Run: 2026-09-02-01M1GREC3YW2E2NC7XRWS1QSE3

Run Details

Duration:
10m 35s
Cost:
$0.004753
Provider:
Z.AI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The gate at the top of the stairs had been chained since the fifties. The chain hung in two halves, cut clean, and the smell reached Quinn before the light did: brine and candlewax, and under both, something floral gone to rot. Dead stations smelled of rust and rat droppings. This one smelled used. She took the stairs the way she took rooms — corners first. "Detective Quinn." A torch beam steadied on her at the bottom. DS Carver, jeans ironed, collar stiff, ducked under a line of blue tape strung between tiled pillars. "Old relief spur under Camden. Closed before I was born. Transport's track walkers found him at five this morning. Nothing's been touched." "Then walk me through nothing." Work lamps lit a stretch of platform the color of old piano keys. CSIs drifted through the glow in white suits, lifting prints from a century of dust. The body lay twenty feet in, on his back between the pillars, heels together like a laid-out man — except no one had laid him out. Rigor had done the folding. A vendor's apron, wax-spotted. Fingers pruned white, creased like days-old laundry. Salt crusted gray at the corners of his mouth. "Drowned." Carver let the word stand in the cold. "Culvert runs under the north end. Spring tide came up big last night. Man sleeps rough down here, water finds him, tide drops, done by breakfast." Quinn followed the platform north. The culvert mouth sat behind a cast-iron grate, furred with cobwebs, bone-dry an arm's length past the bars. "Show me the tide that came through that." "It drained back." "Through cobwebs it didn't bend." She returned to the body and crouched. "No silt on him. No weed. His clothes are dry, Sergeant." She touched the floor an inch from his shoulder. Dust, powder-fine. "And there's not a drop on your platform." "The doctor can talk you through the fluid—" The doctor, gray-haired, kneeling by the ribs with a stethoscope he wasn't using, spoke without looking up. "Lungs are full. Saltwater — seawater, by the salt load. Skin says hours of soaking. You'll want the post-mortem for the rest, but I'll save you the suspense: this man drowned, and he didn't drown here." "Time of death?" He stripped his second glove. "Rigor and the cold put him between two and four. It's six degrees down here — that skews it late." Quinn turned the dead man's wrist. A watch, leather strap, crystal cracked, hands stopped at 3:07. She checked her own — worn leather, still running — and matched the minute. "Watches stop." Carver shrugged. "Dead men's especially." She stood. At the far pillar, a woman had been watching since Quinn came down the stairs — round glasses fogged at the rims, red curls crushed under a wool hat, a satchel heavy with book spines dragging one shoulder down. "You called this in?" "Half six." Soft voice, clipped at the edges. "I came to meet him at moonset. The tunnel was empty except for him." "Name." "Eva Kowalski." The name lived on the third page of a file on Quinn's desk, highlighted yellow. British Museum, restricted access. Known associate. She let the silence do her work. "Your name's in a file on my desk, Ms. Kowalski." "Then you know I find things for people." Eva tucked a curl behind her left ear. "Last night I found Marek." "Marek." "He kept the scales at the Market. Weighed what people owed." Freckles stood sharp under the lamplight, her green eyes fixed on the body. "What market?" Carver had drifted over, notebook out. "The one that isn't here." Quinn let that hang. "Walk me through it. And understand I charge for performances." Eva nodded at the evidence box beside the body, where a small brass compass sat in a plastic tray, its face etched with fine sigils, its casing gone green at the seams. "That's his?" "That's evidence." "That's Shade work. A Veil compass. It doesn't point north, Detective. It points to the nearest tear." Quinn lifted it by the edges. The needle ignored her, dragging its point along the glass, straining at one brick in the far wall. She rotated the compass a quarter turn. The needle stayed. Another quarter. Stayed — fixed on that single brick like a dog on a scent. "Needle's bent." Carver leaned in. "The needle's honest. There was a door in that wall last night, and under the Veil there are rivers. Someone opened that door onto one of them. The water came through and did what water does. When the door shut, the water went home." "The tide—" "Look at your floor." Eva pointed at the ring around the body: a circle of dried salt, crisp at the rim, crumbling to powder at its edge. "Water never stands in a circle. Tides leave sheets. Tidelines against walls. That ring stood around him and left all at once, in one breath. Your culvert doesn't breathe." Carver wrote