Run: 2026-09-02-01M1GRFB3265XHKN0CXZASBC7E

Run Details

Duration:
8m 37s
Cost:
$0.090639
Provider:
Z.AI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
She opened the door on the chain first. Lucien Moreau stood on her landing with his ivory-handled cane in one hand and a wicker cat basket in the other. Rain had beaten his collar; the rest of him stayed pressed charcoal and French. The basket wailed like a fire alarm with fur. "Bonsoir." The basket wailed again. "Eva's flat was broken into this evening." She looked at the basket. The basket looked back through the wicker, unimpressed. "Silas has a phone." "Silas has opinions about phones at this hour. This needed to come from me." "What it needs is a reason you're holding Eva's cat outside my door at one in the morning." "Ptolemy required a destination. Eva is in Glastonbury until Sunday, the curry house won't take him, and he has bitten my runner twice since ten o'clock." "Good cat." "Wonderful. Demented." He shifted the basket to his other arm. "Must we conduct this on a communal stairwell?" Her hair still held the dent from the delivery helmet; she hadn't fixed it for him, and she never would. She took the chain off and put her hand out flat. "Cane lives by the coats." He set it in her palm handle-first, a man at customs declaring everything. "You have my word it stays sheathed." "It can sulk with the coats for all I care." Inside, the last of the bass had died out of Silas's floorboards an hour ago; now the sounds below were the till drawer and chairs going up on tables. Her bike leaned against the wall with a Golden Empress thermal bag looped over the handlebars, and a first-year Contracts textbook kept the wobbly sofa leg honest. She unclipped the basket. The tabby poured out of it, put his nose to the skirting board, and set off on a border inspection that would take him till dawn. She filled the kettle because her mother had raised her right, not because he'd earned it. "Talk, then. How does anyone get past three deadbolts?" "They went through the window over the fire escape instead. The frame gave." "Took what?" "Laptop. A tin from the biscuit barrel. A silver bracelet." He drew a folded slip from his breast pocket, his handwriting small and ruled-straight down the page. "The papers got scattered and left. Every scroll, every notebook. Whoever it was wanted electronics, not text." "After sellables, then." She fixed him with the flat blue stare she saved for men who talked over her. "The curry house rang the police?" "Half nine. A constable looked at the window and wrote a number on a card. My man re-fitted the frame and changed the locks before midnight." He set a single new key on her counter. "For Eva. Or for you, if you'd rather be the one to give it to her." "You changed her locks." "The frame was broken." "You changed her locks without asking anyone." "Oui." She laughed once, at nothing, and clicked the kettle off before it could scream. Then the tea, two mugs, hers with the chip in the rim. "Right. Let's have the rest of it. Locks changed, key cut, police notified, cat relocated. You closed the whole thing out like a bar tab. Which leaves the part where you climbed my stairs to hand-deliver a tabby when a photo and a phone call would've done." He watched the cat. The cat watched the radiator. "Two months, Luc." "Oui." "Not a word through Silas. Not a note under the door." She stopped that sentence and binned the end of it. "Two months." He looked at her then. One eye amber, one black. The black one had never given anything away in his life; the amber did all his feeling for him, and it was doing plenty now. "I've stood on your landing twice before tonight. Both times I left before you answered." "That's not an answer." "No. But it's the true shape of one." She was good at waiting. She'd had worse teachers. She drank her tea and let the quiet pile up on him until he shifted his weight like a man paying for something. "Dublin." She leaned a hip into the counter. "Tell me what you did." "Sit down—" "I've sat down for two months. Tell me." "He came over in the spring." Lucien kept his voice level, courtroom level. "By the third week he'd found your delivery route. You were carrying food past his nose twice a day. That bike. That bag. Your hair where he could see it." She set her mug down before her hands made any decisions for her. "You knew." "I knew." "And you said nothing." "And I said nothing. I had a conversation with him about the sea instead. He found the return crossing very persuasive." "What did it cost?" "Less than he deserved." She did the maths out loud, because doing it in her head was going to hurt. "The Saturday. Silas let it slip the Friday after — said it like weather, 'must be a relief, your man Evan gone home.' He assumed I knew. He assumed that because you'd handled it, and you don't handle things you've told me about." Her voice stayed level. That cost her too. "The Tuesday before, you kissed me on the sofa in your office. So you kissed me with it already in your mouth." He didn't argue the timing. "If you'd told me—" "I'd have gone to face him. Myself. On my feet." She had walked that road a hundred times since, done it brave, done it beautiful. "You knew that." "I knew that." "And you'd rather I hated you." "I don't gamble with you, Rory. The odds could've been ninety-nine in a hundred. I'd have burned the table before the cards turned." "He decided things for me for three years." She said it flat, because the alternative was an orchestra. "Where we ate. Who I saw. What I was allowed to be frightened of. You did the same thing to me, Luc. Better suit, better manners. Same shape." "Yes." He took it with his chin up. "I could dress it up. I speak four languages; I could dress it up in all of them, and underneath it would still be yes." "Why?" "Avaros doesn't ask permission, and neither does the blood. When I learned he'd crossed the river to find you, some cold quarter of me ran the whole calculation in a breath and never consulted the rest. The rest of me has been ashamed since." "And it would do it again." "No." His amber eye held hers. "I would do it again. I'm done pretending the halves vote separately." "You kept me safe by making me small." He took that too, all of it, straight, no flinch. Then he nodded at her left wrist. "Bute Park. You were nine. Your cousin dared you to walk the wall by the weir." She glanced down. The little crescent sat in the lamplight, same as it always had. "It was glass." "A nail in the brickwork. You told me the first night, at Silas's. Two ciders in, you told me about your father's wig on the hatstand, your mother's red pen, Eva at eleven trading paperbacks like other kids traded stickers. I remember the nail, Rory. I remember all of it. I've had two months to check." "Don't." It came out quieter than she'd loaded it. "Don't what?" "Don't be the man who remembers the nail." "The man who remembers the nail is the only man I have." She crossed the floor. The boards gave her away with every step, and she kept coming. He