Run: 2026-09-02-01M1GQTG2X9RY110YPFJ65KWS4

Run Details

Duration:
4m 42s
Cost:
$0.002236
Provider:
Z.AI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The pendant woke at sundown. For three weeks it had hung against her chest like any other piece of jewellery, a crimson stone on a silver chain that had warmed exactly once — weeks ago, the night she'd carried a crate down into Silas's cellar and back up again. Tonight it beat. A small tap against her breastbone, then another, patient as a knuckle on a door. By the time she'd laced her boots it had found a rhythm, and the rhythm quickened with every step she took east. Richmond Park at midnight, then. She'd left the flat above the bar with the lights off and told herself it was a test. Stand at the treeline, give the stone ten minutes to make its point, walk home, laugh about it over breakfast. In and out. Robin Hood Gate was chained for the night. Good. Normal. Rory took the perimeter instead, past the golf course, to the gap in the fence she'd found on a late delivery to the houses on the far lane. The gap had been hip-high wire and bramble. Tonight it was a clean arch of new-cut timber, wide enough for her shoulders, smelling of fresh sawdust. "Someone's been busy." She ducked through. The first wrong thing was the sound. There wasn't any. London hummed whether you wanted it to or not — the A3 grinding away south, Heathrow traffic stitching the sky every ninety seconds, the bass note of a city that never fully slept. She heard none of it. The silence had weight. It pressed on her eardrums like water, and when she snapped her fingers the sound died an inch from her glove. Frost had furred every blade of grass white. Deer were everywhere in Richmond after dark; she'd swerved for them on night runs a dozen times. Not one. Not a print, not a shape at the far treeline, not a dropping on the path. The whole park held its breath. Her phone read 00:47. She walked a hundred yards, the pendant tapping faster, and checked again. 00:47. Same battery percentage, same to the digit. A hundred yards further, the screen said 00:12. She pocketed it. Arguing with a phone never got anyone anywhere. Under the oaks the air changed. Her breath stopped fogging. Warmth rose out of the ground itself, soft and steady, the heat of a road in August — in January, in the teeth of a hard frost. The pendant warmed with it, and the warmth spread through her ribs until she could feel the beat of the stone in her teeth. A blackbird sang. One in the morning, deep winter, and a blackbird sang from the dark to her left — three rising notes and a tumble. Pretty. Then it sang the identical phrase from the dark to her right. Same three notes. Same tumble. Note for note, like a recording played twice. "Right." Rory kept her voice level, loud enough to hear her own lungs working. "Flowers I can handle. Mimic birds, we're going to have words." She thumbed her torch on and took the small knife from her jacket, and felt better holding it, which she knew was a lie. The treeline opened, and she forgot the bird entirely. Wildflowers carpeted the clearing to the trunks of the great oaks — cow parsley, poppies, bluebells, all blooming at once through the frost, colour stacked on colour under a starless sky. The scent hit her next, too sweet, the cold-room sweetness of a florist's back shop with something underneath it like bruised stems. Every head of every flower faced her. Thousands of them, turned like an audience waiting for her to begin. The pendant blazed. She could see its glow through her jacket now, a red stain spreading across her sternum, and the beat of it had stopped being a tap and become a drum. The standing oaks ringed the clearing — five of them, trunks wide as doorways, bark grown smooth and grey over carved lines. The centre one carried long vertical grooves beneath the lichen, a crosspiece of darker wood above them, and her brain kept filing the shape as door. That was when she heard footsteps behind her. She stopped. They stopped — half a beat late, close, on her left where she had left nothing. She spun with the torch up. Frost, unbroken, starred and white. No prints anywhere on the clearing. Including her own. Her boots stood on the frost without a mark around them, ahead or behind. "Funny." Her breath made no fog here. "Hilarious." She circled wide along the ring of stones, flowers at her back, counting as she went. One. Two. Three. Four — she stopped walking. Four pillars on this side. She'd counted five in the ring. She walked the full circle with the torch shaking light across the bark, and at the end of it she counted six. "Six." Her voice dropped dead an inch from her mouth. "There were five." She touched each trunk with a gloved hand on the second pass so the number couldn't slip. Six. And a seventh stood inside the ring itself, where she remembered open grass, at the edge of a circle of bare earth — black, steaming ground at the heart of the grove where no frost survived and no flowers grew. The flowers around it leaned away from it. Away, the way a crowd leans from something dropped in its middle. The pendant pulled now. Not heat. Direction. The way a fishing line pulls. She glanced back the way she'd come and found the treeline impossibly far — the new timber arch of the fence a bright sliver across a stretch of park she had no memory of crossing. "Aurora." Her mother's voice. Cardiff vowels, warm, the exact pitch of a woman calling her in before dark twenty years ago — and it came from the steaming circle at the heart of the grove. Rory's grip tightened on the knife. "Mum's in Cardiff." Her voice held. "She doesn't do house calls." "Aurora." Closer. To her right now, though nothing had crossed her sight. At the corner of her eye a paleness stood between the second and third pillars, tall and narrow and patient, and when she snapped the torch toward it the light found only frost and flowers, every bloom still facing her. The grass moved at the edge of the grove. Long stems parting in a line, a slow wake travelling through standing flowers, circling her, though nothing walked there and the air never stirred. She faced the circle of black earth again. It steamed gently, a perfect ring ten feet across, as if something the shape of a ring of people had burned the ground warm all at once. At its centre the darkness had depth to it. It went down further than ground should go. The pendant stopped. For the first time since sundown there was silence inside her chest, and into that silence, close enough to warm her ear, her own voice spoke. "You came." The beat came back doubled. Hers, and another's, out of step, all around her. The grove drew breath — long and slow, in through the flowers, out through the stones. Not one of the seven pillars stood where it had when she arrived, and every flower in the clearing turned its face to keep watching her.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags5
