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Run: 2026-09-02-01M1GSMZG716FRFRSRX7X3GR37
Run Details
Model:
Z.AI GLM 5.3 (Reasoning, Max)
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Romance: separated couple reunites
Duration:
12m 13s
Cost:
$0.081339
Provider:
Z.AI
Evaluation summary
Score
Evaluator
Details Link
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
(details)
96.37%
AI-ism adverb frequency
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
(details)
63.69%
AI-ism word frequency
(details)
100.00%
Cliché density
(details)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
(details)
100.00%
Filter word density
(details)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
(details)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
(details)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
(details)
100.00%
Name drop frequency
(details)
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
(details)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
(details)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
(details)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
(details)
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
(details)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
(details)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
(details)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
(details)
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
(details)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
(details)
57.31%
Sentence opener variety
(details)
85.47%
Adverb-first sentence starts
(details)
55.90%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
(details)
81.79%
Subject-first sentence starts
(details)
100.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
(details)
100.00%
Technical jargon density
(details)
100.00%
Useless dialogue additions
(details)
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
(details)
94.6842%
Overall
Model input
System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>
Model response
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Meta
AI
Three knocks. Polite as a bailiff. I wrenched the door open, a complaint already loaded for Silas, and the words died behind my teeth.
Lucien Moreau stood on my
landing with rain beading the shoulders of a suit worth three months of my rent.
His cane hung hooked over
one forearm, ivory handle catching the stairwell bulb, and his eyes did their usual trick.
The amber one drank the
light.
The black one gave nothing
back. "Bonsoir, Aurora." I shut the door.
Ivory met the frame with
a click. Not a slam. A click. That was Lucien all over, stopping a door without raising anything. Voice, hand,
pulse
. "Rude. And after I took your stairs. Six flights. The lift in this building appears to be a rumour." "There is no lift." "Precisely." I shoved at the wood. It held.
His foot sat flat in
the gap, patient as a mortgage. "Five minutes." "No." "Your name crossed my desk tonight."
My stomach dropped through the
floorboards, past the Friday crowd, down into Silas' cellar. Below us, somebody had scored or somebody had bled.
The roar came up through
my slippers either way. "Silas handles men in suits. There's a bar right there." "I am not here for the beer." "You're not here at all. That was the arrangement." Rain needled the landing window. He let it. "Five minutes,"
he said, quieter, and quiet
on him was worse than shouting. "You will want them, Aurora. I promise you that."
I looked at the wet
prints his shoes had left on the stairs, at the door below, at every sensible exit in between.
Then I stepped back and
let him in. For the record: I hated every inch of it. He didn't sit.
He stood in the middle
of my sitting room as if the room should apologise, and his gaze took a slow lap.
The boxes still taped from
the move.
The red delivery bag slung
over a kitchen chair. My helmet on the counter, next to my father's Blackstone's, which had crossed two countries to prop open a bedroom door. "You still work for Yu-Fei." "She pays on time. Brokers I've met, less so." "I settled that invoice." "You settled half. Then you went dark for eight months." "Interest, then."
I filled the kettle because
my hands needed a job that wasn't his throat. Old habit.
He used to call the
kettle my tell, back when we were whatever we were. Back before Blackfriars. "You've got four minutes." "You look well." "Three." "There's a word for eight months of nothing, Lucien." "There are several. Most of them accurate." "Fine. Here's mine. Blackfriars."
I heard my own voice
go flat, courtroom flat, Dad's flat. "You put me on that run sheet knowing what the client hitched onto couriers. You knew, and you said nothing, and something followed me home for three nights. Three nights without sleep. I found out from Eva. Eva, who heard it from Silas, who heard it from the man you paid to stand under my window. That's the part I keep coming back to. You couldn't even be a creep in person." The amber eye did something I couldn't price. "You were never the bait, Aurora. You were the blade. I aim blades. That is the work." "I'm not your blade." "No." Quiet again. "Blades do not cost me sleep." The kettle climbed toward its shriek and neither of us blinked. Eight months, and that was the closest he'd come to it, and I hated how my chest gripped at scraps. "And then your office. That last night. You started a sentence and let me walk out before the verb." "I remember." He reached into his coat.
My pulse spiked before I
could school it, but all he produced was a folded page, smoothed flat on the counter with two fingers, the way other men deal cards. "Then let us do business. Every debt in this city that cannot be settled in pounds crosses the floor of the Bourse. Tonight's auction ran twelve pages. Page nine carried a
familiar
name."
