Run: 2026-09-02-01M1GRXDM918H11MGZQT7A2C8T

Run Details

Duration:
5m 55s
Cost:
$0.002330
Provider:
Z.AI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Three hours on stakeout had taught Harlow Quinn two things about the Raven's Nest: the green neon above the door buzzed like a wasp in a jar, and nobody left before two in the morning. At 2:07, the door swung and a man stepped out into the rain with a leather bag slung across his chest. She knew the walk. She'd watched it on grainy footage eleven times. Quinn crossed Brewer Street with her collar up and her hands loose. Under the neon, the man's hood beaded with water, and a Saint Christopher medallion glinted at his throat. "Tomás Herrera." He half turned. Olive skin, curling hair plastered to his forehead, warm brown eyes that found her warrant card and went flat. "No soliciting." "Former paramedic. Three years with the ambulance service, struck off in March." She kept her weight centered, her voice level. "Your needlework turned up on two of my bodies. Same surgical silk. Same left-handed knots." "My patients live." "Mine don't." "Then we work different trades, detective." He shifted the bag higher on his shoulder. "Those two you're carrying around in your morgue were dead before I ever saw them. Somebody stitched them shut to keep them that way. I don't do that work. I undo it." "Then you can undo it in an interview room." He read the reach of her arms the way she'd read his, and bolted. Quinn went after him. Her boots slapped water off the pavement as he cut north on Wardour Street, hurdling a rack of A-boards, scattering a pair of club kids who shrieked and laughed like it was part of the show. Rain drove into her teeth. She keyed her radio on the move. "Quinn, Metropolitan Police. Foot pursuit, male suspect, northbound from Soho, dark hood, medical bag. Requesting assistance." "Copy, Quinn. All units are tied up at a collision on the Embankment. Nearest response is twelve minutes out." Twelve minutes. She'd watched Herrera slip through her fingers in Brixton, in Whitechapel, in a hospital car park in Croydon where he'd walked out of a locked ward like smoke through a keyhole. Not tonight. He swung left through a bus interchange, and she lost him for four seconds against the glare of a shelter. She didn't chase blind. She cut the parallel street, counted his rhythm in the puddle-splash ahead, and came out onto Hampstead Road two strides behind him. Close enough to see the bag bounce at his hip. Close enough to hear his breathing go ragged. Camden High Street was shuttered stalls and wheelie bins and a fox dragging a kebab wrapper into the gutter. Herrera vaulted the bins. His sleeve rode up and she saw the scar down his left forearm, white even under the streetlight, and then he was through a service alley and out the other side onto Kentish Town Road. He stopped at a stretch of blank brick where the buildings lost their nerve. Behind a mesh screen, faded tiles spelled out a ghost of a name. South Kentish Town. A station dead for a century, remembered by nobody but planners and pigeons. Herrera hauled open a steel door hidden flush in the hoarding and dropped into the dark. Quinn hit the stairs after him. A spiral iron staircase, one handrail, her phone torch jerking shadows across wet brick. Cold air rose past her, smelling of river silt and candle wax, carrying a sound she couldn't place — low voices, a fiddle played slightly wrong, the clink of glass on glass. The stair let out onto a platform. Torches burned along the tunnel mouth in iron brackets. Tarps hung between pillars, and behind them she caught shapes: jars, cages, a counter stacked with brass instruments that belonged in no operating theatre she'd ever entered. And across the mouth of the tunnel stood a gate, black iron, older than the station around it. A figure in a long waxed coat waited beside it, motionless, hood down to the chin. Herrera was digging under his collar, dragging up a cord. A small yellowed token swung free — bone, carved with lines too fine for her eyes at this distance. Quinn covered the last ten yards and slammed him into the gate. He was stronger than he looked. His elbow caught her ribs, the med bag spilled — gauze, ampoules, a rolled needle kit — and the cord snapped. The token skipped across the platform tiles. Both of them lunged. She got there first, scooped it into her fist, and came up with his wrist wrenched behind him, the scar ridged under her fingers. The gatekeeper hauled the gate open without a word. Herrera twisted free of her grip, stumbled through the bars, and turned to face her through them. Torchlight moved over his face. "Listen to me." His chest heaved. "Whatever you think you're chasing, it isn't me. Turn around. Walk back up those stairs and file your report." "Give me one reason." "Badges are worth nothing below the waterline. You come down here and you're just a woman with a bone in her hand." The gatekeeper let the gate swing shut between them and faced her. The hood tilted. "Token." Quinn held up her warrant card instead. "Detective Quinn. Metropolitan Police. I'm following that man." The hood drew back a fraction, and what she could see beneath it made her stomach tighten — a face too long, skin like wet slate, eyes that caught the torchlight and gave none of it back. "Paper." The voice came out like gravel shifting underwater. "You smell of fingerprints and restraint. Token." "Herrera went through with one of these." "Herrera pays his debts. His token, his passage." A grey hand extended, palm up. "The token opens for the hand that carries it, whatever hand that is. But the Market keeps what walks in until it chooses to walk out. Understand that before you spend." Her radio crackled at her shoulder. "Quinn, receive. Backup is still twelve minutes out. Hold your position and do not—" She thumbed the volume down. Twelve minutes. Her watch — the worn leather band her wrist had worn through eighteen years of service — told her the same thing the radio had. She looked at the gate. At the torchlight bleeding through the bars. At the tarp stalls and the wrong instruments and the fiddle playing its slow, broken tune. The Market stands until the moon turns, the gatekeeper had said. Three nights, and this place would be a rumor again, and Herrera would be smoke through a keyhole one more time. Three years ago she'd held position at a steel door in Hackney Wick and waited for the cordon, because procedure said wait. Backup had arrived in time to help her zip the bag. Quinn looked at the bone in her palm. Yellowed, light as a knuckle, carved with lines she now saw were letters in no alphabet she knew. "Detective." The gatekeeper's grey fingers flexed once. "In or out. The gate doesn't wait on the living." She put the bone in that waiting palm. The hand closed over it, and the gate ground open onto heat — torch-heat, body-heat, the smell of hot iron and dried flowers and something sweet rotting underneath. Voices swelled from the tunnel. Somewhere deep, a vendor laughed at a price. Quinn stepped through the gate onto the platform, and the iron swung shut behind her.
