Run: 2026-09-02-01M1GR1XG3T2D8BAE15AG8A1N4

Run Details

Duration:
4m 12s
Cost:
$0.001804
Provider:
Z.AI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The last order of the night came in at eleven: one chicken chow mein, one portion of prawn crackers, an address on Danebury Avenue with the pin dropped three streets from the actual house. Rory took it because the pendant had started burning the moment she clipped her helmet, and the heat leaned south, toward the park, like a finger pressed flat against her sternum. She'd stopped asking why the thing did what it did months ago. She just followed. The drop-off took twelve minutes. The burn didn't fade. It pulled. Roehampton Gate was chained, but the gap underneath was old business between the park and every kid in southwest London. She rolled her bike through and walked it into the dark. Richmond Park at night was its own country. Fallow deer drifted out of the bracken and let her pass. The A3 murmured somewhere east. A plane crossed over every ninety seconds, stacking toward Heathrow, blinking red, and she counted them without meaning to. She was three fields in when she noticed the deer had stopped moving. A dozen of them, scattered across the slope, none of them grazing, none of them bolting. All facing the same direction. Not at her. Past her. Deeper in. Then the sound dropped. Not faded — dropped, the way a radio drops when someone lifts it off the earth. No traffic. No planes. Just her trainers on wet grass, enormous. "Bloody hell." Even the whisper came back wrong. Flat. Swallowed. The pendant flared hot enough to bite through her jacket. Ahead stood oaks. Seven of them, ringed on a rise, bark run like poured candlewax, trunks wider than her spread arms. Between them, colour — a low drift of wildflowers, poppies and cow parsley, open wide in November under a full moon. Every part of her said turn around. Her feet didn't get a vote. Passing between two trunks felt like walking through a curtain of cold water. A pressure, a shiver, and then the grove closed behind her and the stillness changed texture. Her breath clouded and stayed — hung at mouth height, a small pale ghost that refused to dissolve. No wind moved, and yet thousands of flowers had turned to face her, small heads tilted, patient. She pulled out her phone. 11:47, battery at sixty per cent, no signal. She lit the torch and got a brown coin of light, weak as a dying firefly. When she glanced at the clock again a breath later, it read 3:12. She looked once more and the screen was dashes. Then black. Dead. "Right." She pocketed it. "Okay. You've got my attention." The pendant pulsed. Thump. She felt the answer come up through her boots half a second later — a slower beat, deeper, from under the soil. She stood still and counted. The ground kept time without her. She walked the ring instead, counting steps to keep her head on straight. The whisper joined her at forty-one. "Forty-two," it said. High and dry, like a reed split down the middle, coming from under the flowers. "Forty-three. Forty-four." She stopped. The whisper carried on to fifty anyway, then thinned out, sulking. A giggle followed, off to her left. Then to her right. Then everywhere at once, like it had been under the grass the whole time. Then a hum. Six notes of a tune she almost knew — something her mum used to sing over the hoover on Saturday mornings, except this version skipped every third note, as if the singer had never quite understood music from the outside. "Who's there?" Her voice cracked the stillness open. Nothing filled the gap she'd made. "I'm just delivering. I'll leave you to it." Movement at the edge of her vision — between two oaks, something pale and vertical, taller than her, hands hanging past its knees. She turned her head. Gone. In the corner of her eye it was back, nearer, behind a different tree, and the wildflowers in its wake lay flattened in a straight line, a wake cut through the bloom like something invisible had dragged a hand through on its way to her. She checked the sky and her stomach dropped. The moon was moving. She watched it slide — a coin pushed across a table, one side of heaven to the other in the space of one breath. Frost ferned up her sleeve and melted. Ferned up her boot and melted. Her shadow lay pointing east, then west, then split into two shadows and couldn't decide. "Hello?" She raised the dead phone like it could help. "Last chance for a normal night." "One chicken chow mein." Her own voice. Word for word, from the treeline — her Cardiff accent scraped off it, played back through a wall. "One chicken chow mein and a portion of prawn crackers." She went cold from the ankles up. Hoofbeats started then, on soft grass: three beats and a drag, three beats and a drag, circling the ring at the speed of a slow walk. Deer didn't sound like that. Nothing in Richmond Park sounded like that. "Rory?" Eva. Eva's voice, from the dark between the oaks — the exact pitch of her calling up the stairwell at the flat. "Rory, are you up there?" Except Eva was in Peckham, asleep by now, and Eva's voice had never sounded like this. Like a recording learned by heart by something with no lungs. "Nice try." Her mouth had gone dry as flour. She backed a step. "Try literally anything else." "Rory." Closer. "Aurora." Her mum now, pitched over school-run traffic, the tone she saved for when Rory was in trouble. "Aurora, come inside, love." She turned for the gap she'd come through and found oak. Solid oak, shoulder to shoulder, bark seamless as wax. She turned the other way and found the same. The ring had swallowed its own door. Around the clearing, every flower head swung to follow her, all together, no wind, no sound. The pendant pulsed out of rhythm with her heart — one beat, two — and on the third, the ground answered. Warm air touched the back of her neck. Slow. Close enough to be breath. The voice behind her was hers, but older, and it spoke a name she'd never told a living soul, a name she'd kept folded away since she was small enough to believe the space under her bed went somewhere. "Malphora."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences19
tagDensity0.421
