Run: 2026-09-02-01M1GT10XH0FNKEATTX8J2Z35M

Run Details

Duration:
3m 29s
Cost:
$0.001571
Provider:
Z.AI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt gave with a click, and Rory hauled the door open on Lucien Moreau. Rain ran off the point of his chin and pooled on Eva's welcome mat, which had never once in its life welcomed anyone. His charcoal wool had gone dark across the shoulders, his platinum hair had surrendered its shape, and the ivory handle of his cane shone wet under the landing bulb. One amber eye. One black. Both on her. She moved to shut it. Ptolemy shot between her ankles and out onto the landing, threading a figure eight around the cane. "Three weeks," Lucien said, holding still while the cat completed his circuit. "The cat remembers me." "Ptolemy, inside." She snapped her fingers. The cat headbutted his shin. "Your friend threw a teapot at me when I asked after you. Good arm. She missed on purpose, I think, which was kind." "Good," Rory said. "She should've aimed better." She glanced past him at the stairwell — empty, out of habit, always out of habit — and hated that the checking came automatic. "How did you find me?" "Eva didn't sell you out, if that's the next question. I bought the CCTV from the curry house downstairs. You come out every Tuesday at seven with naan." "That's either romantic or alarming." "It's expensive." He lifted a hand from the cane. In it sat a folder, edges softened from handling, swollen with paper. "I brought you something. Then I'll go." She should have shut the door. She looked at the folder instead, at a photograph gone grey at the corner where it had been thumbed too many times, and stepped back into the flat. He followed, ducking under the low beam, and did the thing he always did in other people's rooms — lifted a stack of Eva's scrolls, read the top one upside down in a second, set them back exactly as they'd lain. Rain ticked off his hem onto the floorboards. The smell of cumin and fried onions rose through the boards themselves, the whole building breathing curry. "Say it fast." She kept the kitchen counter between them. "Whatever this is, say it and leave." "You asked me a question the night you walked out." He planted the cane and leaned on it. "I gave you four seconds of silence. I've replayed those four seconds every day since, and I've come to tell you the answer, because you earned it and I was a coward." "You had a file on me." Her voice came out flat, which took work. "Photographs. Me at twelve outside my father's chambers in Cardiff. My mum's family tree. Pages in a script I couldn't read with a word written all over them — Malphora. And in your handwriting, one word. Located. Like I was a parcel you'd signed for." "Yes." "So don't stand there and call yourself a coward like it's modesty. You hunted me." "I did." He set the folder on the table, careful of the ink-stained wood, and straightened it so its edges ran parallel to the table's. "A client came to me six years ago hunting a name out of an old story. A name that isn't yours — it's the word people use when they're looking for you. I took the retainer. I did the work. I found you." His jaw moved. "And then I sat in my office for one entire night with your photograph in my hand, and I understood what delivering you would mean, and I burned the contract instead. It cost me the retainer, two alliances, and a knife I still itch from. Then I kept the only copy of that file, because the safest place for it was in the hands of a man who would never sell it." The floorboard by the cooker creaked. Ptolemy, back inside, wound around her ankles, and she gripped the counter because the alternative was gripping something breakable. "Then tell me why." Her wrist ached where she leaned on it, the old crescent scar white against the wood. "You could've burned the file too. One more match. Instead you kept a folder full of me in your desk like — like stock." "Because if I held it, no one else could." He spoke four languages; she had watched him switch between them like a man changing coats. Now he stumbled in all of them. "And because the woman in that folder is Aurora Carter. The woman I know short-changes me on biscuits, argues about cricket with my contacts, threatens my clients with a bicycle pump. I wasn't going to hand you the other name on top of everything else. Every day you didn't know was a day it couldn't touch you." "You decided that for me." "Yes." No flinch. "And I'd decide it again, which is why the silence was the honest answer, and why it was unforgivable. Both true. I'm not asking you to like the arithmetic." "Was I a job?" It came out smaller than she wanted. "All of it. The dinners. The — you. Was that surveillance with better lighting?" He crossed the room. She let him, which felt like unbuckling something. "You were the one thing in six years that wasn't for sale." He stopped close enough that rain still hung on his collar. "I kept the folder to keep you, and I lost you by keeping it. There's the whole account. No reserves." She looked at the table. The folder sat there, fat with her own history, and she found she didn't want to touch it. "Burn it yourself. I don't want to know what's in it if you're standing here instead of it." "That's not an answer I expected." "Nothing about you is what I expected. That's the entire problem." Her hand came up before she'd authorized it and closed on his lapel, wet wool under her fingers. "You had four languages and six years and you couldn't manage one sentence." "I'm managing it now." His free hand covered hers. "Rory." She kissed him. He tasted like rain and the end of a long argument, and the cane clattered against the bookshelf as he let it fall, both hands finding her face, careful even now, careful the way nobody had ever been careful with her. Ptolemy complained from the floor about dinner. The folder sat on the table with everything Rory had ever been inside it, and neither of them looked at it once.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"He stopped close [close]"