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences12
tagDensity0.417
leniency0.833
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
95.91% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1222
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"gently"
count1
highlights
0"gently"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
59.08% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1222
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"quickened"
count1
1
word"silence"
count3
2
word"weight"
count1
3
word"warmth"
count2
4
word"could feel"
count1
5
word"footsteps"
count1
6
word"perfect"
count1
highlights
0"quickened"
1"silence"
2"weight"
3"warmth"
4"could feel"
5"footsteps"
6"perfect"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences103
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences103
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences109
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen43
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1234
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions13
wordCount1201
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity0.25
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Richmond"
discoveredNames
Silas1
Park1
Hood1
Gate1
Heathrow1
Richmond2
August1
January1
Closer1
Rory3
persons
0"Silas"
1"Hood"
2"Gate"
3"Rory"
places
0"Park"
1"Richmond"
2"August"
3"January"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences66
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1234
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences109
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs39
mean31.64
std23.78
cv0.752
sampleLengths
05
184
246
364
46
510
663
749
832
911
1061
113
1249
1325
1424
159
1672
1733
1848
198
2035
2117
228
2357
2413
2578
2613
2735
281
2934
306
3111
3252
3333
3452
353
3626
372
3856
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences103
matches
0"was chained"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs170
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount12
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences13
totalSentences109
ratio0.119
matches
0"For three weeks it had hung against her chest like any other piece of jewellery, a crimson stone on a silver chain that had warmed exactly once — weeks ago, the night she'd carried a crate down into Silas's cellar and back up again."
1"London hummed whether you wanted it to or not — the A3 grinding away south, Heathrow traffic stitching the sky every ninety seconds, the bass note of a city that never fully slept."
2"Deer were everywhere in Richmond after dark; she'd swerved for them on night runs a dozen times."
3"Warmth rose out of the ground itself, soft and steady, the heat of a road in August — in January, in the teeth of a hard frost."
4"One in the morning, deep winter, and a blackbird sang from the dark to her left — three rising notes and a tumble."
5"Wildflowers carpeted the clearing to the trunks of the great oaks — cow parsley, poppies, bluebells, all blooming at once through the frost, colour stacked on colour under a starless sky."
6"The standing oaks ringed the clearing — five of them, trunks wide as doorways, bark grown smooth and grey over carved lines."
7"They stopped — half a beat late, close, on her left where she had left nothing."
8"Four — she stopped walking."
9"And a seventh stood inside the ring itself, where she remembered open grass, at the edge of a circle of bare earth — black, steaming ground at the heart of the grove where no frost survived and no flowers grew."
10"She glanced back the way she'd come and found the treeline impossibly far — the new timber arch of the fence a bright sliver across a stretch of park she had no memory of crossing."
11"Cardiff vowels, warm, the exact pitch of a woman calling her in before dark twenty years ago — and it came from the steaming circle at the heart of the grove."
12"The grove drew breath — long and slow, in through the flowers, out through the stones."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1192
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount35
adverbRatio0.02936241610738255
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.0050335570469798654
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences109
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences109
mean11.32
std10.16
cv0.897
sampleLengths
05
144
23
315
422
55
618
720
83
98
101
111
1228
138
1418
156
167
173
1833
195
204
2121
228
2317
242
2516
266
274
2812
291
307
318
323
338
346
354
3627
3724
383
3923
401
4112
423
432
448
4514
4611
4724
489
4931
80.25% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.5092592592592593
totalSentences108
uniqueOpeners55
74.91% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences89
matches
0"Then it sang the identical"
1"Away, the way a crowd"
ratio0.022
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount26
totalSentences89
matches
0"She'd left the flat above"
1"She ducked through"
2"She heard none of it."
3"It pressed on her eardrums"
4"Her phone read 00:47."
5"She walked a hundred yards,"
6"She pocketed it."
7"Her breath stopped fogging."
8"She thumbed her torch on"
9"She could see its glow"
10"They stopped — half a"
11"She spun with the torch"
12"Her boots stood on the"
13"Her breath made no fog"
14"She circled wide along the"
15"She'd counted five in the"
16"She walked the full circle"
17"Her voice dropped dead an"
18"She touched each trunk with"
19"She glanced back the way"
ratio0.292
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount62
totalSentences89
matches
0"The pendant woke at sundown."
1"Tonight it beat."
2"A small tap against her"
3"Richmond Park at midnight, then."
4"She'd left the flat above"
5"Robin Hood Gate was chained"
6"Rory took the perimeter instead,"
7"The gap had been hip-high"
8"Tonight it was a clean"
9"She ducked through"
10"The first wrong thing was"
11"London hummed whether you wanted"
12"She heard none of it."
13"The silence had weight."
14"It pressed on her eardrums"
15"Frost had furred every blade"
16"Deer were everywhere in Richmond"
17"The whole park held its"
18"Her phone read 00:47."
19"She walked a hundred yards,"
ratio0.697
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences89
matches
0"By the time she'd laced"
1"To her right now, though"
ratio0.022
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences40
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"For three weeks it had hung against her chest like any other piece of jewellery, a crimson stone on a silver chain that had warmed exactly once — weeks ago, the…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags5
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
93.6715%