nothing. "Doors in walls. Rivers under the floor. You want me to radio that up?" "I want you to explain the footprints." She walked him to it: a single line of prints pressed into the platform dust, coming from the south, unhurried, evenly spaced, ending at the ring's edge. No drag marks. No second set. Nothing leaving. "His boots match his prints." Quinn crouched over the last impression. Ball of the foot deep, toes dug, heel lifted clean out of the dust. "He stopped here and went up onto his toes. Nobody dragged him in. Nobody walked him. He came to that wall on his own and rose." "Rose?" "Rising is what happens when water takes you." Carver crouched beside her. "Then where's the killer's prints? Bloke didn't fly in." Quinn pulled a glove from her kit and took the dead man's right hand. The fist had set around something small. She worked the fingers back one at a time — they gave with the sound of old twigs — and a disc of carved bone dropped into her palm, smaller than a pound coin, charred along one rim in a black crescent. "Evidence bag." She held it to the lamplight. "Token. Anyone?" Eva came closer, close enough that Quinn caught candlewax and old paper off the satchel. "Passage. That's how you get into the Market. The door takes its fee and burns a crescent into the bone when it's spent." She stopped. Something moved behind the glasses. "That's spent." "It's more than spent." Quinn turned the disc. The char faced one way only. The skin of the dead man's palm carried no burn, no mark at all. "His hand didn't grip this. His fingers were set rigid before anything touched them, and then someone curled them over it. Someone spent his token, closed his hand around it, and left it for the track walkers." Eva tucked her hair behind her ear again. "You're saying it was planted." "I'm saying nothing here happened the way it looks, and it looks like a robbery in a tunnel." "His pockets—" Carver flipped the apron with a pen. Coins in one. A gold band in the other. A stub of pencil, a folded square of oilcloth. "Nobody robs a man and leaves the ring." "No." Quinn rose and crossed to the far wall, to the brick the needle loved. Up close, a seam of damp ran through the mortar, vertical, shoulder-height to the vault, wide as a door. She laid the back of her hand against it. Cold. Wet, weeping a slow dark line toward the floor, the edges already drying. "Your door left a watermark." Behind her, Carver blew out a breath. "So we're saying what? Someone opens a door in the wall, floods a tube platform with seawater, drowns this poor sod, shuts the door, and strolls off through the brick?" "Strolls is generous. There's not a print that isn't his." Quinn came back to the body. "Here's the shape of the night. Marek walked to that wall himself — his prints, his alone — and stopped at the ring, and went up on his toes as the water came through. The water stood around him in a perfect circle and left in one breath. The door burned his token on the way out, and afterward someone set it in a hand that had already gone rigid." She turned the dead man's watch toward Carver, 3:07 catching the lamplight. "What time was moonset?" Eva didn't hesitate. "3:07. The Market moves at moonset. Every full moon." "His watch agrees with the door." "Coincidences—" "Stop the watch, Sergeant, and the coincidence keeps good time." Carver rubbed the back of his neck. Under the lamps his face had lost its ironing. "So the Market packed up and left a body on the platform?" "The body's on the wrong side of where the door stood." Quinn looked at Eva. "On our side. Where the daylight walks." The curls had come loose around Eva's face. "You don't leave a body in the Market. The Market doesn't permit it. This is the mundane side. This is where transport men come at dawn." "Exactly." Quinn set the compass back in its tray, and the needle swung hard against its glass and held. "Robbery's out. Panic doesn't plant tokens. Whoever opened that wall came and went through it, drowned a man in a foot of borrowed sea, and left him where a rail inspector would trip over him by breakfast. That's not escape. That's a delivery. Someone wanted him found — by us, here, looking like this." The lamps hummed. Somewhere north, water dripped once and stopped. Carver clicked his pen twice and wrote nothing again. "The PM gives me lungs and a timeline. It won't give me a wall." "No. It won't." Eva had gone still by the salt ring, satchel hugged to her chest. The softness had gone out of her voice. "You already knew about the Market." Quinn met the green eyes behind the round glasses. "I knew somebody was moving weight through this city that no port ever logged. Now I know it drowns people in dry rooms and mails me the evidence." She nodded at the tray, at the small brass compass straining toward a wall that had closed. "Bag everything. And nobody touches that wall."
