Run: 2026-09-01-01M1EPHKWMNG4ZHWA2G5GJ5M0W

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Duration:
42.9s
Cost:
$0.007333
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora Carter pushed through the oak standing stones at the edge of Richmond Park and felt the air change at once. The black bark of the ancient boundary was slick with moss that did not belong to December. Behind her, the ordinary world lingered—streetlamps cutting through fog, the distant hum of London traffic, the flat above Silas’ bar a few miles away where she slept with her bright blue eyes exhausted from delivering Yu-Fei Cheung’s meals at Golden Empress. Inside, the grove swallowed sound. The clearing was circular, ringed by oaks older than the barrister who had raised her in Cardiff, older than the Welsh teacher mother whose name she wore like a secret. Wildflowers blazed at her ankles: violets of impossible purple, gold-stars that opened like wounds refusing to close. Their scent was thick, wrong, sweet in a way that made Aurora’s eyes water. She adjusted the silver chain at her throat. The Heartstone Pendant hung there, its deep crimson face dull in the dark, roughly the size of a thumbnail, a gift from an unknown benefactor she still could not name. She had followed the warmth for three blocks, then through the park, then here. Eva had warned her. “Don’t cross the stones at night,” she had said. Aurora had left the delivery job behind, her black hair still pinned back from a twelve-hour shift, her left wrist aching with the crescent scar she had carried since childhood, a small map of old pain. Time moved differently inside Isolde’s grove. She checked her phone. Fourteen minutes had passed since she stepped through the boundary. Her watch read half past eleven. She had left Silas’ bar at eight-thirty. The discrepancy gnawed at her ribs, a cold hole she could not fill with logic. She walked deeper. The grass under her boots was too soft, like fur. Footsteps followed. Not hers. Aurora stopped. The sound was soft, rhythmic, deliberate—someone walking on packed earth behind her, though she had heard no movement and seen nothing at the edge of her vision except trees that did not move correctly. She turned slowly. Nothing. Just black trunks against an impossible sky that held no stars. The wildflowers trembled at her feet, blooming faster than she could watch, closing the gaps between stems. “Nothing out here,” she told the dark. Her voice came back thin, swallowed by the grove’s strange acoustics. She tightened her fingers around her left wrist, feeling the crescent scar burn with old memory. She was cool-headed, intelligent, quick with out-of-the-box thinking. She had fled an abusive ex named Evan to London at Eva’s behest. She worked part-time delivery for Yu-Fei Cheung’s restaurant. She was not a girl who believed in portals or artifacts given by Dymas. But the pendant pulsed. She pulled it from her shirt. The Heartstone’s crimson face glowed faintly, a slow heartbeat of warmth that matched a pressure in her teeth, a cold warning of a Hel portal nearby. She held it out like a lantern. The groan of bending wood returned, closer now, a chorus of ancient trunks shifting under weight they had not felt in centuries. Aurora’s breath hitched. She moved toward the center of the clearing, her shoulders down, her jaw tight. “You came for answers,” said a voice. It came from everywhere and nowhere. It might have been the grove speaking, or something that wore the grove like a skin. Aurora froze. She turned. A figure stood at the tree line, black clothing blending with shadows, but not invisible—too present, too sharp against the wildflowers. It had no face, or rather, its face was a smooth absence where features should have been, a hollow that drank the light. Aurora stepped back. Her heart hammered in her throat. “I came for the portal,” she said. Her voice was steady, a lie she told herself. “That’s all.” The figure tilted its head. The sound of creaking wood grew louder, a rhythmic cracking that matched Aurora’s pulse, a dry sound of bones adjusting inside a body too large for its skin. “The time here eats the minutes,” Aurora said. She did not ask; she stated it, because she needed to hear the words in her own mouth to believe them. “How long have I been here?” “Long enough for the flowers to remember your name.” Aurora’s bright blue eyes caught the inner glow of the Heartstone. It blazed crimson, painting the figure’s smooth face in dark red light. She raised her arm. “I don’t belong here,” she told it. “I’m just a delivery person from Cardiff. I live above Silas’ bar. I don’t—” “You are the barrister’s daughter,” the figure interrupted. “The girl who left Evan. The girl who runs from things that hurt.” Aurora’s jaw tightened. The accusation stung worse than cold. She walked backward, not taking her eyes from the absence of a face. The wildflowers blocked her path, blooming in her way, closing the distance to the standing stones with a speed that made her stomach turn. “The pendant,” Aurora said. “You know it.” “It was given to you by an