| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 22 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Nyx said softly [softly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 38 | | tagDensity | 0.579 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.045 | | effectiveRatio | 0.045 | |
| 85.08% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1676 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "very" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "softly" | | 3 | "gently" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 70.17% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1676 | | totalAiIsms | 10 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "trembled" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "whisper" | | 3 | "weight" | | 4 | "footsteps" | | 5 | "echoes" | | 6 | "pulse" | | 7 | "stomach" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "stomach dropped/sank" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 96 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 96 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 111 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 67 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1699 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 22 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 66.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 59 | | wordCount | 1411 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 1.35 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Nyx" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | December | 4 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Yu-Fei | 1 | | Nyx | 15 | | Rory | 19 | | Heartstone | 3 | | London | 1 | | Seer | 1 | | Isolde | 8 | | Do | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Yu-Fei" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Heartstone" | | 4 | "Seer" | | 5 | "Isolde" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Do" |
| | globalScore | 0.827 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 0.75% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 67 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "something like hunger, or its cousin" | | 1 | "l at once, not obviously, but she caught the" | | 2 | "not quite an answer, and turned away toward the pool" | | 3 | "quite swallow, and at her throat the Heartstone lay quiet as a held breath, waiting for its door" |
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| 82.28% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.177 | | wordCount | 1699 | | matches | | 0 | "not all at once, not obviously, but she caught them at it, foxglove heads swinging gently back t" | | 1 | "not obviously, but she caught them at it, foxglove heads swinging gently back t" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 111 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 47 | | mean | 36.15 | | std | 27.54 | | cv | 0.762 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 66 | | 1 | 54 | | 2 | 59 | | 3 | 97 | | 4 | 3 | | 5 | 49 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 30 | | 8 | 30 | | 9 | 23 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 14 | | 12 | 93 | | 13 | 4 | | 14 | 67 | | 15 | 49 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 24 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 57 | | 20 | 29 | | 21 | 94 | | 22 | 16 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 57 | | 25 | 18 | | 26 | 16 | | 27 | 95 | | 28 | 32 | | 29 | 30 | | 30 | 16 | | 31 | 18 | | 32 | 27 | | 33 | 77 | | 34 | 52 | | 35 | 10 | | 36 | 52 | | 37 | 37 | | 38 | 18 | | 39 | 19 | | 40 | 46 | | 41 | 16 | | 42 | 75 | | 43 | 10 | | 44 | 8 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 67 |
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| 97.95% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | | |
| 1.42% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 7 | | totalVerbs | 235 | | matches | | 0 | "weren't shaking" | | 1 | "wasn't blowing" | | 2 | "was breathing" | | 3 | "were flexing" | | 4 | "were running" | | 5 | "was ringing " | | 6 | "was falling" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 22 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 14 | | totalSentences | 111 | | ratio | 0.126 | | matches | | 0 | "Frost had turned Richmond Park into a photograph of itself — white bracken, white grass, oaks standing black and certain against a bruised December sky." | | 1 | "A fallow doe and a young stag stood at the edge of a clearing, ears forward, bodies angled to bolt — and simply would not step past a certain line in the grass." | | 2 | "Nyx walked beside her looking — as always — like a place where the night had forgotten to end, six feet of living shadow with two faintly glowing violet eyes." | | 3 | "The shimmer spread outward until it swallowed the gap between the stones, and Rory's last rational thought was that she was about to walk into what was essentially a soap bubble the size of a doorway — and then the bubble popped over her entire body at once, a film of cold breaking across her skin, her ears popping as if she'd dropped ten feet in a lift." | | 4 | "The sound of London — distant traffic, a plane, wind in bare branches — was simply amputated." | | 5 | "On the pearl-lit moss at Nyx's feet lay a shadow — thin, grey, faint — and it copied them a half-second late, arms rising after the arms had risen." | | 6 | "The flowers turned as she passed — not all at once, not obviously, but she caught them at it, foxglove heads swinging gently back toward her like a crowd pretending it hadn't been staring." | | 7 | "Somewhere ahead, a single note was ringing — high and pure, like a finger circling the rim of a glass — and it had been ringing, she realized, since the moment they'd crossed." | | 8 | "A single oak stood there, vast beyond sense, its roots rising from the earth like the fluted pillars of a drowned cathedral — roots thick as houses, arching overhead to form walls and vaults and ribbed aisles." | | 9 | "In the grove's sourceless light the Heartstone glowed like an ember drowned in honey, and it was still — no warmth, no beat." | | 10 | "\"Story of my life.