| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 17 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 42 | | tagDensity | 0.405 | | leniency | 0.81 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 89.40% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1415 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "utterly" | | 1 | "slightly" | | 2 | "quickly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 64.66% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1415 | | totalAiIsms | 10 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "whisper" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "trembled" | | 3 | "shattered" | | 4 | "weight" | | 5 | "resolved" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 71 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 71 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 96 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 45 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1435 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 9 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 73.39% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 41 | | wordCount | 979 | | uniqueNames | 14 | | maxNameDensity | 1.53 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Nyx" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Pembroke | 1 | | Lodge | 1 | | Nyx | 12 | | Silent | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Veil | 1 | | Hel | 1 | | Rory | 15 | | Welsh | 1 | | Script | 1 | | Plough | 1 | | Seer | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Nyx" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Welsh" | | 4 | "Script" | | 5 | "Seer" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Pembroke" |
| | globalScore | 0.734 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 54 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1435 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 47 | | mean | 30.53 | | std | 21.59 | | cv | 0.707 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 74 | | 1 | 13 | | 2 | 9 | | 3 | 39 | | 4 | 38 | | 5 | 57 | | 6 | 38 | | 7 | 23 | | 8 | 4 | | 9 | 44 | | 10 | 11 | | 11 | 71 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 81 | | 14 | 15 | | 15 | 10 | | 16 | 55 | | 17 | 30 | | 18 | 2 | | 19 | 29 | | 20 | 42 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 22 | | 23 | 75 | | 24 | 34 | | 25 | 32 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 46 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 42 | | 30 | 1 | | 31 | 44 | | 32 | 22 | | 33 | 32 | | 34 | 24 | | 35 | 26 | | 36 | 59 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 23 | | 39 | 63 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 12 | | 42 | 36 | | 43 | 26 | | 44 | 13 | | 45 | 40 | | 46 | 49 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 172 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 17 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 12 | | totalSentences | 96 | | ratio | 0.125 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory had delivered to Richmond Park more times than she could count — noodles for the family near Pembroke Lodge, curry twice a week for the man with the hostile terrier — and not once had she noticed two oaks standing where the map showed open grass." | | 1 | "The Heartstone had pulsed warm against her sternum for weeks — near every tremor of the Veil, every whisper of Hel — and tonight it lay cold as a river stone." | | 2 | "Somewhere behind her a bell rang once — and something spoke her name in her mother's voice, warm and puzzled, asking where she'd gone." | | 3 | "Wildflowers crowded the ground to the horizon of a clearing that had no right to exist under Richmond Park — foxgloves, violets, white bells she couldn't name, all open and glowing faintly, as if moonlight had pooled in every petal and refused to drain away." | | 4 | "They turned in a slow circle, and for once their whisper carried something Rory had never heard in it — awe." | | 5 | "Not all at once — one by one, unhurried, the way sunflowers follow a slow sun." | | 6 | "A stream crossed their path, running quick and bright and utterly silent — water over stones and not one sound — and when she crouched to touch it, the current bent around her fingers like it was deciding whether to let her in." | | 7 | "Script crawled over the surfaces — not carved, moving, rearranging itself the instant Rory looked away." | | 8 | "It had been everywhere — thin silver threads of it, sourceless like the light — and it cut off between one step and the next, so clean she flinched." | | 9 | "Ahead, the wildflowers parted around a path — stems bent, dew shattered, but the soil beneath showed nothing." | | 10 | "The water reflected stars — hundreds, whole constellations — though there was no sky above the grove to hold them, and none of them matched." | | 11 | "Pale lavender eyes held Rory's without blinking, and behind the woman, all the way back to the bend of the path, the wildflowers faced the wrong direction — still turned toward where Rory stood." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 970 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 38 | | adverbRatio | 0.03917525773195876 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.006185567010309278 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 96 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 96 | | mean | 14.95 | | std | 10.36 | | cv | 0.693 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 47 | | 1 | 27 | | 2 | 13 | | 3 | 9 | | 4 | 26 | | 5 | 13 | | 6 | 25 | | 7 | 13 | | 8 | 3 | | 9 | 31 | | 10 | 12 | | 11 | 11 | | 12 | 25 | | 13 | 13 | | 14 | 23 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 12 | | 17 | 32 | | 18 | 11 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 22 | | 21 | 24 | | 22 | 18 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 45 | | 25 | 18 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 11 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 10 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 15 | | 33 | 21 | | 34 | 19 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 18 | | 37 | 7 | | 38 | 2 | | 39 | 26 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 10 | | 42 | 16 | | 43 | 16 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 14 | | 46 | 8 | | 47 | 2 | | 48 | 30 | | 49 | 43 |
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| 75.69% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 9 | | diversityRatio | 0.5104166666666666 | | totalSentences | 96 | | uniqueOpeners | 49 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | | 0 | "Somewhere behind her a bell" | | 1 | "Just light, sourceless and silver-green," | | 2 | "Then the birdsong stopped." |
| | ratio | 0.045 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 14 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | | 0 | "She noticed the absence the" | | 1 | "She crouched, scrawled a crooked" | | 2 | "She kept her eyes forward," | | 3 | "She let her breath out." | | 4 | "It fogged anyway, out of" | | 5 | "They turned in a slow" | | 6 | "She watched it strain for" | | 7 | "She counted nine stones." | | 8 | "It had been everywhere —" | | 9 | "Their edges had gone ragged" | | 10 | "She said it before the" | | 11 | "She found the Plough nowhere." | | 12 | "She found shapes that moved." | | 13 | "They came to the heart" |
| | ratio | 0.209 | |
| 57.01% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 54 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory had delivered to Richmond" | | 1 | "Nyx poured upward out of" | | 2 | "Rory pulled her gloves off" | | 3 | "Nyx drifted closer, their whisper" | | 4 | "The Heartstone had pulsed warm" | | 5 | "Rory pressed her fingers to" | | 6 | "She noticed the absence the" | | 7 | "She crouched, scrawled a crooked" | | 8 | "Nyx extended a hand made" | | 9 | "Rory inhaled, took the shadow's" | | 10 | "Pressure squeezed her ears, her" | | 11 | "She kept her eyes forward," | | 12 | "January was gone." | | 13 | "Wildflowers crowded the ground to" | | 14 | "The trees inside rose vast" | | 15 | "She let her breath out." | | 16 | "It fogged anyway, out of" | | 17 | "Nyx had solidified beside her," | | 18 | "They turned in a slow" | | 19 | "Rory dug out her phone." |
| | ratio | 0.806 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 56.28% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 33 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "Wildflowers crowded the ground to the horizon of a clearing that had no right to exist under Richmond Park — foxgloves, violets, white bells she couldn't name, …" | | 1 | "The grass whispered under Rory's boots in a language that was almost Welsh, almost birdsong, and the longer she listened the more certain she became that it was…" | | 2 | "A stream crossed their path, running quick and bright and utterly silent — water over stones and not one sound — and when she crouched to touch it, the current …" | | 3 | "A voice came from behind them, soft as the grass-whisper, coming from a woman who stood in the pressed-grass path where no footprints marked the dew." |
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| 66.18% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 17 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx drifted, their whisper brushing her ear like wind through a keyhole" | | 1 | "Nyx glided, and the grass bowed away from their feet without touching them" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "she breathed (breathe)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 42 | | tagDensity | 0.071 | | leniency | 0.143 | | rawRatio | 0.667 | | effectiveRatio | 0.095 | |