created_at"2026-09-02T09:58:57.938Z" 9/2/2026, 9:58:57 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"grey fingers flexed once [once]"
dialogueSentences25
tagDensity0.24
leniency0.48
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.08
95.93% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1230
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
87.80% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1230
totalAiIsms3
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"silk"
count1
2
word"stomach"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"silk"
2"stomach"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences76
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences76
filterMatches
0"watch "
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences95
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1238
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions41
wordCount984
uniqueNames22
maxNameDensity0.81
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn8
Raven1
Nest1
Brewer1
Street3
Saint1
Christopher1
Wardour1
Herrera6
Brixton1
Whitechapel1
Croydon1
Hampstead1
Road2
High1
Kentish2
Town2
Market1
Hackney1
Wick1
Three3
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Raven"
3"Saint"
4"Christopher"
5"Herrera"
6"Market"
places
0"Brewer"
1"Street"
2"Wardour"
3"Brixton"
4"Whitechapel"
5"Croydon"
6"Hampstead"
7"Road"
8"High"
9"Kentish"
10"Town"
11"Hackney"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences59
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1238
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences95
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs48
mean25.79
std19.29
cv0.748
sampleLengths
056
112
230
32
422
52
635
73
82
946
109
1114
1252
1316
1419
1535
1664
1758
1843
1916
2059
2170
2229
2312
2462
259
2622
2725
284
2922
3015
311
3215
3337
3416
357
3645
376
3814
395
4055
4132
4233
4326
4417
458
4641
4715
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences76
matches
0"was shuttered"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs157
matches
0"was digging"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences95
ratio0.063
matches
0"Cold air rose past her, smelling of river silt and candle wax, carrying a sound she couldn't place — low voices, a fiddle played slightly wrong, the clink of glass on glass."
1"A small yellowed token swung free — bone, carved with lines too fine for her eyes at this distance."
2"His elbow caught her ribs, the med bag spilled — gauze, ampoules, a rolled needle kit — and the cord snapped."
3"The hood drew back a fraction, and what she could see beneath it made her stomach tighten — a face too long, skin like wet slate, eyes that caught the torchlight and gave none of it back."
4"Her watch — the worn leather band her wrist had worn through eighteen years of service — told her the same thing the radio had."
5"The hand closed over it, and the gate ground open onto heat — torch-heat, body-heat, the smell of hot iron and dried flowers and something sweet rotting underneath."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount979
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount13
adverbRatio0.013278855975485188
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0010214504596527069
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences95
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences95
mean13.03
std9.06
cv0.695
sampleLengths
035
121
24
38
412
518
62
73
819
92
1020
1115
123
132
1414
1532
169
1714
184
1936
205
217
2216
2319
242
2531
262
2720
284
2922
3010
318
3219
334
3435
3514
3613
373
3813
3916
406
4114
4232
437
449
4527
4618
4716
4810
4919
75.09% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.49473684210526314
totalSentences95
uniqueOpeners47
45.66% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences73
matches
0"Somewhere deep, a vendor laughed"
ratio0.014
93.97% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount23
totalSentences73
matches
0"She knew the walk."
1"She'd watched it on grainy"
2"He half turned."
3"She kept her weight centered,"
4"He shifted the bag higher"
5"He read the reach of"
6"Her boots slapped water off"
7"She keyed her radio on"
8"She'd watched Herrera slip through"
9"He swung left through a"
10"She didn't chase blind."
11"She cut the parallel street,"
12"His sleeve rode up and"
13"He stopped at a stretch"
14"He was stronger than he"
15"His elbow caught her ribs,"
16"She got there first, scooped"
17"His chest heaved"
18"Her radio crackled at her"
19"She thumbed the volume down."
ratio0.315
55.89% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount59
totalSentences73
matches
0"She knew the walk."
1"She'd watched it on grainy"
2"Quinn crossed Brewer Street with"
3"He half turned."
4"Olive skin, curling hair plastered"
5"She kept her weight centered,"
6"He shifted the bag higher"
7"He read the reach of"
8"Quinn went after him."
9"Her boots slapped water off"
10"Rain drove into her teeth."
11"She keyed her radio on"
12"She'd watched Herrera slip through"
13"He swung left through a"
14"She didn't chase blind."
15"She cut the parallel street,"
16"Camden High Street was shuttered"
17"Herrera vaulted the bins."
18"His sleeve rode up and"
19"He stopped at a stretch"
ratio0.808
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences73
matches(empty)
ratio0
51.28% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences39
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"Olive skin, curling hair plastered to his forehead, warm brown eyes that found her warrant card and went flat."
1"Her boots slapped water off the pavement as he cut north on Wardour Street, hurdling a rack of A-boards, scattering a pair of club kids who shrieked and laughed…"
2"Tarps hung between pillars, and behind them she caught shapes: jars, cages, a counter stacked with brass instruments that belonged in no operating theatre she'd…"
3"Herrera was digging under his collar, dragging up a cord."
4"The hood drew back a fraction, and what she could see beneath it made her stomach tighten — a face too long, skin like wet slate, eyes that caught the torchligh…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
86.8545%