Run: 2026-09-02-01M1GS9CZ9YSZH7XT2EXX9X4TT

Run Details

Duration:
4m 31s
Cost:
$0.049968
Provider:
Z.AI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The cordon ran behind the Camden lock stalls, tape sagging between two scaffolding poles, and the constable at the end of it had the gray look of a man who'd been on his feet since midnight. "Quinn. Major Crimes." She held her warrant card at his eye level until he read it twice, then ducked under the tape. Rain had followed her beneath the awnings and sat in the close crop of her hair, the salt-and-pepper gone dark with damp. She took the service stair beside the dead escalator — she counted the steps without meaning to, eighty-one, a habit from another life kept as sharp as everything else about her — and came out onto a platform where white tiles had aged to the color of weak tea. A poster on the far wall advertised cigarettes at eleven pence. Torchlight from two scene-of-crime officers moved along the track bed like men wading a river. And in the center of the platform, inside a ring of chalk, a dead man lay with his arms folded across his chest. Detective Sergeant Cole straightened up beside the body, notebook open, and his voice carried the flat certainty she'd learned to distrust more than any lie. "Harlow. Thought they'd send you." He flipped a page. "White male, mid-fifties, good suit, good shoes. Throat opened ear to ear. Chalk ring, black candle stubs, a line of salt — the full panto. Third misper near these tunnels since March. It's the market lot. Kids trade rat bones for charms down here, there's a whole bazaar under Camden if you believe half of what uniform hears. I've got teams sweeping the tunnels now." "Pull them back." "You haven't looked yet." "I'm looking." She crouched at the edge of the chalk and let the torchlight cut along her jaw as she bent over the body. The pool beneath the man's neck had dried to a black dinner plate. His collar lay clean against his throat on either side of the wound. "Where's the blood, Marcus?" "It's there. Under him. Soaked through." "That wouldn't fill a teacup. You open a carotid on a living man, you get spray — on the chalk, on the candles, on the cuffs of whoever held the blade. There's nothing here. A tidy pool and a folded collar." She tipped her head at the arms crossed over the dead man's chest. "Dead men don't bleed like this, and they don't fold their own hands. His heart stopped before the knife went in." "Cold night. Clotting." "Clots don't rewind." He shifted his weight. "So they cut him after. Some ritual requirement. Blood's still blood." "Blood's never just blood. That's the entire point of it in a ritual." She lowered the torch until the beam raked flat across the tiles. Dust held a story down there, faint arcs sweeping in from the tunnel mouth. "Look at your ring." "I've looked at the ring." "It swerves." Her finger tracked the chalk without touching it. "Here. The line bulges around his left elbow. You draw your circle first and lay your offering inside it. This was drawn around a body already on the floor. And here — drag marks, coming down the platform from the tunnel. He died up the line and got posed down here." She swept the light across the candle stubs. "Your candles burned to nubs, but there's no wax on the chalk. Not one drip crossing the line. The chalk runs over wax that was already hard. They burned somewhere else and got planted — set pieces out of a bag." "Or the traders tidied up and redrew everything. They're careful people." "Careful people don't fold a corpse's hands." At the far end of the platform, a small woman knelt over the chalk with a notebook, red corkscrews escaping her clip, round glasses fogged at the edges. A leather satchel sat beside her, fat with books. "Doctor Kowalski, British Museum," Cole offered. "The inspector called her in to translate the scribbles." "They're not scribbles." She didn't look up from the page. "It's a warding sequence. Aldercott's Clavicle, 1647 — I wrote my thesis on it. Gates, thresholds, a keep-out written eight times over." She pushed her glasses up, tucked a curl behind her left ear, and finally raised her face. Freckles, green eyes, and the particular discomfort of someone standing in a murder scene by invitation. "And they're mirrored. Drawn backward. Whoever did this traced them from a photograph or a plate and never noticed the reversal." "Cult gibberish," Cole decided. "It's a door bolt." Her chin came up. "You'd carve this over a threshold to stop something crossing it. It's the last circle on earth you'd draw if you meant to kill a man inside it — and the first you'd draw if you wanted the police to believe someone had." Quinn watched her for a moment. "The market under Camden. When did it move?" Eva blinked. "Move?" "The Veil Market." She let the name sit there. "It shifts venue on the full moon. I've read the missing-persons reports, Doctor. Talk to me." "Last full moon was Tuesday night." Eva's voice dropped, as though the tunnel might take an interest. "Whatever door it uses down here shut three days ago. The traders are long gone." "Pryce puts the body at less than a day." Quinn turned to Cole. "Your satanic bazaar packed up Tuesday. The chalk went down last night. Someone staged a sacrifice in an empty church." Cole opened his notebook, shut it again. Before he could answer, the SOCO from the track bed came up the platform at a trot, holding out a flat evidence bag in both gloved hands. "Ma'am. Found this in his right hand, under the fingers." A small brass compass sat against the plastic, its casing furred green with verdigris, its face etched with fine sigils — kin to the chalk signs. The needle trembled against the crystal. "Antique." Cole tilted the bag. "Needle's jammed. Stuck on... whatever that is." Quinn gloved up, lifted it out, and held it level. She turned in a slow circle on her heel. The needle swung wide, dragged, and settled back to one bearing. She turned again. It swung back again, insistent, toward the bricked arch at the end of the platform where a rusted WAY OUT sign pointed into solid tile. "Jammed needles stay where you leave them. This one's working." She walked the platform with it, arm out, and the needle strained harder with every step until it lay flat against the crystal. Eva crossed to her, looked down at the little brass face, and went still. Her hand rose and tucked the same curl behind her ear again. "That's Shade work. The verdigris, the etching — that's a rift needle. It points to thresholds. Doors." She looked from