| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 13 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 37 | | tagDensity | 0.351 | | leniency | 0.703 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1480 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 83.11% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1480 | | totalAiIsms | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "warmth" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "crystal" | | 3 | "stomach" | | 4 | "whisper" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "stomach dropped/sank" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "eyes narrowed" | | 1 | "stomach dropped" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 90 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 90 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 114 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 43 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1495 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 11 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 89.08% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 38 | | wordCount | 1149 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 1.22 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 1 | | Rory | 14 | | Tube | 1 | | Nyx | 10 | | London | 2 | | Whitechapel | 1 | | Hill | 1 | | December | 3 | | Shade | 1 | | Nan | 1 | | Third | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Hill" | | 4 | "December" |
| | globalScore | 0.891 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 72 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like a hole cut out of the world" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.669 | | wordCount | 1495 | | matches | | 0 | "no shadows in this place but" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 114 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 54 | | mean | 27.69 | | std | 21.69 | | cv | 0.783 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 20 | | 1 | 12 | | 2 | 62 | | 3 | 25 | | 4 | 24 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 5 | | 7 | 81 | | 8 | 43 | | 9 | 36 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 71 | | 14 | 28 | | 15 | 24 | | 16 | 32 | | 17 | 16 | | 18 | 1 | | 19 | 30 | | 20 | 2 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 18 | | 23 | 58 | | 24 | 77 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 73 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 49 | | 31 | 30 | | 32 | 26 | | 33 | 61 | | 34 | 20 | | 35 | 36 | | 36 | 15 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 58 | | 39 | 14 | | 40 | 51 | | 41 | 16 | | 42 | 39 | | 43 | 47 | | 44 | 24 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 61 | | 47 | 30 | | 48 | 12 | | 49 | 34 |
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| 93.57% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | | 0 | "been carved" | | 1 | "were knotted" | | 2 | "were pinned" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 176 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 15 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 12 | | totalSentences | 114 | | ratio | 0.105 | | matches | | 0 | "All week it had burned against her sternum — on the Tube, in the shower, halfway up a delivery staircase with a bag of chilli prawns swinging from her wrist — a small coal that left her skin pink." | | 1 | "The burn had dragged them across half of London — Whitechapel, the river's bend, tonight up Richmond Hill with the moon setting thin and orange behind the trees." | | 2 | "Thirteen pillars stood in a ring, each taller than her father had been, each one an oak turned to stone — the grain still running through them like frozen water, bark ridges fossilised mid-ripple." | | 3 | "The ruby flared once — a red pulse that lit her knuckles — and went out." | | 4 | "The light came up out of the ground itself, or out of the flowers — wildflowers to her knees and far beyond, harebells and foxgloves and ox-eye daisies and things she had no name for, trumpets of a blue so dark it rang." | | 5 | "\"Nothing casts. There are no shadows in this place but the stones'.\" Nyx's eyes tracked down the pillars — and Rory saw it too." | | 6 | "Above the treeline hung a moon she didn't recognise — fat, high, climbing, in the wrong phase by a fortnight." | | 7 | "A path of pressed grass led inward, and beside it stood a hawthorn strung with ribbons — some faded to threads, some new and shop-bright." | | 8 | "Somewhere off in the warm dark a nightingale sang — full-throated, mid-December — and a laugh broke out of Rory before she could stop it." | | 9 | "A slow arc tracked around them through the flowers, folding and rising, folding and rising — a lane of pressed grass with nothing on it." | | 10 | "She was looking down into the sky she'd left — down at the up of everything." | | 11 | "Her eyes were a pale lavender, and behind her stretched a lane of grass where nothing had been bent, nothing broken — a path walked by someone who left no prints at all." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1145 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 24 | | adverbRatio | 0.02096069868995633 | | lyAdverbCount | 0 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 114 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 114 | | mean | 13.11 | | std | 9.3 | | cv | 0.709 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 20 | | 1 | 12 | | 2 | 12 | | 3 | 39 | | 4 | 7 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 19 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 14 | | 9 | 10 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 28 | | 13 | 28 | | 14 | 25 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 34 | | 17 | 13 | | 18 | 23 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 34 | | 23 | 21 | | 24 | 16 | | 25 | 10 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 12 | | 28 | 14 | | 29 | 10 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 16 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 1 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 11 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 1 | | 38 | 30 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 18 | | 42 | 16 | | 43 | 19 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 8 | | 46 | 10 | | 47 | 17 | | 48 | 2 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 78.17% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 5 | | diversityRatio | 0.49557522123893805 | | totalSentences | 113 | | uniqueOpeners | 56 | |
| 40.65% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | | 0 | "Somewhere off in the warm" |
| | ratio | 0.012 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 11 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | | 0 | "She pressed two fingers to" | | 1 | "They fed up to a" | | 2 | "It glowed a green-gold, like" | | 3 | "It smelled of honey, crushed" | | 4 | "She stood in a clearing" | | 5 | "She turned to look at" | | 6 | "She'd had her fill, once," | | 7 | "They went deeper." | | 8 | "It held the orange lamps" | | 9 | "She was looking down into" | | 10 | "Her eyes were a pale" |
| | ratio | 0.134 | |
| 94.15% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 60 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | | 0 | "Frost furred the grass of" | | 1 | "The pendant had gone cold" | | 2 | "She pressed two fingers to" | | 3 | "The shadow pooled beneath a" | | 4 | "The voice arrived as if" | | 5 | "The burn had dragged them" | | 6 | "Rory had walked in a" | | 7 | "A herd of fallow deer" | | 8 | "They fed up to a" | | 9 | "Nyx drifted along the shadows" | | 10 | "The trees opened, and Rory" | | 11 | "Acorn cups had been carved" | | 12 | "Moss grew on them in" | | 13 | "It glowed a green-gold, like" | | 14 | "Nyx's eyes narrowed to slits" | | 15 | "Rory lifted the pendant toward" | | 16 | "The ruby flared once —" | | 17 | "Rory rolled the crescent scar" | | 18 | "Pressure wrapped her whole body," | | 19 | "The distant hum of the" |
| | ratio | 0.732 | |
| 60.98% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.012 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 44 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "All week it had burned against her sternum — on the Tube, in the shower, halfway up a delivery staircase with a bag of chilli prawns swinging from her wrist — a…" | | 1 | "Her eyes were a pale lavender, and behind her stretched a lane of grass where nothing had been bent, nothing broken — a path walked by someone who left no print…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 13 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 68.92% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 7 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "She pressed (press)" | | 1 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 37 | | tagDensity | 0.189 | | leniency | 0.378 | | rawRatio | 0.429 | | effectiveRatio | 0.162 | |