run: 2026-09-01-01M1EPGB20JB6PT4EG7A54VVD8

Run Details

Duration:
2m 35s
Cost:
$0.041486
Provider:
xAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The three deadbolts slid back under Rory's fingers. She pulled the door open. Lucien filled the landing, rain beading on the shoulders of his charcoal suit. Platinum hair stayed in place. One amber eye and one black eye locked on her. "Rory." "Lucien." She kept her body in the gap. "Eva's at the British Library. She won't be back for hours." He rested both hands on the ivory handle of his cane. "I didn't come for Eva." Ptolemy streaked past her ankles and hissed. Rory did not step aside. The curry smell from the restaurant below mixed with wet wool and whatever cologne he wore. "Three months." She let the number sit. "You vanish after that night and now you knock like we're still... whatever we were." Lucien moved forward. The cramped hallway left her no choice. She backed up. He crossed the threshold and shut the door himself. The locks stayed undone. Books and unrolled scrolls covered the sofa, the kitchen counter, the floor. Research notes papered one wall. He took it in without comment, then looked at her again. "We both know what we were." Rory went to the kettle because her hands needed a job. She filled it, set it on the hob. The scar on her left wrist showed when her sleeve rode up. "You left. That's what I know. I woke up in your bed and the sheets were cold. No note. No number. Nothing." He leaned the cane against the overflowing bookshelf and unbuttoned his jacket. "People were looking for me. The kind who don't knock. I couldn't bring that to your door." "You don't get to decide what comes to my door." She pulled two mugs from the draining board anyway. "You don't get to decide anything after you put your mouth on me and then disappeared." The kettle began its low rumble. Lucien picked up a scroll from the counter, scanned the symbols, set it down. "Eva's work on Avaros. She's digging in the wrong places." "She's helping me understand what I slept with." Rory's blue eyes stayed on him. "After you, I needed the facts." He took the mug she shoved toward him. Their fingers touched. Neither pulled back at once. "It was never just that." His voice dropped. "I left because the last person who stayed close to me ended up in pieces. I won't have that for you." Rory laughed once, no humour in it. She kept her own mug. "Protecting me by ghosting. Original. And now you're here because you need something. Information. Always information with you." "There's a contract. A relic that could crack a door to Avaros. Eva's notes might have the location." He set the mug down without drinking. "That's not why I came first." She turned to the window. Brick Lane neon painted the glass. People still moved on the pavement below despite the hour. "Don't." She watched his reflection come up behind her. "Don't start with the 'I couldn't stay away' line if you plan to walk out again." Lucien stopped close enough that the heat of him reached her back. "I thought of you every day. The way you talk when you're thinking three steps ahead. The scar when you grabbed my shirt that night." Rory faced him. Five-eleven to her five-six. She had to look up. "You remember the scar." "I remember the story. Childhood. The fence. You told me in the dark after." His hand lifted, hovered near her wrist, dropped. "I remember you didn't run when I told you what I am." "I should have." She stayed where she was. "Half-demon. Father from Avaros. Eva filled in the rest. The rest I worked out myself because you weren't around to ask." Ptolemy jumped onto the windowsill and stared at them both. Lucien's gaze flicked to the cat and back. "Eva knowing that much puts her in it too." "She's my friend. She tells me the truth. She doesn't vanish." The space between sofa and bookshelf forced them closer. Rory set her mug on the sill. Steam curled. "What do you actually want, Lucien? The notes? Or is this the part where you say the night meant something and then you leave again?" He took her left hand. His thumb traced the crescent. The contact ran up her arm. "It meant something. Too much. My kind don't get mornings. We don't get the girl from Cardiff who delivers noodles and still looks at a demon like he's just a man." "You don't get to call me the girl from Cardiff." She did not pull her hand free. "You don't get to make it sound like I was some holiday." "It wasn't a holiday." His other hand came up, stopped short of her jaw. "I wanted to stay. I wanted the kettle in the morning and your voice telling me I was an idiot. I wanted it enough that I ran before my enemies found the address." Rory's pulse showed in her throat. She should have stepped back. The three months sat between them like another piece of furniture. "You ran. That's the part I keep. Not the wanting." Lucien let go of her wrist. He picked up a notebook from the nearest pile, flipped pages, put it down. "The relic. If her research has a name, a location, anything, I need it. Not because of the contract. Because if that door opens, the people looking for me become the people looking for anyone who ever stood next to me." "So now it's my problem because I stood next to you once." Rory crossed her arms. The kettle clicked off, ignored. "You made it my problem when you didn't stay to explain." He retrieved the cane. The ivory looked yellow in the flat's cheap light. "I have a number now. I can give it to you." "You had a number then." "I know." He took a cream card from his inner pocket and laid it on a stack of papers. "If you find something in the notes. Or if you want to finish the conversation we started that night." Rory stared at the card. She did not touch it. "Finish. That's rich. You started it. You ended it. Now you want a sequel." Lucien moved toward the door, then stopped with his back to her. "I never stopped. That's the part I didn't say." She picked up Ptolemy. The cat's claws pricked her jumper. "Say it now or don't. But don't stand there like the rain on your suit is an excuse." He turned. The heterochromatic eyes found hers again. "I wanted you. I still do. And I hate that I have to stand in Eva's flat surrounded by her warnings about me and admit it." Rory set the cat down. Ptolemy