unknown benefactor.” “Dymas,” she said. The figure nodded, or perhaps the trees nodded behind it. Aurora’s fingers found the silver chain. She pulled it tight, her thumb brushing the crescent scar on her wrist. The scar throbbed with a memory of blood and playground concrete, of a childhood accident that marked her long before the grove knew her name. She was here because the pendant demanded it, because some out-of-the-box instinct inside her had followed the warmth instead of fear. “I’m not yours,” she said. The figure moved. It was closer than she thought. It did not walk; it seemed to unfold from the dark, its black clothes rippling like smoke, its empty face tilting toward the crimson light. Aurora stepped back into a cluster of wildflowers. Their petals tore against her palms. She gasped, a sound lost in the grove’s hollow acoustics. “You carry death,” the figure said. “You carry the portal’s door.” Aurora held the Heartstone up. The crimson gem glowed hard, a defense she did not understand but recognized as real. It pulsed with warmth against her palm, near a Hel portal that waited like an open mouth. “I carry a gift,” Aurora corrected. She spoke hard, her voice loud enough to break the grove’s spell. “Not a door. Not your key.” The figure stopped. The rustling in the trees ceased. Aurora turned and ran. The wildflowers parted, or she tore through them, her black hair whipping behind her, her boots crushing stems that smelled too sweet. The standing stones loomed, black and ancient, their moss-soft bark waiting for her return. She crossed the boundary. The air changed. Cold night of Richmond Park hit her lungs. The sound of distant traffic returned, sharp and ordinary. She stumbled into the grass, her hands shaking, the pendant still glowing faintly in her fist, its crimson face pulsing in rhythm with her heart. She looked back. No figure. No sound. Only the stones, empty and ordinary, standing like teeth in the dark. But her watch read three in the morning. Her phone was dead. Aurora clutched the Heartstone to her chest. Her bright blue eyes wide in the dark, she walked back toward Silas’ bar, her left wrist burning with her childhood scar, her hair plastered to her neck, her lungs burning with the grove’s wrong air. She had her answer. She was not alone. And she had not yet escaped. The grove watched from the stones, and the flowers bloomed behind her, closing slowly over the ground she had left.
created_at"2026-09-01T14:39:05.121Z" 9/1/2026, 2:39:05 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"the dark she walked back [back]"
dialogueSentences21
tagDensity0.667
leniency1
rawRatio0.071
effectiveRatio0.071
92.14% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1272
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count2
highlights
0"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
41.04% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1272
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"warmth"
count4
1
word"footsteps"
count1
2
word"rhythmic"
count2
3
word"trembled"
count1
4
word"pulsed"
count2
5
word"weight"
count1
6
word"pulse"
count1
7
word"stomach"
count1
8
word"throbbed"
count1
9
word"loomed"
count1
highlights
0"warmth"
1"footsteps"
2"rhythmic"
3"trembled"
4"pulsed"
5"weight"
6"pulse"
7"stomach"
8"throbbed"
9"loomed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences109
matches
0"d with warmth"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences109
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences118
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen43
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1269
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions43
wordCount1105
uniqueNames17
maxNameDensity1.63
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Richmond2
Park2
December1
London2
Cardiff1
Welsh1
Aurora18
Heartstone5
Pendant1
Isolde1
Evan1
Eva2
Yu-Fei1
Cheung1
Dymas1
Hel2
persons
0"Carter"
1"Aurora"
2"Heartstone"
3"Pendant"
4"Evan"
5"Eva"
6"Cheung"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"December"
3"London"
4"Cardiff"
5"Isolde"
6"Hel"
globalScore0.686
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences67
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1269
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences118
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs54
mean23.5
std21.23
cv0.904
sampleLengths
084
161
2101
36
442
513
62
72
839
929
107
1111
1259
134
1439
1522
1617
177
1822
194
2044
219
2218
2333
2435
259
2627
2721
2821
299
3037
317
329
333
3410
3565
365
3734
3824
3911
4037
4124
429
434
4440
453
4642
473
4816
498
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences109
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs190
matches(empty)
21.79% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences118
ratio0.042
matches
0"Behind her, the ordinary world lingered—streetlamps cutting through fog, the distant hum of London traffic, the flat above Silas’ bar a few miles away where she slept with her bright blue eyes exhausted from delivering Yu-Fei Cheung’s meals at Golden Empress."
