Run: 2026-09-02-01M1GR77BMYCXAPRZNXAKK9FTZ

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Duration:
7m 42s
Cost:
$0.003214
Provider:
Z.AI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The lift had been dead since 1992, so Harlow Quinn took the maintenance stairs, torch beam carving through air that tasted of rust and rain no sun had touched in forty years. At the bottom, a constable lifted the tape for her. "Northbound platform, Detective. Pathologist's been and gone. No visible cause of death — he's holding the paperwork for toxicology." "Then walk me through the gate." "Gate's chained. Old chain's got a link cut clean through, and somebody's hung a new padlock over the repair." The constable's light found the bright brass shackle. "That hardware's days old, not decades." Quinn studied the cut link, the fresh burr on the metal, the new lock squatting on a rusted hasp. Sharp jaw working, she filed each detail the way she'd once filed target reports. "Somebody broke in this week, then bought a padlock on the way out so the paperwork would read *secure*. Whoever found the body — how?" "Drainage crew. Two blokes with a clipboard and a headlamp, six this morning." She ducked under the tape and followed the tunnel down. The northbound platform opened around her like a flooded cellar. Half an inch of dust lay over everything — grey felt on the benches, on the tiled advertising frames, on the rails themselves. Forty years of the city's shed skin, deep enough to hold a fingerprint. Except here. A lane, eight feet wide, ran from the tunnel mouth to the platform edge, swept clean as a ballroom floor. It ended in a patch where the dust had been trodden to clay by hundreds of feet, every print pointed the same direction. Marek, the scenes-of-crime officer, crouched by the body with his torch between his teeth. "Male, fifties. Grey overcoat, Savile Row label. Wallet's still on him, four hundred quid in twenties. No phone, no keys, no ID. No wounds, no petechiae, no needle marks. Doc's leaning cardiac arrest and hating himself for it." "Clock on the death?" "Twelve to twenty hours. Cold air buys wiggle room, he says." Quinn gloved up and turned the dead man's hand over. Both palms carried the same mark: a lattice of fine scars, geometric, healed pale. Years old. The fingertips were black to the second knuckle. "Religious scarring, maybe." Marek shrugged. "Monks do stranger." "Whose monks etch sigils into both hands?" She angled her torch at the shoes. "And look at this. Soles clean as new. Toes furred grey. The floor was swept when he walked it — then the dust started falling again, on him, for days. Your doc's clock is wrong. He didn't die last night." "Then when—" Voices at the tunnel mouth. A PC had someone by the elbow — small, red curls crushed under a hood, round glasses fogging the second she crossed into the warmer air. The PC held her satchel hostage. "That bag is logged Museum property—" "Everything in it is on an intake form your own people filed." She wrenched it back and turned to Quinn, torchlight catching the freckles across her nose. "Eva Kowalski. British Museum, restricted collections. Your incident room logged me on as specialist witness an hour ago. I'm the one who phoned it in." "The Museum phones the Met about dust?" "The Museum phones the Met about this." She dug past the drag of books in the satchel and produced her own evidence bag. Inside sat a compass the size of a matchbox, brass gone green at the seams, its face ringed with sigils etched fine as watchwork. "Six days ago a survey crew pulled this out of the rubble under those stairs. It reached my desk Thursday. By Friday morning it had done this —" she tapped her phone: a notebook page, a hand-drawn line running north-west across a tube map — "it pointed the same bearing for nine hours. The line ends at this station." "Compasses drift." "It doesn't point north. It points at doors." Marek shifted his weight. "Found property's ours until—" "It's evidence." Quinn held out her palm, and Eva set the bag on it. The needle ignored north, ignored Quinn, and hauled toward the north tunnel like a dog scenting meat. They walked the lane together, their boots loud on the swept clay. At the tunnel mouth, the brick wore a scorch mark: a perfect arch, soot-black, edges crisp as a stencil. A door drawn in a flame's handwriting. A broken ring of salt lay across the threshold, half dissolved by damp. Lower on the arch's flank, scratched small into the brick, a second lattice of sigils — the same family as the compass face, down to the broken seventh glyph. Quinn's thumb found the worn leather strap of her watch and pressed. Eva crouched at the threshold. "There's a market that sets up in dead places like this. It moves every full moon — a station one month, a crypt the next, a lock-up in Peckham the time before that. Entry by token only. Bone." She glanced back at the body. "The last full moon was Tuesday." "And the survey crew locked this place up six days before that." "The gate's for people who don't know about doors. The Market doesn't use stairs." Eva pulled a second bag from her satchel and held it out. Inside: a token of yellowed bone, snapped clean, charred along the break. "Marek found it in his coat." "Fake?" "That's not age and it's not damage. That's a refusal. The Market breaks false tokens at the leaving — snaps them at the door on the way out. It'll let you in on somebody else's name." Her voice dropped. "It doesn't have to let you out." Quinn turned the compass in her hand, needle straining at the arch. "So. Tuesday night, full moon. A man with money and no patience buys a token he didn't earn. He walks in through that —" she nodded at the scorch — "with a thousand other feet. That's your swept lane, your trodden clay. The Market packs up at dawn, goes through the arch, and takes the door with it. He's left in a sealed station with no phone, no keys, a padlocked gate he can't cut, and a bone in his pocket that says *liar*." "Nobody killed him," Eva said. "Nobody had to. Somebody sold him. That's still a robbery — it just uses a door instead of a crowbar." She crouched by the dead man's hands again, matching the scarred lattice against the compass face. "These marks are years old. He's held that compass before. He knew the protocol, knew the sigils, pressed the thing into his own skin trying to make it open a wall. Days of that. Then his heart, or the cold, or both." "Doc's still going to write cardiac arrest." "Doc wrote cardiac arrest three years ago, too." Eva looked up. "What?" "Hackney Wick. A lock-up off the Lea. Same lattice on the walls, same burn pattern, same everything." Quinn stood, torch beam steady on the arch. "My partner didn't come home from that scene. The file said cardiac arrest. I burned the file." The station held its silence. Water ticked somewhere down the black tunnel. "Bag the lane," Quinn said. "Every print in that clean strip — I want whoever walked out Tuesday morning. Print the new padlock. Then find me the survey crew, and after them, find whoever sold a dead man his ticket."
