Run: 2026-09-02-01M1GT3Z73C2WG1GG87RNM3V91

Run Details

Duration:
5m 56s
Cost:
$0.035654
Provider:
Z.AI

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The knock came at nine, when the curry house below still breathed onions up through the floorboards and rain ticked against the glass like a debt being counted. Three raps. A pause. Three more. Patient as weather. A knock that knew it would be answered. Rory set down Eva's notes. Not Eva — Eva was in Prague and had keys besides. Ptolemy lifted his head from a stack of scrolls, ears angled at the door like tiny antennae. She crossed the room and put her eye to the peephole. The fish-eyed landing, the bulb that had been dead since March, and beneath it a man in a charcoal suit, platinum hair slicked back like a signature. She didn't need to see the eyes to know them. One amber, one black. The knock had already told her everything. She undid the deadbolts anyway. One. Two. Three. Information was currency, and cool heads collected it — even when their pulse was doing something distinctly uncool against the backs of their ribs. Lucien Moreau filled the doorframe, dry in a city that was weeping on everyone else, the ivory handle of his cane gleaming at his gloved fist. "Rory." "You've got the wrong flat." "You've been here eleven days." Not a question. "The wrong flat is above Silas' bar." "Then you'll want to try there." She started to close the door. His cane didn't move to stop it — he was too practiced for that — but his voice was. "You've picked up a shadow. Green anorak. He's been on Brick Lane since Tuesday, and he holds a coffee he never drinks." She stopped the door an inch from the frame. Damn him. "Takeaway cups are props. It means he's paid by the hour, not by the job." The amber eye warmed. "There she is." "Don't." The word came out lower than she intended. "You don't get to be pleased with me. Not on this doorstep, not anywhere." "No," he agreed quietly. "Likely not for some time." Ptolemy chose that moment to make his bid for the stairs, a tabby streak between her ankles and out onto the landing. Lucien caught him one-handed against his chest, easy as breathing, and five hundred pounds of tailored charcoal suddenly wore cat hair like a badge. The animal began to purr loudly enough to be heard over the rain. "Traitor," Rory told the cat. "He has always had excellent taste," Lucien said, "and terrible timing. As do I. May I come in? The stairwell smells like a tandoor, and I'd rather your neighbors not learn what a half-demon from Marseille looks like when he begs." "You don't beg." "I am prepared to learn." She should have shut the door. She had run from Cardiff to London to stop standing in doorways of men who decided things for her, and she had promised herself there would never be a second doorway. But the rain was driving sideways into the landing, and the cat was purring in his arms like a small engine, and three months of silence sat in her chest with a weight she refused to name. She stepped back and let him in. He stood in the middle of Eva's flat and turned a slow half-circle, taking in the paper landscape — books buttressing the sofa, scrolls wedged vertical between the bookcase and the radiator, notes pinned to the curtains. "It's exactly like her," he said. "All of it could fall on you at any moment." "That's the general idea." She folded her arms. "Ten minutes. Talk." Lucien set Ptolemy down, and the cat wound once around his ankles and settled on his shoe like a claim. He did not sit. He watched her instead, and she made herself meet it — the amber eye catching the lamp, the black one drinking the light whole. Five inches of height between them, and she tipped her chin anyway, because she'd learned years ago that the ground you stood on mattered more than the ground you didn't. "Verrick is dead," he said. "Fished out of the Thames on Sunday with a ledger full of names and no heirs. That ledger goes to auction by Friday. Your name is in it. Page forty-one." A pause, precise as everything else about him. "Aurora Carter. Also known as Laila. What you carried for the Golden Empress in November. Your routes. Your face. Where you sleep." The floor seemed to tilt, one degree, the way it did when a delivery turned wrong at midnight. She kept her voice level because it was the only thing she owned completely. "You don't buy a ledger like that to read it." "No. Two of the confirmed bidders are from Avaros." His father's realm. She let that land, then let the older wound open alongside it, because it was the same wound, had always been the same wound. "You sold my name to Verrick once already. You set the price on me and never said a word." "I bought your life with it." No flinch, no softening. "Verrick wanted a war with Yu-Fei, and he needed a spark. You were carrying the match through the city in a takeaway bag. So I gave him your name — because then you were a hostage instead of a corpse." His gloved hand shifted on the cane. "You spent two nights in his cellar and you walked out. I made certain of both halves of that sentence." The lamp hummed. Somewhere below, a pan clattered, and laughter in Bengali rose up through the floor and dissolved. Rory had believed, for three months, that Yu-Fei's people had arranged the ransom. She had built a whole quiet architecture on that belief, and he had just pulled a wall out of it. "You never asked," she said finally. "What I'd have paid. Which version of that night I'd have chosen. You never asked." "No." The word had edges; he'd carried it a while. "I chose the version where you hated me and breathed. I can live with the first half. Not the second." Her eyes were burning and she despised it, so she looked at the window instead, at rain crawling down the glass in long silver ropes. "What did the ransom cost you?" "A favor. Undischarged." "To whom?" He was quiet for the space of two breaths. "Family." Of course. She almost laughed — would have, if her throat had allowed it. He'd pawned himself to his father's court to buy her out of a cellar, and then let her walk away believing he'd traded her like a crate of contraband. That was Lucien. He spoke four languages and not one of them was the truth about himself. "You walked me home that last night," she said. "Up the stairs above the bar. You had your thumb on my wrist —" she turned her left wrist over without meaning to, the small crescent scar pale in the lamplight "— and you said something in French. You knew I didn't speak it. You never translated." "I know." "What did you say?" "Rory." "Lucien." She used the flat tone she'd learned from watching him bargain, and she saw it land — the flicker in the