Run: 2026-09-02-01M1GTW2D8SEBS626YSC61VH4F

Run Details

Duration:
5m 25s
Cost:
$0.002563
Provider:
Z.AI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The padlock on the Richmond Park gate hung open, its chain pooled in the frost, as though someone had unlocked it and stepped back to wait. "Of course it is." Rory gave the words to the empty road, and the road gave nothing back. The order had come in at 1:47 a.m. One carton of dan dan noodles, extra chilli oil, two hundred quid paid up front. No street. No postcode. The note in the app read: The old stones. Ring the bell twice. Rent was due, Yu-Fei had locked up the Golden Empress and gone home, and there had been no one in that kitchen to tell her no. She wheeled her bike through the gate and walked it onto the grass. Frost stiffened every blade, crackling under the tyres, and her breath hung in the air in small white ghosts. Overhead, the sky sat wrong. Richmond lay under the stack of planes circling Heathrow, and on any other night the dark crawled with running lights and the falling whine of engines. Tonight, nothing moved up there. Not one light. The sky looked painted on. Her pocket had been warm since the bridge. She fished out the pendant, and the little crimson stone pulsed through her glove, dimming and brightening, dimming and brightening. For three days it had stayed faint enough to ignore. Here it ticked against her palm faster than her own pulse, a trapped thing clawing at its silver chain. "You're a necklace," she told it. "Act like one." She locked the bike to a deer-fence post and went in on foot, delivery bag slung across her chest, torch beam sweeping the path. Crocuses stood open in the frost, wide as teacups, every one of them facing the same direction. Deeper in, cowslips. Then flowers she had no names for, gold and bruise-purple, nodding in a wind she couldn't feel on her own face. She made herself watch the path instead. Under her boots the frozen grass cracked in a rhythm. Half a beat behind it, the same rhythm cracked again. She stopped. The second set of footsteps stopped — late, catching up to its own silence. Three quick steps, hers. The echo took four. Somewhere off to the left a blackbird began to sing, full-throated, the whole liquid evening song, in December, at nearly three in the morning. It broke off mid-phrase, clipped, like a hand closing over a cage. She dialled the number on the order. It connected before the first ring finished. A room came down the line. Water dripping onto stone. Something heavy dragged in a slow circle. Then a voice, agreeable as a shop assistant, from the bottom of a well. "Ring the bell twice." The call ended. The click arrived half a second after she'd already pulled the phone from her ear. "Two hundred quid." Her voice came out smaller than she'd priced it. "Noodles, Rory. In and out." Her mobile buzzed in her hand. The screen said Yu-Fei Cheung, and relief hit her like sun through a window. "Where are you?" No hello. The roar of wok burners behind the words. "Richmond Park. Weird order, one carton, no address—" "Richmond." A ladle came down on a steel bench. "Rory. You left my kitchen at ten past ten. It is half two. Where have you been for four hours?" "I left at two." The clock on her phone agreed with her. 2:31. "You texted me at ten oh six to say the order felt strange. I still have it. I was about to call Eva." The order had come in at 1:47. Yu-Fei held a text from 10:06 that she had never sent. The cold moved up Rory's arms then, and it had nothing to do with the frost. She zipped her jacket to the chin. "Signal's going. I'll call you back—" "Rory. Come back to the shop. Now." The line ate the rest of her name. No bars. She held the phone over her head and turned a slow circle with her arm up like a flood victim. The screen gave her back her own face and nothing else. The trees changed ahead of her. Richmond oaks — squat, split, familiar as bus stops — gave way to pillars. Trunks grown straight and smooth, pale as stripped bone, set in a rough ring older than any map of the park. And past the ring, the frost stopped in a clean line. On the far side the grass burned green. Wildflowers ran to the edges of a hidden clearing, every head turned toward its centre, waiting the way an audience waits. Summer air breathed out through the boundary and touched her cheek, thick with honey and cut stems. Her breath fogged white and curled back at the line as if it had struck glass. On a flat stone at the threshold sat a brass counter bell. Hotel desk. Shop counter. Polished bright. No house behind it. No door, no wire, no hand. She had not brought it. She had not touched it. It rang. Once, bright, obscene in all that silence, the little hammer rising and falling with no finger near it. A pause long enough for hope. Twice. The delivery bag swung in her grip. Rory stood still and understood that she had never needed to ring. The bell had answered for her. Her arrival was being acknowledged, and had been expected, and the note in the app had never been an instruction. The pendant burned through denim now. She drew it out and its glow threw red up the crescent scar on her wrist, pulsing, keeping time. She looked up. The dark between the far pillars had depth to it, and the depth had posture. Vertical shapes stood at the treeline, doorway-height, still as the stones themselves. Birch trunks, she told herself. She blinked. They were birch trunks. She blinked again and could not remember when birches had grown inside a ring of oaks, or why the pale patches on them sat so patiently where shoulders would be. Close. Behind her shoulder, where nothing had walked. "You're late, Laila." Winter poured back into the air against her neck. She turned. The pale trunks stood where they had always stood. Between two of them, at a polite distance, something held out its hand. Palm up. Fingers too long. Patient as a waiter who has all night and knows it. It made no move to cross the grass, and it did not need to. The whole grove was its outstretched arm. The pendant pulsed hot against her fingers, once, twice. "Two hundred quid." Her voice cracked the frost-bright silence. "Noodles. In and out." The hand stayed where it was, palm up, and waited.