leniency0.842
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1063
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
71.78% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1063
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"whisper"
count3
1
word"pulsed"
count2
2
word"stomach"
count1
highlights
0"whisper"
1"pulsed"
2"stomach"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"stomach dropped/sank"
count1
highlights
0"stomach dropped"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences98
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences98
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences108
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen45
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1074
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions22
wordCount1013
uniqueNames16
maxNameDensity0.39
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Danebury1
Avenue1
Gate1
London1
Park2
Heathrow1
Flat1
November1
High1
Saturday1
Cardiff1
Richmond2
Eva4
Peckham1
Like1
Rory2
persons
0"Eva"
1"Like"
2"Rory"
places
0"Danebury"
1"Avenue"
2"London"
3"Park"
4"Flat"
5"November"
6"Cardiff"
7"Richmond"
8"Peckham"
globalScore1
windowScore1
29.03% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences62
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"felt like walking through a curtain of"
1"sounded like that"
2"sounded like this"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1074
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences108
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs39
mean27.54
std18.63
cv0.677
sampleLengths
065
115
211
331
443
541
631
710
810
942
1013
1129
1235
1354
149
1537
1613
176
1820
1913
2025
2143
2222
2373
2464
2516
264
2731
287
2938
301
3154
3217
3324
3452
3521
3614
3739
381
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences98
matches
0"was chained"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs152
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount11
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences108
ratio0.093
matches
0"Not faded — dropped, the way a radio drops when someone lifts it off the earth."
1"Between them, colour — a low drift of wildflowers, poppies and cow parsley, open wide in November under a full moon."
2"Her breath clouded and stayed — hung at mouth height, a small pale ghost that refused to dissolve."
3"She felt the answer come up through her boots half a second later — a slower beat, deeper, from under the soil."
4"Six notes of a tune she almost knew — something her mum used to sing over the hoover on Saturday mornings, except this version skipped every third note, as if the singer had never quite understood music from the outside."
5"Movement at the edge of her vision — between two oaks, something pale and vertical, taller than her, hands hanging past its knees."
6"She watched it slide — a coin pushed across a table, one side of heaven to the other in the space of one breath."
7"Word for word, from the treeline — her Cardiff accent scraped off it, played back through a wall."
8"Eva's voice, from the dark between the oaks — the exact pitch of her calling up the stairwell at the flat."
9"The pendant pulsed out of rhythm with her heart — one beat, two — and on the third, the ground answered."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1005
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount35
adverbRatio0.03482587064676617
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0009950248756218905
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences108
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences108
mean9.94
std8.82
cv0.887
sampleLengths
034
131
212
33
45
54
62
720
811
98
1011
115
1219
1313
1416
155
163
172
182
194
2016
212
222
237
248
251
261
2710
283
2918
3021
317
326
3313
3416
3518
3617
375
388
3916
4013
419
422
431
444
455
463
471
4822
495
82.10% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.5370370370370371
totalSentences108
uniqueOpeners58
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount7
totalSentences82
matches
0"All facing the same direction."
1"Then the sound dropped."
2"Just her trainers on wet"
3"Even the whisper came back"
4"Then to her right."
5"Then everywhere at once, like"
6"Then a hum."
ratio0.085
93.17% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount26
totalSentences82
matches
0"She'd stopped asking why the"
1"She just followed."
2"She rolled her bike through"
3"She was three fields in"
4"Her feet didn't get a"
5"Her breath clouded and stayed"
6"She pulled out her phone."
7"She lit the torch and"
8"She looked once more and"
9"She pocketed it"
10"She felt the answer come"
11"She stood still and counted."
12"She walked the ring instead,"
13"Her voice cracked the stillness"
14"She turned her head."
15"She checked the sky and"
16"She watched it slide —"
17"Her shadow lay pointing east,"
18"She raised the dead phone"
19"Her own voice."
ratio0.317
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount56
totalSentences82
matches
0"The last order of the"
1"Rory took it because the"
2"She'd stopped asking why the"
3"She just followed."
4"The drop-off took twelve minutes."
5"The burn didn't fade."
6"Roehampton Gate was chained, but"
7"She rolled her bike through"
8"Richmond Park at night was"
9"Fallow deer drifted out of"
10"The A3 murmured somewhere east."
11"A plane crossed over every"
12"She was three fields in"
13"A dozen of them, scattered"
14"The pendant flared hot enough"
15"Every part of her said"
16"Her feet didn't get a"
17"A pressure, a shiver, and"
18"Her breath clouded and stayed"
19"She pulled out her phone."
ratio0.683
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences82
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences37
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Six notes of a tune she almost knew — something her mum used to sing over the hoover on Saturday mornings, except this version skipped every third note, as if t…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags8
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences19
tagDensity0.053
leniency0.105
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
89.2027%