Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
67
glossingSentenceCount
2
matches
0
"looked like a student who had wandered in"
1
"seemed more pronounced in the pale light, that her green eyes were scanning not the body but the walls—specifically, a hairline crack in the old ceramic tiles behind the body, where the darkness seemed to shimmer with a faint, wrong color"
"It was dead, always dead—she hadn’t wound it in three years, not since DS Morris, not since the case that had swallowed her whole and spat back only questions."
1
"She moved with military precision, shoulders squared, eyes—brown, unblinking—scanning the scene before her."
2
"The victim was male, late thirties, dressed in an expensive suit that was now ruined—dark, soaked, the wool blackened not by mud but by something thinner, something that had pooled in irregular lines across the tiles rather than soaking into them."
3
"The throat was slit with surgical exactness, a single clean incision that spoke of a blade held by a steady hand—military precision, she thought, and the word made her throat tighten with memory."
4
"His hands—folded over his chest in a gesture that looked almost peaceful—were unbloodied, which was impossible if he had clawed at a blade, if he had tried to hold the wound shut in those final seconds."
5
"Eva stepped closer, and Quinn noticed the satchel’s worn strap had bitten into Eva’s shoulder, that her freckles seemed more pronounced in the pale light, that her green eyes were scanning not the body but the walls—specifically, a hairline crack in the old ceramic tiles behind the body, where the darkness seemed to shimmer with a faint, wrong color."
6
"She reached into her pocket—not for a weapon, but for the object she had found earlier, near the stairwell, half-buried in the dust."
7
"The sigils were protective, not offensive—designed to shield a bearer from the forces on the other side of a portal."
8
"The needle was not spinning randomly; it was fixed, almost furious, aimed at the rift."
9
"She looked at the way the victim’s suit was arranged—not torn by claws, not burned by alchemical fire, but stained with a liquid too thin for human blood."
10
"“The bone token is in his pocket,” Quinn said, confirming her deduction without looking inside—she could see the outline, the shape pressed against the wool."
11
"The verdigris was cool against her palm, and she felt the weight of it—not just metal, but intent, a tool crafted to find what was hidden."
12
"Eva’s nervous habit returned—tucking her hair behind her left ear, a quick, involuntary motion."
13
"She did not touch the blood—not out of revulsion, but because she had already seen enough."
14
"Behind her, Eva muttered something about protective sigils and Shade artisans, about the market’s schedule and the token required, and Quinn only half-listened, because she was already measuring the distance to the rift, already calculating the risk, already seeing the pattern beneath the chaos—the same pattern that had taken DS Morris, the same pattern that now led her, unafraid, into the dark."
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
52
technicalSentenceCount
10
matches
0
"The platform smelled of rust and old electricity, the kind of damp, mineral scent that clung to abandoned Tube stations like a second skin."
1
"It was dead, always dead—she hadn’t wound it in three years, not since DS Morris, not since the case that had swallowed her whole and spat back only questions."
2
"It was beneath Camden, in a disused station that had been closed since the seventies, a hollow cathedral of rusted rails and blackened posters."
3
"The victim was male, late thirties, dressed in an expensive suit that was now ruined—dark, soaked, the wool blackened not by mud but by something thinner, somet…"
4
"Quinn crouched, her knees aching, her fingers hovering over the collarbone."
5
"The throat was slit with surgical exactness, a single clean incision that spoke of a blade held by a steady hand—military precision, she thought, and the word m…"
6
"The wound was deep enough to have sprayed, to have drowned the surrounding dust, yet the concrete was only lightly dampened, the droplets neat and small, as if …"
7
"His hands—folded over his chest in a gesture that looked almost peaceful—were unbloodied, which was impossible if he had clawed at a blade, if he had tried to h…"
8
"Her sharp jaw tightened as she examined the scene with the same discipline she had applied for eighteen years of decorated service, the same discipline that had…"
9
"Behind her, Eva muttered something about protective sigils and Shade artisans, about the market’s schedule and the token required, and Quinn only half-listened,…"