Run: 2026-09-02-01M1GRPPQDJD7Q0PMPSF6JB5CB

Run Details

Duration:
9m 17s
Cost:
$0.003832
Provider:
Z.AI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain came down Frith Street in grey ropes, and the green neon above the door doubled itself in every puddle. Inside the Raven's Nest the light sat low and yellow, maps of dead empires climbing the walls between photographs of men in heavy coats, while two old regulars argued about the weekend's offside and Silas polished a glass that was already clean. Rory kept to the quiet end of the bar, delivery bag on the stool beside her, phone face-down by her elbow, waiting out the lull before the dinner rush. She'd learned the trick of it from Silas: how to be in a room without taking up any of it. The door opened on a gust. A woman came in shaking rain from a camel coat, scanning the room the way people do when they're early for a meeting in the wrong pub — and then she stopped scanning. "Rory Carter." Rory knew the voice before she turned. She'd have known it underwater. "Rhian Pryce." For a heartbeat neither of them moved, as if the air between them had gone solid. Then Rhian crossed the floor and they attempted the hug, aborted it, offered hands instead, laughed, and ended up gripping each other's forearms like sailors testing the ice. "Four years." Rhian held her off and looked her over the way you check a coin for wear. "Four years, and I find you behind a bar in Soho. I walk this street twice a week." "I live upstairs." "Upstairs." "Long story. Sit." Silas was already drifting down the counter, cloth over his shoulder, grey streaking the auburn of his beard, the signet on his right hand ticking against the wood as he gathered the first glass. His eyes went over Rhian once — coat, shoes, the weight of the ring — and filed her somewhere. "What's it to be?" "Talisker. Neat." Rory laughed before she could stop it. "Since when do you drink whisky?" "Since about 2021." Rhian draped her coat over the stool. "Since when do you not?" "I'm working later." "Right." Rhian squared the drinks card as if it had offended her. "So how's the law, Carter? Still saving the whales? The working classes? All of Wales?" The old teasing, landing on new ground. Rory wiped a ring of moisture off the bar. "I deliver food. Golden Empress, up on Old Compton. If you've ever ordered the crispy beef — I carried it." Rhian's glass stopped halfway to her mouth. "I'm between things," Rory said, and heard the sentence slide out without a bump, the way lies do after four years of practice. "Wexford and Hale," Rhian said. "City firm. I do due diligence on buyouts. Money moving in circles until somebody gets dizzy." She drank. "I was going to do housing law. You remember. I had the miners' strike poster over my desk and I was going to sue the government for everything it had." "You were going to sue God. And win." "He'd have settled out of court." The joke came out flat and she looked at her own hand instead of Rory. "How are your parents? Your dad still eating junior barristers for breakfast?" "All right. Mum's volunteering at the school now. They ask after London. They don't ask after much else." "And nobody — at Christmas and that — nobody mentioned me?" "Would it have changed anything if they had?" Silas set a soda water and lime in front of Rory, unasked, and limped back down the bar to the regulars. The phone buzzed against the wood. An order: chow mein, Dean Street, eight pounds odd. Rory turned it face-down without looking at it. "You can get that." "It can wait." The two old men had moved on to the referee. One of them banged the bar about him. "And what happened to—" Rhian flicked her fingers. "What was his name. Evan." "He's in Cardiff. Last I heard." "Last you heard." "That's all anybody gets from me these days." Rhian turned her glass a quarter turn on the wood. The engagement stone caught the neon and threw a green fleck along the shelf. "I'm getting married. June. Oliver — he does something with structures. Debt, at the bottom of it. His mother sent me a spreadsheet for the table plan. You'd hate every minute of it." "Congratulations." "Don't." The word cracked worse than anger would have. Rhian pressed her knuckles to her mouth for a moment, then put her hand flat on the bar. "Last thing I had from you was a voice note. You, half-cut, going on about a curry, laughing at something, and then right at the end your voice went small. I played it for months. Then nothing. Grey ticks for a year. I rang the flat. I rang your mum. Your dad said you'd gone to London, you were fine, you'd ring when you rang." Her breath went out of her. "Two years ago he let slip about a flat above a pub in Soho. I came here. I stood across the road. I had a text written." "Why didn't you send it?" "Because I was a coward, Carter. And because some shameful bit of me thought, good, someone else is carrying her now. There were finals, then the training contract, then Oliver. You were one more person to worry about and I was twenty-two and knackered, so I let my best friend fall off the earth and called it closure." She said the last of it the way you confess to a crime. "Two years I've rehearsed that. It sounds worse in a pub." Rory looked past her at the maps. Old shipping routes. Every line a way out. "You want to hear mine?" "Go on." "I didn't fall off the earth. I was already under it." She turned her glass on the bar, watching the lime circle round. "That night at the Taf, end of second year. You bought the last round and I left before it landed. You shouted something after me — go on, lover girl — and the whole table laughed." "I remember it." "I'd just had a text. I walked home with my phone in my fist like a rosary." The old habit reached for a lie — a course, a fresh start, a bloke — and she let it starve. "You texted me for a year. I read every one. Night shifts, the little grey ticks, and I'd think, she's still there. And then I'd think, and that's exactly what he said nobody else would be." Rhian went still. Her eyes dropped to Rory's left wrist where the cuff had ridden up — the small crescent of old scar — and came back up to her face, and she asked nothing at all. "Say the word," Rhian said, "and I'll drive to Cardiff tonight and reverse the car through whatever's left of him." "There's nothing left. He made me a better liar than he ever was. That's the estate he left me." Rory reached over and took the Talisker, drank it the way Rhian drank it, neat and fast, and set the glass down with a click. "You look—" "Don't say it." "Same as ever. Same face." "That's the joke, isn't it." The laugh that came out of Rhian had no floor under it. "I used to be fun. Ask anyone. Now I bill in six-minute