amber eye, recognition and something rawer beneath. "Friday," he said instead, "I'm going to buy that ledger, and I am going to burn it in your kitchen sink while you watch, because you should get to see your own name turn to ash. And the shadow in the green anorak will be handled before he learns what floor you sleep on. Those are not favors. Those are repairs." "Your repairs come with ledgers of their own. Not this time." She stepped closer — close enough now to catch the cold-rain smell of him under the cologne, close enough that she had to angle her chin and he had to lower his gaze and the whole room narrowed to the space between two people pretending it was about logistics. "New terms. Anything that concerns me happens with me in the room. No trades over my head. No deciding which version of me survives. And when it's done — the truth. All of it. Even the parts you think are protection." For a long moment he said nothing. The rain filled in the silence. Ptolemy purred against his shoe. "Those are acceptable terms," Lucien said. "Say it plainly." "You'll be in the room. No trades. The truth." A pause. "Even the parts you'll hate me for." "I already hate you for them. That's what makes you safe." Something moved through his face — there and gone, like a fish under ice. He crossed to the door, and she followed, and at the threshold he turned, and before she could guess his intention his gloved hand came up and tucked a strand of black hair behind her ear, knuckle grazing her jaw, light as a held breath. Her whole body remembered him in one traitorous pulse. "The French," she said, and her voice did not come out level, and she let it. "Tu étais le seul imprévu." He said it softly, the way you'd return something stolen. "In English: you were the only thing I never saw coming." For a man who sold foreknowledge by the ounce, it was, she understood, a confession of ruin. "That's a terrible business model, Moreau." "It has ruined me beautifully." He pressed the cane into her hands — the ivory warm where he'd gripped it, heavier than it looked, something thin and patient inside the shaft. "Hold onto this. I'll be back for it." "You'll want it before Friday." "I'll want it before then regardless." He stepped out onto the landing, into the noise of the stairwell, hairline cat fur still ghosting his lapel. "Au revoir, Rory." She closed the door and drove the deadbolts home. One. Two. Three. Only after the third did it occur to her, standing in the lamp light with a demon's blade in her hands and a purring cat interrogating her ankles, that au revoir did not mean goodbye. It meant until we see each other again.
created_at"2026-09-02T10:20:01.134Z" 9/2/2026, 10:20:01 AM
model"z-ai/glm-5.3-20260816"
app_id182717
external_user(null)
streamedtrue
cancelledfalse
latency1682
moderation_latency(null)
generation_time356423
tokens_prompt788
tokens_completion8499
native_tokens_prompt766
native_tokens_completion7959
native_tokens_completion_images(null)
native_tokens_reasoning5798
native_tokens_cached384
num_media_prompt(null)
num_input_audio_prompt(null)
num_media_completion0
num_search_results(null)
num_fetches(null)
web_search_engine(null)
origin"https://ncbench.com/"
is_byokfalse
finish_reason"stop"
native_finish_reason"stop"
service_tier(null)
usage0.03565424
router(null)
user_agent"langchainjs-openai/1.0.0 ((node/v24.19.0; linux; x64))"
http_referer(null)
request_id"req-1788344401-zBD9ahN7q7QIQ0iQosZX"
session_id(null)
preset_id(null)
api_type"completions"
id"gen-1788344401-NZcxf45soZMe10ek3LHl"
upstream_id"2026090218200183a594797411444b"
provider_responses
0
endpoint_id"db975786-e7f6-4838-9e56-3e0b77f1bdc2"
id"2026090218200183a594797411444b"
is_byokfalse
latency1682
model_permaslug"z-ai/glm-5.3-20260816"
provider_name"Z.AI"
status200
total_cost0.03565424
cache_discount0.00043776
upstream_inference_cost0
provider_name"Z.AI"
response_cache_source_id(null)
data_region"global"
workspace_id"97e315e5-d303-487d-83c1-83180e8a13d4"

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags19
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"he agreed quietly [quietly]"
1"she said finally [finally]"
2"he said instead [instead]"
dialogueSentences60
tagDensity0.317
leniency0.633
rawRatio0.158
effectiveRatio0.1
91.04% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1675
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
1
adverb"completely"
count1
2
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"completely"
2"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
79.10% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1675
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"pulse"
count2
1
word"gleaming"
count1
2
word"silence"
count2
3
word"weight"
count1
4
word"flicker"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"gleaming"
2"silence"
3"weight"
4"flicker"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences88
matches(empty)
77.92% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences88
filterMatches
0"see"
hedgeMatches
0"started to"
1"began to"
2"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences124
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen61
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1688
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions20
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions31
wordCount1067
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity0.56
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Eva4
Prague1
March1
Moreau1
Ptolemy4
Lucien6
Cardiff1
London1
Bengali1
Yu-Fei1
Three4
Rory3
One3
persons
0"Eva"
1"Moreau"
2"Ptolemy"
3"Lucien"
4"Yu-Fei"
5"Rory"
6"One"
places
0"Prague"
1"Cardiff"
2"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences54
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1688
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences124
matches
0"chose that moment"
1"let that land"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs59
mean28.61
std24.54
cv0.858
sampleLengths
045
133
259
332
426
51
65
715
831
922
1026
117
1223
139
1459
155
1641
173
185
1974
207
2153
2211
2378
2465
2542
269
2746
2877
2919
3054
3130
3231
333
342
3510
3660
3756
382
394
401
4129
4261
43101
4418
456
463
4718
4811
4968
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences88
matches
0"being counted"
19.82% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount5
totalVerbs185
matches
0"was doing"
1"was weeping"
2"was driving"
3"was purring"
4"were burning"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount11
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences11
totalSentences124
ratio0.089
matches
0"Not Eva — Eva was in Prague and had keys besides."