I knew before he said
it. Eight months of not saying a name, and my body still knew it coming, the way a tooth knows cold. "Evan Pryce." The counter edge bit into my palms. "He's in Cardiff." "He was. He reached London five weeks ago and asked questions in postcodes that do not forgive questions. Two nights ago, he bought a calling." "A what?" "A candle, a name, and blood spoken into the wick. Old craft. Ugly craft. The holder asks the flame where you are, and the flame answers. It is how men like him find women like you, once the women have had the good sense to run." "He doesn't have my blood." It came out certain. It did not stay certain. A razor left behind in a shared bathroom. A toothbrush. Four years of living with him, and he'd had a whole flat to forage. "He had a home's worth of you to choose from." The words landed soft. Wrong kind of soft. "I am sorry." "For which part?" "All of it. In order, if you like." "Hilarious." "Rarely, these days." He tapped the page once. "Evan defaulted on the instalments. Debts of that craft compound nightly, and he has the fiscal discipline of a moth. The seller put the entire parcel on the block tonight. The arrears, the penalties, and the calling attached." "Attached to me." "Everything in that parcel attaches to you. That is the point of a calling." The kettle clicked off. Neither of us moved. My cheap wall clock did its tick-tock into the
silence
, and I
hated that clock
more than I had ever hated an object. "Who bought it?" He watched me the way he watched doors. "I did." The walls leaned in. "You bought me." "I bought a candle and a bad man's arrears." He straightened a cuff, a small fussy motion I had learned to read as discomfort. Lucien Moreau, uncomfortable. Note the date. "As of eleven o'clock, the calling answers to me. It will find you nothing but weather and
silence
." "And the debt?" "Wiped. Call it a hostile acquisition." "That's a reason. It's not the reason. You could have sent a note. You hate this borough. You hate my stairs. You have never once collected anything yourself." He crossed the room. Two steps, silent for a man in wet leather soles, and his scent arrived ahead of him, bergamot and rain and, under it, something faint and hot, like a match just struck. I turned for the mugs and his hand caught my wrist. Not hard. Enough. He turned my hand over, and his thumb found the small crescent scar the greenhouse glass left when I was nine, and
traced
it once. "Aurora." "Don't." "You never let me finish that sentence." "You never started it." His thumb moved over the scar again, slower, and I felt it in my knees, the traitors. "What I meant to say that night was this. I paid that man to stand at your door because standing there myself, every night, was the one habit I could not afford." Below us, the bar stopped. Not a lull between songs. Not last orders. The whole Friday crowd, Silas' roar, the slide of pint glasses, gone at once, like a held breath. A pub does not go silent at midnight on a Friday. A pub would sooner burn. Lucien's head turned toward the floorboards. Then toward my door. The chain. I hadn't thrown the chain. You never do, when you open up expecting Silas and get something worse instead. The stairwell bulb died. No
flicker
, no whine. A death. "Aurora." Barely sound. "The window. The fire escape. When I say now." "The window sticks." "Break it." A floorboard on the landing took
weight
. Another.
Whoever owned those footsteps was
in no hurry, and that frightened me more than running would have. I reached past Lucien and killed the lamp. If they wanted a show, they could bid on one like everyone else at the Bourse. He turned the cane in his palm. Steel slid from the ivory shaft, thin and pale as a lie. The door handle turned.