units, I drink like my father, and I'm marrying a man whose mother sends spreadsheets. And you — you were the one with the plan. Colour-coded revision. First in, first out. Of the two of us, I had money on you for the safe life." "I had money on me too." A bus went past outside, dragging its light along the wet glass. "Was I wrong?" Rhian's voice came down to almost nothing. "That night at the Taf. I watched you go and I thought, there's something she can't say. I thought it, and then I had another drink, and I let it go. Four years I've carried that round like a stone in my coat pocket." "You weren't wrong." Rhian nodded. She looked at her glass, at the window, at the photographs of men in heavy coats — everywhere except at Rory. "I'm sorry, Carter." "I know." "I texted you every—" "I know. I read them." Silas came back up the bar, refilled Rhian's glass without a word and set the bottle down between them where it could be reached. From behind the bookshelf came two soft knocks. He lifted the false panel with the ease of a man letting himself into his own house and was gone, and the shelves swung shut on whatever waited in the room behind them. Rhian watched the bookcase settle. When she turned back there was the ghost of the old grin somewhere in her face, buried like a coin at the bottom of a bag. "Four years, Carter." "Four years." The neon hummed over the door. The phone buzzed again beside Rory's hand, face-down, its light coming on and going out in the green dark, and neither of them reached for it.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences65
tagDensity0.246
leniency0.492
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1510
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
83.44% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1510
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"scanning"
count2
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"flicked"
count1
3
word"coded"
count1
highlights
0"scanning"
1"weight"
2"flicked"
3"coded"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences57
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences57
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences106
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen72
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1525
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions43
wordCount792
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity2.27
worstName"Rhian"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Rhian"
discoveredNames
Frith1
Street2
Raven1
Nest1
Silas5
Rhian18
Rory13
Dean1
Talisker1
persons
0"Silas"
1"Rhian"
2"Rory"
3"Talisker"
places
0"Frith"
1"Street"
2"Raven"
3"Dean"
globalScore0.364
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences47
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1525
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences106
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs71
mean21.48
std23.17
cv1.079
sampleLengths
063
149
239
32
412
52
644
736
83
91
103
1153
124
132
1413
1515
163
1727
1816
1920
207
2123
2253
238
2421
2512
2618
2711
288
2921
3023
314
323
3318
3413
356
363
378
3857
391
401
4126
4298
435
4482
4515
465
472
4859
493
99.11% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences57
matches
0"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs125
matches
0"was already drifting"
8.09% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences106
ratio0.047
matches
0"A woman came in shaking rain from a camel coat, scanning the room the way people do when they're early for a meeting in the wrong pub — and then she stopped scanning."
1"His eyes went over Rhian once — coat, shoes, the weight of the ring — and filed her somewhere."
2"\"I'd just had a text. I walked home with my phone in my fist like a rosary.\" The old habit reached for a lie — a course, a fresh start, a bloke — and she let it starve."
3"Her eyes dropped to Rory's left wrist where the cuff had ridden up — the small crescent of old scar — and came back up to her face, and she asked nothing at all."
4"She looked at her glass, at the window, at the photographs of men in heavy coats — everywhere except at Rory."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount787
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount17
adverbRatio0.021601016518424398
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0012706480304955528
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences106
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences106
mean14.39
std14.22
cv0.989
sampleLengths
021
142
229
320
46
533
62
77
85
92
1016
1128
1218
1318
143
151
163
1734
1819
194
202
217
226
2310
245
253
2612
2715
287
299
3020
317
3223
335
3418
3530
368
3721
3812
3918
4011
418
4221
436
449
458
464
473
4810
498
63.52% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.44339622641509435
totalSentences106
uniqueOpeners47
62.89% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences53
matches
0"Then Rhian crossed the floor"
ratio0.019
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount9
totalSentences53
matches
0"She'd learned the trick of"
1"She'd have known it underwater."
2"His eyes went over Rhian"
3"Her breath went out of"
4"She said the last of"
5"She turned her glass on"
6"Her eyes dropped to Rory's"
7"She looked at her glass,"
8"He lifted the false panel"
ratio0.17
26.04% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount46
totalSentences53
matches
0"The rain came down Frith"
1"Rory kept to the quiet"
2"She'd learned the trick of"
3"The door opened on a"
4"A woman came in shaking"
5"Rory knew the voice before"
6"She'd have known it underwater."
7"Rhian held her off and"
8"Silas was already drifting down"
9"His eyes went over Rhian"
10"Rory laughed before she could"
11"Rhian draped her coat over"
12"Rhian squared the drinks card"
13"The old teasing, landing on"
14"Rory wiped a ring of"
15"Rhian's glass stopped halfway to"
16"Rory said, and heard the"
17"The joke came out flat"
18"Silas set a soda water"
19"The phone buzzed against the"
ratio0.868
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences53
matches(empty)
ratio0
74.83% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences21
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Inside the Raven's Nest the light sat low and yellow, maps of dead empires climbing the walls between photographs of men in heavy coats, while two old regulars …"
1"The phone buzzed again beside Rory's hand, face-down, its light coming on and going out in the green dark, and neither of them reached for it."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences65
tagDensity0.062
leniency0.123
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
85.0418%