Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
51
glossingSentenceCount
3
matches
0
"not quite a smile, more the memory of one"
1
"felt like the last professional accompl"
2
"as if resuming an old appointment, and below them Brick Lane breathed its spices into the dark, and Rory pulled the milk crate close, and made him start from the beginning"
"The curry house below exhaled its midnight breath through the floor — cumin, cardamom, char — and it rose around him like weather."
1
"Something moved at the corner of his mouth — not quite a smile, more the memory of one."
2
"It was arithmetic — midnight, rain, a neighbor who banged on the wall if you breathed loudly, and the simple fact that she'd never once out-thought her own curiosity."
3
"It was a cramped one-bedroom stacked to the ceiling with Eva's books and scrolls and annotated madness, and Lucien moved through it like a man crossing a temple floor — careful where he put his sins, stepping over a leaning tower of folios without disturbing a page."
4
"She'd seen ledgers like it before — everyone in his world kept them, hers included since the month she'd started taking deliveries past the veil of ordinary London."
5
"— written in faded iron-gall ink, annotated in a spidery hand, struck through with one clean line."
6
"She'd learned that trick the hard way, the year she'd left Cardiff — you planted your feet and you read the document twice and you did not give anyone the satisfaction of your knees."
7
"Not the ledger, not the favors, not the clean line through her name — a half-demon fixer in a tailored suit sitting alone with an untouched saag because he'd been trying to be near her in the only way left to him."
8
"\"Rory.\" He said it in French first — or it came out in French, Aurône soft and ruined — and she watched four languages fail him in real time."
9
"It was the other kind — the kind you build toward for a year without admitting the blueprints existed."
10
"The amber eye closed last; she'd have sworn to that."
11
"All three, one after another, the sound of them clean and certain in the cramped little flat — the most honest thing she'd said in fifty-three days."
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
37
technicalSentenceCount
4
matches
0
"The ivory-handled cane rested against the doorframe as if it had been waiting longer than he had."
1
"It was arithmetic — midnight, rain, a neighbor who banged on the wall if you breathed loudly, and the simple fact that she'd never once out-thought her own curi…"
2
"It was a cramped one-bedroom stacked to the ceiling with Eva's books and scrolls and annotated madness, and Lucien moved through it like a man crossing a temple…"
3
"Ptolemy climbed onto his knee as if resuming an old appointment, and below them Brick Lane breathed its spices into the dark, and Rory pulled the milk crate clo…"