Run: 2026-09-02-01M1GRVGB9YM9KMF0XG6HK7331

Run Details

Duration:
5m 49s
Cost:
$0.062972
Provider:
Z.AI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain had followed Rory all the way from Pimlico. The last delivery of the night went to a basement flat off Wardour Street, and the man who answered paid in coins that smelled of the cold. By the time she wheeled the bike into the alley behind The Raven's Nest, her waterproof had stopped keeping the weather out and settled for keeping it in. Inside, the green of the neon came through the window glass thinned to a rumor. Old maps climbed the walls above the booths, and the black-and-white faces above the bar watched the room the way they always did, patient and unbothered. Silas stood at the far end turning a glass in a rag, holding it to the light like a jeweler with a stone he half trusted. "Rough shift," drifted down the counter. "Generous tips, though." She rang the coins out onto the wood. "That's me set for Christmas." He limped over, took a bottle from beneath the register, and set a measure of something dark in front of her before she'd got the helmet bag off her shoulder. His signet ring clicked against the glass. "Eat something after this." "You say that like I don't." "I say it like you don't." The whiskey tasted of woodsmoke and the end of a day. She got two swallows down before the door swung and let November in with it. A woman stood on the mat, shaking rain from a coat worth three of Rory's bike. Hair cut sharp to the jaw. A briefcase. A phone dying in one hand. She scanned the room the way people scan rooms when a hotel room is the alternative, and her gaze crossed the bar and stopped as if it had hit glass. "Rory." Rory set her glass down without a sound. "Hello, Carys." Carys crossed the floor with the walk she'd had at eighteen, all shoulders and purpose, then lost it a table out and just stood there. "I saw the green from the cab. I thought, one drink. I've been promising myself one drink since four o'clock." "Bad day or good one?" "Good one." Her mouth did something that had once been a smile. "That's the trouble." Silas drew a second glass from under the counter. "Sit down before you drip on my maps. What are you having?" "She'll have what I'm having." Rory pushed the neighboring stool out with her foot. "She's paying." Carys laughed—one short note, surprised out of her—and that at least hadn't changed. The rest had. At seventeen, Carys had been loud the way weather is loud: yellow coats, chewed pens, opinions at full volume. The woman folding herself onto the stool was spare and still, collarbones like coat hangers, and on her left hand the ring was gone but the pale stripe of it remained. "You cut your hair." "I cut everything." Under the lamp, Carys studied her. Rory's hair was plastered flat and the rain had gotten into the collar of her waterproof, but her eyes were the same startled blue. The only loud thing left about either of them. "You look—" Carys circled a word and landed on it. "Settled." "You were there when I wrote the plan in biro on the back of my school planner. Barrister by twenty-eight. Silk by forty." Rory turned her glass a quarter turn. "I'm three years off schedule and living over a bar." "You deliver food." "You married Tom." Carys held her drink without drinking it. "Geneva. The marriage isn't." "I'm sorry." "It was a beautiful wedding. Very organized." She swallowed. "The organizing should have warned me." While she hung her coat on the stool, her gaze traveled the walls—the maps, the faces, the tall bookcase at the end of the room with a seam of light showing at its edge. "Who are the photographs?" "Old customers." Silas limped off with the bottle. "Is that bookshelf a door?" "It's a bookshelf." He and Rory answered together, and Carys let it go, which told Rory she'd spent enough time in courtrooms to know when not to press. "How's chambers? Eva's mum said something about pupillage." "Finished in the spring. Family set in Cardiff. The ugly end of family—protect orders, contact disputes." She turned her glass by the rim. "I won today. Judge granted everything I asked for. The respondent had—" She stopped, started again. "Outside the court, the client held my hand and thanked me, and then got in a taxi to his flat. His flat. I keep a list now. The women who go back." Her thumb circled the base of the glass. "It's a long list." Rory kept her eyes on the counter. "That's work that matters." "It doesn't matter enough." Carys looked at her then, a long look, professional, the kind that inventories a witness. "You've gone somewhere I can't follow." "It's late. I've been on the bike since noon." Carys nodded the way you nod at an answer you're putting in a drawer for later. "I looked for you. Eva stonewalled me. I respected it for about a year, then I hated her for it. Four messages, Rory. A letter to your mum's. One reply, and it was a card with no address on it." "I got everything you sent." "You got everything." She absorbed that with a swallow. "You missed my wedding." "Eva showed me the photos. You had buttercups." "You were in none of them." The rain filled the pause. At the far end of the bar, Silas's rag squeaked against a glass. "Your father held a door for me at the Crown Court in April," Carys went on. "He asked whether I'd heard from you, and I lied before I'd decided to. He keeps your chair at Sunday lunch. Your mum told Eva's mum, and Eva's mum told Eva, and—" "I know about the chair." Rory pressed her thumbnail into the grain of the counter. Carys lowered her voice beneath the sound of the weather. "I saw Evan last winter. Castle Street. He was buying coffee like a person. He asked after you. He said you'd come back—said it the way you'd read out a train time." Rory's thumb found the crescent on her left wrist and set into it, small pressure, an old habit with a job to do. "What did you say?" "That I hoped not." "I'm sorry I believed his story for a minute. Even a minute." "He never let me finish a sentence." Rory lifted her glass. "Endings were his department." Carys reached across and took her hand—no announcement, the way they used to share armrests—and turned it over in the lamp glow. Her thumb settled on the crescent. "Your nan's garden in Splott. The tin bath she kept for the dog. Dai Pritchard bet you a Fruit Salad you couldn't clear it." "I cleared it." "You cleared it and landed in the beans, and caught your wrist on the rim on the way down." A laugh got out of Carys, low and real. "I carried your arm to the house like it was shopping. You were so pleased about the bet you forgot to cry." "Best scar in the year." "Best scar in the school. I told that story at every sleepover we ever had." Her thumb didn't move off the mark. "Whatever else there's been since—you don't owe me a word of it. Not tonight." Rory looked at the crescent, older than the friendship of the woman holding it. "It's still just the bath." Carys held her eyes, took her time over it, and let the answer stand. "Okay. The bath." She gave the hand back and reached for her drink. Silas came down the bar with the bottle and filled them both without asking. "Pump's playing up," he told the room, and retreated with his limp and his rag. Carys dug through the briefcase and came out with a card, heavy stock, her chambers embossed at the top. She wrote across the back in a slanted, quick hand and slid it over. "Mobile's on the back. The landline's chambers, and they treat messages like evidence." Rory tucked it into the inside pocket of her waterproof, in with the night's notes, where it would smell of ginger until laundry day. "Don't do another three years, Carter." Rory looked at the fresh measure, at the rain running the window in ropes, at the green of the sign breaking apart and reassembling on the wet street. "One more, then."
