Run: 2026-09-02-01M1GT2WYY6T4FBSGD2J2EVE77

Run Details

Duration:
7m 49s
Cost:
$0.071508
Provider:
Z.AI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The last deadbolt surrendered, and the door swung open onto rain, onto the smell of fried onions drifting up from the curry house, and onto a lecture Rory had ready for Eva, who owned a key and never once used it. The lecture died on the landing. Lucien Moreau stood in the stairwell light with his platinum hair unpinned and black with water, his charcoal suit ruined, the ivory cane silvered to the grip. His bottom lip was split. The bulb over the stairs caught his amber eye and gave up on the black one. "No." She put her shoulder behind the door. His palm met the wood, flat and quiet, and the door stopped as though it had found a wall stud. "Five minutes." "'No' is a short word. You'd think one of your four languages would have room for it." "Four languages, and I crossed London in the rain to use just that one." Water ran off his jaw. He let it. "Eva's in Dublin." "I know." "Of course you know. You probably know what I had for breakfast." "Toast. The heel of the loaf, because the shop on Hanbury shut early." She had eaten it dry over the sink and told nobody. "This is the problem, Lucien." Her arms crossed. "Men who know my breakfast. Men with files." "You could have texted." "Some things you deliver in person." "I do that for a living. You tip worse." He shifted his weight to come in, and stopped. His shoe sat an inch short of the chalk line Eva had drawn across the threshold, her sigils gone the colour of old bone. His mouth tipped toward it. "Eva's been practising." "You're not crossing that." "Wasn't planning to." He reached inside the ruined coat and drew out a folder wrapped in oilskin, its corners gone soft with damp, and held it out. Rain beaded off his wrist onto the paper, and that — the paper, not the man — decided her. She took it. "Marseille," he said. "Everything you found in my case. And twelve pages you didn't stay long enough to read." She flipped it open against the doorframe. Photographs. Evan, smiling in a way she'd paid a year to forget. Evan outside a Cardiff pawnbroker. Evan under a railway arch, shaking hands with something the camera hadn't liked — its face came out as a smear. Ledger pages. A contract, copied twice, her own name inked into the surety line in Evan's looping hand. Her thumb stopped on a date. Then on another. The earliest was stamped eight months before she'd ever known Lucien Moreau's name. "He borrowed," Lucien said. "Not money. Favour. When the bill came due and he couldn't cover it, he wrote you into the surety line and walked away whistling." "He put me up as collateral." "You'd left Cardiff by then. Debts don't check forwarding addresses." "Why do you have it? Why did you ever have it?" "Because I bought it." The folder's edge bit into her palm. She loosened her grip, finger by finger. "You bought me." "I bought him." He tipped his chin at the photographs. "His debt, his name, his mistakes. There's a difference, and it's the whole difference." "And the difference is why you're standing on my step at eleven at night looking like a lost umbrella?" "Tonight a man offered to take the debt off my hands. I declined. He collects in person, and he doesn't knock first. Two of his went to the Golden Empress asking after a delivery girl with a Welsh voice. Yu-Fei lost their order twice and drowned them in chilli oil they hadn't asked for. That bought me the hour I've spent on your landing." "You're bleeding because of me." "I'm bleeding because I was rude about his tie." She looked past him, down the stairwell, at the rain needling the streetlight. "I'm done running. Cardiff to London is the whole distance I've got left in me." "Good." A muscle worked in his jaw. "I'd rather stand a siege than watch you vanish twice." "Laila—" "Rory." The word came out flat as a slammed drawer. "Laila didn't make it out of Marseille." Rain ticked off the cane's handle. "No. She didn't." He moved to brace himself against the rail, and something in his side pulled a hiss through his teeth. "Putain." "You're hurt." "It's a rib. It'll be dramatic for a week, then boring." She'd taken half a step over the chalk before she caught herself. He watched her stop. She stayed stopped. Ptolemy arrived then, tail up, and leaned his whole spine into Lucien's wet shoe, purring loud enough to argue with the rain. She levelled a look at the cat. "Traitor." "He knows a warm thing when he meets one." Steam curled off Lucien's shoulders in the cold stairwell. "That's the half of me you keep complaining about." "You should go." "Rory—" "I'm fine." "You're holding your wrist." His mismatched eyes dropped to her left hand, the thumb pressed to the crescent scar. "You've done that since the greenhouse door in Wexford. You were nine." "That's in the file too." "No." Something crossed his face, quick, gone before she could name it. "That's in me. Some of it never made the paper." She started closing the door. A hand's width at a time, giving him room to leave like a decent man. "Tell Eva her wards hold." The door was a breath from the latch when he spoke. "It was never a job, Aurora." Nobody called her that. Her father, on the phone, at Christmas. Nobody else, and never in that voice, worn down to the grain. The door stopped under her hand. "Say it again." "You heard me." "Say it so it means something. One sentence. No ledger, no cover story. Why the file, why Marseille, why my doorstep in the rain?" He left the rain where it was, running off his jaw, and gave it to her plain. "You were never the mark. The night you kissed me outside the Empress, there was a camera in the car across the street, and being mine has never once been safe. So I gave them a man pushing you away. I let you keep the bruise, because the other thing you'd have worn was a target." "I wore it anyway. A year, Lucien. 