1"Information was currency, and cool heads collected it — even when their pulse was doing something distinctly uncool against the backs of their ribs."
2"His cane didn't move to stop it — he was too practiced for that — but his voice was."
3"He stood in the middle of Eva's flat and turned a slow half-circle, taking in the paper landscape — books buttressing the sofa, scrolls wedged vertical between the bookcase and the radiator, notes pinned to the curtains."
4"He watched her instead, and she made herself meet it — the amber eye catching the lamp, the black one drinking the light whole."
5"\"No.\" The word had edges; he'd carried it a while."
6"She almost laughed — would have, if her throat had allowed it."
7"\"Lucien.\" She used the flat tone she'd learned from watching him bargain, and she saw it land — the flicker in the amber eye, recognition and something rawer beneath."
8"\"Your repairs come with ledgers of their own. Not this time.\" She stepped closer — close enough now to catch the cold-rain smell of him under the cologne, close enough that she had to angle her chin and he had to lower his gaze and the whole room narrowed to the space between two people pretending it was about logistics."
9"Something moved through his face — there and gone, like a fish under ice."
10"He pressed the cane into her hands — the ivory warm where he'd gripped it, heavier than it looked, something thin and patient inside the shaft."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1061
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount37
adverbRatio0.034872761545711596
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.008482563619227144
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences124
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences124
mean13.61
std12.73
cv0.935
sampleLengths
028
12
22
32
43
58
65
711
817
911
1027
1110
124
137
145
151
161
171
1824
1926
201
215
228
237
2412
2519
2622
279
282
2915
304
313
329
3314
344
355
3622
3724
3813
395
4041
413
425
436
4431
4537
467
4737
486
4910
68.82% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.4274193548387097
totalSentences124
uniqueOpeners53
93.90% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences71
matches
0"Somewhere below, a pan clattered,"
1"Only after the third did"
ratio0.028
17.18% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount36
totalSentences71
matches
0"She crossed the room and"
1"She didn't need to see"
2"She undid the deadbolts anyway."
3"She started to close the"
4"His cane didn't move to"
5"She stopped the door an"
6"he agreed quietly"
7"She should have shut the"
8"She had run from Cardiff"
9"She stepped back and let"
10"He stood in the middle"
11"She folded her arms"
12"He did not sit."
13"He watched her instead, and"
14"She kept her voice level"
15"His father's realm."
16"She let that land, then"
17"His gloved hand shifted on"
18"She had built a whole"
19"she said finally"
ratio0.507
37.46% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount60
totalSentences71
matches
0"The knock came at nine,"
1"A knock that knew it"
2"Rory set down Eva's notes."
3"Ptolemy lifted his head from"
4"She crossed the room and"
5"The fish-eyed landing, the bulb"
6"She didn't need to see"
7"The knock had already told"
8"She undid the deadbolts anyway."
9"Information was currency, and cool"
10"Lucien Moreau filled the doorframe,"
11"She started to close the"
12"His cane didn't move to"
13"She stopped the door an"
14"The amber eye warmed."
15"The word came out lower"
16"he agreed quietly"
17"Ptolemy chose that moment to"
18"Lucien caught him one-handed against"
19"The animal began to purr"
ratio0.845
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences71
matches(empty)
ratio0
98.21% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences32
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The fish-eyed landing, the bulb that had been dead since March, and beneath it a man in a charcoal suit, platinum hair slicked back like a signature."
1"Lucien Moreau filled the doorframe, dry in a city that was weeping on everyone else, the ivory handle of his cane gleaming at his gloved fist."
98.68% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags19
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she understood, a confession of ruin"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"he agreed quietly (agree)"
dialogueSentences60
tagDensity0.167
leniency0.333
rawRatio0.1
effectiveRatio0.033
82.7384%