the compass to the bricked arch and back. "He was holding a door-finder." "And there's no bone on him," Quinn said. "No token. Nothing carved, nothing strung around his neck." "Entry takes one. Carved bone. I've seen two in my life, and both were older than the museum." Quinn's thumb crossed the worn leather band of her watch. The last time she'd stood in a tunnel like this one, Morris had been at her shoulder and a door had opened where no door should be. She put that back where she kept it and turned to Cole. "He came down here carrying a compass that finds doors, with no key to open one. Somebody found him first. Killed him up the tunnel, waited for the heart to stop, opened his throat, dragged him onto this platform, and drew a pantomime circle around him so we'd come down with dogs and flatten the first trader we caught." She held Cole's stare. "Cancel the tunnel sweep. I want street-level CCTV on every access to this station for the last two nights, and look for anyone carrying a bag heavy with candles. And put a light on that arch." "And if you're wrong?" Quinn leveled the compass at the brick. The needle strained against the glass like a dog at a leash. "Then the needle's stuck, the circle's holy, and the dead man folded his own hands."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences50
tagDensity0.34
leniency0.68
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1365
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Marcus"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
74.36% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1365
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"traced"
count1
2
word"etched"
count1
3
word"trembled"
count1
4
word"crystal"
count2
5
word"etching"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"traced"
2"etched"
3"trembled"
4"crystal"
5"etching"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences52
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences52
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences85
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen65
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1375
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions22
wordCount687
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.16
worstName"Cole"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Cole"
discoveredNames
Camden1
Rain1
Sergeant1
Cole8
Freckles1
Quinn6
Eva3
Morris1
persons
0"Rain"
1"Sergeant"
2"Cole"
3"Quinn"
4"Eva"
5"Morris"
places(empty)
globalScore0.918
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences41
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1375
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences85
matches
0"put that back"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs49
mean28.06
std27.4
cv0.977
sampleLengths
036
122
297
323
425
574
63
74
82
948
104
116
1275
133
143
1515
1613
1726
184
195
20110
2111
227
2337
2415
2586
264
2751
2814
293
3025
3132
3233
3334
3410
3532
3612
3758
3810
3923
4026
4133
4217
4318
4449
4599
464
4719
4815
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences52
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs108
matches(empty)
75.63% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences85
ratio0.024
matches
0"She took the service stair beside the dead escalator — she counted the steps without meaning to, eighty-one, a habit from another life kept as sharp as everything else about her — and came out onto a platform where white tiles had aged to the color of weak tea."
1"A small brass compass sat against the plastic, its casing furred green with verdigris, its face etched with fine sigils — kin to the chalk signs."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount689
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"lay clean against his"
adverbCount11
adverbRatio0.015965166908563134
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.001451378809869376
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences85
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences85
mean16.18
std14.1
cv0.872
sampleLengths
036
122
222
349
411
515
623
725
89
965
103
114
122
1322
1413
1513
164
176
1854
1921
203
213
224
2311
2413
2512
2614
274
285
2910
3059
3141
3211
337
3428
359
366
379
3810
3939
4016
4121
424
438
4443
456
468
472
481
499
98.04% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats0
diversityRatio0.5882352941176471
totalSentences85
uniqueOpeners50
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences48
matches(empty)
ratio0
36.67% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount22
totalSentences48
matches
0"She held her warrant card"
1"She took the service stair"
2"He flipped a page"
3"She crouched at the edge"
4"His collar lay clean against"
5"She tipped her head at"
6"He shifted his weight."
7"She lowered the torch until"
8"Her finger tracked the chalk"
9"She swept the light across"
10"She didn't look up from"
11"She pushed her glasses up,"
12"Her chin came up"
13"She let the name sit"
14"She turned in a slow"
15"She turned again."
16"It swung back again, insistent,"
17"She walked the platform with"
18"Her hand rose and tucked"
19"She looked from the compass"
ratio0.458
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount45
totalSentences48
matches
0"The cordon ran behind the"
1"She held her warrant card"
2"Rain had followed her beneath"
3"She took the service stair"
4"A poster on the far"
5"Torchlight from two scene-of-crime officers"
6"Detective Sergeant Cole straightened up"
7"He flipped a page"
8"She crouched at the edge"
9"The pool beneath the man's"
10"His collar lay clean against"
11"She tipped her head at"
12"He shifted his weight."
13"She lowered the torch until"
14"Dust held a story down"
15"Her finger tracked the chalk"
16"She swept the light across"
17"A leather satchel sat beside"
18"She didn't look up from"
19"She pushed her glasses up,"
ratio0.938
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences48
matches
0"Before he could answer, the"
ratio0.021
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences26
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The cordon ran behind the Camden lock stalls, tape sagging between two scaffolding poles, and the constable at the end of it had the gray look of a man who'd be…"
95.59% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Eva's voice dropped, as though the tunnel might take an interest"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences50
tagDensity0.02
leniency0.04
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
87.9206%