immediately wound between Lucien's legs and then away. "Eva warned me. I didn't listen. That's on me." She gestured at the room, the scrolls, the taped notes. "This is on you. You brought Avaros into a delivery girl's life and then decided I couldn't handle the morning after." "You handled it. That's the problem." He took one step closer again. "You handled the chase, the blood, me. You looked at the black eye and the amber one and you didn't flinch. Most people flinch." "I flinched later. When the bed was empty." The words hung. Neither reached for the card or the door. Lucien's hand found the edge of the bookshelf to steady himself. Papers shifted. "There's more coming. The relic isn't the only thing. If Eva's research goes deeper, they'll come here. Three deadbolts won't matter." "Then tell me what they are. Don't decide I can't know." Rory's voice stayed level. "You want the notes, you tell me the rest. No more vanishing acts. No more 'for your own good'." He looked at the scar again, then at her face. "The rest is that my father still has interests on this side. The relic would let him walk through. The people hunting me work for him or against him. Either way, they use whoever I touch." "You touched me." She let that sit. "You don't get to un-touch it by leaving." Lucien's jaw tightened. He set the cane down once more. "I know. That's why I'm here. Not the contract. Not Eva. You." Rory picked up the nearest scroll, the one with the Avaros symbols, and held it out. "Then look. Tell me what this means. Stay long enough to explain it. And if you walk out that door again without a number I can actually use, don't come back." He took the scroll. Their fingers brushed a second time. This time he didn't let go immediately. The cat watched from the windowsill. The curry smell rose through the floor. Rain tapped the glass. Lucien read the first line, then the second. His mouth opened. "This isn't just location. This is a name. The name of the one who last held the relic." Rory waited. He looked up from the parchment. "It's a name I know."
created_at"2026-09-01T14:38:23.873Z" 9/1/2026, 2:38:23 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences62
tagDensity0.274
leniency0.548
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1508
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
86.74% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1508
totalAiIsms4
found
0
word"scanned"
count1
1
word"flicked"
count1
2
word"traced"
count1
3
word"pulse"
count1
highlights
0"scanned"
1"flicked"
2"traced"
3"pulse"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences95
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences95
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences140
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen41
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1508
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
45.37% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions31
wordCount669
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity2.09
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory14
Lucien11
Lane1
Ptolemy4
Avaros1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Lucien"
2"Ptolemy"
places
0"Lane"
globalScore0.454
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences57
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1508
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences140
matches
0"let that sit"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs76
mean19.84
std10.54
cv0.531
sampleLengths
013
128
21
319
416
528
622
726
828
96
1031
1122
1229
1335
1420
1510
1620
1716
1829
1930
2031
2121
2225
2337
2412
254
2634
2729
2810
2917
3011
3118
3225
3316
3431
3529
3647
3722
3810
3920
4041
4132
4213
4311
445
4538
4610
4714
4812
499
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences95
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs127
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences140
ratio0
matches(empty)
99.79% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount671
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount27
adverbRatio0.040238450074515646
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.0029806259314456036
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences140
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences140
mean10.77
std7.39
cv0.686
sampleLengths
08
15
213
35
410
51
68
711
811
95
107
115
1216
137
1415
153
167
173
189
194
2012
215
2211
236
2411
258
2612
2722
2812
2917
3019
3116
326
3314
3410
3514
366
378
383
395
408
4121
427
435
4418
4525
466
475
486
4910
44.29% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.2714285714285714
totalSentences140
uniqueOpeners38
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences91
matches(empty)
ratio0
48.57% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount39
totalSentences91
matches
0"She pulled the door open."
1"She kept her body in"
2"He rested both hands on"
3"She let the number sit"
4"She backed up."
5"He crossed the threshold and"
6"He took it in without"
7"She filled it, set it"
8"He leaned the cane against"
9"She pulled two mugs from"
10"He took the mug she"
11"Their fingers touched."
12"His voice dropped"
13"She kept her own mug."
14"He set the mug down"
15"She turned to the window."
16"She watched his reflection come"
17"She had to look up."
18"His hand lifted, hovered near"
19"She stayed where she was"
ratio0.429
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount88
totalSentences91
matches
0"The three deadbolts slid back"
1"She pulled the door open."
2"Lucien filled the landing, rain"
3"Platinum hair stayed in place."
4"She kept her body in"
5"He rested both hands on"
6"Ptolemy streaked past her ankles"
7"Rory did not step aside."
8"The curry smell from the"
9"She let the number sit"
10"Lucien moved forward."
11"The cramped hallway left her"
12"She backed up."
13"He crossed the threshold and"
14"The locks stayed undone."
15"Books and unrolled scrolls covered"
16"He took it in without"
17"Rory went to the kettle"
18"She filled it, set it"
19"The scar on her left"
ratio0.967
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences91
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences19
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
84.1584%