Run: 2026-09-02-01M1GTK3259299XER6424YPR33

Run Details

Duration:
4m 44s
Cost:
$0.001835
Provider:
Z.AI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain drove sideways up Old Compton Street, and the Raven's Nest burned green through it, its neon sign buzzing like a trapped wasp. Detective Harlow Quinn shouldered the door open at eleven-forty and let the bar's heat settle over her. Maps papered the walls — the Bering Strait, the Catacombs of Palermo — each one pinned beneath black-and-white photographs of men long dead. Behind the bar, a broad-shouldered man stacked glasses, a silver medallion swinging free of his collar. "Tomás Herrera." He looked up. Warm brown eyes. A scar rode the outside of his left forearm as he reached for a cloth. "We're closed." "Detective Harlow Quinn, Metropolitan Police." She laid her warrant card on the bar and left it there. "You treated Daniel Okafor three Thursdays ago. Gunshot to the left shoulder. No hospital, no GP, no morgue. A man takes a bullet in Soho and vanishes — that's a story I'd like to hear." Herrera folded the cloth, one crease at a time. "You have me confused with someone else." "The paramedic from Seville. Struck off for treating patients the NHS had no file on." She tipped her head toward the bookshelf at the back of the room. "Six bodies in six weeks. Every one of them saw you before they died." Something shifted behind his face. "That is not what happened." "Then tell me what did." He glanced past her shoulder — the door, the rain, the street. When he spoke again his voice had dropped low. "You should walk out of here, Detective. Take your card. Don't come back." "Daniel Okafor." Herrera's hand closed around a glass. Then he was moving — over the bar hatch in one motion, through the bookshelf, which swung on a hidden hinge and crashed shut behind him. A fire door banged somewhere at the back of the building. Quinn ran. The alley behind the Nest funneled the downpour into a sheet of water, and Herrera was already at the far end, trainers slapping the cobbles. "Police! Stop!" He vaulted a market barrow, scattering a crate of wet flowers, and she cleared it a stride later, boots skidding on petals and rain. For three seconds she lost him. Then the green of the Nest's sign caught his jacket and threw it back at her like a flare, and she followed the flare. Left onto Dean Street. Right. Rain hammered the awnings and bounced off the bonnets of parked cars. Her radio crackled against her shoulder. "Control to—" She keyed the transmit button with her thumb. "Control, Quinn. Suspect on foot, heading—" Herrera's voice came back over his shoulder, ragged with effort. "Call your backup and they'll bury you next to Morris!" Her thumb lifted off the button. The radio went quiet in her hand. "Wrong answer," she said to the rain, and ran harder. He cut north up Charing Cross Road, weaving through the late buses, and at the junction by Centre Point he clipped a skip and staggered. Something small and pale spun from his jacket and skipped across the flooded pavement. Quinn stamped on it without breaking stride, scooped it up, and thrust it in her pocket. A disc of bone, smooth as a pebble. She filed the question away and kept running. He banked onto Camden High Street with the rail bridge ahead of him, the arches swallowing the streetlight one by one. Behind a construction hoarding stencilled DANGER — KEEP OUT, white chalk marked the brick in a spiral she didn't recognise, and Herrera wrenched open a rusted door that shouldn't have had a handle anymore. Steps. Concrete, slick with weep, descending into the dark of an old station. Dead lift shafts gaped on the landing. Tiled walls curved away below, glazed in the colour of old teeth, and far down at the bottom a storm lantern threw a shivering circle of light. Quinn slowed at the top and came down the stairs quiet, one hand on the wet wall. Herrera stood at a gate of black iron at the bottom. Behind it, a figure in an oilskin coat held the lantern up, and the light caught no face she could name — only a jaw wrapped in grey wool and eyes that reflected the flame flat, like coins. "Token." The gatekeeper's voice came out sanded flat. Herrera lifted a bone disc on a cord — twin to the one in her pocket — and pressed it to the iron. "One." "Moon's three nights off full. The market's restless. Be out before it clears the rooftops or it takes you where it's going." "I know the rules." Herrera turned then, and found her on the steps. Water dripped off his chin. For a moment neither of them moved, and the lantern hissed between them. "Don't follow me, Detective." He tapped his own chest, where the medallion hung. "I patched up six people the hospitals couldn't explain. I kept them breathing. You're chasing the wrong end of this, and down there is nothing that will give you the courtesy of a warning." "Then give me one now. Okafor. The bodies. Morris." Something crossed his face — grief, or its fossil. "Ask it below, if you've got the stomach. Or go home, and in the morning the file will be exactly as empty as it's always been." He turned and passed through the gate. The iron swallowed him without a sound, and the dark took the sound of his footsteps a moment later. Quinn came down the last steps. The gatekeeper raised the lantern. Up close the wool around its jaw was stitched on, and the stitching was neat, and that was the worst thing she had seen all year. "Token." She held up the bone disc from her pocket. The gatekeeper took it, turned it over once in fingers too long for the glove, and weighed it in its palm. "This belongs to Tomás." "He dropped it." "Then you walk in carrying another man's luck. The market will decide what that's worth." The gate stepped open with a groan. Behind it, a tunnel breathed warm air up at her — smoke, wet stone, something copper underneath. "No signal reaches below. No backup follows. The constabulary ends at that gate, Detective, and the moon owns everything past it." Quinn looked back up the stairs. At the top, the rusted door stood open on Camden and its rain, on her warrant card and eighteen years of procedure, on the backup she had never called because some part of her had known, since Morris, that the things she needed to catch never made it into an incident report. The case file had no body in it. She had checked every week for three years. Her thumb found the watch on her wrist — worn leather, cracked at the clasp. She'd cut it off Morris himself. It still kept perfect time, which she had never once found comforting, and she pressed her thumb to the crystal now the way other people pressed a crucifix. Herrera's footsteps had gone. The tunnel breathed. Somewhere far down, voices spoke a language that made her back teeth ache. Her jaw ached from clenching. She let it loosen. "Last chance to stay dry." The gatekeeper held the lantern steady. Quinn pocketed the dead radio, rolled her shoulders once, and started down the tunnel past the iron gate into the dark.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags7
