| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 17 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 36 | | tagDensity | 0.472 | | leniency | 0.944 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 95.94% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1232 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 63.47% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1232 | | totalAiIsms | 9 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "whisper" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "footsteps" | | 3 | "pulse" | | 4 | "crystal" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 76 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 76 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 95 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 49 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 3 | | markdownWords | 3 | | totalWords | 1245 | | ratio | 0.002 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 13 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 70.97% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 38 | | wordCount | 949 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 1.58 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 15 | | Isolde | 11 | | Nyx | 5 | | Shade | 1 | | June | 1 | | Deeper | 1 | | Earth | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Hel | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Isolde" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Shade" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.71 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 50 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like heat over a road, a faint shi" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.803 | | wordCount | 1245 | | matches | | 0 | "not wind-whisper, but syllables, fragments, half a word repeated until it frayed" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 41 | | mean | 30.37 | | std | 20.19 | | cv | 0.665 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 47 | | 1 | 7 | | 2 | 41 | | 3 | 44 | | 4 | 42 | | 5 | 65 | | 6 | 60 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 34 | | 9 | 24 | | 10 | 39 | | 11 | 59 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 33 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 26 | | 16 | 24 | | 17 | 31 | | 18 | 47 | | 19 | 53 | | 20 | 1 | | 21 | 24 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 33 | | 26 | 17 | | 27 | 89 | | 28 | 54 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 12 | | 31 | 43 | | 32 | 34 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 8 | | 35 | 28 | | 36 | 28 | | 37 | 36 | | 38 | 21 | | 39 | 29 | | 40 | 58 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 73.42% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 158 | | matches | | 0 | "wasn't blowing" | | 1 | "was already moving" | | 2 | "was starting" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 13 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 11 | | totalSentences | 95 | | ratio | 0.116 | | matches | | 0 | "Ahead of her, Isolde moved between the oaks without breaking a single silver thread of it — no crunch, no prints, the rime unmarked wherever her bare feet came down." | | 1 | "\"It is not a path for finding.\" Isolde paused between two standing stones — oaks gone to pale grey stone, bark rendered in rock down to the last knot, each taller than a church door." | | 2 | "Rory stepped through and the world pushed back — pressure on her eardrums, deep-water pressure, then a pop, and sound returned wrong." | | 3 | "Green-gold light came from everywhere and nowhere — out of the moss, out of the petals, out of the veins in the bark — light rising from things instead of falling on them." | | 4 | "Wildflowers ran in every direction, knee-deep and brighter than any June, each bloom turning on its stem as they passed — not toward a sun, because there was no sun, no sky she could find, only that luminous green-gold depth in every direction." | | 5 | "Grass whispered at the edge of hearing — not wind-whisper, but syllables, fragments, half a word repeated until it frayed." | | 6 | "A low tree hung with seed pods, hundreds of them, and each rang as they passed — a soft, different note, a carillon playing itself for an audience of three." | | 7 | "Not in that voice — her own voice, played back at half speed, curious and sweet." | | 8 | "The whisper tried twice more and then, finding no purchase, tried Nyx instead — *Aldric* — and the cold at Rory's heel flared so hard she felt it through her boot." | | 9 | "An arch of ribs, white as the standing stones, wide enough to ride a horse through — the ribs of something that had never had a name on Earth, moss slung between the joints, pink flowers rooted in the marrow-hollows." | | 10 | "The water ran silver and utterly still, a mirror with no bottom, and in the mirror hung a sky — two moons, one green, one the colour of an old bruise, stars in patterns no Cardiff night had ever shown her." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 945 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "luminous green-gold depth" |
| | adverbCount | 36 | | adverbRatio | 0.0380952380952381 | | lyAdverbCount | 7 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.007407407407407408 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 95 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 95 | | mean | 13.11 | | std | 10.72 | | cv | 0.818 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 17 | | 1 | 30 | | 2 | 7 | | 3 | 21 | | 4 | 20 | | 5 | 20 | | 6 | 19 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 35 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 21 | | 11 | 22 | | 12 | 2 | | 13 | 2 | | 14 | 18 | | 15 | 2 | | 16 | 12 | | 17 | 13 | | 18 | 33 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 23 | | 23 | 19 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 7 | | 26 | 17 | | 27 | 15 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 43 | | 30 | 11 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 30 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 15 | | 36 | 11 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 21 | | 39 | 20 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 1 | | 43 | 18 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 8 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 12 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 30 |
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| 73.33% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 7 | | diversityRatio | 0.4842105263157895 | | totalSentences | 95 | | uniqueOpeners | 46 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | | 0 | "Then they poured sideways, and" | | 1 | "Instead she counted." | | 2 | "Then the bells." |
| | ratio | 0.048 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 8 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | | 0 | "they murmured, a whisper carried" | | 1 | "Their edges rippled, wet-ink ripples" | | 2 | "Her shadow went heavy and" | | 3 | "Her watch had stopped at" | | 4 | "She rapped the face." | | 5 | "she said, and put it" | | 6 | "Her full name." | | 7 | "Her hand rose without her" |
| | ratio | 0.127 | |
| 79.05% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 48 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | | 0 | "Frost had turned the bracken" | | 1 | "Isolde lifted her chin toward" | | 2 | "Nyx walked at Rory's left," | | 3 | "they murmured, a whisper carried" | | 4 | "Isolde paused between two standing" | | 5 | "The air between the stones" | | 6 | "Rory stepped through and the" | | 7 | "December vanished at the boundary" | | 8 | "The Shade stood at the" | | 9 | "Their edges rippled, wet-ink ripples" | | 10 | "Rory held out her hand," | | 11 | "Nyx considered her for a" | | 12 | "Her shadow went heavy and" | | 13 | "The grove opened around them." | | 14 | "Wildflowers ran in every direction," | | 15 | "The flowers tracked their footsteps" | | 16 | "Isolde's lavender eyes found hers," | | 17 | "Rory softened it." | | 18 | "The soil gave under her" | | 19 | "Grass whispered at the edge" |
| | ratio | 0.762 | |
| 79.37% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | | 0 | "If time here was negotiable," |
| | ratio | 0.016 | |
| 73.73% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 31 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx walked at Rory's left, solid for the moment, a six-foot silhouette that drank the moonlight rather than catching it." | | 1 | "An arch of ribs, white as the standing stones, wide enough to ride a horse through — the ribs of something that had never had a name on Earth, moss slung betwee…" | | 2 | "Isolde was already moving, bare feet printing nothing, silver hair drifting on air that had no business carrying it." |
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| 95.59% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 17 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde said, not breaking stride" |
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| 94.44% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 9 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "they murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "Isolde corrected (correct)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 36 | | tagDensity | 0.25 | | leniency | 0.5 | | rawRatio | 0.222 | | effectiveRatio | 0.111 | |