created_at"2026-09-02T09:50:44.871Z" 9/2/2026, 9:50:44 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags21
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences75
tagDensity0.28
leniency0.56
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1708
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
85.36% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1708
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"crystal"
count1
1
word"silence"
count1
2
word"etched"
count1
3
word"perfect"
count1
4
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"crystal"
1"silence"
2"etched"
3"perfect"
4"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences90
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences90
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences144
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen68
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1721
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
60.41% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions42
wordCount893
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.79
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Quinn16
Carver12
Dust1
Museum1
Freckles1
Eva9
Ball1
Coins1
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Carver"
2"Dust"
3"Museum"
4"Freckles"
5"Eva"
places(empty)
globalScore0.604
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences63
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1721
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences144
matches
0"let that hang"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs70
mean24.59
std20.89
cv0.85
sampleLengths
054
112
250
35
459
520
635
723
88
93
1042
118
1253
133
1425
1530
167
1741
184
1922
201
212
2228
2310
2421
251
2624
278
285
2914
3034
312
3217
3349
345
3544
362
3756
3817
397
4035
4151
421
438
4413
4563
4610
4747
4865
4913
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences90
matches
0"been chained"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs146
matches
0"wasn't using"
23.81% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences144
ratio0.042
matches
0"She took the stairs the way she took rooms — corners first."
1"The body lay twenty feet in, on his back between the pillars, heels together like a laid-out man — except no one had laid him out."
2"She checked her own — worn leather, still running — and matched the minute."
3"At the far pillar, a woman had been watching since Quinn came down the stairs — round glasses fogged at the rims, red curls crushed under a wool hat, a satchel heavy with book spines dragging one shoulder down."
4"Stayed — fixed on that single brick like a dog on a scent."
5"She worked the fingers back one at a time — they gave with the sound of old twigs — and a disc of carved bone dropped into her palm, smaller than a pound coin, charred along one rim in a black crescent."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount893
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount12
adverbRatio0.013437849944008958
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.0022396416573348264
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences144
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences144
mean11.95
std11.15
cv0.933
sampleLengths
014
128
28
34
412
511
617
722
85
913
1015
1126
125
134
147
159
169
1726
185
1918
208
213
2212
2320
242
258
268
2717
2836
293
305
3120
326
3310
3414
354
363
372
3839
394
408
4114
421
432
4415
454
462
477
4810
4916
80.09% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.5138888888888888
totalSentences144
uniqueOpeners74
40.65% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences82
matches
0"Somewhere north, water dripped once"
ratio0.012
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount13
totalSentences82
matches
0"She took the stairs the"
1"She returned to the body"
2"She touched the floor an"
3"He stripped his second glove."
4"She checked her own —"
5"She let the silence do"
6"She rotated the compass a"
7"She walked him to it:"
8"She worked the fingers back"
9"She held it to the"
10"She laid the back of"
11"She turned the dead man's"
12"She nodded at the tray,"
ratio0.159
39.27% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount69
totalSentences82
matches
0"The gate at the top"
1"The chain hung in two"
2"This one smelled used."
3"She took the stairs the"
4"A torch beam steadied on"
5"DS Carver, jeans ironed, collar"
6"Work lamps lit a stretch"
7"CSIs drifted through the glow"
8"The body lay twenty feet"
9"Rigor had done the folding."
10"A vendor's apron, wax-spotted."
11"Fingers pruned white, creased like"
12"Salt crusted gray at the"
13"Carver let the word stand"
14"Quinn followed the platform north."
15"The culvert mouth sat behind"
16"She returned to the body"
17"She touched the floor an"
18"The doctor, gray-haired, kneeling by"
19"He stripped his second glove."
ratio0.841
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences82
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences26
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags21
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Quinn set, and the needle swung hard against its glass and held"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
87.6533%