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences30
tagDensity0.233
leniency0.467
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1221
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
71.33% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1221
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"stomach"
count1
1
word"footsteps"
count2
2
word"perfect"
count1
3
word"comforting"
count1
4
word"crystal"
count1
5
word"clenching"
count1
highlights
0"stomach"
1"footsteps"
2"perfect"
3"comforting"
4"crystal"
5"clenching"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences74
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences74
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences97
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen52
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1233
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions41
wordCount956
uniqueNames21
maxNameDensity0.94
worstName"Herrera"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Herrera"
discoveredNames
Old1
Compton1
Street3
Raven1
Nest3
Harlow1
Quinn7
Bering1
Strait1
Catacombs1
Palermo1
Herrera9
Dean1
Charing1
Cross1
Road1
Centre1
Point1
Camden2
High1
Morris2
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Harlow"
3"Quinn"
4"Herrera"
5"Morris"
places
0"Old"
1"Compton"
2"Street"
3"Bering"
4"Strait"
5"Palermo"
6"Dean"
7"Charing"
8"Cross"
9"Road"
10"Centre"
11"Point"
12"Camden"
13"High"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences61
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1233
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences97
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs50
mean24.66
std19.08
cv0.774
sampleLengths
023
156
22
323
452
516
642
710
85
934
102
1143
122
1325
142
1554
1623
172
1814
1920
2013
2110
2271
2355
2447
2517
2649
278
2824
2922
304
3127
3247
339
3435
3526
366
3731
381
3930
404
413
4260
4358
4416
4549
4620
479
4811
4921
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences74
matches
0"was stitched"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs154
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount11
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences97
ratio0.093
matches
0"Maps papered the walls — the Bering Strait, the Catacombs of Palermo — each one pinned beneath black-and-white photographs of men long dead."
1"He glanced past her shoulder — the door, the rain, the street."
2"Then he was moving — over the bar hatch in one motion, through the bookshelf, which swung on a hidden hinge and crashed shut behind him."
3"Behind a construction hoarding stencilled DANGER — KEEP OUT, white chalk marked the brick in a spiral she didn't recognise, and Herrera wrenched open a rusted door that shouldn't have had a handle anymore."
4"Behind it, a figure in an oilskin coat held the lantern up, and the light caught no face she could name — only a jaw wrapped in grey wool and eyes that reflected the flame flat, like coins."
5"Herrera lifted a bone disc on a cord — twin to the one in her pocket — and pressed it to the iron."
6"Something crossed his face — grief, or its fossil."
7"Behind it, a tunnel breathed warm air up at her — smoke, wet stone, something copper underneath."
8"Her thumb found the watch on her wrist — worn leather, cracked at the clasp."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount949
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount20
adverbRatio0.02107481559536354
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.001053740779768177
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences97
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences97
mean12.71
std9.82
cv0.772
sampleLengths
023
117
223
316
42
53
63
715
82
917
1035
119
127
1328
1414
155
165
175
1812
199
2013
212
226
2326
2411
252
2625
272
2824
296
3024
314
321
3312
346
352
368
376
3810
3910
406
417
4210
4325
4414
4516
468
478
4821
4934
79.04% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats0
diversityRatio0.4742268041237113
totalSentences97
uniqueOpeners46
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences71
matches
0"Then he was moving —"
1"Then the green of the"
2"Somewhere far down, voices spoke"
ratio0.042
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount21
totalSentences71
matches
0"He looked up."
1"She laid her warrant card"
2"She tipped her head toward"
3"He glanced past her shoulder"
4"He vaulted a market barrow,"
5"Her radio crackled against her"
6"She keyed the transmit button"
7"Her thumb lifted off the"
8"she said to the rain,"
9"He cut north up Charing"
10"She filed the question away"
11"He banked onto Camden High"
12"He tapped his own chest,"
13"He turned and passed through"
14"She held up the bone"
15"She had checked every week"
16"Her thumb found the watch"
17"She'd cut it off Morris"
18"It still kept perfect time,"
19"Her jaw ached from clenching."
ratio0.296
86.76% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount53
totalSentences71
matches
0"Rain drove sideways up Old"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn shouldered the"
2"Maps papered the walls —"
3"He looked up."
4"A scar rode the outside"
5"She laid her warrant card"
6"Herrera folded the cloth, one"
7"She tipped her head toward"
8"Something shifted behind his face."
9"He glanced past her shoulder"
10"Herrera's hand closed around a"
11"A fire door banged somewhere"
12"The alley behind the Nest"
13"He vaulted a market barrow,"
14"Her radio crackled against her"
15"She keyed the transmit button"
16"Herrera's voice came back over"
17"Her thumb lifted off the"
18"The radio went quiet in"
19"she said to the rain,"
ratio0.746
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences71
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences34
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Then he was moving — over the bar hatch in one motion, through the bookshelf, which swung on a hidden hinge and crashed shut behind him."
1"Behind a construction hoarding stencilled DANGER — KEEP OUT, white chalk marked the brick in a spiral she didn't recognise, and Herrera wrenched open a rusted d…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags7
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences30
tagDensity0.033
leniency0.067
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
91.2378%