1"The sound was soft, rhythmic, deliberate—someone walking on packed earth behind her, though she had heard no movement and seen nothing at the edge of her vision except trees that did not move correctly."
2"A figure stood at the tree line, black clothing blending with shadows, but not invisible—too present, too sharp against the wildflowers."
3"She did not ask; she stated it, because she needed to hear the words in her own mouth to believe them."
4"It did not walk; it seemed to unfold from the dark, its black clothes rippling like smoke, its empty face tilting toward the crimson light."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount484
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount17
adverbRatio0.03512396694214876
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.004132231404958678
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences118
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences118
mean10.75
std8.51
cv0.791
sampleLengths
021
117
241
35
430
517
614
78
830
914
104
119
1236
136
144
1510
166
177
1815
193
2010
212
222
232
2434
253
261
2711
2817
297
3011
3116
328
3313
348
3514
364
376
3826
397
4022
413
4214
437
446
4516
462
472
4821
4923
36.44% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats16
diversityRatio0.2457627118644068
totalSentences118
uniqueOpeners29
70.18% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences95
matches
0"Just black trunks against an"
1"Only the stones, empty and"
ratio0.021
34.74% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount44
totalSentences95
matches
0"Their scent was thick, wrong,"
1"She adjusted the silver chain"
2"She had followed the warmth"
3"she had said"
4"She checked her phone."
5"Her watch read half past"
6"She had left"
7"She walked deeper."
8"She turned slowly."
9"she told the dark"
10"Her voice came back thin,"
11"She tightened her fingers around"
12"She was cool-headed, intelligent, quick"
13"She had fled an abusive"
14"She worked part-time delivery for"
15"She was not a girl"
16"She pulled it from her"
17"She held it out like"
18"She moved toward the center"
19"It came from everywhere and"
ratio0.463
12.63% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount85
totalSentences95
matches
0"Aurora Carter pushed through the"
1"The black bark of the"
2"The clearing was circular, ringed"
3"Wildflowers blazed at her ankles:"
4"Their scent was thick, wrong,"
5"She adjusted the silver chain"
6"The Heartstone Pendant hung there,"
7"She had followed the warmth"
8"Eva had warned her."
9"she had said"
10"Aurora had left the delivery"
11"Time moved differently inside Isolde’s"
12"She checked her phone."
13"Her watch read half past"
14"She had left"
15"The discrepancy gnawed at her"
16"She walked deeper."
17"The grass under her boots"
18"The sound was soft, rhythmic,"
19"She turned slowly."
ratio0.895
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences95
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences45
technicalSentenceCount12
matches
0"The clearing was circular, ringed by oaks older than the barrister who had raised her in Cardiff, older than the Welsh teacher mother whose name she wore like a…"
1"Wildflowers blazed at her ankles: violets of impossible purple, gold-stars that opened like wounds refusing to close."
2"Their scent was thick, wrong, sweet in a way that made Aurora’s eyes water."
3"The sound was soft, rhythmic, deliberate—someone walking on packed earth behind her, though she had heard no movement and seen nothing at the edge of her vision…"
4"Just black trunks against an impossible sky that held no stars."
5"The wildflowers trembled at her feet, blooming faster than she could watch, closing the gaps between stems."
6"The Heartstone’s crimson face glowed faintly, a slow heartbeat of warmth that matched a pressure in her teeth, a cold warning of a Hel portal nearby."
7"The sound of creaking wood grew louder, a rhythmic cracking that matched Aurora’s pulse, a dry sound of bones adjusting inside a body too large for its skin."
8"The wildflowers blocked her path, blooming in her way, closing the distance to the standing stones with a speed that made her stomach turn."
9"The scar throbbed with a memory of blood and playground concrete, of a childhood accident that marked her long before the grove knew her name."
10"The wildflowers parted, or she tore through them, her black hair whipping behind her, her boots crushing stems that smelled too sweet."
11"She stumbled into the grass, her hands shaking, the pendant still glowing faintly in her fist, its crimson face pulsing in rhythm with her heart."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
54.76% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"the figure interrupted (interrupt)"
1"Aurora corrected (correct)"
dialogueSentences21
tagDensity0.476
leniency0.952
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.19
77.1238%