Run: 2026-09-02-01M1GQKB18Y7TAXXV1EZJDM19E

Run Details

Duration:
6m 19s
Cost:
$0.049885
Provider:
Z.AI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The order came through at 23:14. Spring rolls, a happy family, a house special, delivered to a pin in the middle of Richmond Park. Prepaid, twenty-pound tip, name of I. GROVE. The note said: 'Wait at the standing oaks past the ponds. I will come to you.' Rory had taken stranger orders. A penthouse with a shark tank. A lock-up in Peckham where a man paid in coins, counted out one at a time. So she chained her bike to the railings at Petersham Gate, hoisted the insulated bag onto her shoulder, and set her phone torch swinging ahead of her down the path. The pedestrian gate screeched when she pushed through it, and the sound carried further than it had any right to. Then there was nothing. No drone off the A3. No plane sliding down toward Heathrow, though the flight path ran straight across the ponds and the sky stood cloudless to prove it. London hummed at night — she had lived above Silas' bar long enough to know the hum came up through the floorboards and into your sleep if you let it. The hum stopped at the gate. The silence past the railings had a pressure to it, the sort you felt in your eardrums on a long descent. Frost sugared every blade of grass along the path. Her boots went across it, tak, tak, tak, and half a beat behind them, softer, on grass instead of frost, a second set of footsteps kept pace. She stopped. The second set stopped one stride later. She turned the torch on the path behind her. Empty bracken, empty grass, the railings a pale line in the dark. Nothing to hide behind, nothing to echo off. Frost didn't echo. The bag strap, she told herself. The strap slapping her back as she walked. She shrugged the bag off her shoulder and carried it in both arms, awkward, the foil boxes hot through the canvas. The footsteps carried on. Under her coat and jumper, the Heartstone had gone warm on the bus over — she'd noticed it at the traffic lights by Eel Pie Island and blamed the heated seats. At the gate it had warmed further. Now it lay on her sternum like a coin lifted off a stove. Not burning. Working out how. Past the first rise the torch found eyes at the treeline. Six pairs, low and green, floating in the black. Deer. The park crawled with them; she'd braked for a stag in October and sworn at him with affection. Deer bolted from people. It was the one thing they did well. These stood in a line, all facing her, and not one of them chewed. A deer's whole life was chewing. She stood there until the cold climbed inside her sleeves. The eyes never blinked, never swung away. When she stepped forward, they followed her, all together, like beads sliding along one string. The ponds lay black and still. The moon sat whole on the water and never wavered, though the reeds along the bank stirred and bowed against a wind she could not feel on her face. Her phone said 23:52. The pin sat a few hundred metres on, in a stand of trees past the water. She walked. When she checked the phone again, it said 02:16, and the moon had crossed the sky to agree with it. "Okay," she told the dark, and her voice came out smaller than she'd sent it. "Okay." She rang Eva. One ring, then voicemail — strange; Eva slept with the phone under her pillow. "Ev. It's me. Work thing, long story. I'm in Richmond Park, of all places, and it's — just ring me back, yeah? Ring me back." She lifted the phone from her ear to end the call, and the speaker was still live, and through it, small and tinny, she heard frost crackle. Footsteps. Her own breathing, half a second late. She turned. The torch beam crossed bare path, bare reeds, black water. The phone kept playing the footsteps from somewhere behind her, patient, unhurried, until she killed the call with her thumb. The log said the call had lasted fifty-one minutes and forty-four seconds. The battery had been over half when she'd dialled. Four per cent now. The trees came up out of the dark all at once. Nine oaks in a ring, too tall and too straight, trunks grey as picked bone. The park's own oaks grew fat and crooked, pollarded and storm-broken. These stood like columns. Like they'd been stood there. Frost ended in a clean line at the ring's edge — one step, and the grass outside wore white; the next, green and dark and growing. The air inside came warm as a greenhouse. Wildflowers stood open in the dark, celandine and violet and pale things she had no names for, every bloom lifted as if the sun sat somewhere beneath the ground. The smell was honey and cut grass, and under that, faint, something sweet that had turned. Her breath stopped fogging the moment she crossed the line. "Hello?" The flowers soaked her voice up. No echo, no birds startled off anything. "Golden Empress delivery. I've got an order for — Grove? Groves?" The torch beam thinned as it went into the ring, as if the dark there drank it a metre out from the lens. She held the bag out in front of her, the smell of soy and sesame climbing off it into all that honey, absurd, obscene. "Prepaid," she tried. "Twenty quid tip, so somebody's expecting food." "Leave it between the stones." The voice came from nowhere she could point to. Not loud. Pleasant, even — a woman's voice, unhurried, the kind that took your order at a counter. Rory turned a full circle with the torch, and the beam found flowers, flowers, oak bark, flowers. "Where —" "Between the stones, Rory." Her thumb found the crescent scar on her left wrist and pressed. The ticket had said I. GROVE. The app showed the restaurant and her first name, Aurora, and nobody — nobody — read Aurora off a delivery ticket and came back with Rory. The Heartstone flared. She yanked the chain out from under her collar with a hiss — the silver had gone hot, and the gem in it sat deep crimson in her palm, its inner light beating. Once. Twice. Quick, out of time with her own pulse, quicker, like something on the far side of the ring had started running. She looked down. The frost beyond the flowers was printed with bare feet. Narrow, human-length, pressed deep, a full circuit of the ring's inside — and the nearest prints had not been there when she crossed the line. Footsteps came between two of the oaks. Unhurried. No frost to crackle under them — they fell soft on the flowers, and the flowers did not bend. Rory backed toward the gap she'd come through, bag held out like a shield, the pendant beating heat into her fist. The footsteps matched her, stride for stride.