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
6
adverbTagCount
0
adverbTags
(empty)
dialogueSentences
63
tagDensity
0.095
leniency
0.19
rawRatio
0
effectiveRatio
0
96.37%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount
1377
totalAiIsmAdverbs
1
found
0
adverb
"precisely"
count
1
highlights
0
"precisely"
100.00%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
63.69%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount
1377
totalAiIsms
10
found
0
word
"pulse"
count
2
1
word
"stomach"
count
1
2
word
"familiar"
count
1
3
word
"silence"
count
2
4
word
"traced"
count
1
5
word
"flicker"
count
1
6
word
"weight"
count
1
7
word
"footsteps"
count
1
highlights
0
"pulse"
1
"stomach"
2
"familiar"
3
"silence"
4
"traced"
5
"flicker"
6
"weight"
7
"footsteps"
100.00%
Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
1
maxInWindow
1
found
0
label
"stomach dropped/sank"
count
1
highlights
0
"stomach dropped"
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
90
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
1
narrationSentences
90
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
0
"tries to"
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences
146
gibberishSentences
0
adjustedGibberishSentences
0
longSentenceCount
0
runOnParagraphCount
0
giantParagraphCount
0
wordSaladCount
0
repetitionLoopCount
0
controlTokenCount
0
repeatedSegmentCount
0
maxSentenceWordsSeen
72
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans
0
markdownWords
0
totalWords
1377
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions
7
unquotedAttributions
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions
17
wordCount
779
uniqueNames
9
maxNameDensity
0.64
worstName
"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity
1
worstWindowName
"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Silas
2
Moreau
2
Lucien
5
Friday
3
Blackstone
1
Blackfriars
1
Dad
1
Wrong
1
Bourse
1
persons
0
"Silas"
1
"Moreau"
2
"Lucien"
3
"Blackstone"
4
"Dad"
places
0
"Bourse"
globalScore
1
windowScore
1
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
47
glossingSentenceCount
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches
0
per1kWords
0
wordCount
1377
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
1
totalSentences
146
matches
0
"hated that clock"
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
89
mean
15.47
std
16.52
cv
1.068
sampleLengths
0
6
1
18
2
52
3
2
4
4
5
26
6
19
7
4
8
1
9
18
10
2
11
1
12
6
13
32
14
10
15
7
16
9
17
8
18
22
19
31
20
9
21
62
22
5
23
9
24
4
25
10
26
2
27
34
28
4
29
3
30
1
31
9
32
7
33
87
34
8
35
17
36
4
37
9
38
31
39
19
40
2
41
35
42
33
43
26
44
2
45
7
46
3
47
25
48
2
49
46
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount
0
totalSentences
90
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
0
totalVerbs
133
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount
0
semicolonCount
0
flaggedSentences
0
totalSentences
146
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
578
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
7
adverbRatio
0.012110726643598616
lyAdverbCount
2
lyAdverbRatio
0.0034602076124567475
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
146
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
146
mean
9.43
std
9.84
cv
1.043
sampleLengths
0
2
1
4
2
18
3
20
4
20
5
6
6
6
7
2
8
4
9
7
10
3
11
2
12
11
13
3
14
19
15
4
16
1
17
5
18
2
19
11
20
2
21
1
22
6
23
14
24
9
25
9
26
10
27
7
28
9
29
5
30
3
31
13
32
9
33
23
34
8
35
9
36
3
37
22
38
7
39
9
40
21
41
5
42
9
43
4
44
10
45
2
46
14
47
2
48
15
49
3
57.31%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
13
diversityRatio
0.3972602739726027
totalSentences
146
uniqueOpeners
58
85.47%
Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount
2
totalSentences
78
matches
0
"Then I stepped back and"
1
"Then toward my door."
ratio
0.026
55.90%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount
32
totalSentences
78
matches
0
"I wrenched the door open,"
1
"His cane hung hooked over"
2
"I shut the door."
3
"I shoved at the wood."
4
"His foot sat flat in"
5
"My stomach dropped through the"
6
"He let it."
7
"he said, quieter, and quiet"
8
"I looked at the wet"
9
"He didn't sit."
10
"He stood in the middle"
11
"My helmet on the counter,"
12
"I filled the kettle because"
13
"He used to call the"
14
"I heard my own voice"
15
"He reached into his coat."
16
"My pulse spiked before I"
17
"I knew before he said"
18
"It came out certain."
19
"It did not stay certain."
ratio
0.41
81.79%
Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount
59
totalSentences
78
matches
0
"I wrenched the door open,"
1
"Lucien Moreau stood on my"
2
"His cane hung hooked over"
3
"The amber one drank the"
4
"The black one gave nothing"
5
"I shut the door."
6
"Ivory met the frame with"
7
"That was Lucien all over,"
8
"I shoved at the wood."
9
"His foot sat flat in"
10
"My stomach dropped through the"
11
"The roar came up through"
12
"Rain needled the landing window."
13
"He let it."
14
"he said, quieter, and quiet"
15
"I looked at the wet"
16
"He didn't sit."
17
"He stood in the middle"
18
"The boxes still taped from"
19
"The red delivery bag slung"
ratio
0.756
100.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount
2
totalSentences
78
matches
0
"Whoever owned those footsteps was"
1
"If they wanted a show,"
ratio
0.026
100.00%
Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
25
technicalSentenceCount
1
matches
0
"I filled the kettle because my hands needed a job that wasn't his throat."
100.00%
Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags
6
uselessAdditionCount
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
1
fancyCount
0
fancyTags
(empty)
dialogueSentences
63
tagDensity
0.016
leniency
0.032
rawRatio
0
effectiveRatio
0
94.6842%