Run: 2026-09-02-01M1GTF25E64YPH80E9PS3FBC4

Run Details

Duration:
5m 17s
Cost:
$0.002655
Provider:
Z.AI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The gates of Richmond Park locked at dusk. Rory swung over them at half eleven anyway, dropped to the tarmac on the far side, and stood a moment while the bars printed stripes across her trainers. The Heartstone Pendant lay against her sternum, hot as a coin out of the dryer. It had kept a double-beat since Tuesday — pulse, pulse, pause — and it quickened now as she faced into the park, eased as she turned back toward the road. A compass cut from gemstone and heat. Her phone buzzed. Silas. "Tell me you're at home." She started walking. "Define home." "The flat above my bar, Rory. That one." The road unspooled pale under a half-moon. "It hasn't stopped pulsing since Tuesday. You know what that means." "Hel portals. I know what it means. I also know Isolde shut the grove a month ago, and I know nobody sane walks Richmond after dark." "Then something's opened a door in the one bit of London that isn't London." A plane should have been crossing overhead — Richmond sat under the Heathrow approach, and she'd stopped hearing the engines years ago the way you stop hearing a clock. The sky sat empty. No contrail, no groan, nothing. "If a crack turns into a door while I'm asleep—" "Go at dawn. I'll come with you. Daylight, numbers, Isolde's rules." "Dawn's a day late." She put him on speaker and wedged the phone into her jacket. Chilli oil from the Golden Empress still clung to the collar; she'd come straight off her last delivery without stopping. "Go back to your pub. I'll ring you when I'm out." "Rory—" She ended the call. The park took the click and gave nothing back. The silence had a floor to it. Somewhere beyond the trees the city carried on, but the sound stopped at the treeline as if it had met glass. Her breath came back to her louder than it should. Dew silvered the grass on both sides of the road. The first deer stood at the verge alone, a fallow doe with its head high. Not grazing. Not moving. She gave it a wide berth and it turned with her — not its head, its whole body, a slow swivel on hooves that made no sound. Farther on, more of them waited between the oaks in a loose line, and the heads came round one after another as she passed, a wave rolling down a stand at a match. "Evening." Her voice dropped flat and died a yard from her mouth. None of the deer blinked. She counted eleven. Three steps later she counted again and made fourteen, and the three new ones stood at the back, taller than the rest, shoulders level with her chin. Their eyes gave back the moonlight all at once, coins at the bottom of a well. Deer ran from people; everyone who walked this park knew that much. These held their ground and watched her with the patience of furniture. A pace-wide strip of grass ran off the road into the dark, and it was dry. Every blade around it wore its bead of dew. The strip had been pressed flat by weight, and it curved away in the direction the pendant pulled. "Or someone's had a motorbike through here." Her voice again, and again it died too soon, and this time the silence after it lasted a beat longer than it should have. Something kept pace with her beyond the oaks. She never caught it head-on — a suggestion of movement at the rim of her vision, tall, unhurried, matching her stride for stride. When she turned, trunks and moonlight. When she faced forward, the movement resumed, nearer. She stopped. It stopped. "All right." She lifted her chin at the trees. "I see you. Come out or rack off." Grass moved in a wind she couldn't feel. No branch lifted anywhere. 23:47, said the phone. A hundred yards on: 23:47. The battery had read 38 percent at the gate; it read 12 now with the phone idle in her pocket. The screen dimmed, and in the black glass a shape stood behind her left shoulder, narrow and long and still. She spun. Road, grass, oaks, the deer at the treeline, all of them facing her. The phone rang in her hand with the screen black. She answered on the second ring, thumb moving before her brain caught up. Silas' voice came out of the speaker, flat, each syllable the same distance from the last. "You should have waited for dawn." "Silas?" "You should have waited for dawn." The call dropped. She pressed the power button, got nothing — then it rang again, and this time it played the whole conversation back. Both halves. Her half and his, word for word, with a hiss underneath like tape. It rolled past the point where she'd hung up, through a gap, through breath, and then her own voice said, "All right. I see you. Come out or rack off." Words she hadn't said yet. She said them. The same line, the same flat pitch, dragged up out of her throat while she stood there listening to it happen, and the phone went dark at one percent in her palm. The boundary arrived all at once. Oaks grown into pillars stood in a ring, trunks wider than doorways, bark split into deep furrows, the whole ring leaning inward the way an argument leans in. Above them the canopy shut like a lid. Wildflowers covered the ground in their hundreds, open at midnight out of season, every bloom turned toward the center of the ring. The silver chain had gone warm at her nape, and crimson light leaked through the neck of her jacket — the Heartstone lit from inside, no bigger than her thumbnail and burning like an ember. At her left wrist the old crescent scar went tight and hot. She crossed the line of roots. The world's sound went out. Not faded — out, like a plug pulled. No owl, no wind, no city. Her footsteps arrived a half-beat late, each one landing after her foot had already committed to the next. On her watch the second hand stood between the seven and the eight, trembling, unwilling to choose. The clearing lay open under a moon hung in the wrong quarter of the sky. Bootprints crossed the flowers ahead of her. Her boots. Her tread, the worn patch on the left sole printed clean in the flattened blooms, leading in — and none leading out. The pendant beat its double-beat. And something under the ground, under the flowers, beat back — off the beat, a counterpoint, the two rhythms fitting together the way a key fits a lock it was cut for. She stood at the center of the grove with her fists in her pockets and made herself breathe. Four in. Four out. Cool head. Think sideways. "Okay." She said it to the ring of stones, to the turned flowers, to the bootprints. "You're here." The word came back to her from everywhere — from the flowers, from under the roots, from a mouth close enough that she felt it move the air against her ear. "Yes."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"it died too [too]"