created_at"2026-09-02T09:57:55.188Z" 9/2/2026, 9:57:55 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags20
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences68
tagDensity0.294
leniency0.588
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
96.48% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1422
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
92.97% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1422
totalAiIsms2
found
0
word"scanned"
count1
1
word"silk"
count1
highlights
0"scanned"
1"silk"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences63
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences63
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences110
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen40
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1414
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions41
wordCount845
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.78
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory15
Pimlico1
Wardour1
Street1
Raven1
Nest1
November1
Silas5
Carys15
persons
0"Rory"
1"Raven"
2"Silas"
3"Carys"
places
0"Pimlico"
1"Wardour"
2"Street"
globalScore0.612
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences55
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1414
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences110
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs68
mean20.79
std18.83
cv0.906
sampleLengths
064
167
26
316
441
56
66
726
860
91
108
112
1225
1320
145
1515
1621
1716
1866
194
203
2139
2211
2340
243
253
2611
272
2815
2934
304
318
325
3328
348
3583
3611
3725
389
3956
405
4113
428
436
4418
4548
4615
4742
4823
494
94.12% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences63
matches
0"was gone"
1"was plastered"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs140
matches(empty)
64.94% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences110
ratio0.027
matches
0"Carys laughed—one short note, surprised out of her—and that at least hadn't changed."
1"While she hung her coat on the stool, her gaze traveled the walls—the maps, the faces, the tall bookcase at the end of the room with a seam of light showing at its edge."
2"Carys reached across and took her hand—no announcement, the way they used to share armrests—and turned it over in the lamp glow."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount852
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount13
adverbRatio0.015258215962441314
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0011737089201877935
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences110
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences110
mean12.85
std9.55
cv0.743
sampleLengths
09
127
228
315
426
526
66
711
85
930
107
114
126
136
1411
1515
1616
176
182
196
2030
211
228
232
2425
2520
265
2712
283
299
3012
3114
322
3313
343
3519
3631
374
383
396
4024
419
4210
431
4430
4510
463
473
487
494
63.33% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.41818181818181815
totalSentences110
uniqueOpeners46
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences61
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount16
totalSentences61
matches
0"She rang the coins out"
1"He limped over, took a"
2"His signet ring clicked against"
3"She got two swallows down"
4"She scanned the room the"
5"Her mouth did something that"
6"He and Rory answered together,"
7"She turned her glass by"
8"She stopped, started again"
9"Her thumb circled the base"
10"She absorbed that with a"
11"Her thumb settled on the"
12"Her thumb didn't move off"
13"She gave the hand back"
14"he told the room, and"
15"She wrote across the back"
ratio0.262
25.57% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount53
totalSentences61
matches
0"Rain had followed Rory all"
1"The last delivery of the"
2"Silas stood at the far"
3"She rang the coins out"
4"He limped over, took a"
5"His signet ring clicked against"
6"The whiskey tasted of woodsmoke"
7"She got two swallows down"
8"A woman stood on the"
9"Hair cut sharp to the"
10"A phone dying in one"
11"She scanned the room the"
12"Rory set her glass down"
13"Carys crossed the floor with"
14"Her mouth did something that"
15"Silas drew a second glass"
16"Rory pushed the neighboring stool"
17"Carys laughed—one short note, surprised"
18"The rest had."
19"The woman folding herself onto"
ratio0.869
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences61
matches
0"By the time she wheeled"
1"While she hung her coat"
ratio0.033
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences28
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"She scanned the room the way people scan rooms when a hotel room is the alternative, and her gaze crossed the bar and stopped as if it had hit glass."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags20
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Rory pressed (press)"
dialogueSentences68
tagDensity0.044
leniency0.088
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.029
89.5806%