created_at"2026-09-02T09:35:59.026Z" 9/2/2026, 9:35:59 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences10
tagDensity0.6
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1171
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
44.49% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1171
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"silence"
count1
1
word"footsteps"
count6
2
word"echo"
count3
3
word"affection"
count1
4
word"wavered"
count1
5
word"pulse"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"footsteps"
2"echo"
3"affection"
4"wavered"
5"pulse"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences99
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences99
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences106
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1183
ratio0
matches(empty)
41.67% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions2
matches
0"The bag strap, she told herself."
1"When she checked the phone again, it said 02:16, and the moon had crossed the sky to agree with it."
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions23
wordCount1095
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity0.37
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Rory4
Peckham1
Petersham1
Gate1
Heathrow1
Heartstone2
Eel1
Pie1
Island1
October1
Eva2
Aurora2
Frost3
persons
0"Rory"
1"Heartstone"
2"Eva"
3"Frost"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Peckham"
3"Petersham"
4"Heathrow"
5"Eel"
6"Pie"
7"Island"
8"October"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences69
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1183
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences106
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs37
mean31.97
std20.25
cv0.633
sampleLengths
047
157
224
385
436
59
632
735
84
956
1051
1120
1232
1335
1442
1516
1617
1725
1835
1944
2013
2146
2279
2310
2425
2547
2610
275
2844
292
304
3144
3259
3338
3427
3521
367
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences99
matches
0"been stood"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs169
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount10
semicolonCount3
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences106
ratio0.094
matches
0"London hummed at night — she had lived above Silas' bar long enough to know the hum came up through the floorboards and into your sleep if you let it."
1"Under her coat and jumper, the Heartstone had gone warm on the bus over — she'd noticed it at the traffic lights by Eel Pie Island and blamed the heated seats."
2"The park crawled with them; she'd braked for a stag in October and sworn at him with affection."
3"One ring, then voicemail — strange; Eva slept with the phone under her pillow."
4"Frost ended in a clean line at the ring's edge — one step, and the grass outside wore white; the next, green and dark and growing."
5"Pleasant, even — a woman's voice, unhurried, the kind that took your order at a counter."
6"The app showed the restaurant and her first name, Aurora, and nobody — nobody — read Aurora off a delivery ticket and came back with Rory."
7"She yanked the chain out from under her collar with a hiss — the silver had gone hot, and the gem in it sat deep crimson in her palm, its inner light beating."
8"Narrow, human-length, pressed deep, a full circuit of the ring's inside — and the nearest prints had not been there when she crossed the line."
9"No frost to crackle under them — they fell soft on the flowers, and the flowers did not bend."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount266
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount3
adverbRatio0.011278195488721804
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0037593984962406013
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences106
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences106
mean11.16
std8.51
cv0.763
sampleLengths
06
118
26
31
411
55
65
76
816
930
1020
114
125
1323
1430
156
1621
179
1827
192
207
219
2212
238
243
256
268
2721
284
2931
307
3113
322
333
3411
359
361
3718
384
398
4014
416
4210
437
4415
456
4629
474
4816
492
64.47% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.44339622641509435
totalSentences106
uniqueOpeners47
38.76% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences86
matches
0"Then there was nothing."
ratio0.012
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount16
totalSentences86
matches
0"I will come to"
1"Her boots went across it,"
2"She turned the torch on"
3"She shrugged the bag off"
4"It was the one thing"
5"She stood there until the"
6"Her phone said 23:52."
7"she told the dark, and"
8"She rang Eva."
9"She lifted the phone from"
10"Her own breathing, half a"
11"Her breath stopped fogging the"
12"She held the bag out"
13"Her thumb found the crescent"
14"She yanked the chain out"
15"She looked down."
ratio0.186
99.53% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount62
totalSentences86
matches
0"The order came through at"
1"The note said:"
2"I will come to"
3"Rory had taken stranger orders."
4"A penthouse with a shark"
5"A lock-up in Peckham where"
6"The pedestrian gate screeched when"
7"London hummed at night —"
8"The hum stopped at the"
9"The silence past the railings"
10"Frost sugared every blade of"
11"Her boots went across it,"
12"The second set stopped one"
13"She turned the torch on"
14"Nothing to hide behind, nothing"
15"Frost didn't echo."
16"The bag strap, she told"
17"The strap slapping her back"
18"She shrugged the bag off"
19"The footsteps carried on."
ratio0.721
58.14% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences86
matches
0"Now it lay on her"
ratio0.012
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences43
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Wildflowers stood open in the dark, celandine and violet and pale things she had no names for, every bloom lifted as if the sun sat somewhere beneath the ground…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences10
tagDensity0.2
leniency0.4
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
88.2353%