created_at"2026-09-02T09:46:50.623Z" 9/2/2026, 9:46:50 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"She glanced back [back]"
dialogueSentences43
tagDensity0.349
leniency0.698
rawRatio0.067
effectiveRatio0.047
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1224
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
79.58% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1224
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"etch"
count1
1
word"etched"
count1
2
word"weight"
count1
3
word"perfect"
count1
4
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"etch"
1"etched"
2"weight"
3"perfect"
4"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences49
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences49
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences77
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen83
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords2
totalWords1236
ratio0.002
matches
0"secure"
1"liar"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
68.70% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions21
wordCount615
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity1.63
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn10
Voices1
Marek3
Eva5
Market1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Marek"
3"Eva"
4"Market"
places(empty)
globalScore0.687
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences38
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1236
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences77
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs41
mean30.15
std27.03
cv0.897
sampleLengths
042
119
26
333
458
513
610
746
845
952
104
1111
1234
138
1454
152
1637
176
1852
197
20106
212
228
238
2431
2580
2612
2755
2812
2944
301
3146
3296
335
3478
357
368
374
3842
3912
4040
98.10% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences49
matches
0"been trodden"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs99
matches(empty)
31.54% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences77
ratio0.039
matches
0"Half an inch of dust lay over everything — grey felt on the benches, on the tiled advertising frames, on the rails themselves."
1"A PC had someone by the elbow — small, red curls crushed under a hood, round glasses fogging the second she crossed into the warmer air."
2"Lower on the arch's flank, scratched small into the brick, a second lattice of sigils — the same family as the compass face, down to the broken seventh glyph."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount528
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount6
adverbRatio0.011363636363636364
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.001893939393939394
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences77
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences77
mean16.05
std14.36
cv0.894
sampleLengths
032
110
219
36
427
56
619
714
825
913
1010
1110
1223
1313
142
1520
1623
1714
1838
194
2011
2110
2214
232
248
255
263
2714
2840
292
305
3126
326
336
3427
3525
367
3723
3824
3959
402
418
424
434
4414
4517
4612
4719
487
4913
94.81% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.6103896103896104
totalSentences77
uniqueOpeners47
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences44
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount9
totalSentences44
matches
0"She ducked under the tape"
1"It ended in a patch"
2"She angled her torch at"
3"She wrenched it back and"
4"She dug past the drag"
5"They walked the lane together,"
6"She glanced back at the"
7"Her voice dropped"
8"She crouched by the dead"
ratio0.205
62.27% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount35
totalSentences44
matches
0"The lift had been dead"
1"The constable's light found the"
2"Quinn studied the cut link,"
3"She ducked under the tape"
4"The northbound platform opened around"
5"A lane, eight feet wide,"
6"It ended in a patch"
7"Marek, the scenes-of-crime officer, crouched"
8"Quinn gloved up and turned"
9"Both palms carried the same"
10"The fingertips were black to"
11"She angled her torch at"
12"Voices at the tunnel mouth."
13"A PC had someone by"
14"The PC held her satchel"
15"She wrenched it back and"
16"She dug past the drag"
17"Marek shifted his weight."
18"Quinn held out her palm,"
19"The needle ignored north, ignored"
ratio0.795
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences44
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences23
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
91.67% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"She wrenched, torchlight catching the freckles across her nose"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences43
tagDensity0.047
leniency0.093
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
87.5554%