Run: 2026-09-02-01M1GTT2Y0HM1EZ8A5Y2TH5TT0

Run Details

Duration:
4m 28s
Cost:
$0.037164
Provider:
Z.AI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt gave under her hand and the door opened onto rain and Lucien Moreau. He stood on Eva's mat with the stairwell bulb doing its last honest work above him, charcoal suit soaked to slate across the shoulders, platinum hair — always lacquered, always ordered — plastered to his brow like he'd lost an argument with the weather. One amber eye caught the light and held it. The black one swallowed it whole. At her ankles, Ptolemy began to purr like a small idling engine. The cat despised everyone. The postman got claws. Eva got teeth, and Eva fed him. "Traitor," Rory muttered. "Bonsoir to you too." "No." She put her palm flat against the door and pushed. The ivory handle of his cane rose — not to block it, just to rest against the frame, polite as a raised hand at a lecture. "Five seconds." "You had four months." "Then I'm owed five seconds of listening." Rain dripped off his jaw and darkened the letters of a WELCOME that had mostly worn off the mat. Down Brick Lane a bus hissed past through standing water, and the stairwell smelled of cardamom and frying onions, all of it rising up through the curry house floorboards. "How do you even know where I am?" "Your scooter's at the curb outside. You've been here since Tuesday." "That's a crime-adjacent amount of creepy, Lucien. That's a documentary amount of creepy." "Then let me waste the rest of it on your mat. Rory." Her name in his mouth, unhurried, like he'd carried it somewhere dry. She should have closed the door. Her hand stayed on the wood. "Evan is in London." It did its work in her wrists first — the old crescent scar pulling tight, though scars don't do that. She stepped back. Not for him. She'd have let a bailiff in on that name. The flat was a paper city. Books stood in load-bearing columns, one stack serving as a side table, another as a doorstop to Eva's bedroom. Scrolls furred the sofa. Notes pinned the curtains to the walls like the room itself was under study. Rory pulled a towel off the radiator and threw it at him — one of Eva's, a protection sigil embroidered along the border, allegedly. He caught it one-handed and dried his hair, and for the first time in her life he looked absurd, a rabbit produced from a very expensive hat. "Say it properly." She crossed to the kettle because her hands wanted a job that wasn't shaking. "Evan. Where, when, what he wants." "He wants what men like him want. Someone smaller than he is." The cane went against the wall with a click. "He came up six weeks ago. Hired someone to find you. Not a private detective — a finder. Something with a very good nose and no paperwork." "And?" "And I bought the debt. Paid the finder to remember an address in Manchester instead. Then I paid Evan a visit, and Evan has developed an enthusiasm for emigrating." "You threatened him." "I negotiated. Threats were involved." He draped his coat over a chair, over a book, over her protest. "He's a small man who hired a monster to do his staring for him. He'll stare from a distance now. From an airport." She set the kettle down harder than the kettle deserved. "Six weeks ago. You vanished four months ago. You didn't think any of that was worth a text?" "I thought distance was worth more." "To who?" "To you." He said it the way he priced things — flat, final. "The finder traced you through me, Rory. What I owe, what I've done — it has a family, and they were curious about the girl who delivered to me every Thursday. So I made you boring. Closed my accounts, changed my routes, let the trail go cold. I stayed away because a man like me standing next to you is a signpost." "You decided." She turned, and the mug she'd fetched sat between them like a witness. "You got to be the one who decided. Do you know what I decided? That I'd been a game. Three months of Thursdays — your order, 8:40, rain or shine, the same thing Yu-Fei never once got right. You asking what I was reading. You driving me home when the scooter died on Commercial Street. Me lending you my book like a complete idiot. And then one Thursday, nothing. Nothing, Lucien. I made a fool's peace with that. I grieved it. And now you're standing on Eva's mat telling me it was chivalry." "I never called it chivalry." "What did you call it?" He reached into the coat and came out with a paperback. Cracked spine, dog-eared, her name inside the cover in her round teenage hand. He held it out. "I brought back your book." She took it because her hands moved on their own. The margins were full of pencil — French, tight, slanted. Four dates on the flyleaf. He'd read it four times. Beside her favorite scene he'd written *ici elle ment*. "You wrote in my book." "I annotated it. There's a difference. A legal difference — I'm told you'd care about that." One syllable of laughter got out of her before she could kill it. She hated him for it, and hated that the hating had no floor under it. She stepped closer to shut the book, and he didn't step back, and the kitchen bulb hummed between them. Ptolemy knocked a scroll tube off a stack. Neither of them looked. On the window, condensation held the neon of the curry house sign in long red smears, and the rain kept up its small work on the glass. His gaze dropped to her wrist where she gripped the paperback. The little crescent scar. "You were nine," he said. "A flowerpot. You told your mum it was a dog." "I told her it was a werewolf." "You drew the moon on your cast." "Full moon. I was committed to the bit." "You're committed to most things." His thumb hovered an inch above the scar, not touching — just an inch of rain-cooled air that she could feel anyway, everywhere. "I have thought about that scar on more days than I'll admit to a woman holding her tea like a weapon." She looked down. She was, in fact, holding her tea like a weapon. "Why tonight?" Her voice came out lower than she'd budgeted for. "Evan's handled. The trail's cold. Staying away is the entire point of you — you just spent ten minutes explaining it. So why are you on Brick Lane in a ruined suit?" Both eyes, then. Amber and black at once, which from him was an event. "Because I can count on one hand, with fingers left over, the things I've wanted that I let myself keep." He turned his face half away — the amber half to the window, the black half in shadow — and the French came out quiet, almost to the glass. "Il paraît qu'on ne guérit pas de toi. On apprend seulement à vivre avec." Ptolemy, bored of the two of them, stalked off toward his empty bowl. Rory set the mug down on a stack of first editions Eva would have died over. "I did French to sixteen." He didn't move. "Say it in English."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"his mouth unhurried like [like]"