'A mistake.' You let me carry that word for a year." "I know." "That's not an apology." "No. It's the truth. You're welcome to hate me from a safer address." She looked at him dripping on the boards, at the oilskin going soft in her grip, at the chalk line between them. Then she stepped over it. The landing was colder than the flat, and the rain went straight down her collar. She took a fistful of his wet lapel and pulled, and he came — careful, off-balance, his rib complaining, his cane clicking against the boards to catch them both — and she kissed him. He tasted of iron and rain. His free hand rose and hovered at her jaw the way a man hovers at a door he's been thrown out of before, and then it landed, warm as the cat had promised. They broke apart to Ptolemy complaining about the wet. She kept the lapel. "Get inside before Brick Lane works out what you are." "Eva's ward—" "Eva's in Dublin, and this week I live here." She hauled him across the chalk by the fistful of suit. "Rory's inviting you. Consider her persuasive." The door slammed. The first bolt went home. The second went home. The third fought her the way it fought everybody, and lost. She turned to find him dripping onto Eva's first editions, wincing at the stack as if it had cost him something personal. "Three deadbolts, Frenchman. You're behind every one of them tonight." She dropped the oilskin folder onto a scroll and headed for the kitchen towels. "So sit down, get that jacket off, and start with Marseille. And don't skip the parts that hurt."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences68
tagDensity0.191
leniency0.382
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1339
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
96.27% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1339
totalAiIsms1
found
0
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences68
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences68
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences123
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen65
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1344
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions21
wordCount749
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.67
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Evan"
discoveredNames
Rory1
Eva3
Moreau2
Cardiff1
Evan4
Lucien5
Rain2
Christmas1
Ptolemy2
persons
0"Rory"
1"Eva"
2"Moreau"
3"Evan"
4"Lucien"
5"Rain"
6"Ptolemy"
places
0"Cardiff"
1"Christmas"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences47
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1344
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences123
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs78
mean17.23
std16.61
cv0.964
sampleLengths
041
16
248
38
420
52
617
725
82
912
1013
1111
1216
134
146
159
1633
178
184
193
2046
2119
2263
2322
2428
256
2610
2711
284
2914
303
3124
3219
3364
345
359
3628
3717
381
3917
406
413
4220
432
4411
4519
4622
478
4827
493
94.94% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences68
matches
0"was stamped"
1"been thrown"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs132
matches
0"was, running"
73.17% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences123
ratio0.024
matches
0"Rain beaded off his wrist onto the paper, and that — the paper, not the man — decided her."
1"Evan under a railway arch, shaking hands with something the camera hadn't liked — its face came out as a smear."
2"She took a fistful of his wet lapel and pulled, and he came — careful, off-balance, his rib complaining, his cane clicking against the boards to catch them both — and she kissed him."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount745
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount10
adverbRatio0.013422818791946308
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences123
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences123
mean10.93
std9.99
cv0.915
sampleLengths
041
16
227
35
416
58
620
72
817
919
103
113
122
1312
1413
1511
168
178
184
196
209
219
2224
235
243
254
263
2724
2819
293
303
3116
327
331
3411
355
3621
372
3816
396
403
4113
424
4324
446
4510
4611
474
487
497
54.20% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.37398373983739835
totalSentences123
uniqueOpeners46
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences64
matches
0"Then on another."
1"Then she stepped over it."
ratio0.031
7.50% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount34
totalSentences64
matches
0"His bottom lip was split."
1"She put her shoulder behind"
2"His palm met the wood,"
3"He let it."
4"She had eaten it dry"
5"Her arms crossed"
6"He shifted his weight to"
7"His shoe sat an inch"
8"His mouth tipped toward it."
9"He reached inside the ruined"
10"She took it."
11"She flipped it open against"
12"Her thumb stopped on a"
13"She loosened her grip, finger"
14"He tipped his chin at"
15"She looked past him, down"
16"He moved to brace himself"
17"She'd taken half a step"
18"He watched her stop."
19"She stayed stopped."
ratio0.531
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount62
totalSentences64
matches
0"The last deadbolt surrendered, and"
1"The lecture died on the"
2"Lucien Moreau stood in the"
3"His bottom lip was split."
4"The bulb over the stairs"
5"She put her shoulder behind"
6"His palm met the wood,"
7"Water ran off his jaw"
8"He let it."
9"She had eaten it dry"
10"Her arms crossed"
11"He shifted his weight to"
12"His shoe sat an inch"
13"His mouth tipped toward it."
14"He reached inside the ruined"
15"Rain beaded off his wrist"
16"She took it."
17"She flipped it open against"
18"Evan, smiling in a way"
19"Evan outside a Cardiff pawnbroker."
ratio0.969
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences64
matches(empty)
ratio0
87.91% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences26
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The last deadbolt surrendered, and the door swung open onto rain, onto the smell of fried onions drifting up from the curry house, and onto a lecture Rory had r…"
1"She turned to find him dripping onto Eva's first editions, wincing at the stack as if it had cost him something personal."
86.54% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"mismatched eyes dropped, the thumb pressed to the crescent scar"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences68
tagDensity0.029
leniency0.059
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
86.6844%