\" Rory's breath caught as Isolde reached into the mother oak's root — into it, her hand sinking into the solid wood like a hand into water — and drew something out." | | 11 | "When Rory drew it, the blade threw light of its own — faint, silver, faithful — and the cold of it bit through her glove and into her palm, colder than the December they'd left, cold as the space between stars." | | 12 | "Fat, unhurried flakes, drifting through the black oaks, and the ground — Rory looked down and her stomach dropped — the ground wore a skin of fresh white, unbroken." | | 13 | "Rory laughed — a short, unsteady sound that the snow seemed to eat — and slid the moonsilver dagger inside her coat, where its cold pressed against her ribs like a hand." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1398 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "cold pressed against her" |
| | adverbCount | 48 | | adverbRatio | 0.034334763948497854 | | lyAdverbCount | 15 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01072961373390558 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 111 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 111 | | mean | 15.31 | | std | 11.89 | | cv | 0.777 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 25 | | 1 | 23 | | 2 | 6 | | 3 | 12 | | 4 | 38 | | 5 | 6 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 3 | | 8 | 4 | | 9 | 8 | | 10 | 33 | | 11 | 18 | | 12 | 8 | | 13 | 20 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 22 | | 16 | 29 | | 17 | 13 | | 18 | 2 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 30 | | 21 | 19 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 20 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 7 | | 26 | 16 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 14 | | 29 | 9 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 14 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 68 | | 34 | 17 | | 35 | 2 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 21 | | 38 | 14 | | 39 | 32 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 28 | | 42 | 19 | | 43 | 13 | | 44 | 1 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 17 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 7 |
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| 73.87% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 13 | | diversityRatio | 0.5135135135135135 | | totalSentences | 111 | | uniqueOpeners | 57 | |
| 84.39% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | | 0 | "Then Rory saw the third" | | 1 | "Somewhere ahead, a single note" |
| | ratio | 0.025 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 10 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | | 0 | "Her instructions, delivered three nights" | | 1 | "They were stone." | | 2 | "She was breathing summer." | | 3 | "She checked her phone: 4:47," | | 4 | "It changed pitch as they" | | 5 | "Her lavender eyes were the" | | 6 | "Her riddle-smile deepened" | | 7 | "It lay in the knot" | | 8 | "Their inbound footprints were gone." | | 9 | "Her phone was dead, a" |
| | ratio | 0.127 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 56 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | | 0 | "Frost had turned Richmond Park" | | 1 | "Rory's breath hung in front" | | 2 | "Isolde had chosen the date" | | 3 | "Her instructions, delivered three nights" | | 4 | "The deer had been the" | | 5 | "A fallow doe and a" | | 6 | "Rory watched the doe try" | | 7 | "The brothers of one root" | | 8 | "They were stone." | | 9 | "Bark had fossilized into grey" | | 10 | "The frost lay white across" | | 11 | "The air in that gap" | | 12 | "Nyx walked beside her looking" | | 13 | "Tonight they were fully solid," | | 14 | "Nyx's voice was always a" | | 15 | "Rory touched the chain at" | | 16 | "The Heartstone hung cold and" | | 17 | "Nyx studied the gap with" | | 18 | "Nyx lifted one black hand" | | 19 | "The seam dilated like a" |
| | ratio | 0.709 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 55.39% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 49 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "The frost lay white across the whole field and stopped between the two trunks in a clean ruled line, as if someone had drawn it there with a ruler." | | 1 | "The shimmer spread outward until it swallowed the gap between the stones, and Rory's last rational thought was that she was about to walk into what was essentia…" | | 2 | "Above her the sky was the colour of the inside of a pearl, and low on the horizon hung a white disc that could not decide whether it was sun or moon." | | 3 | "Foxgloves and poppies, snowdrops and bluebells and meadowsweet, all blooming at once in defiant wrongness, banked along a path of dark moss that wound away betw…" | | 4 | "When she turned, they were flexing their hands, opening and closing them, staring at their own fingers." | | 5 | "A single oak stood there, vast beyond sense, its roots rising from the earth like the fluted pillars of a drowned cathedral — roots thick as houses, arching ove…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 22 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde said, without turning around" |
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| 18.42% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 17 | | fancyCount | 5 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Rory quoted (quote)" | | 1 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" | | 2 | "Nyx advised (advise)" | | 3 | "Isolde murmured (murmur)" | | 4 | "they whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 38 | | tagDensity | 0.447 | | leniency | 0.895 | | rawRatio | 0.294 | | effectiveRatio | 0.263 | |