dialogueSentences45
tagDensity0.244
leniency0.489
rawRatio0.091
effectiveRatio0.044
91.81% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1221
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"very"
count2
highlights
0"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
91.81% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1221
totalAiIsms2
found
0
word"traced"
count1
1
word"could feel"
count1
highlights
0"traced"
1"could feel"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences59
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences59
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences93
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen93
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords3
totalWords1236
ratio0.002
matches
0"ici elle ment"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions18
wordCount701
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity0.86
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Lucien1
Moreau1
Eva6
Ptolemy3
Brick1
Lane1
French2
Rory3
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Moreau"
2"Eva"
3"Ptolemy"
4"French"
5"Rory"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences44
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1236
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences93
matches
0"hated that the"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs56
mean22.07
std21.51
cv0.975
sampleLengths
016
159
227
33
44
537
62
74
87
948
108
1111
1213
1324
1412
154
1635
1767
1827
1923
2048
211
2229
233
2441
2528
266
272
2875
29108
305
315
3228
335
3439
355
3616
3728
3858
3915
4015
417
427
438
4449
4513
4643
4714
4820
4929
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences59
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs114
matches
0"wasn't shaking"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount10
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences93
ratio0.086
matches
0"He stood on Eva's mat with the stairwell bulb doing its last honest work above him, charcoal suit soaked to slate across the shoulders, platinum hair — always lacquered, always ordered — plastered to his brow like he'd lost an argument with the weather."
1"The ivory handle of his cane rose — not to block it, just to rest against the frame, polite as a raised hand at a lecture."
2"It did its work in her wrists first — the old crescent scar pulling tight, though scars don't do that."
3"Rory pulled a towel off the radiator and threw it at him — one of Eva's, a protection sigil embroidered along the border, allegedly."
4"\"To you.\" He said it the way he priced things — flat, final."
5"The margins were full of pencil — French, tight, slanted."
6"\"You're committed to most things.\" His thumb hovered an inch above the scar, not touching — just an inch of rain-cooled air that she could feel anyway, everywhere."
7"He turned his face half away — the amber half to the window, the black half in shadow — and the French came out quiet, almost to the glass."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount695
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount19
adverbRatio0.027338129496402876
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.0028776978417266188
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences93
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences93
mean13.29
std12.99
cv0.977
sampleLengths
016
144
29
36
412
54
64
77
83
94
1011
1126
122
134
147
1519
1629
178
1811
1913
2024
216
226
234
2420
253
263
279
286
2919
304
3114
3224
3327
3417
356
3621
3727
381
3929
403
4118
4223
4310
4418
456
462
4713
4862
4915
73.12% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.4838709677419355
totalSentences93
uniqueOpeners45
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences57
matches(empty)
ratio0
30.53% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount27
totalSentences57
matches
0"He stood on Eva's mat"
1"She put her palm flat"
2"Her name in his mouth,"
3"She should have closed the"
4"Her hand stayed on the"
5"It did its work in"
6"She stepped back."
7"She'd have let a bailiff"
8"He caught it one-handed and"
9"She crossed to the kettle"
10"He draped his coat over"
11"She set the kettle down"
12"He said it the way"
13"She turned, and the mug"
14"He reached into the coat"
15"He held it out."
16"She took it because her"
17"He'd read it four times."
18"She hated him for it,"
19"She stepped closer to shut"
ratio0.474
38.95% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount48
totalSentences57
matches
0"The third deadbolt gave under"
1"He stood on Eva's mat"
2"The black one swallowed it"
3"The cat despised everyone."
4"The postman got claws."
5"Eva got teeth, and Eva"
6"She put her palm flat"
7"The ivory handle of his"
8"Rain dripped off his jaw"
9"Her name in his mouth,"
10"She should have closed the"
11"Her hand stayed on the"
12"It did its work in"
13"She stepped back."
14"She'd have let a bailiff"
15"The flat was a paper"
16"Books stood in load-bearing columns,"
17"Scrolls furred the sofa."
18"Notes pinned the curtains to"
19"Rory pulled a towel off"
ratio0.842
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences57
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences25
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
79.55% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags11
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"He said, final"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Rory muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences45
tagDensity0.067
leniency0.133
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.044
83.5252%