"She had looked through the peephole first, of course — old habits, Cardiff habits — and seen the silhouette: the height, the cane, the particular way he had of standing as though the whole world were a chair he'd declined to sit in."
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"Her arm had stopped it — some traitor part of her, somewhere below the ribs, acting without a warrant."
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"Eva's flat was a paper city — books stacked into load-bearing walls, scrolls in postal tubes, index cards pinned to the curtains like moths — with a gas fire in the corner and a tabby cat who regarded visitors as staff."
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"Getting it off him was meant to be dignified and wasn't; in the end she cut the shirt open along the seam with Eva's scissors, because making him lift his arm that high was going to end badly for everyone."
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"Eva's first-aid box had a suture kit taped inside the lid, labelled in her looping hand: FIELD MISHAPS — which, for Eva, covered everything from papercuts to exsanguination."
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"He'd traced it once, the single night they'd let themselves nearly have — traced it with one fingertip and asked, and she'd told him about the garden wall in Cardiff and the flowerpot, and he had laughed like she'd handed him a present."
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"The amber eye caught the fire; the black one absorbed it."
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"And he picked English — her first language, the one with no elegant exits — and said, \"I love you. Since the night you stitched my hand at Silas' and charged me the delivery fee, which I still maintain was extortion. I have never once known how to trade it, and God knows I have tried, and it has ruined all my arithmetic.\""
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"\"Deeply,\" Lucien said, and laughed — a real one, brief and startled out of him, and she realized she'd been rationing the memory of that sound like it was the last of something."
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"She had looked through the peephole first, of course — old habits, Cardiff habits — and seen the silhouette: the height, the cane, the particular way he had of …"
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"Eva's flat was a paper city — books stacked into load-bearing walls, scrolls in postal tubes, index cards pinned to the curtains like moths — with a gas fire in…"
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"Eva herself was in Edinburgh, chasing a manuscript that was either genuine or forged depending on which of her contacts you believed, and Rory had the cat."
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"Her hands, which had been unsteady about everything else all evening, went still the moment they touched skin."
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"Outside, the rain kept falling over Brick Lane, over the shuttered market and the lit windows of the curry house, over the whole grey city that didn't know eith…"