dialogueSentences39
tagDensity0.41
leniency0.821
rawRatio0.063
effectiveRatio0.051
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1070
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
90.65% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1070
totalAiIsms2
found
0
word"silence"
count2
highlights
0"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences43
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences43
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences65
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen72
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1077
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions11
wordCount526
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity0.57
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory3
Lucien2
Moreau1
Eva2
Ptolemy3
persons
0"Rory"
1"Lucien"
2"Moreau"
3"Eva"
4"Ptolemy"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences30
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"felt like unbuckling something"
1"tasted like rain and the end of a long ar"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1077
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences65
matches
0"hated that the"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs31
mean34.74
std29.09
cv0.837
sampleLengths
016
160
222
316
411
523
636
728
85
928
1034
1166
1217
1350
1459
151
1615
17143
1825
1944
2089
215
2232
2325
2412
2543
2641
276
2842
2910
3073
97.10% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences43
matches
0"been thumbed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs88
matches(empty)
10.99% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences65
ratio0.046
matches
0"\"She should've aimed better.\" She glanced past him at the stairwell — empty, out of habit, always out of habit — and hated that the checking came automatic."
1"He followed, ducking under the low beam, and did the thing he always did in other people's rooms — lifted a stack of Eva's scrolls, read the top one upside down in a second, set them back exactly as they'd lain."
2"\"Because if I held it, no one else could.\" He spoke four languages; she had watched him switch between them like a man changing coats."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount524
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount15
adverbRatio0.02862595419847328
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0019083969465648854
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences65
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences65
mean16.57
std14.15
cv0.854
sampleLengths
016
123
229
33
42
53
65
717
812
94
106
115
1223
133
1428
155
1628
175
189
1912
207
216
2228
2341
248
2517
2610
277
2818
2932
3014
3145
321
3315
3425
3546
3672
376
3819
3920
4024
4125
427
4357
445
453
4629
4711
4814
494
81.54% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.5076923076923077
totalSentences65
uniqueOpeners33
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences40
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount24
totalSentences40
matches
0"His charcoal wool had gone"
1"She moved to shut it."
2"She snapped her fingers"
3"She glanced past him at"
4"He lifted a hand from"
5"She should have shut the"
6"She looked at the folder"
7"He followed, ducking under the"
8"She kept the kitchen counter"
9"He planted the cane and"
10"Her voice came out flat,"
11"He set the folder on"
12"His jaw moved"
13"Her wrist ached where she"
14"He spoke four languages; she"
15"It came out smaller than"
16"He crossed the room."
17"She let him, which felt"
18"He stopped close enough that"
19"She looked at the table."
ratio0.6
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount37
totalSentences40
matches
0"The third deadbolt gave with"
1"Rain ran off the point"
2"His charcoal wool had gone"
3"Both on her."
4"She moved to shut it."
5"Ptolemy shot between her ankles"
6"Lucien said, holding still while"
7"She snapped her fingers"
8"The cat headbutted his shin."
9"She glanced past him at"
10"He lifted a hand from"
11"She should have shut the"
12"She looked at the folder"
13"He followed, ducking under the"
14"Rain ticked off his hem"
15"The smell of cumin and"
16"She kept the kitchen counter"
17"He planted the cane and"
18"Her voice came out flat,"
19"He set the folder on"
ratio0.925
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences40
matches
0"Now he stumbled in all"
ratio0.025
83.33% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences12
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Rain ran off the point of his chin and pooled on Eva's welcome mat, which had never once in its life welcomed anyone."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"She snapped (snap)"
dialogueSentences39
tagDensity0.077
leniency0.154
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.051
82.1206%