created_at"2026-09-02T10:33:10.834Z" 9/2/2026, 10:33:10 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences17
tagDensity0.353
leniency0.706
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1119
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
59.79% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1119
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"pulsed"
count2
1
word"pulse"
count1
2
word"footsteps"
count1
3
word"silence"
count3
4
word"echo"
count1
5
word"familiar"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"pulse"
2"footsteps"
3"silence"
4"echo"
5"familiar"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences105
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences105
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences115
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1122
ratio0
matches(empty)
75.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"Birch trunks, she told herself."
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions15
wordCount1018
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.29
worstName"Richmond"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Richmond"
discoveredNames
Richmond3
Park1
Yu-Fei3
Golden1
Empress1
Heathrow1
December1
Cheung1
Rory3
persons
0"Yu-Fei"
1"Cheung"
2"Rory"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"December"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences72
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1122
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences115
matches
0"understood that she"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs43
mean26.09
std23.32
cv0.894
sampleLengths
026
118
266
332
444
557
69
765
87
944
1036
1114
1231
134
1418
1517
1620
1713
188
1929
2013
2123
2241
236
247
2541
26114
2738
282
2918
306
311
3245
3325
343
3568
368
373
3811
3959
409
4113
4210
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences105
matches
0"being acknowledged"
1"been expected"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs159
matches
0"was being"
93.17% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences115
ratio0.017
matches
0"The second set of footsteps stopped — late, catching up to its own silence."
1"Richmond oaks — squat, split, familiar as bus stops — gave way to pillars."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1024
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount28
adverbRatio0.02734375
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.001953125
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences115
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences115
mean9.76
std6.77
cv0.694
sampleLengths
026
118
28
315
42
52
69
74
826
913
1019
115
1226
135
143
155
168
1720
1810
1919
206
213
2224
2317
243
2521
267
2710
2810
292
3014
314
324
3324
3412
357
367
376
384
397
4014
414
423
4315
4412
455
466
4714
485
498
73.39% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.4824561403508772
totalSentences114
uniqueOpeners55
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences90
matches
0"Then flowers she had no"
1"Somewhere off to the left"
2"Then a voice, agreeable as"
3"Once, bright, obscene in all"
ratio0.044
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount23
totalSentences90
matches
0"She wheeled her bike through"
1"Her pocket had been warm"
2"She fished out the pendant,"
3"she told it"
4"She locked the bike to"
5"She made herself watch the"
6"It broke off mid-phrase, clipped,"
7"She dialled the number on"
8"It connected before the first"
9"Her voice came out smaller"
10"Her mobile buzzed in her"
11"She zipped her jacket to"
12"She held the phone over"
13"Her breath fogged white and"
14"She had not brought it."
15"She had not touched it."
16"Her arrival was being acknowledged,"
17"She drew it out and"
18"She looked up."
19"They were birch trunks."
ratio0.256
82.22% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount68
totalSentences90
matches
0"The padlock on the Richmond"
1"Rory gave the words to"
2"The order had come in"
3"The note in the app"
4"Rent was due, Yu-Fei had"
5"She wheeled her bike through"
6"Frost stiffened every blade, crackling"
7"Richmond lay under the stack"
8"Tonight, nothing moved up there."
9"The sky looked painted on."
10"Her pocket had been warm"
11"She fished out the pendant,"
12"Here it ticked against her"
13"she told it"
14"She locked the bike to"
15"Crocuses stood open in the"
16"She made herself watch the"
17"The second set of footsteps"
18"The echo took four."
19"It broke off mid-phrase, clipped,"
ratio0.756
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences90
matches(empty)
ratio0
91.84% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences42
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"She fished out the pendant, and the little crimson stone pulsed through her glove, dimming and brightening, dimming and brightening."
1"Wildflowers ran to the edges of a hidden clearing, every head turned toward its centre, waiting the way an audience waits."
2"She drew it out and its glow threw red up the crescent scar on her wrist, pulsing, keeping time."
41.67% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Rory gave, and the road gave nothing back"
91.18% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"her phone agreed (agree)"
dialogueSentences17
tagDensity0.118
leniency0.235
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.118
90.2749%