dialogueSentences22
tagDensity0.273
leniency0.545
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.091
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1198
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
70.78% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1198
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"pulse"
count2
1
word"quickened"
count1
2
word"silence"
count2
3
word"weight"
count1
4
word"footsteps"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"quickened"
2"silence"
3"weight"
4"footsteps"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences86
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences86
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences103
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen42
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1209
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions13
wordCount1045
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity0.19
worstName"Richmond"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Richmond"
discoveredNames
Richmond2
Park1
Heartstone2
Pendant1
Tuesday1
Heathrow1
Chilli1
Golden1
Empress1
Grass1
Words1
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Pendant"
2"Empress"
3"Grass"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Golden"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences59
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1209
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences103
matches
0"knew that much"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs43
mean28.12
std24.56
cv0.874
sampleLengths
036
152
24
35
45
58
618
726
862
911
1047
111
1213
1348
1479
151
1616
1770
1843
1931
2045
214
2217
2312
2449
2515
2623
2722
281
296
3069
315
3235
33111
346
3554
3615
3731
3837
3926
4018
4131
421
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences86
matches
0"been pressed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs151
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount11
semicolonCount3
flaggedSentences13
totalSentences103
ratio0.126
matches
0"It had kept a double-beat since Tuesday — pulse, pulse, pause — and it quickened now as she faced into the park, eased as she turned back toward the road."
1"\"Then something's opened a door in the one bit of London that isn't London.\" A plane should have been crossing overhead — Richmond sat under the Heathrow approach, and she'd stopped hearing the engines years ago the way you stop hearing a clock."
2"Chilli oil from the Golden Empress still clung to the collar; she'd come straight off her last delivery without stopping."
3"She gave it a wide berth and it turned with her — not its head, its whole body, a slow swivel on hooves that made no sound."
4"Deer ran from people; everyone who walked this park knew that much."
5"She never caught it head-on — a suggestion of movement at the rim of her vision, tall, unhurried, matching her stride for stride."
6"The battery had read 38 percent at the gate; it read 12 now with the phone idle in her pocket."
7"She pressed the power button, got nothing — then it rang again, and this time it played the whole conversation back."
8"The silver chain had gone warm at her nape, and crimson light leaked through the neck of her jacket — the Heartstone lit from inside, no bigger than her thumbnail and burning like an ember."
9"Not faded — out, like a plug pulled."
10"Her tread, the worn patch on the left sole printed clean in the flattened blooms, leading in — and none leading out."
11"And something under the ground, under the flowers, beat back — off the beat, a counterpoint, the two rhythms fitting together the way a key fits a lock it was cut for."
12"The word came back to her from everywhere — from the flowers, from under the roots, from a mouth close enough that she felt it move the air against her ear."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount635
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount13
adverbRatio0.02047244094488189
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences103
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences103
mean11.74
std9.64
cv0.821
sampleLengths
08
128
215
330
47
53
61
75
83
92
108
117
1211
1326
1443
154
165
1710
1811
1916
2020
2111
221
234
249
257
2621
2710
2810
2915
302
312
3227
3333
341
3511
365
373
3827
3916
4012
4112
4216
439
4418
4531
468
4723
486
498
73.14% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.4854368932038835
totalSentences103
uniqueOpeners50
45.05% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences74
matches
0"Somewhere beyond the trees the"
ratio0.014
95.68% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount23
totalSentences74
matches
0"It had kept a double-beat"
1"Her phone buzzed."
2"She started walking."
3"She put him on speaker"
4"She ended the call."
5"Her breath came back to"
6"She gave it a wide"
7"Her voice dropped flat and"
8"She counted eleven."
9"Their eyes gave back the"
10"Her voice again, and again"
11"She never caught it head-on"
12"She lifted her chin at"
13"She answered on the second"
14"She pressed the power button,"
15"Her half and his, word"
16"It rolled past the point"
17"She said them."
18"She crossed the line of"
19"Her footsteps arrived a half-beat"
ratio0.311
54.59% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount60
totalSentences74
matches
0"The gates of Richmond Park"
1"Rory swung over them at"
2"The Heartstone Pendant lay against"
3"It had kept a double-beat"
4"A compass cut from gemstone"
5"Her phone buzzed."
6"She started walking."
7"The road unspooled pale under"
8"A plane should have been"
9"The sky sat empty."
10"She put him on speaker"
11"Chilli oil from the Golden"
12"She ended the call."
13"The park took the click"
14"The silence had a floor"
15"Her breath came back to"
16"Dew silvered the grass on"
17"The first deer stood at"
18"She gave it a wide"
19"Her voice dropped flat and"
ratio0.811
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences74
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences37
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"She gave it a wide berth and it turned with her — not its head, its whole body, a slow swivel on hooves that made no sound."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences22
tagDensity0.045
leniency0.091
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
87.9746%