went still — the stillness of somebody who knew not to frighten the thing in front of him — and she put her hand flat on his chest, felt the fine quick drum of him through the wool, and kissed him. He made a sound low in his throat, two months of it, and then one careful hand came to her jaw. Claws hit laminate behind them. Ptolemy landed in her abandoned noodles with his whole crime face on, one paw in the chow mein. They broke apart. Lucien looked at the cat. The cat looked back. "He has no shame." "He bit a professional runner twice tonight. Shame left that animal years ago." She stepped back an inch and kept her hand where it was. The heartbeat under her palm refused to slow down, and she decided to let it. "This doesn't square us." "I'd not presumed." "Dublin. All of it. What you paid, who you paid, the conversation word for word. I want the whole ledger, not your summary." "You'll have it by morning." "And the next time a decision shows up with my name on it, you bring it to me while it's still a decision. Not after it's done." He turned his hand over and closed it around hers against his chest. "That I can promise." His accent thinned the way it did when he meant something. "It will mean keeping you close to my business. Closer than is comfortable." "Lucky for you." She reached past him, hooked his cane off the coat hook, and pressed it back into his free hand. "I deliver."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"The basket wailed again [again]"
dialogueSentences81
tagDensity0.198
leniency0.395
rawRatio0.063
effectiveRatio0.025
96.75% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1540
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
93.51% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1540
totalAiIsms2
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"comfortable"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"comfortable"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences60
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences60
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences125
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen56
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1543
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions9
wordCount694
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity0.43
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity0.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Moreau1
French1
Silas1
Golden1
Empress1
Contracts1
Lucien3
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Silas"
2"Lucien"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences41
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1543
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences125
matches
0"stopped that sentence"
1"walked that road"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs87
mean17.74
std17.64
cv0.995
sampleLengths
08
144
212
313
44
514
618
726
82
918
1031
115
1213
137
1410
1586
1616
179
1813
192
2044
2125
2251
234
244
257
261
2726
2847
299
303
311
3223
3335
3415
354
368
3732
3813
392
408
4143
4213
432
442
454
4621
474
484
4989
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences60
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs120
matches
0"was doing"
5.71% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount5
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences125
ratio0.048
matches
0"Rain had beaten his collar; the rest of him stayed pressed charcoal and French."
1"Her hair still held the dent from the delivery helmet; she hadn't fixed it for him, and she never would."
2"Inside, the last of the bass had died out of Silas's floorboards an hour ago; now the sounds below were the till drawer and chairs going up on tables."
3"The black one had never given anything away in his life; the amber did all his feeling for him, and it was doing plenty now."
4"\"I could dress it up. I speak four languages; I could dress it up in all of them, and underneath it would still be yes.\""
5"He went still — the stillness of somebody who knew not to frighten the thing in front of him — and she put her hand flat on his chest, felt the fine quick drum of him through the wool, and kissed him."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount696
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount17
adverbRatio0.02442528735632184
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0014367816091954023
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences125
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences125
mean12.34
std10.69
cv0.866
sampleLengths
08
121
214
39
45
57
65
78
84
914
1018
1126
122
1310
148
1520
1611
175
1813
197
2010
2129
2227
234
2426
2516
269
2713
282
2927
3017
3119
326
3335
3416
354
364
377
381
3914
4012
4147
424
435
443
451
4621
472
485
495
61.60% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.408
totalSentences125
uniqueOpeners51
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences60
matches
0"Then the tea, two mugs,"
1"Then he nodded at her"
ratio0.033
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount39
totalSentences60
matches
0"She opened the door on"
1"She looked at the basket."
2"He shifted the basket to"
3"Her hair still held the"
4"She took the chain off"
5"He set it in her"
6"Her bike leaned against the"
7"She unclipped the basket."
8"She filled the kettle because"
9"He drew a folded slip"
10"She fixed him with the"
11"He set a single new"
12"She laughed once, at nothing,"
13"He watched the cat."
14"She stopped that sentence and"
15"He looked at her then."
16"She was good at waiting."
17"She'd had worse teachers."
18"She drank her tea and"
19"She leaned a hip into"
ratio0.65
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount56
totalSentences60
matches
0"She opened the door on"
1"Lucien Moreau stood on her"
2"Rain had beaten his collar;"
3"The basket wailed like a"
4"The basket wailed again"
5"She looked at the basket."
6"The basket looked back through"
7"He shifted the basket to"
8"Her hair still held the"
9"She took the chain off"
10"He set it in her"
11"Her bike leaned against the"
12"She unclipped the basket."
13"The tabby poured out of"
14"She filled the kettle because"
15"He drew a folded slip"
16"She fixed him with the"
17"He set a single new"
18"She laughed once, at nothing,"
19"He watched the cat."
ratio0.933
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences60
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences24
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"He went still — the stillness of somebody who knew not to frighten the thing in front of him — and she put her hand flat on his chest, felt the fine quick drum …"
62.50% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"He drew, his handwriting small and ruled-straight down the page"
1"She said, because the alternative was an orchestra"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"The basket wailed again (wail)"
dialogueSentences81
tagDensity0.025
leniency0.049
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.025
84.0025%